Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
perfect time
Michael Edwards said:
Love the idea of muzzles to the moon but not before bums to the sod - great fun write to get the day off to a good start.
October 7th, 2017 01:41
Michael Edwards said:
Love the idea of muzzles to the moon but not before bums to the sod - great fun write to get the day off to a good start.
October 7th, 2017 01:41
perfect time
Goldfinch60 said:
The howl towards the falling moon. Good write.
October 7th, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
The howl towards the falling moon. Good write.
October 7th, 2017 01:23
perfect time
dusk arising said:
Aaaah the Prem hound howls his ghostly accompanyment. Dog and piper are eclipsed. Actually its good fun to howl along with a willing dog.
October 7th, 2017 00:44
dusk arising said:
Aaaah the Prem hound howls his ghostly accompanyment. Dog and piper are eclipsed. Actually its good fun to howl along with a willing dog.
October 7th, 2017 00:44
sweeping
dusk arising said:
Such drama in your writing. This is a scene where the plain man, the grey man nobody sees, becomes a work of art in his depth of purpose giving dignity to his mundanity. Or is he yesterdays prince learning the value of a poor mans labour.
October 6th, 2017 16:41
dusk arising said:
Such drama in your writing. This is a scene where the plain man, the grey man nobody sees, becomes a work of art in his depth of purpose giving dignity to his mundanity. Or is he yesterdays prince learning the value of a poor mans labour.
October 6th, 2017 16:41
sweeping
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor on life well lived, Frank! I appreciate this one immensely.
October 6th, 2017 11:21
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor on life well lived, Frank! I appreciate this one immensely.
October 6th, 2017 11:21
coffee train
secondchancesyndrome said:
two sugars please, enjoyable poetry Frank, thanks j
October 5th, 2017 09:17
secondchancesyndrome said:
two sugars please, enjoyable poetry Frank, thanks j
October 5th, 2017 09:17
coffee train
orchidee said:
Is there a tea-train too?! I shall hop on that one, if there is! Feel like a pot of tea now. lol. Not Earl Grey tea. I shall miss that train. Yuk!
October 5th, 2017 08:26
orchidee said:
Is there a tea-train too?! I shall hop on that one, if there is! Feel like a pot of tea now. lol. Not Earl Grey tea. I shall miss that train. Yuk!
October 5th, 2017 08:26
coffee train
Fay Slimm. said:
I echo those lovely coffee-toots Frank - yes please for me.
October 5th, 2017 02:52
Fay Slimm. said:
I echo those lovely coffee-toots Frank - yes please for me.
October 5th, 2017 02:52
coffee train
Michael Edwards said:
Just had one - freshly filtered, naturally, no machine, best way but no toot toot. Love this Frank
October 5th, 2017 02:36
Michael Edwards said:
Just had one - freshly filtered, naturally, no machine, best way but no toot toot. Love this Frank
October 5th, 2017 02:36
ya-hey ya-ho (to fly)
Louis Gibbs said:
Mountain climber becomes bird-man ... an enigma indeed, but intriguing. Fine poem, Frank!
October 4th, 2017 12:06
Louis Gibbs said:
Mountain climber becomes bird-man ... an enigma indeed, but intriguing. Fine poem, Frank!
October 4th, 2017 12:06
ya-hey ya-ho (to fly)
FredPeyer said:
Frank, when I was young I had a private pilot license, was flying single engine small planes. Even though your poem is talking about a bird, it did bring back memories! When you are up there, you really do feel free!
October 4th, 2017 02:15
FredPeyer said:
Frank, when I was young I had a private pilot license, was flying single engine small planes. Even though your poem is talking about a bird, it did bring back memories! When you are up there, you really do feel free!
October 4th, 2017 02:15
ya-hey ya-ho (to fly)
Michael Edwards said:
At first I read as a man climbing and towards the end as a great bird flying - for me it\'s this enigma that is so appealing in this well crafted piece. I am left wondering and using my own imagination.
October 4th, 2017 00:36
Michael Edwards said:
At first I read as a man climbing and towards the end as a great bird flying - for me it\'s this enigma that is so appealing in this well crafted piece. I am left wondering and using my own imagination.
October 4th, 2017 00:36
where you see and feel it
FredPeyer said:
Frank, I did need to read the comments to understand the poem. So well written! Love the structure too!
October 3rd, 2017 12:33
FredPeyer said:
Frank, I did need to read the comments to understand the poem. So well written! Love the structure too!
October 3rd, 2017 12:33
where you see and feel it
Louis Gibbs said:
A psychiatric nurse, in a world going mad! There must be a long line at your door, Frank. I don\'t envy you, but do admire you. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
October 3rd, 2017 06:31
Louis Gibbs said:
A psychiatric nurse, in a world going mad! There must be a long line at your door, Frank. I don\'t envy you, but do admire you. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
October 3rd, 2017 06:31
where you see and feel it
orchidee said:
Ahh, someone having a bad hair-day? A tad upset?! Erm, I\'ve dampened down the emotion in this like a wet blanket! lol.
October 3rd, 2017 02:04
orchidee said:
Ahh, someone having a bad hair-day? A tad upset?! Erm, I\'ve dampened down the emotion in this like a wet blanket! lol.
October 3rd, 2017 02:04
where you see and feel it
orchidee said:
What\'s going on there? Will I swoon if you tell me?! heehee.
October 3rd, 2017 01:58
orchidee said:
What\'s going on there? Will I swoon if you tell me?! heehee.
October 3rd, 2017 01:58
where you see and feel it
Michael Edwards said:
Surreal indeed - very Dahliesque - great work Frank.
October 3rd, 2017 01:08
Michael Edwards said:
Surreal indeed - very Dahliesque - great work Frank.
October 3rd, 2017 01:08
love (in a time of passing trains)
Frank Prem said:
Thank you to all who\'ve read and responded.
I\'m so glad you\'ve enjoyed. Sorry I can\'t respond individually today - a little pressed for time.
October 2nd, 2017 17:20
Frank Prem said:
Thank you to all who\'ve read and responded.
I\'m so glad you\'ve enjoyed. Sorry I can\'t respond individually today - a little pressed for time.
October 2nd, 2017 17:20
love (in a time of passing trains)
Louis Gibbs said:
Thanks for the enjoyable train ride, Frank. I always have loved trains, and remember riding the steam-driven locomotive train into Chicago as a child.
October 2nd, 2017 11:23
Louis Gibbs said:
Thanks for the enjoyable train ride, Frank. I always have loved trains, and remember riding the steam-driven locomotive train into Chicago as a child.
October 2nd, 2017 11:23
love (in a time of passing trains)
Michael Edwards said:
Now this is something special - original and so engaging - into favourites.
October 2nd, 2017 03:33
Michael Edwards said:
Now this is something special - original and so engaging - into favourites.
October 2nd, 2017 03:33
street sounds
Michael Edwards said:
I actually really enjoyed this although I\'m still not sure what to make of it - perhaps it\'s the originality that appeals.
October 2nd, 2017 01:09
Michael Edwards said:
I actually really enjoyed this although I\'m still not sure what to make of it - perhaps it\'s the originality that appeals.
October 2nd, 2017 01:09
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