Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
way poem #16: open to new
FredPeyer said:
Very true Frank! Kind of made me think of a fish with its 3 second memory! :-)
January 18th, 2018 17:35
FredPeyer said:
Very true Frank! Kind of made me think of a fish with its 3 second memory! :-)
January 18th, 2018 17:35
way poem #16: open to new
Louis Gibbs said:
Boundless new worlds materialize with each new blink, indeed. So well put in your words, Frank.
January 18th, 2018 09:37
Louis Gibbs said:
Boundless new worlds materialize with each new blink, indeed. So well put in your words, Frank.
January 18th, 2018 09:37
way poem #16: open to new
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Frank, each moment is anew world to be explored.
January 18th, 2018 09:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Frank, each moment is anew world to be explored.
January 18th, 2018 09:00
way poem #13: sorrow and joy (up here in heaven)
Laura🌻 said:
This write made me think of my beloved ones who are no longer with me...especially my dad! He would tell me not to worry or be sad because one day we’ll be together again with all those who have gone before us! A thanksgiving it will be...he’d say! I Will never forget his beautiful words! I enjoyed the read very much because it made me think of the love of my life...my dad! Thank you Frank!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 04:54
Laura🌻 said:
This write made me think of my beloved ones who are no longer with me...especially my dad! He would tell me not to worry or be sad because one day we’ll be together again with all those who have gone before us! A thanksgiving it will be...he’d say! I Will never forget his beautiful words! I enjoyed the read very much because it made me think of the love of my life...my dad! Thank you Frank!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 04:54
way poem #12: barrow and spade
Laura🌻 said:
They’re hibernating for the winter! A few more months before they come out to “play”! Looking forward to it!
Enjoyed the read, Frank! Thank you for sharing your great write!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 04:33
Laura🌻 said:
They’re hibernating for the winter! A few more months before they come out to “play”! Looking forward to it!
Enjoyed the read, Frank! Thank you for sharing your great write!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 04:33
way poem #11: how I thought, it was
Laura🌻 said:
Great use of
all your senses, Frank!
Enjoyed the read!
It’s so true how a thought....simple or otherwise...can become a memory Great write!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 04:19
Laura🌻 said:
Great use of
all your senses, Frank!
Enjoyed the read!
It’s so true how a thought....simple or otherwise...can become a memory Great write!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 04:19
way poem #10: a court farewells its king
Laura🌻 said:
This is an interesting read, Frank!
The last stanza is my favorite. I think it summarizes it all in a nutshell! Great write my friend!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 04:11
Laura🌻 said:
This is an interesting read, Frank!
The last stanza is my favorite. I think it summarizes it all in a nutshell! Great write my friend!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 04:11
way poem #09: poor saturations
Laura🌻 said:
Cheers to you Frank!
Cheers to a long lasting
life!
A poignant write!
A nasty addiction
to say the least!
Glad you gave it up!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 04:05
Laura🌻 said:
Cheers to you Frank!
Cheers to a long lasting
life!
A poignant write!
A nasty addiction
to say the least!
Glad you gave it up!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 04:05
way poem #16: open to new
Laura🌻 said:
Another great one, Frank!
Enjoyed the read and I too shall close my eyes and drift away in a beautiful and pleasing idea and try to lift myself out of this dark pit I’ve managed to fall in!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 03:53
Laura🌻 said:
Another great one, Frank!
Enjoyed the read and I too shall close my eyes and drift away in a beautiful and pleasing idea and try to lift myself out of this dark pit I’ve managed to fall in!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 03:53
way poem #15: I, creator
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful description of the artist connecting with the muse in the creation of art in its many forms. So well expressed, Frank!
January 17th, 2018 09:27
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful description of the artist connecting with the muse in the creation of art in its many forms. So well expressed, Frank!
January 17th, 2018 09:27
way poem #15: I, creator
Goldfinch60 said:
May that palette create the colours of your world. Good write.
January 17th, 2018 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May that palette create the colours of your world. Good write.
January 17th, 2018 02:28
way poem #06: perhaps by questions
Laura🌻 said:
Great write, Frank!
The perennial question...
... “WHY?”...
Will we ever have the answer?
I think not!
The importance is
to keep asking the question
as you stated at the end of your poem!
January 16th, 2018 18:48
Laura🌻 said:
Great write, Frank!
The perennial question...
... “WHY?”...
Will we ever have the answer?
I think not!
The importance is
to keep asking the question
as you stated at the end of your poem!
January 16th, 2018 18:48
way poem #05: the five steps to wheaten pecks
Laura🌻 said:
Thank you for this share, Frank!
This write reminds me of my dad! He loved to walk everywhere! The last few years of his life, it became very difficult to walk the half mile he did every day! He managed to do it till the end! He would start his walk and every few minutes he’d rest! An amazing man!
January 16th, 2018 18:29
Laura🌻 said:
Thank you for this share, Frank!
This write reminds me of my dad! He loved to walk everywhere! The last few years of his life, it became very difficult to walk the half mile he did every day! He managed to do it till the end! He would start his walk and every few minutes he’d rest! An amazing man!
January 16th, 2018 18:29
way poem #14: conversation with three foxes
FredPeyer said:
Your imagination really is on overdrive here. Well done!
January 16th, 2018 17:55
FredPeyer said:
Your imagination really is on overdrive here. Well done!
January 16th, 2018 17:55
way poem #14: conversation with three foxes
Louis Gibbs said:
A charming exercise in imagination, Frank. I enjoyed it.
January 16th, 2018 10:17
Louis Gibbs said:
A charming exercise in imagination, Frank. I enjoyed it.
January 16th, 2018 10:17
way poem #13: sorrow and joy (up here in heaven)
FredPeyer said:
The eternal never getting together love story of the moon and the sun!
Very well written, Frank! I do love the way you write, your structure, actually everything!
January 15th, 2018 22:40
FredPeyer said:
The eternal never getting together love story of the moon and the sun!
Very well written, Frank! I do love the way you write, your structure, actually everything!
January 15th, 2018 22:40
way poem #13: sorrow and joy (up here in heaven)
Michael Edwards said:
And a great series it is too.
January 15th, 2018 11:55
Michael Edwards said:
And a great series it is too.
January 15th, 2018 11:55
way poem #13: sorrow and joy (up here in heaven)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRANK ~ I apologise for this being my first comment on this series ~ but this one caught my imagination !
\"Death doth hide but not divide ~ it is as though the Rose that budded on our Garden Wall has blossomed on the other side !\"
In my short life I have lost Loved Ones ~ Friends & Family ~ but knowing their character I have spiritual assurance that ~ when my time comes ~ I will meet them again in GLORY ! Thanks BRIAN
January 15th, 2018 08:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRANK ~ I apologise for this being my first comment on this series ~ but this one caught my imagination !
\"Death doth hide but not divide ~ it is as though the Rose that budded on our Garden Wall has blossomed on the other side !\"
In my short life I have lost Loved Ones ~ Friends & Family ~ but knowing their character I have spiritual assurance that ~ when my time comes ~ I will meet them again in GLORY ! Thanks BRIAN
January 15th, 2018 08:11
way poem #12: barrow and spade
Lorna said:
Can you garden all year down under? If so, there\'s plenty of time!
January 14th, 2018 11:11
Lorna said:
Can you garden all year down under? If so, there\'s plenty of time!
January 14th, 2018 11:11
way poem #12: barrow and spade
Accidental Poet said:
I was just thinking this morning how I can\'t wait to get back to cutting my lawn. 4 months to go Frank. I\'m ready, willing and able.
January 14th, 2018 11:10
Accidental Poet said:
I was just thinking this morning how I can\'t wait to get back to cutting my lawn. 4 months to go Frank. I\'m ready, willing and able.
January 14th, 2018 11:10
way poem #12: barrow and spade
FredPeyer said:
Nice, Frank! My wheelbarrow and spade are not asleep, they are comatose! One of these days.....
January 14th, 2018 02:39
FredPeyer said:
Nice, Frank! My wheelbarrow and spade are not asleep, they are comatose! One of these days.....
January 14th, 2018 02:39
way poem #11: how I thought, it was
Accidental Poet said:
And luckily you wrote it all down. Thanks for sharing Frank.
January 13th, 2018 09:05
Accidental Poet said:
And luckily you wrote it all down. Thanks for sharing Frank.
January 13th, 2018 09:05
way poem #11: how I thought, it was
Lorna said:
I really loved this. It reflects something I\'ve been thinking for a long time - that everything we do is over in a nanosecond and becomes a memory - and so if your imagination is good enough, you can create imagined memories that can be almost better than real ones. Helpful for bad times.
January 13th, 2018 05:31
Lorna said:
I really loved this. It reflects something I\'ve been thinking for a long time - that everything we do is over in a nanosecond and becomes a memory - and so if your imagination is good enough, you can create imagined memories that can be almost better than real ones. Helpful for bad times.
January 13th, 2018 05:31
way poem #09: poor saturations
Louis Gibbs said:
A brutal addiction it is. I watched my father and a brother battle it and slowly die from it. Great poem here, Frank! An important message well delivered.
January 11th, 2018 10:38
Louis Gibbs said:
A brutal addiction it is. I watched my father and a brother battle it and slowly die from it. Great poem here, Frank! An important message well delivered.
January 11th, 2018 10:38
way poem #09: poor saturations
Michael Edwards said:
Powerful message in this well crafted great write.
January 11th, 2018 01:08
Michael Edwards said:
Powerful message in this well crafted great write.
January 11th, 2018 01:08
way poem #09: poor saturations
El_Pretzadente said:
Wow,...on that note, think I might.
Great righting.
January 11th, 2018 00:43
El_Pretzadente said:
Wow,...on that note, think I might.
Great righting.
January 11th, 2018 00:43
way poem #06: perhaps by questions
FredPeyer said:
The age old question. Beautifully written. It nearly sounds like a fable when reading out loud. I like the structure, it goes so well with the writing. You are well along the path to enlightenment my dear Frank!
January 10th, 2018 12:00
FredPeyer said:
The age old question. Beautifully written. It nearly sounds like a fable when reading out loud. I like the structure, it goes so well with the writing. You are well along the path to enlightenment my dear Frank!
January 10th, 2018 12:00
way poem #06: perhaps by questions
Louis Gibbs said:
Continually asking questions, seeking answers ... such is the journey of one on the path. Well stated herein, Frank!
January 10th, 2018 10:40
Louis Gibbs said:
Continually asking questions, seeking answers ... such is the journey of one on the path. Well stated herein, Frank!
January 10th, 2018 10:40
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