Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Father Time Is Undefeated.
Bella Shepard said:
To contemplate time I think is to contemplate eternity, and you say it beautifully. Just love the music, and the young people making it!
July 12th, 2025 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
To contemplate time I think is to contemplate eternity, and you say it beautifully. Just love the music, and the young people making it!
July 12th, 2025 12:31
Father Time Is Undefeated.
Poetic Licence said:
The frame work with which we have to work within, nicely done
July 12th, 2025 11:12
Poetic Licence said:
The frame work with which we have to work within, nicely done
July 12th, 2025 11:12
Father Time Is Undefeated.
arqios said:
Just as well since Time is indefatigable 🕊🙏🏻
July 12th, 2025 07:09
arqios said:
Just as well since Time is indefatigable 🕊🙏🏻
July 12th, 2025 07:09
Father Time Is Undefeated.
sorenbarrett said:
There is a nice weaving of time markers in this poem. (birth, morning, spring, summer, youth, adults, autumn, summer, old age, winter life ending. The full cycle nicely done Andy.
July 12th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
There is a nice weaving of time markers in this poem. (birth, morning, spring, summer, youth, adults, autumn, summer, old age, winter life ending. The full cycle nicely done Andy.
July 12th, 2025 04:30
Father Time Is Undefeated.
David Wakeling said:
I guess Time is holding all the cards. We can\'t win. Still we had a good experience while alive. Excellent poem asking one of the most important questions about Time.Made me think.Well done compadre
July 12th, 2025 04:24
David Wakeling said:
I guess Time is holding all the cards. We can\'t win. Still we had a good experience while alive. Excellent poem asking one of the most important questions about Time.Made me think.Well done compadre
July 12th, 2025 04:24
Father Time Is Undefeated.
orchidee said:
Do you know Mother Time too? Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
July 12th, 2025 01:41
orchidee said:
Do you know Mother Time too? Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
July 12th, 2025 01:41
That\'s Life.
sorenbarrett said:
So true Andy there is no going back and rereading it is forward one page at a time to the end. Nicely said
July 11th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
So true Andy there is no going back and rereading it is forward one page at a time to the end. Nicely said
July 11th, 2025 05:12
The Keys To Happiness Sonnet.
Tony Grannell said:
This is a perfect sonnet in every way. Composed with great care and poetic acumen. A complete and absolute joy to read. Excellent! Very well done indeed.
All the best,
Tony.
July 11th, 2025 04:30
Tony Grannell said:
This is a perfect sonnet in every way. Composed with great care and poetic acumen. A complete and absolute joy to read. Excellent! Very well done indeed.
All the best,
Tony.
July 11th, 2025 04:30
That\'s Life.
David Wakeling said:
This is a great metaphor.The book you are reading is the book of life.Well written compadre
July 11th, 2025 04:19
David Wakeling said:
This is a great metaphor.The book you are reading is the book of life.Well written compadre
July 11th, 2025 04:19
The Keys To Happiness Sonnet.
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Sonnet. Sort of Poetry I like to read.
And John Denver had such a fine Voice.
Nice one.
July 10th, 2025 18:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyable Sonnet. Sort of Poetry I like to read.
And John Denver had such a fine Voice.
Nice one.
July 10th, 2025 18:31
The Keys To Happiness Sonnet.
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful, Andy. I think music is a universal language. Like poetry it contains beauty and truth. Your sonnet has both of those aspects. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 13:37
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful, Andy. I think music is a universal language. Like poetry it contains beauty and truth. Your sonnet has both of those aspects. A lovely poem. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 13:37
The Keys To Happiness Sonnet.
Poetic Licence said:
Forever and always, lovely write
July 10th, 2025 05:31
Poetic Licence said:
Forever and always, lovely write
July 10th, 2025 05:31
The Keys To Happiness Sonnet.
David Wakeling said:
Yes a great message here.Love and Music.Both are sacred in our lives.Enjoyable read mi amigo
July 10th, 2025 04:27
David Wakeling said:
Yes a great message here.Love and Music.Both are sacred in our lives.Enjoyable read mi amigo
July 10th, 2025 04:27
The Keys To Happiness Sonnet.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold, and a sensible song, not like some rot of today.
July 10th, 2025 02:50
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold, and a sensible song, not like some rot of today.
July 10th, 2025 02:50
The Keys To Happiness Sonnet.
Doggerel Dave said:
I think I\'ve exhausted my vocabulary when it comes to your sonnets, Andy. Please let me know if \'Bravo!\' is acceptable.
July 10th, 2025 02:45
Doggerel Dave said:
I think I\'ve exhausted my vocabulary when it comes to your sonnets, Andy. Please let me know if \'Bravo!\' is acceptable.
July 10th, 2025 02:45
Accept Reality.
Doggerel Dave said:
Will /have/do, Andy....but is mine yours? I like to contribute to that impermanence, and not accept things as they are.
Neat piece notwithstanding. Thanks.
July 9th, 2025 20:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Will /have/do, Andy....but is mine yours? I like to contribute to that impermanence, and not accept things as they are.
Neat piece notwithstanding. Thanks.
July 9th, 2025 20:04
Accept Reality.
Tony Grannell said:
Yes indeed, nothing lasts forever and understanding that and the reality therein is the makings of a good life. A very fine poem, wisdom personified with poetic flair and the simple truth. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 14:55
Tony Grannell said:
Yes indeed, nothing lasts forever and understanding that and the reality therein is the makings of a good life. A very fine poem, wisdom personified with poetic flair and the simple truth. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 14:55
Accept Reality.
Neville said:
Bingo my good man, you just hit the nail squarely and hard on its proverbial head .. Neville
July 9th, 2025 11:14
Neville said:
Bingo my good man, you just hit the nail squarely and hard on its proverbial head .. Neville
July 9th, 2025 11:14
Accept Reality.
MendedFences27 said:
Wise words, Andy. I guess we all get there eventually. Time to \"accept reality.\" - Phil A.
July 9th, 2025 10:37
MendedFences27 said:
Wise words, Andy. I guess we all get there eventually. Time to \"accept reality.\" - Phil A.
July 9th, 2025 10:37
Accept Reality.
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful philosophy; simple, elegant and oh so true. Thank you!!
July 9th, 2025 09:47
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful philosophy; simple, elegant and oh so true. Thank you!!
July 9th, 2025 09:47
Accept Reality.
Poetic Licence said:
That is a stone cold fact, nicely expressed write
July 9th, 2025 07:28
Poetic Licence said:
That is a stone cold fact, nicely expressed write
July 9th, 2025 07:28
Accept Reality.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. My marriage to KP seems permanent - a life sentence. lol.
Now what was I doing thinking the same sort of theme recently? Careful with that thinking, Fido says to me!
July 9th, 2025 02:35
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. My marriage to KP seems permanent - a life sentence. lol.
Now what was I doing thinking the same sort of theme recently? Careful with that thinking, Fido says to me!
July 9th, 2025 02:35
The Blank Page Is Before Me.
NafisaSB said:
very well written - and as usual, you have filled the blank pages beautifully.
well done
July 9th, 2025 00:17
NafisaSB said:
very well written - and as usual, you have filled the blank pages beautifully.
well done
July 9th, 2025 00:17
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