Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Glass Full.
Doggerel Dave said:
The golf balls were pissed as a fart,
And the pebbles had a good time.
The glass sold as a work of art -
The sand, too gritty was a crime.
If you read it, references in order to verify, please Andy
November 17th, 2022 03:37
Doggerel Dave said:
The golf balls were pissed as a fart,
And the pebbles had a good time.
The glass sold as a work of art -
The sand, too gritty was a crime.
If you read it, references in order to verify, please Andy
November 17th, 2022 03:37
Glass Full.
orchidee said:
But don\'t invite me for a beer, or it will be half beer and half water! heehee. Well, beer is made with water, but you know what I mean, being the Phantom Soda (Water) Syphoner!
November 17th, 2022 02:48
orchidee said:
But don\'t invite me for a beer, or it will be half beer and half water! heehee. Well, beer is made with water, but you know what I mean, being the Phantom Soda (Water) Syphoner!
November 17th, 2022 02:48
My Good Life.
Bella Shepard said:
My smile grows broader with each line! Your joy is so palpable and infectious. You have put into words so many things that I think to myself each day. We should start a 70 something club. Who knows, maybe we will go on forever!
November 16th, 2022 10:09
Bella Shepard said:
My smile grows broader with each line! Your joy is so palpable and infectious. You have put into words so many things that I think to myself each day. We should start a 70 something club. Who knows, maybe we will go on forever!
November 16th, 2022 10:09
My Good Life.
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the same way Gold and I feel and endorse your last line.
November 16th, 2022 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the same way Gold and I feel and endorse your last line.
November 16th, 2022 07:26
My Good Life.
arqios said:
Suddenly I am reminded of the king in \'Ever After\' when he said to his errant son, \"Then I shall have to live forever!\"
November 16th, 2022 04:33
arqios said:
Suddenly I am reminded of the king in \'Ever After\' when he said to his errant son, \"Then I shall have to live forever!\"
November 16th, 2022 04:33
My Good Life.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. When did us two become \'old age\', as we\'re millions of years old? Was it at about our 4 millionth birthdays?!
November 16th, 2022 03:22
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. When did us two become \'old age\', as we\'re millions of years old? Was it at about our 4 millionth birthdays?!
November 16th, 2022 03:22
My Good Life.
Doggerel Dave said:
I cannot but endorse this more -
Except perhaps your last line.
You stick around â Iâm off before,
Before the worldâs troubles combine.
November 16th, 2022 03:00
Doggerel Dave said:
I cannot but endorse this more -
Except perhaps your last line.
You stick around â Iâm off before,
Before the worldâs troubles combine.
November 16th, 2022 03:00
Wishful Thinking?
Doggerel Dave said:
And of course we can always hope
Things improve before they go west.
But will people manage to cope
With change dysfunctional at best?
âSorry Andy â it will take more than morals, thankfulness and respect to engage with and sort world problems right now.
November 15th, 2022 05:14
Doggerel Dave said:
And of course we can always hope
Things improve before they go west.
But will people manage to cope
With change dysfunctional at best?
âSorry Andy â it will take more than morals, thankfulness and respect to engage with and sort world problems right now.
November 15th, 2022 05:14
Wishful Thinking?
arqios said:
It may take longer than we might think. Some things don\'t ever return either. A very mixed basket there. Quite sad really. Thanks for the reminder, Andy.
November 15th, 2022 03:45
arqios said:
It may take longer than we might think. Some things don\'t ever return either. A very mixed basket there. Quite sad really. Thanks for the reminder, Andy.
November 15th, 2022 03:45
Wishful Thinking?
orchidee said:
Yes, I thought the same, when some miserable git let a door swing back in my face! Thanks a lot, guy, have a bad day! Patience now, Orchi. But how patient, just because of someone\'s rudeness?
November 15th, 2022 03:09
orchidee said:
Yes, I thought the same, when some miserable git let a door swing back in my face! Thanks a lot, guy, have a bad day! Patience now, Orchi. But how patient, just because of someone\'s rudeness?
November 15th, 2022 03:09
Lessons In Life.
Fay Slimm. said:
Mistakes can become great lessons for us Andy - am listening so intensely now to a favourite voice as Frank sings the sadness of Autumn when love has been lost. Thanks for sharing the words and of course Sinatra too.
November 14th, 2022 17:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Mistakes can become great lessons for us Andy - am listening so intensely now to a favourite voice as Frank sings the sadness of Autumn when love has been lost. Thanks for sharing the words and of course Sinatra too.
November 14th, 2022 17:03
Lessons In Life.
LauraBerry said:
Don´t be afraid to make mistakes, Thank you!
November 14th, 2022 05:38
LauraBerry said:
Don´t be afraid to make mistakes, Thank you!
November 14th, 2022 05:38
Lessons In Life.
L. B. Mek said:
looking back, we see a trail
a definitive path
yet looking ahead, we can\'t fathom
a route, towards progress
looking side to side, we assume
we\'ve arrived...
(when we think we know
we begin to contemplate
how little we do)
thanks for sharing your encouraging words, dear Poet
I read and learn
November 14th, 2022 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
looking back, we see a trail
a definitive path
yet looking ahead, we can\'t fathom
a route, towards progress
looking side to side, we assume
we\'ve arrived...
(when we think we know
we begin to contemplate
how little we do)
thanks for sharing your encouraging words, dear Poet
I read and learn
November 14th, 2022 05:31
Lessons In Life.
arqios said:
Lessons in life are aplenty, thanks for the reminder Andy!
November 14th, 2022 05:19
arqios said:
Lessons in life are aplenty, thanks for the reminder Andy!
November 14th, 2022 05:19
Lessons In Life.
Doggerel Dave said:
Do utilise those mistakes by all means
If you have the chance and itâs possible;
This doesnât amount to a hill of beans
Where poverty makes it improbable.
November 14th, 2022 03:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Do utilise those mistakes by all means
If you have the chance and itâs possible;
This doesnât amount to a hill of beans
Where poverty makes it improbable.
November 14th, 2022 03:29
Lessons In Life.
orchidee said:
Good write Gol.
Is there any remedy for my mistake of \'I started to sing one day\'? lol.
November 14th, 2022 03:16
orchidee said:
Good write Gol.
Is there any remedy for my mistake of \'I started to sing one day\'? lol.
November 14th, 2022 03:16
Warm Days
arqios said:
I get what you mean, they look the part but swelter or melt because all of it is asynchronous! The video literally made my hairs stand on end. I have partiality to Sting\'s version but this is not to be scoffed. Hope there is a recording of your choir\'s version to listen to!!! Thanks Andy.
November 13th, 2022 06:49
arqios said:
I get what you mean, they look the part but swelter or melt because all of it is asynchronous! The video literally made my hairs stand on end. I have partiality to Sting\'s version but this is not to be scoffed. Hope there is a recording of your choir\'s version to listen to!!! Thanks Andy.
November 13th, 2022 06:49
Warm Days
Doggerel Dave said:
You just observed ex Boy Scouts and Girl Guides;
They adhered to their well known principle:
âBe Preparedâ, and after all, who decides? -
Weather forecasts change and are so supple.
Best wishes for your concert, Mate - the human voice in unison - Great.
November 13th, 2022 04:09
Doggerel Dave said:
You just observed ex Boy Scouts and Girl Guides;
They adhered to their well known principle:
âBe Preparedâ, and after all, who decides? -
Weather forecasts change and are so supple.
Best wishes for your concert, Mate - the human voice in unison - Great.
November 13th, 2022 04:09
Warm Days
orchidee said:
I gotta get me gloves out soon, when it\'s \'normal\' temperatures for this time of year! Good write Gold.
November 13th, 2022 03:04
orchidee said:
I gotta get me gloves out soon, when it\'s \'normal\' temperatures for this time of year! Good write Gold.
November 13th, 2022 03:04
Handels Music Flows. Senryu.
Bella Shepard said:
This senryu flows beautifully in the confluence of words and music. What a vision you create!
November 12th, 2022 13:09
Bella Shepard said:
This senryu flows beautifully in the confluence of words and music. What a vision you create!
November 12th, 2022 13:09
Handels Music Flows. Senryu.
Doggerel Dave said:
Musical choice? I mostly opt for jazz;
Now I must admit Iâm no connoisseur.
Though that kind of music has more pizzazz.
I need peace; Classical I quite prefer.
Thanks Andy - lovely accompaniment as I wander around the rest of MPS.
November 12th, 2022 04:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Musical choice? I mostly opt for jazz;
Now I must admit Iâm no connoisseur.
Though that kind of music has more pizzazz.
I need peace; Classical I quite prefer.
Thanks Andy - lovely accompaniment as I wander around the rest of MPS.
November 12th, 2022 04:44
For Remembrance Day.
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree the wording is unforgettable and very meaningful. The choice of \"Only Remember\" is so apt.
November 11th, 2022 13:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree the wording is unforgettable and very meaningful. The choice of \"Only Remember\" is so apt.
November 11th, 2022 13:09
For Remembrance Day.
L. B. Mek said:
sharing great poetry that illuminates
as it delights, is a great service to our collective worth
the day we forget our 11\'11\'11s or other memorial days
is the day we accept, humanity has lost the ability
to love and sympathise with each other..
(thank you Andy!)
November 11th, 2022 07:26
L. B. Mek said:
sharing great poetry that illuminates
as it delights, is a great service to our collective worth
the day we forget our 11\'11\'11s or other memorial days
is the day we accept, humanity has lost the ability
to love and sympathise with each other..
(thank you Andy!)
November 11th, 2022 07:26
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