Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The Lost Idea.
MendedFences27 said:
Very, very true. Happens all the time. I also have stacks of unfinished poems. one\'s that were started and then drifted to something else entirely. Sometimes I will take bits and pieces of those unfinished poems and build a new poem from them.
I think we can all appreciate your poem for having been there. Nice words Andy. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2022 13:40
MendedFences27 said:
Very, very true. Happens all the time. I also have stacks of unfinished poems. one\'s that were started and then drifted to something else entirely. Sometimes I will take bits and pieces of those unfinished poems and build a new poem from them.
I think we can all appreciate your poem for having been there. Nice words Andy. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2022 13:40
The Lost Idea.
L. B. Mek said:
(there is a lost drawer
full of inspiration\'s, dust
waiting to be found
and lost, again..
someday, I will find it
and go crazy
trying to record it all
before
I lose it, again...
someday!)
lol
just so relatable, Andy
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 5th, 2022 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
(there is a lost drawer
full of inspiration\'s, dust
waiting to be found
and lost, again..
someday, I will find it
and go crazy
trying to record it all
before
I lose it, again...
someday!)
lol
just so relatable, Andy
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 5th, 2022 03:08
The Lost Idea.
orchidee said:
Sometimes I\'ve forgotten the words completely, if I\'ve not written them down soon after they have come to mind.
Good, they say - will save you singing again! lol.
August 5th, 2022 01:43
orchidee said:
Sometimes I\'ve forgotten the words completely, if I\'ve not written them down soon after they have come to mind.
Good, they say - will save you singing again! lol.
August 5th, 2022 01:43
The Lost Idea.
orchidee said:
I\'m in a similar situation - was it that poem I was going to write yesterday? But now it\'s today. Shall I write it tomorrow?!
What day is it? What year is it? What planet am I on? I\'m a confused laddie. lol.
What\'s that ditty?: \'Tomorrow is......\'
August 5th, 2022 01:38
orchidee said:
I\'m in a similar situation - was it that poem I was going to write yesterday? But now it\'s today. Shall I write it tomorrow?!
What day is it? What year is it? What planet am I on? I\'m a confused laddie. lol.
What\'s that ditty?: \'Tomorrow is......\'
August 5th, 2022 01:38
The Lost Idea.
dusk arising said:
LOL Such a familiar thought. I\'d often end up writing something completely different from my original intention just as you describe.
August 5th, 2022 01:36
dusk arising said:
LOL Such a familiar thought. I\'d often end up writing something completely different from my original intention just as you describe.
August 5th, 2022 01:36
Harry Shalgosky.
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful tribute to a man who truly affected your life, and probably never knew it. Thankfully those people are out there, never knowing how many lives they\'ve touched with kindness and understanding, but always remembered. Lovely write dear friend.
August 3rd, 2022 08:35
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful tribute to a man who truly affected your life, and probably never knew it. Thankfully those people are out there, never knowing how many lives they\'ve touched with kindness and understanding, but always remembered. Lovely write dear friend.
August 3rd, 2022 08:35
Harry Shalgosky.
Doggerel Dave said:
This is a deviation from your usual writes, and I have to add that I like it.
Let\'s have more of your disreputable past, Andy. 😊
August 3rd, 2022 02:28
Doggerel Dave said:
This is a deviation from your usual writes, and I have to add that I like it.
Let\'s have more of your disreputable past, Andy. 😊
August 3rd, 2022 02:28
Harry Shalgosky.
Neville said:
Good old Harry & may his memory long be fondly remembered ..
August 3rd, 2022 02:07
Neville said:
Good old Harry & may his memory long be fondly remembered ..
August 3rd, 2022 02:07
Harry Shalgosky.
orchidee said:
And - heck! I was spared a living torture. Not kissing her at Christmas under the mistletoe. Phew!
August 3rd, 2022 01:34
orchidee said:
And - heck! I was spared a living torture. Not kissing her at Christmas under the mistletoe. Phew!
August 3rd, 2022 01:34
Harry Shalgosky.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold.
In one job, we were OK until a new manageress came along. Then it went downhill. Your poem is probably all the things she is NOT.
Some nearly went on strike - not paid properly - but were only a smallish Company. She wouldn\'t have cared. She would not even leave the building for a Fire Practice. We don\'t care if she had burnt up! That\'s how it was.
August 3rd, 2022 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold.
In one job, we were OK until a new manageress came along. Then it went downhill. Your poem is probably all the things she is NOT.
Some nearly went on strike - not paid properly - but were only a smallish Company. She wouldn\'t have cared. She would not even leave the building for a Fire Practice. We don\'t care if she had burnt up! That\'s how it was.
August 3rd, 2022 01:33
Through The Mist.
Raven333 said:
Really good poem Goldfinch, very well written. Enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2022 14:57
Raven333 said:
Really good poem Goldfinch, very well written. Enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2022 14:57
Through The Mist.
Doggerel Dave said:
No need of church when you have your river, Andy.
The picture you painted - I hope you didn\'t mind that I came along too.
August 2nd, 2022 08:20
Doggerel Dave said:
No need of church when you have your river, Andy.
The picture you painted - I hope you didn\'t mind that I came along too.
August 2nd, 2022 08:20
Through The Mist.
Fay Slimm. said:
Keep walking on that grateful journey my dear friend. - -- You are a fine example of the message given in the wonderful number you chose today.
August 2nd, 2022 06:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Keep walking on that grateful journey my dear friend. - -- You are a fine example of the message given in the wonderful number you chose today.
August 2nd, 2022 06:16
Through The Mist.
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful!
the lyrics of your song choice
serenades
the poetry of your words..
this theme reminds me of phil collins
and \'another day in paradise\'
especially your poetry\'s
defiant, last line
indeed, we must be grateful
for the small wonder\'s
that accumulate to make up
the smiles in our lives..
thanks Andy!
a poignant and reassuring message
August 2nd, 2022 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful!
the lyrics of your song choice
serenades
the poetry of your words..
this theme reminds me of phil collins
and \'another day in paradise\'
especially your poetry\'s
defiant, last line
indeed, we must be grateful
for the small wonder\'s
that accumulate to make up
the smiles in our lives..
thanks Andy!
a poignant and reassuring message
August 2nd, 2022 04:55
Through The Mist.
Neil Higgins said:
A brilliantly constructed piece.I can visualize every statement.Very spiritual,and very alive in word play.
August 2nd, 2022 03:49
Neil Higgins said:
A brilliantly constructed piece.I can visualize every statement.Very spiritual,and very alive in word play.
August 2nd, 2022 03:49
Through The Mist.
Neville said:
very atmospheric sir if you dont mind me saying so .. and your metaphors are simply to die for ........ write on my friend & go well ................ Neville
August 2nd, 2022 01:28
Neville said:
very atmospheric sir if you dont mind me saying so .. and your metaphors are simply to die for ........ write on my friend & go well ................ Neville
August 2nd, 2022 01:28
RIP Uhura.
sorenbarrett said:
I too remember watching star trek and each star that passes reminds me of my own age. A very nice write.
August 1st, 2022 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
I too remember watching star trek and each star that passes reminds me of my own age. A very nice write.
August 1st, 2022 06:43
RIP Uhura.
L. B. Mek said:
what a classy dedication!
may she rest in peace
thanks Andy
August 1st, 2022 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
what a classy dedication!
may she rest in peace
thanks Andy
August 1st, 2022 03:34
Dad Dancing.
Bella Shepard said:
You just hit on something dear to my heart. I hear the music and I can\'t help but move. I rarely get to go dancing anymore, but nothing stops me from dancing, by myself, in my living room, to music of the sixties. Only problem is that hips and knees have aged, where the brain has not followed. Thank you for this little trip down memory lane, a great write!
July 31st, 2022 11:18
Bella Shepard said:
You just hit on something dear to my heart. I hear the music and I can\'t help but move. I rarely get to go dancing anymore, but nothing stops me from dancing, by myself, in my living room, to music of the sixties. Only problem is that hips and knees have aged, where the brain has not followed. Thank you for this little trip down memory lane, a great write!
July 31st, 2022 11:18
Dad Dancing.
Justa_Geezer said:
Loved your sentiments and memories of the front room two step Goldfinch !
July 31st, 2022 05:04
Justa_Geezer said:
Loved your sentiments and memories of the front room two step Goldfinch !
July 31st, 2022 05:04
Wonderful Life.
Bella Shepard said:
Amen, my friend! You are so right, every moment is precious. Thank you for this beautiful, life affirming poem!
July 30th, 2022 13:42
Bella Shepard said:
Amen, my friend! You are so right, every moment is precious. Thank you for this beautiful, life affirming poem!
July 30th, 2022 13:42
Wonderful Life.
orchidee said:
We\'re both getting older too. How many millions of years old are we?! lol.
July 30th, 2022 01:31
orchidee said:
We\'re both getting older too. How many millions of years old are we?! lol.
July 30th, 2022 01:31
Laughter And Sleep.
Doggerel Dave said:
Andy, You need to put your sage advises together and write a self help book instead of scattering your pearls of wisdom around here (not suggesting you stop!!)
July 29th, 2022 07:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Andy, You need to put your sage advises together and write a self help book instead of scattering your pearls of wisdom around here (not suggesting you stop!!)
July 29th, 2022 07:17
Laughter And Sleep.
Fay Slimm. said:
Agreed dear Andy - and my feet are still tapping to that Beach Boys number - -wow - those were the days - -I loved and still love their sound.
July 29th, 2022 04:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Agreed dear Andy - and my feet are still tapping to that Beach Boys number - -wow - those were the days - -I loved and still love their sound.
July 29th, 2022 04:04
Laughter And Sleep.
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s why insomnia
is such an evil, hindrance
to our whole wellness
and sleeping pills, are such a dangerous slippery-slope
to addiction\'s or unhealthy over reliance\'s, doors..
but I have found powernaps
are a great way to get your accumulative sleep..
as for laughter
get it wherever you can
laugh till you can\'t breathe and be grateful
for each chuckle..
(such a great read, Andy
and so, so
timely and relevant)
thank you!
July 29th, 2022 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s why insomnia
is such an evil, hindrance
to our whole wellness
and sleeping pills, are such a dangerous slippery-slope
to addiction\'s or unhealthy over reliance\'s, doors..
but I have found powernaps
are a great way to get your accumulative sleep..
as for laughter
get it wherever you can
laugh till you can\'t breathe and be grateful
for each chuckle..
(such a great read, Andy
and so, so
timely and relevant)
thank you!
July 29th, 2022 03:59
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