Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Strange Lady.
Robert Southwick Richmond said:

US readers won\'t know the word \"chemist\" in this sense, British usage for what we call a pharmacist or (informally) a druggist. In US usage a chemist is a scientist who does chemistry.

December 20th, 2020 10:14

Strange Lady.
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Gold.
How you lost weight? Not had much of that shortbread?!

December 20th, 2020 02:56

Strange Lady.
Michael Edwards said:

I can see the scene and it gave me a big smile - first of the morning.

December 20th, 2020 02:40

Death Is A Moment. Senryu
Jerry Reynolds said:

Respect for a moment well said this
humble link

a crescent moon drinks
from the fountain of forever

December 19th, 2020 16:32

Death Is A Moment. Senryu
FredPeyer said:

Well said, Andy! Just like crossing a threshold. It only takes a moment.

December 19th, 2020 12:11

Death Is A Moment. Senryu
Clara said:

I like this... It\'s a pleasant thought to think that death is but a moment and not the end.

December 19th, 2020 10:23

Death Is A Moment. Senryu
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

December 19th, 2020 03:07

Kept Away?
FredPeyer said:

We live in troubled times Andy. I don\'t want to visit anybody, I don\'t want anybody to visit me. I know I am lucky, still have my wife, so it is just the two of us for this Holiday Season. Turkey is out, don\'t think there is a turkey for two. Maybe a little hen, or what the heck, two sausages.

December 18th, 2020 20:55

Kept Away?
Joe Marcello said:

Well done. We should all be ashamed that it\'s true.

December 18th, 2020 20:00

Farewell to Stromness.
FineB said:

Hi Andy.

Farewell to Stromness you have captured the beauty of the music in your incredible, beautiful poem.


Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB


December 18th, 2020 17:03

Kept Away?
Trenz Pruca said:

Sound sentiments.

December 18th, 2020 16:55

Kept Away?
Jerry Reynolds said:

Stay safe for a bit longer. Have a Happy Holiday.

December 18th, 2020 14:58

Two Muses.
SerenWise said:

A wonderfully tender write, so sweet!

December 18th, 2020 14:08

Kept Away?
AuburnScribbler said:

A sad but well written message here Andy.

The tiers divide us, and in this case, so does age, but in my opinion, we are all in the same boat in this horrible pandemic storm.

Bravo again, and please do take care.

December 18th, 2020 10:33

Kept Away?
L. B. Mek said:

worth waiting for that meaningful reveal at the end, a thought provoking take on a topic that effects each of us so differently, and yet has us sharing the same apprehension...
Happy Holidays Andy

December 18th, 2020 06:17

Kept Away?
Michael Edwards said:

Why on earth do they have tiers - it causes so much confusion and discord - for goodness sake a set of rules across the entire country if we are serious about getting the numbers down. So many wimps out there - bite the bullet.

December 18th, 2020 05:39

Kept Away?
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
Erm with friends or alone - we gotta eat Christmas dinners with masks on! Eh?!

December 18th, 2020 02:42

Farewell to Stromness.
SerenWise said:

Beautiful write!

December 17th, 2020 18:15

Farewell to Stromness.
Jerry Reynolds said:

It must be a beautiful place.

December 17th, 2020 17:28

Farewell to Stromness.
FredPeyer said:

Andy, your poem drew me in just like the music did. Well done!

December 17th, 2020 13:12

Farewell to Stromness.
L. B. Mek said:

\'When I said farewell,
Farewell to Stromness.\'
and stepped
into that cooling solace
within acceptance,
a great write Andy!

December 17th, 2020 06:56

Farewell to Stromness.
Amon said:

GOOD WRITE GOLD

December 17th, 2020 06:36

Farewell to Stromness.
Doggerel Dave said:

You are a musical education, Andy - and for that I can\'t thank you enough.

Dave

December 17th, 2020 04:50

Changing the Ending.
L. B. Mek said:

a wonderful combination between the video and your words to reinforce a very straightforward but vital message, reminds me (if a little dramatically) of Dylan Thomas and his:
\'Do no go gentle into that good night\'
\'rage, rage against the dying of the light\',
while Dylan was speaking to his ailing father and our general willingness to accept the escape offered by death,
I think his words can be interpreted in line with your message: where even if we hold-on and merely find out we can impact our fates - at the very end,
maybe it\'s worth investing in a little hope and sprouting what feeble \'fighting spirit\' we can muster and try to give a good accounting of ourselves in this brief breaths of a life, we inevitable tend to take for granted...
a thought provoking write Andy, thank you for inspiring my little reply scribble
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-30915

December 17th, 2020 04:20

Farewell to Stromness.
orchidee said:

A fine write and clip Gold.

December 17th, 2020 02:49

Farewell to Stromness.
Michael Edwards said:

\'Tis indeed a great piece - a firm favourite of Classic FM - and a fine write to go with it.

December 17th, 2020 02:23

Changing the Ending.
Neville said:


this is so very true .. I bet there aint a single one of us who would choose or dare to argue ..................

December 17th, 2020 01:37

Changing the Ending.
FredPeyer said:

Could have, should have, would have... we all go through that. But you are right Andy, while we cannot change the past, we can shape the future. Well penned!

December 16th, 2020 12:13

Changing the Ending.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Very good read Andy. Can\'t play the tune right now as it would wake up Linda and that would not be a happy ending for me. ;-)

December 16th, 2020 09:49

Changing the Ending.
peto said:

Great advice as always Goldfinch
Can\'t change the beginning
Can build to a crescendo

December 16th, 2020 07:55



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