Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Talking On The Screen.
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Andy! I am so thankful for that \'screen\'. Without it I wouldn\'t have seen my grandkids for over a year. We don\'t talk for hours, they some of them have an attention span of about three minutes. But they always want to hear a \'story\' which I have to make up as I go along. Thanks for this poem.
February 11th, 2021 19:48
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Andy! I am so thankful for that \'screen\'. Without it I wouldn\'t have seen my grandkids for over a year. We don\'t talk for hours, they some of them have an attention span of about three minutes. But they always want to hear a \'story\' which I have to make up as I go along. Thanks for this poem.
February 11th, 2021 19:48
One At A Time.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful metaphor, Andy. We are unique, each of us, but also belong to humanity with all its beauty and sorrow. Well written!
February 11th, 2021 16:13
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful metaphor, Andy. We are unique, each of us, but also belong to humanity with all its beauty and sorrow. Well written!
February 11th, 2021 16:13
One At A Time.
SureshG said:
Your analogy of a single flake (each flake being truly unique) to individualism is unparalleled, and more when so poetically stated
February 11th, 2021 13:08
SureshG said:
Your analogy of a single flake (each flake being truly unique) to individualism is unparalleled, and more when so poetically stated
February 11th, 2021 13:08
One At A Time.
willow tree said:
I enjoyed it -yet why do crowds bring sorrow ?
February 11th, 2021 10:12
willow tree said:
I enjoyed it -yet why do crowds bring sorrow ?
February 11th, 2021 10:12
One At A Time.
John Prophet said:
Nice work Andy. Love a good snow fall! ❄️☃️
February 11th, 2021 08:09
John Prophet said:
Nice work Andy. Love a good snow fall! ❄️☃️
February 11th, 2021 08:09
One At A Time.
L. B. Mek said:
but my friend, you\'ve also seen the majesty of that white carpet, those individual flakes paint the earth with, when they truly choose
\'to join together\': as equals...
(such, be
life\'s unrequited bane of commonality
within Nature\'s: cyclical, cynicism of duality
while all existence is tethered
a mere coin flip\'s - breadth
to empathy\'s mercy...)
a wonderful read Andy,
thanks for inspiring my little reply
February 11th, 2021 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
but my friend, you\'ve also seen the majesty of that white carpet, those individual flakes paint the earth with, when they truly choose
\'to join together\': as equals...
(such, be
life\'s unrequited bane of commonality
within Nature\'s: cyclical, cynicism of duality
while all existence is tethered
a mere coin flip\'s - breadth
to empathy\'s mercy...)
a wonderful read Andy,
thanks for inspiring my little reply
February 11th, 2021 05:52
Talking On The Screen.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Those wonderful times of the past
When the three of us
Were together.
But we laugh as well,
The humour in our lives
Always to the fore.
There are many miles between us
But that distance means nothing
As we sit by each other\'...
oh my friend what warmth you imbue into mere words,
a great read Andy
February 11th, 2021 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'Those wonderful times of the past
When the three of us
Were together.
But we laugh as well,
The humour in our lives
Always to the fore.
There are many miles between us
But that distance means nothing
As we sit by each other\'...
oh my friend what warmth you imbue into mere words,
a great read Andy
February 11th, 2021 04:41
One At A Time.
Doggerel Dave said:
No blame (your comment) accrues with you here Andy – only the stultifying and potentially dangerous effect crowds can (not necessarily will) have. Would you accept my judgement of this as a parable, succinct and nicely polished?
Thanks also for the music.
February 11th, 2021 03:38
Doggerel Dave said:
No blame (your comment) accrues with you here Andy – only the stultifying and potentially dangerous effect crowds can (not necessarily will) have. Would you accept my judgement of this as a parable, succinct and nicely polished?
Thanks also for the music.
February 11th, 2021 03:38
Talking On The Screen.
Fay Slimm. said:
Chatting with someone special is always a way to lighten our hearts Andy - - thank you for sharing your experience of that with us and also for sharing the music that always lifts my heart.
February 10th, 2021 16:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Chatting with someone special is always a way to lighten our hearts Andy - - thank you for sharing your experience of that with us and also for sharing the music that always lifts my heart.
February 10th, 2021 16:27
The Green Disappears – Haiku.
AlitaOpal said:
Green is the colour of the heart chakra, wonderful piece Goldfinch 🌹
February 9th, 2021 20:11
AlitaOpal said:
Green is the colour of the heart chakra, wonderful piece Goldfinch 🌹
February 9th, 2021 20:11
The Green Disappears – Haiku.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done Gold accept this humble
response.
dandelions bloom
in the snow
February 9th, 2021 10:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done Gold accept this humble
response.
dandelions bloom
in the snow
February 9th, 2021 10:55
The Green Disappears – Haiku.
dusk arising said:
Tears from heaven fall
Bringing forth a joyous call
Build a snowman tall
Grrr at you getting me counting syllables!
February 9th, 2021 07:23
dusk arising said:
Tears from heaven fall
Bringing forth a joyous call
Build a snowman tall
Grrr at you getting me counting syllables!
February 9th, 2021 07:23
The Green Disappears – Haiku.
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful Andy,
it snowed here as well, not as much I think - for our
\'grey, pointedly: stayed...\'
February 9th, 2021 06:00
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful Andy,
it snowed here as well, not as much I think - for our
\'grey, pointedly: stayed...\'
February 9th, 2021 06:00
The Green Disappears – Haiku.
Doggerel Dave said:
Not fond of haikus generally, Andy - but this one gave me a clear vision. So...
February 9th, 2021 04:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Not fond of haikus generally, Andy - but this one gave me a clear vision. So...
February 9th, 2021 04:45
The Green Disappears – Haiku.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Autumn pulls a silky blanket over its head and sleeps again
Great capture of nature today Andy
February 9th, 2021 03:52
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Autumn pulls a silky blanket over its head and sleeps again
Great capture of nature today Andy
February 9th, 2021 03:52
The Green Disappears – Haiku.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
We got a slight covering, but the green has not completely disappeared.
February 9th, 2021 02:49
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
We got a slight covering, but the green has not completely disappeared.
February 9th, 2021 02:49
Love For Eternity.
dusk arising said:
It\'s written in the stars. You only need look to the heavens at night and it is as plain as day and written in your heart.
One day we shall all share the bliss of the love we have lived.
February 8th, 2021 07:49
dusk arising said:
It\'s written in the stars. You only need look to the heavens at night and it is as plain as day and written in your heart.
One day we shall all share the bliss of the love we have lived.
February 8th, 2021 07:49
Love For Eternity.
DesertWords said:
Soon I will share a 60th anniversary with my Love. Your poem reminds me to celebrate each day, each moment. Thank you.
February 8th, 2021 07:00
DesertWords said:
Soon I will share a 60th anniversary with my Love. Your poem reminds me to celebrate each day, each moment. Thank you.
February 8th, 2021 07:00
Love For Eternity.
L. B. Mek said:
just beautiful, I will never tire of reading your wonderful depiction of that love, life so fit - to gift, you and your treasured wife..
\'emotive\' doesn\'t even begin to do your dedication\'s justice Andy
February 8th, 2021 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
just beautiful, I will never tire of reading your wonderful depiction of that love, life so fit - to gift, you and your treasured wife..
\'emotive\' doesn\'t even begin to do your dedication\'s justice Andy
February 8th, 2021 06:36
Love For Eternity.
JonathanB said:
Just beautiful. I can really relate to that after 37 years of marriage to the love of my life.
February 8th, 2021 05:17
JonathanB said:
Just beautiful. I can really relate to that after 37 years of marriage to the love of my life.
February 8th, 2021 05:17
It Is Back.
L. B. Mek said:
forgive me Andy, I\'m not the biggest cricket fan, but your write still took me back - in-time...
as I used to work at Lord\'s and Twickenham in my adventurous teens, and yes I ticked-off Wembley as well but try as I might Wimbledon - actually had standard\'s to uphold,
so my grand-slam stadia dreams
dissipated in straight sets, before
I got anywhere near centre court... lol
February 8th, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
forgive me Andy, I\'m not the biggest cricket fan, but your write still took me back - in-time...
as I used to work at Lord\'s and Twickenham in my adventurous teens, and yes I ticked-off Wembley as well but try as I might Wimbledon - actually had standard\'s to uphold,
so my grand-slam stadia dreams
dissipated in straight sets, before
I got anywhere near centre court... lol
February 8th, 2021 05:14
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