Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Life FIB.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Nicely done, Andy. Went well with my morning coffee.
April 29th, 2021 09:35
Jerry Reynolds said:
Nicely done, Andy. Went well with my morning coffee.
April 29th, 2021 09:35
Life FIB.
Accidental Poet said:
And a fine place it is to be. Well done Andy. ; )
April 29th, 2021 05:17
Accidental Poet said:
And a fine place it is to be. Well done Andy. ; )
April 29th, 2021 05:17
Light Ghost.
L. B. Mek said:
yup, witty commentary is a timeless recipe my friend
thanks for the fun read
April 29th, 2021 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
yup, witty commentary is a timeless recipe my friend
thanks for the fun read
April 29th, 2021 03:38
Life FIB.
orchidee said:
A
Good
Write
Gold.
My FIB attempt - a poor show from me! lol.
April 29th, 2021 02:29
orchidee said:
A
Good
Write
Gold.
My FIB attempt - a poor show from me! lol.
April 29th, 2021 02:29
Light Ghost.
Fay Slimm. said:
Nods of agreement at reading your piece of exposure dear Andy - those with phones to their ears give me a right scare in daylight not to mention their appearance in darkness.
April 29th, 2021 02:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Nods of agreement at reading your piece of exposure dear Andy - those with phones to their ears give me a right scare in daylight not to mention their appearance in darkness.
April 29th, 2021 02:08
Life FIB.
Doggerel Dave said:
This put me in my place......... Thanks Andy......
April 29th, 2021 02:07
Doggerel Dave said:
This put me in my place......... Thanks Andy......
April 29th, 2021 02:07
Light Ghost.
Accidental Poet said:
Interesting how tired eyes seem to see odd things. Love the song A Summer\'s Place. Great write Andy.
April 28th, 2021 18:50
Accidental Poet said:
Interesting how tired eyes seem to see odd things. Love the song A Summer\'s Place. Great write Andy.
April 28th, 2021 18:50
Covid Jabs.
PrEm Ji said:
A Covid vaccination is nothing but an exchange of hope... Stay blessed...
April 27th, 2021 10:11
PrEm Ji said:
A Covid vaccination is nothing but an exchange of hope... Stay blessed...
April 27th, 2021 10:11
Covid Jabs.
Doggerel Dave said:
Good experience by the sound of it, Andy.
Humour in such situations makes a big difference, and they sound like the kind of people who would really enjoy a ringing endorsement - and in poetic form too.
Your words were good stuff by any standards.
April 27th, 2021 05:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Good experience by the sound of it, Andy.
Humour in such situations makes a big difference, and they sound like the kind of people who would really enjoy a ringing endorsement - and in poetic form too.
Your words were good stuff by any standards.
April 27th, 2021 05:55
Only The Lonely.
L. B. Mek said:
so these lyrics inspired the spine to your worded anguish, Andy
caught you off-guard, maybe
in that realm where a few good days lined-up in a row, for a change
and you felt the trickles of whimsy, awaken from within, too easily
then back - without a parachute
you were swirling in that cyclone pain of remembrance
and wilting, in the face of unrequited yearning
still, my friend you\'ve been here before
so when those gushing tears stopped forming streams
and dwindled to mere droplet puddles, once more
you chose: to look ahead and bravely smiled
\'I got this! my beloved...\' you whispered, to that part of Joyce
pulsing within each gifted breath, you learned to treasure
eventually, when your trembling fingers - calmed
and your stoic British resolve, resumed
eyesight - blinked dry, feet - back-up and sturdy
stubbornly facing, that semblance of reality
you\'ve learnt to accept, willingly
grateful steps - moved, to replenish your spirit
with a few sips of a sobering - stiff drink
and finally sat back down, before a blank screen
let your fingers - dance: to the cadence
of that poetic genius, you choose to share with us...
\'behold: ye all
his worded testimony
to fruits, that blossom
from a nurtured love\'s: undying fortitude
of unflinching, loyalty!\'
April 27th, 2021 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
so these lyrics inspired the spine to your worded anguish, Andy
caught you off-guard, maybe
in that realm where a few good days lined-up in a row, for a change
and you felt the trickles of whimsy, awaken from within, too easily
then back - without a parachute
you were swirling in that cyclone pain of remembrance
and wilting, in the face of unrequited yearning
still, my friend you\'ve been here before
so when those gushing tears stopped forming streams
and dwindled to mere droplet puddles, once more
you chose: to look ahead and bravely smiled
\'I got this! my beloved...\' you whispered, to that part of Joyce
pulsing within each gifted breath, you learned to treasure
eventually, when your trembling fingers - calmed
and your stoic British resolve, resumed
eyesight - blinked dry, feet - back-up and sturdy
stubbornly facing, that semblance of reality
you\'ve learnt to accept, willingly
grateful steps - moved, to replenish your spirit
with a few sips of a sobering - stiff drink
and finally sat back down, before a blank screen
let your fingers - dance: to the cadence
of that poetic genius, you choose to share with us...
\'behold: ye all
his worded testimony
to fruits, that blossom
from a nurtured love\'s: undying fortitude
of unflinching, loyalty!\'
April 27th, 2021 04:03
Only The Lonely.
Accidental Poet said:
I too know your loneliness, but what keeps me positive is feeling how lucky I was to have had her in my life to begin with. Smile, and she smiles with you. Great emotional write Andy.
April 26th, 2021 18:07
Accidental Poet said:
I too know your loneliness, but what keeps me positive is feeling how lucky I was to have had her in my life to begin with. Smile, and she smiles with you. Great emotional write Andy.
April 26th, 2021 18:07
Only The Lonely.
Doggerel Dave said:
Faced with that kind of ongoing anguish, words from me seem inadequate, Andy - Sorry.
April 26th, 2021 08:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Faced with that kind of ongoing anguish, words from me seem inadequate, Andy - Sorry.
April 26th, 2021 08:33
Only The Lonely.
Neville said:
... this is such an awesomely emotionally charged page my golden friend .. I shouldn\'t wonder if somewhere this very evening an electric storm lights up the sky in a dramatic downpouring demonstration of reciprocated love .............. Neville
April 26th, 2021 02:44
Neville said:
... this is such an awesomely emotionally charged page my golden friend .. I shouldn\'t wonder if somewhere this very evening an electric storm lights up the sky in a dramatic downpouring demonstration of reciprocated love .............. Neville
April 26th, 2021 02:44
Only The Lonely.
Caring dove said:
Sorry for your sadness, and loneliness . A nicely expressed poem )
April 26th, 2021 01:17
Caring dove said:
Sorry for your sadness, and loneliness . A nicely expressed poem )
April 26th, 2021 01:17
Guilty Pleasures.
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Teddy, we all have those guilty pleasures. But as long as it harms no one, why the guilty conscience? Enjoy your music Andy. Great write. ; )
April 25th, 2021 10:09
Accidental Poet said:
Have to agree with Teddy, we all have those guilty pleasures. But as long as it harms no one, why the guilty conscience? Enjoy your music Andy. Great write. ; )
April 25th, 2021 10:09
Guilty Pleasures.
John Prophet said:
Life is a stress test. Finding pleasure where you can makes it less stressful
Nice write....
April 25th, 2021 07:34
John Prophet said:
Life is a stress test. Finding pleasure where you can makes it less stressful
Nice write....
April 25th, 2021 07:34
Guilty Pleasures.
Neville said:
.... and why should ya eh\' ...
for some reason \'No milk today\' my love has gone away .. by Herman\'s Hermits popped just into my head ...
Neville
April 25th, 2021 02:46
Neville said:
.... and why should ya eh\' ...
for some reason \'No milk today\' my love has gone away .. by Herman\'s Hermits popped just into my head ...
Neville
April 25th, 2021 02:46
Visions Senryu.
Accidental Poet said:
And you paint those visions from your heart so masterful Andy. ; )
April 24th, 2021 06:46
Accidental Poet said:
And you paint those visions from your heart so masterful Andy. ; )
April 24th, 2021 06:46
Visions Senryu.
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with love and devotion both the words and the number.
April 24th, 2021 03:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with love and devotion both the words and the number.
April 24th, 2021 03:49
Visions Senryu.
Neville said:
... who needs more words when you can say it all ... and so bloomin well in so few .................... ?
... Neville
April 24th, 2021 03:42
Neville said:
... who needs more words when you can say it all ... and so bloomin well in so few .................... ?
... Neville
April 24th, 2021 03:42
Visions Senryu.
Doggerel Dave said:
Your shortie (my own technical terminology - of which I have a whole repertoire) just about says it all in the simplest possible way - I could get to quite like that applied to a vast array of human activity.
And thanks for the Flying Pickets - bought back some old memories, plus they were good.
April 24th, 2021 01:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Your shortie (my own technical terminology - of which I have a whole repertoire) just about says it all in the simplest possible way - I could get to quite like that applied to a vast array of human activity.
And thanks for the Flying Pickets - bought back some old memories, plus they were good.
April 24th, 2021 01:12
Virtual Event.
Accidental Poet said:
World leaders, I\'m reminded of many years ago how young boys would build a fort and all be part of a club. Only today\'s club have no clue of the real issues that our world faces. Great write and song video Andy.
April 23rd, 2021 20:57
Accidental Poet said:
World leaders, I\'m reminded of many years ago how young boys would build a fort and all be part of a club. Only today\'s club have no clue of the real issues that our world faces. Great write and song video Andy.
April 23rd, 2021 20:57
In My Dreams.
Caring dove said:
Really lovely words . Nice place to be . Good to have such lovely memories
April 23rd, 2021 12:46
Caring dove said:
Really lovely words . Nice place to be . Good to have such lovely memories
April 23rd, 2021 12:46
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