Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Under The Hammer.
SureshG said:
Nothing is ever sacred, so let the hammer fall, I ain’t bidding anyways. Thanks
June 30th, 2021 14:16
SureshG said:
Nothing is ever sacred, so let the hammer fall, I ain’t bidding anyways. Thanks
June 30th, 2021 14:16
Under The Hammer.
dusk arising said:
I was five and uncle cedric took me to this pub where the music was loud and a blonde lady was dancing and taking off her clothes. She removed everything except her black gloves and boots and then stood there like the five of spades. Unclre Cedric... why is her hair blonde on top but black down there, I asked. Well dusk, do you remember when yer dad hit his thumb with the hammer last month and it turned black? Yes i said. Well my lad, he said pointing at her nether regions, that\'s had some hammer son.
June 30th, 2021 01:12
dusk arising said:
I was five and uncle cedric took me to this pub where the music was loud and a blonde lady was dancing and taking off her clothes. She removed everything except her black gloves and boots and then stood there like the five of spades. Unclre Cedric... why is her hair blonde on top but black down there, I asked. Well dusk, do you remember when yer dad hit his thumb with the hammer last month and it turned black? Yes i said. Well my lad, he said pointing at her nether regions, that\'s had some hammer son.
June 30th, 2021 01:12
This Light.
dusk arising said:
That song reborn on our TVs these days in the LLoyds bank advert always makes me think of my son and how he and his partner have built, day by day into the fabulous (Oh that word from the 60\'s LOL) unit they have become.
Of course us old codgers are a long way from \'only just begun\' and taking the words of your poem to heart is a must for us.
Grey days are still days which are lit by the eternal light which gave us life and preserves life.
Into my favourites Andy.
June 29th, 2021 13:15
dusk arising said:
That song reborn on our TVs these days in the LLoyds bank advert always makes me think of my son and how he and his partner have built, day by day into the fabulous (Oh that word from the 60\'s LOL) unit they have become.
Of course us old codgers are a long way from \'only just begun\' and taking the words of your poem to heart is a must for us.
Grey days are still days which are lit by the eternal light which gave us life and preserves life.
Into my favourites Andy.
June 29th, 2021 13:15
This Light.
Thekkinkkattil said:
Positive thinking helps to tide over this grey period enjoyable
June 29th, 2021 04:50
Thekkinkkattil said:
Positive thinking helps to tide over this grey period enjoyable
June 29th, 2021 04:50
This Light.
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful! simply and unquestionably
thank you Andy
June 29th, 2021 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful! simply and unquestionably
thank you Andy
June 29th, 2021 04:44
This Light.
Neville said:
You are a ray of sunshine my golden friend .. todays offering more than glows ............................................. :)
June 29th, 2021 03:31
Neville said:
You are a ray of sunshine my golden friend .. todays offering more than glows ............................................. :)
June 29th, 2021 03:31
Infinite Universe.
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking Andy, truly
worth reading a few times, to fully grasp
its worded depths I found
June 28th, 2021 08:30
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking Andy, truly
worth reading a few times, to fully grasp
its worded depths I found
June 28th, 2021 08:30
Infinite Universe.
Neville said:
Awesome .. tis one of them things I just can\'t get my head around ... its a big place for sure ...
Now see wot ya just done GF60 ya gone and produced single verse to encompass the whole of the universe :)
June 28th, 2021 03:23
Neville said:
Awesome .. tis one of them things I just can\'t get my head around ... its a big place for sure ...
Now see wot ya just done GF60 ya gone and produced single verse to encompass the whole of the universe :)
June 28th, 2021 03:23
Infinite Universe.
Doggerel Dave said:
Infinite universes are more than likely, I feel; however, I cannot buy the infinite versions of me stuff.
But who knows?
Thanks for raising the topic, Andy.
June 28th, 2021 02:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Infinite universes are more than likely, I feel; however, I cannot buy the infinite versions of me stuff.
But who knows?
Thanks for raising the topic, Andy.
June 28th, 2021 02:15
Infinite Universe.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Hell must exist then - cos I\'m gonna sing infinitely! heehee.
June 28th, 2021 01:45
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Hell must exist then - cos I\'m gonna sing infinitely! heehee.
June 28th, 2021 01:45
But Is It Poetry?
SureshG said:
I’ve seen a blank canvas in a recognized gallery, displayed as art, so who shall claim that a Scribble is not poetry, btw - this is poetry
June 27th, 2021 02:46
SureshG said:
I’ve seen a blank canvas in a recognized gallery, displayed as art, so who shall claim that a Scribble is not poetry, btw - this is poetry
June 27th, 2021 02:46
But Is It Poetry?
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, Andy. Just because I prefer rhyme and the rest doesn\'t mean I don\'t enjoy unstructured stuff (although no rhymes present doesn\'t mean it doesn\'t have any structure or cohesion). Whether I enjoy depends on the skill of the writer and the content - all very subjective judgments.
June 27th, 2021 01:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, Andy. Just because I prefer rhyme and the rest doesn\'t mean I don\'t enjoy unstructured stuff (although no rhymes present doesn\'t mean it doesn\'t have any structure or cohesion). Whether I enjoy depends on the skill of the writer and the content - all very subjective judgments.
June 27th, 2021 01:52
But Is It Poetry?
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Now me poem - \'But is it singing?\' (by me). Answer: Nope!
June 27th, 2021 01:41
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Now me poem - \'But is it singing?\' (by me). Answer: Nope!
June 27th, 2021 01:41
But Is It Poetry?
dusk arising said:
So true, the average person has no interest beyond the obvious in art or poetry. Indeed very few seem to appreciate poetry. Most seem to expect rhyme.... and say it cant be poetry if it doesn\'t rhyme.
I think the most of us on mps are far broader minded than that
June 27th, 2021 01:28
dusk arising said:
So true, the average person has no interest beyond the obvious in art or poetry. Indeed very few seem to appreciate poetry. Most seem to expect rhyme.... and say it cant be poetry if it doesn\'t rhyme.
I think the most of us on mps are far broader minded than that
June 27th, 2021 01:28
But Is It Poetry?
Saxon Crow said:
Well it all depends on how you say it i reckon.
Very good point well made GF
June 27th, 2021 01:26
Saxon Crow said:
Well it all depends on how you say it i reckon.
Very good point well made GF
June 27th, 2021 01:26
Lost In Artwork.
John Prophet said:
“The mind of the painter.”
Each brushstroke represents
a thought. Wonderful write.
JP
June 26th, 2021 08:57
John Prophet said:
“The mind of the painter.”
Each brushstroke represents
a thought. Wonderful write.
JP
June 26th, 2021 08:57
Lost In Artwork.
dusk arising said:
He is indeed a most accomplished artist and your piece today is a fine tribute to the inspiration he has given you.
June 26th, 2021 07:53
dusk arising said:
He is indeed a most accomplished artist and your piece today is a fine tribute to the inspiration he has given you.
June 26th, 2021 07:53
Lost In Artwork.
Neville said:
I wonder the same thing myself and get those self same feelings whenever I wind my way up my spiral stairs and take a look at my own Michael Edwards original smiling back at me ................
A good un Goldie ... N :)
June 26th, 2021 02:59
Neville said:
I wonder the same thing myself and get those self same feelings whenever I wind my way up my spiral stairs and take a look at my own Michael Edwards original smiling back at me ................
A good un Goldie ... N :)
June 26th, 2021 02:59
Lost In Artwork.
Caring dove said:
Good poem . You can see so much in a painting .. sometimes
June 26th, 2021 02:32
Caring dove said:
Good poem . You can see so much in a painting .. sometimes
June 26th, 2021 02:32
Lost In Artwork.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I hope to see some local artists \'at home\' soon.
One is doing recycled materials - old junk?! heehee. Nope! I was very un-cultured.
June 26th, 2021 02:00
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I hope to see some local artists \'at home\' soon.
One is doing recycled materials - old junk?! heehee. Nope! I was very un-cultured.
June 26th, 2021 02:00
Red Dress.
Fay Slimm. said:
How wonderful for you both - Joyce must have been so thrilled - Oh what a night and a song to keep in your heart forever.
June 25th, 2021 16:31
Fay Slimm. said:
How wonderful for you both - Joyce must have been so thrilled - Oh what a night and a song to keep in your heart forever.
June 25th, 2021 16:31
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