Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
She is Not There.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks UNCLE ANDY for a great SONG - by a Great SINGER and a great TRIBUTE to MLK. Thanks for sharing with us the great void in your life 24/7 due the fact that your beloved wife JOYCE - although present in the BODY - due to ALZHEIMERS - SHE is in essence not THERE ! I have some experience of Couples on my Home visit list for PHYSIO and it is very very tragic. The person they knew & loved for all their married life has disappeared. One can only comfort them and PRAY with them to reduce the heartache ! You are in all our thought and PRAYERS - AMEN
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 5th, 2019 17:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks UNCLE ANDY for a great SONG - by a Great SINGER and a great TRIBUTE to MLK. Thanks for sharing with us the great void in your life 24/7 due the fact that your beloved wife JOYCE - although present in the BODY - due to ALZHEIMERS - SHE is in essence not THERE ! I have some experience of Couples on my Home visit list for PHYSIO and it is very very tragic. The person they knew & loved for all their married life has disappeared. One can only comfort them and PRAY with them to reduce the heartache ! You are in all our thought and PRAYERS - AMEN
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 5th, 2019 17:26
She is Not There.
Aislinn Wilson said:
Very impactful. Fantastic emotion and use of repetition.
November 5th, 2019 14:26
Aislinn Wilson said:
Very impactful. Fantastic emotion and use of repetition.
November 5th, 2019 14:26
She is Not There.
FredPeyer said:
She may not be there, Goldie, but every line in your poem shows that the love is there. And in the end, that is all that matters!
November 5th, 2019 10:58
FredPeyer said:
She may not be there, Goldie, but every line in your poem shows that the love is there. And in the end, that is all that matters!
November 5th, 2019 10:58
She is Not There.
dusk arising said:
This really reached deep into me and i feel for your loss.
Only your innate positivity is going to see you through this which thankfully is very strong in you.
November 5th, 2019 05:06
dusk arising said:
This really reached deep into me and i feel for your loss.
Only your innate positivity is going to see you through this which thankfully is very strong in you.
November 5th, 2019 05:06
She is Not There.
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a moving read dear Andy - - she will never leave the place in your heart where she lives in true love.
November 5th, 2019 04:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a moving read dear Andy - - she will never leave the place in your heart where she lives in true love.
November 5th, 2019 04:51
The Winning Sport.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE ANDY ~ For a fine tribute to a fine GAME ! Because of the high points awarded (unlike SOCCER) SEVEN (for a converted TRY) and THREE for penalties & Drop Kicks which all go over the BAR scores of 100+ are not uncommon ! Whereas in SOCCER a score of 10 or more makes HISTORY ! Like the recent Cup Game between Liverpool & Arsenal (usually so defensive) after a PEN shootout Liverpool (of course) won on agregate 10 : 9 ! There is no rhyme or reason in RU results (Angela is still supporting NEW ZEALAND) NZ beat RSA we beat NZ a priori we should have beaten RSA but they hammered us ! Im glad ANGELA talked me out of paying £11,000 for a flight ~ hotel and a seat next to Prince Harry ! However we had a Wedding in the Peak District on Saturday and listening to the BIG MATCH on the Car Radio would have been very third class ! So we went on FRIDAY NIGHT to the Premier Inn near DERBY and watched the Match on the BIG Screen ! There were no Springboks staying @ the Hotel so were shared the humiliation of defeat with 30 others who (mercifully ~ no Scots Welsh or Irish) were all England Supporters ! Some of the Ladies were in TEARS and none of us ordered an AMARULA ! As you say we*ll have to wait another four YEARS but at least we got a SILVER and ANGELA a BRONZE for NZ ! Poor Wales (like England in the Soccer Cup) back to the VALLEYS with a wooden love spoon !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 4th, 2019 20:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE ANDY ~ For a fine tribute to a fine GAME ! Because of the high points awarded (unlike SOCCER) SEVEN (for a converted TRY) and THREE for penalties & Drop Kicks which all go over the BAR scores of 100+ are not uncommon ! Whereas in SOCCER a score of 10 or more makes HISTORY ! Like the recent Cup Game between Liverpool & Arsenal (usually so defensive) after a PEN shootout Liverpool (of course) won on agregate 10 : 9 ! There is no rhyme or reason in RU results (Angela is still supporting NEW ZEALAND) NZ beat RSA we beat NZ a priori we should have beaten RSA but they hammered us ! Im glad ANGELA talked me out of paying £11,000 for a flight ~ hotel and a seat next to Prince Harry ! However we had a Wedding in the Peak District on Saturday and listening to the BIG MATCH on the Car Radio would have been very third class ! So we went on FRIDAY NIGHT to the Premier Inn near DERBY and watched the Match on the BIG Screen ! There were no Springboks staying @ the Hotel so were shared the humiliation of defeat with 30 others who (mercifully ~ no Scots Welsh or Irish) were all England Supporters ! Some of the Ladies were in TEARS and none of us ordered an AMARULA ! As you say we*ll have to wait another four YEARS but at least we got a SILVER and ANGELA a BRONZE for NZ ! Poor Wales (like England in the Soccer Cup) back to the VALLEYS with a wooden love spoon !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 4th, 2019 20:36
The Winning Sport.
Michael Edwards said:
And it\'s a loud \'hear hear\' from me - fine write about a great sport.
November 4th, 2019 02:31
Michael Edwards said:
And it\'s a loud \'hear hear\' from me - fine write about a great sport.
November 4th, 2019 02:31
Words to Page.
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
An excellent write!
Keep writing FineB
November 3rd, 2019 14:07
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
An excellent write!
Keep writing FineB
November 3rd, 2019 14:07
Words to Page.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
just let the heart bleed my friend
November 3rd, 2019 12:56
ron parrish aka wordman said:
just let the heart bleed my friend
November 3rd, 2019 12:56
Words to Page.
Suresh said:
It was the essence of the words, such as yours, that allowed our species to become creative.
November 3rd, 2019 11:30
Suresh said:
It was the essence of the words, such as yours, that allowed our species to become creative.
November 3rd, 2019 11:30
Words to Page.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I suppose I should challenge you, Andy, to compose a poem to be set to the music of John Cage. Take a listen to his piece entitled 4\' 33\" which he composed (supposedly) in 1959, but I think he had been working on it for years. It doesn\'t really matter which version you hear they are all of equal musical prowess, however the rendering by David Tudor is the most revered.
I\'m trying not to be boastful when I say that I can actually play this piece blindfolded.
Ex animo, Alan
November 3rd, 2019 09:26
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I suppose I should challenge you, Andy, to compose a poem to be set to the music of John Cage. Take a listen to his piece entitled 4\' 33\" which he composed (supposedly) in 1959, but I think he had been working on it for years. It doesn\'t really matter which version you hear they are all of equal musical prowess, however the rendering by David Tudor is the most revered.
I\'m trying not to be boastful when I say that I can actually play this piece blindfolded.
Ex animo, Alan
November 3rd, 2019 09:26
Words to Page.
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely so true, what a fruitfully food for thought delightful page it is.
Always appreciated
November 3rd, 2019 05:20
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely so true, what a fruitfully food for thought delightful page it is.
Always appreciated
November 3rd, 2019 05:20
Words to Page.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for this first read of my day dear Andy - Words from your caring pen are always welcome my friend - wishing you a very pleasant Sunday.
November 3rd, 2019 02:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you for this first read of my day dear Andy - Words from your caring pen are always welcome my friend - wishing you a very pleasant Sunday.
November 3rd, 2019 02:45
Words to Page.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Do a Silent Poem - no words in it, of course. And who knows how many verses it has? Could run to millions! heehee.
November 3rd, 2019 02:35
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Do a Silent Poem - no words in it, of course. And who knows how many verses it has? Could run to millions! heehee.
November 3rd, 2019 02:35
The First Hippie.
FineB said:
Hi Goldfinch60,
What an awesome write. Very good.
Something tells me in your younger days you were a very cool dude but I am sure you still are!
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:37
FineB said:
Hi Goldfinch60,
What an awesome write. Very good.
Something tells me in your younger days you were a very cool dude but I am sure you still are!
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:37
The First Hippie.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
I’m all for...
“Bringing love,
Not war,
To all.”
Amen to that!!!
Have a wonderful weekend!
My love to Joyce and to you.
~Laura~🌻
November 2nd, 2019 06:49
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
I’m all for...
“Bringing love,
Not war,
To all.”
Amen to that!!!
Have a wonderful weekend!
My love to Joyce and to you.
~Laura~🌻
November 2nd, 2019 06:49
The First Hippie.
Suresh said:
not only a hippie, but a Buddhist hippie, preaching non- violence, peace and love towards all.
November 2nd, 2019 04:51
Suresh said:
not only a hippie, but a Buddhist hippie, preaching non- violence, peace and love towards all.
November 2nd, 2019 04:51
The First Hippie.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
That an angle Andy
You could be on to something
In the words of John Lennon \"You may say I\'m a dreamer... But I\'m not the only one\"
Great write have a great weekend
November 2nd, 2019 03:46
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
That an angle Andy
You could be on to something
In the words of John Lennon \"You may say I\'m a dreamer... But I\'m not the only one\"
Great write have a great weekend
November 2nd, 2019 03:46
The First Hippie.
orchidee said:
Hmm, not sure I would agree here with all of this Gold. Yes, loving God and loving one another, as He said.
November 2nd, 2019 02:49
orchidee said:
Hmm, not sure I would agree here with all of this Gold. Yes, loving God and loving one another, as He said.
November 2nd, 2019 02:49
The First Hippie.
kevin browne said:
Ah, the unorhadox point of view against \'The First Hippie\'. Jesus would have been very proud smoking a joint on a daily basis from birth to his death. Hung upon his cross singing \'Always Look On The Bright Side Of Life\'. to believe or not to believe now that is the question. Your message is very clear in your well described poem...
November 2nd, 2019 02:45
kevin browne said:
Ah, the unorhadox point of view against \'The First Hippie\'. Jesus would have been very proud smoking a joint on a daily basis from birth to his death. Hung upon his cross singing \'Always Look On The Bright Side Of Life\'. to believe or not to believe now that is the question. Your message is very clear in your well described poem...
November 2nd, 2019 02:45
St Stephen\'s Autumn.
Suresh said:
As poets go, you have shown your mantle with these finely tuned words.
November 1st, 2019 21:58
Suresh said:
As poets go, you have shown your mantle with these finely tuned words.
November 1st, 2019 21:58
St Stephen\'s Autumn.
kevin browne said:
What a wonderfully graceful tribute poem for Joyce, A marvellous read and tinged with a poignant emotional pull on the hearts of readers. Fantastic job written...
November 1st, 2019 13:21
kevin browne said:
What a wonderfully graceful tribute poem for Joyce, A marvellous read and tinged with a poignant emotional pull on the hearts of readers. Fantastic job written...
November 1st, 2019 13:21
St Stephen\'s Autumn.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Autumn in the air today great write Andy
November 1st, 2019 07:04
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Autumn in the air today great write Andy
November 1st, 2019 07:04
St Stephen\'s Autumn.
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful collection of diverse happenings in Autumn and I am sure the residents with Joyce will treasure your reading today - thank you dear Andy for sharing it with us.
November 1st, 2019 05:25
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful collection of diverse happenings in Autumn and I am sure the residents with Joyce will treasure your reading today - thank you dear Andy for sharing it with us.
November 1st, 2019 05:25
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