Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Chet Baker Acrostic.
Michael Edwards said:
Great clip and poem Andy - hope you are okay and enjoying your break.
February 1st, 2019 06:22
Michael Edwards said:
Great clip and poem Andy - hope you are okay and enjoying your break.
February 1st, 2019 06:22
Chet Baker Acrostic.
Neville said:
Ah\' something of a classic ... I am glad you posted this poem and accompanying sound clip... sums up just the way I feel.... N
February 1st, 2019 06:03
Neville said:
Ah\' something of a classic ... I am glad you posted this poem and accompanying sound clip... sums up just the way I feel.... N
February 1st, 2019 06:03
Old Age Phonephobia?
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh the sax has always blown me away my friend - - - such cool cool music - -- - - the strange old couple with mobiles would have brought a smile to my face too.
January 31st, 2019 16:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh the sax has always blown me away my friend - - - such cool cool music - -- - - the strange old couple with mobiles would have brought a smile to my face too.
January 31st, 2019 16:53
Old Age Phonephobia?
dusk arising said:
You\'re never to old to learn a bad new trick. My 5\" screen phone is too flippin small to want to spend too much time squinting at it and laptop too big.
January 31st, 2019 16:07
dusk arising said:
You\'re never to old to learn a bad new trick. My 5\" screen phone is too flippin small to want to spend too much time squinting at it and laptop too big.
January 31st, 2019 16:07
Old Age Phonephobia?
sylviasearcher said:
My mum is 62 and on her phone more than me! They had to keep waving that no mobile phone sign to her in the theatre!
Every occasion needs a selfie, especially with her favourite daughter!
The older generation eh?
On topic!
January 31st, 2019 07:45
sylviasearcher said:
My mum is 62 and on her phone more than me! They had to keep waving that no mobile phone sign to her in the theatre!
Every occasion needs a selfie, especially with her favourite daughter!
The older generation eh?
On topic!
January 31st, 2019 07:45
Old Age Phonephobia?
Michael Edwards said:
Another great observational piece Andy - sadly it\'s becoming more evident these days.
January 31st, 2019 06:42
Michael Edwards said:
Another great observational piece Andy - sadly it\'s becoming more evident these days.
January 31st, 2019 06:42
Old Age Phonephobia?
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Good Morning!
I enjoyed the video and the poem!
I must admit, I’m an owner of one of those “mobiles”! I will also admit that I don’t own a computer! If I didn’t have this device that I’m using right now, I wouldn’t be able to send you this message! For my purposes, I find having this device to be very convenient because it is small enough to fit anywhere! I do travel quite a bit.
To each his/her own...
I guess!
I hope you’re getting a lot of R & R this week!
Have a wonderful day!
I’ll be indoors today. The temperature outdoors is -17C!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
January 31st, 2019 04:58
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Good Morning!
I enjoyed the video and the poem!
I must admit, I’m an owner of one of those “mobiles”! I will also admit that I don’t own a computer! If I didn’t have this device that I’m using right now, I wouldn’t be able to send you this message! For my purposes, I find having this device to be very convenient because it is small enough to fit anywhere! I do travel quite a bit.
To each his/her own...
I guess!
I hope you’re getting a lot of R & R this week!
Have a wonderful day!
I’ll be indoors today. The temperature outdoors is -17C!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
January 31st, 2019 04:58
Old Age Phonephobia?
Neville said:
nowt so strange as folk... maybe it said more about your expectations... tho I would probably agree... Did you know there is no reason whatsoever to be told or expected not to use your mobile in a GP practice or hospital waiting area.... if anyone says turn it off or it interferes with this or that, tell them to go take a hike....we used to let anyone use their mobile at our old surgery & clinics.....rant over.. nice poem... N
January 31st, 2019 04:26
Neville said:
nowt so strange as folk... maybe it said more about your expectations... tho I would probably agree... Did you know there is no reason whatsoever to be told or expected not to use your mobile in a GP practice or hospital waiting area.... if anyone says turn it off or it interferes with this or that, tell them to go take a hike....we used to let anyone use their mobile at our old surgery & clinics.....rant over.. nice poem... N
January 31st, 2019 04:26
Old Age Phonephobia?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Love the SAX Uncle Andy : always COOL : perhaps too cool for classical : but it has apperaed once or twice on the Proms ! BRIAN refuses to have a MOBILE : He calls it the FOBILE MOAN of the Mobile Phone (spoonerism ?). I do need one in case Im called in if one of my Clients is in Emergency. Im ON CALL 6am to Midnight ! Teens live on their Phones & Tablets (not paracetamol !) but i do see more 50+ using mobiles in PUBLIC. Your Poem is a Gem : reporting Society Today !
Blessings & Love for YOU & JOYCE :
ANGELA (NZ) 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Ive added CLIFF (Summer Holiday) please check !
January 31st, 2019 04:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Love the SAX Uncle Andy : always COOL : perhaps too cool for classical : but it has apperaed once or twice on the Proms ! BRIAN refuses to have a MOBILE : He calls it the FOBILE MOAN of the Mobile Phone (spoonerism ?). I do need one in case Im called in if one of my Clients is in Emergency. Im ON CALL 6am to Midnight ! Teens live on their Phones & Tablets (not paracetamol !) but i do see more 50+ using mobiles in PUBLIC. Your Poem is a Gem : reporting Society Today !
Blessings & Love for YOU & JOYCE :
ANGELA (NZ) 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Ive added CLIFF (Summer Holiday) please check !
January 31st, 2019 04:14
Old Age Phonephobia?
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold - Modern oldies?! Title reminded me of a long word (ooh). Zacharias, John Baptist\'s father, could not speak a while, after seeing an angel in the Temple - Psychophonosthenia. \'Soul-sound-less\'. Psycho-phonos-thenia. Bit early in the day for these long words! Too early for an unwatered scotch?
January 31st, 2019 03:14
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold - Modern oldies?! Title reminded me of a long word (ooh). Zacharias, John Baptist\'s father, could not speak a while, after seeing an angel in the Temple - Psychophonosthenia. \'Soul-sound-less\'. Psycho-phonos-thenia. Bit early in the day for these long words! Too early for an unwatered scotch?
January 31st, 2019 03:14
Gone Away.
Fay Slimm. said:
Goldi my heart goes out to you in the problems of tending dementia - -- it must be such a challenge and the verse states plainly that those caring for dire disability have to take rest. Hoping your week will bring you pleasant sleep and more relaxation dear friend.
January 30th, 2019 14:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Goldi my heart goes out to you in the problems of tending dementia - -- it must be such a challenge and the verse states plainly that those caring for dire disability have to take rest. Hoping your week will bring you pleasant sleep and more relaxation dear friend.
January 30th, 2019 14:14
Gone Away.
dusk arising said:
To the river Goldfinch where peace and the spiritual you rest and re-set your mind.
January 30th, 2019 12:20
dusk arising said:
To the river Goldfinch where peace and the spiritual you rest and re-set your mind.
January 30th, 2019 12:20
Gone Away.
kevin browne said:
Blessings to both your wife and yourself. Living those two lives I feel has put you in duress and the heartaches you are suffering seeing you wife like this. I wish, and pray for you both to have easier lives. A wonderful write, my friend.
January 30th, 2019 06:41
kevin browne said:
Blessings to both your wife and yourself. Living those two lives I feel has put you in duress and the heartaches you are suffering seeing you wife like this. I wish, and pray for you both to have easier lives. A wonderful write, my friend.
January 30th, 2019 06:41
Gone Away.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks again UNCLE ANDY for another very moving POEM. It prepares us for similar should we ever have to face it. God tells us \"His Grace enables us to bear all things\" You have spoken lovingly of being with JOYCE and GOD also provides respite to enable you to gain the Physical & Spiritual strength to lovingly recieve Joyce back again ! True Love is victoriuos in all situations. It enables ANGELA & I to rejoice even though we are 11,500 miles apart. However we can phone & write & because it is 2019 talk face to face on Skype everyday.
Every Blessing & Love to you BOTH ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love KF ~ perfect song for the Poem ~ B & A 🧡
January 30th, 2019 06:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks again UNCLE ANDY for another very moving POEM. It prepares us for similar should we ever have to face it. God tells us \"His Grace enables us to bear all things\" You have spoken lovingly of being with JOYCE and GOD also provides respite to enable you to gain the Physical & Spiritual strength to lovingly recieve Joyce back again ! True Love is victoriuos in all situations. It enables ANGELA & I to rejoice even though we are 11,500 miles apart. However we can phone & write & because it is 2019 talk face to face on Skype everyday.
Every Blessing & Love to you BOTH ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love KF ~ perfect song for the Poem ~ B & A 🧡
January 30th, 2019 06:22
Gone Away.
Michael Edwards said:
This is such a sad sad read - I do hope you have a restful week away from your much loved wife.
January 30th, 2019 03:28
Michael Edwards said:
This is such a sad sad read - I do hope you have a restful week away from your much loved wife.
January 30th, 2019 03:28
Gone Away.
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Gold. We were glad when our manager went on holiday, but that\'s a different situation! More like \'While the cat\'s away, the mice will play\'.
A friend\'s father is in a Care Home permanently. He is 97, though my friend has lived in his own place for years now.
January 30th, 2019 03:07
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Gold. We were glad when our manager went on holiday, but that\'s a different situation! More like \'While the cat\'s away, the mice will play\'.
A friend\'s father is in a Care Home permanently. He is 97, though my friend has lived in his own place for years now.
January 30th, 2019 03:07
Spiritual Humanity.
Gino said:
Nice write. Our spirits are the real deal, for we are eternal in them...
January 29th, 2019 21:49
Gino said:
Nice write. Our spirits are the real deal, for we are eternal in them...
January 29th, 2019 21:49
Spiritual Humanity.
dusk arising said:
We are born human Goldfinch. Every instinct a bratty child exhibits is human instinct, human nature. We are taught about spiritual matters to \'improve\' us. One of the great contradictions which western religious folk wont face up to is that we are supposed to be created in gods image... therefore our basic instincts are godly. Killing, robbing, raping, etc etc...
Why so many half baked contradictions in that bible? If created in that image why do we need commandments?
All religions teach \'follow me and do as i say\' except Buddhism which shows ways to enlightenment without the need for any god.
January 29th, 2019 18:38
dusk arising said:
We are born human Goldfinch. Every instinct a bratty child exhibits is human instinct, human nature. We are taught about spiritual matters to \'improve\' us. One of the great contradictions which western religious folk wont face up to is that we are supposed to be created in gods image... therefore our basic instincts are godly. Killing, robbing, raping, etc etc...
Why so many half baked contradictions in that bible? If created in that image why do we need commandments?
All religions teach \'follow me and do as i say\' except Buddhism which shows ways to enlightenment without the need for any god.
January 29th, 2019 18:38
Spiritual Humanity.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE ANDY : Love ELLA and this song : made me think of MY BRIAN ! Its 11pm TUESDAY here so a good song to go to bed with ! I agree with the sentiment in your Poem : we all have a Spirit within us which motivates us ! As committed Christians we are also indwelt by the Holy Spirit which empowers us to show Love : Joy : Peace and the the other six Fruit of the Spirit : this makes us truely HUMAN. In my JOB as a PHYSIOTERRORIST I need an abundance of TLC because all my Clients are hurting and I need a healing touch to restore their confidence & mobility ! Because I am filled with the Holy Spirit I am a much better PHYSIO. TLC is also a Fruit of the Spirit. The same is true of Brian as a Teacher & Student Councellor ~ AMEN !
Blessings & love to you BOTH :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please add a POEM to our latest FUSION : HOLIDAY PLANS 2019 ? : Thanks A & B !
January 29th, 2019 05:25
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE ANDY : Love ELLA and this song : made me think of MY BRIAN ! Its 11pm TUESDAY here so a good song to go to bed with ! I agree with the sentiment in your Poem : we all have a Spirit within us which motivates us ! As committed Christians we are also indwelt by the Holy Spirit which empowers us to show Love : Joy : Peace and the the other six Fruit of the Spirit : this makes us truely HUMAN. In my JOB as a PHYSIOTERRORIST I need an abundance of TLC because all my Clients are hurting and I need a healing touch to restore their confidence & mobility ! Because I am filled with the Holy Spirit I am a much better PHYSIO. TLC is also a Fruit of the Spirit. The same is true of Brian as a Teacher & Student Councellor ~ AMEN !
Blessings & love to you BOTH :
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please add a POEM to our latest FUSION : HOLIDAY PLANS 2019 ? : Thanks A & B !
January 29th, 2019 05:25
Spiritual Humanity.
orchidee said:
Indeed so! A fine write Gold. A really important point, I think. Otherwise (the Christian view, or Protestant emphasis) we are trying to earn and gain our own salvation. It can\'t be done.
It\'s like a bridge illustration - if no bridge, we may even get 99% across a gap by our great good deeds, but we still fall in the ravine.
January 29th, 2019 04:21
orchidee said:
Indeed so! A fine write Gold. A really important point, I think. Otherwise (the Christian view, or Protestant emphasis) we are trying to earn and gain our own salvation. It can\'t be done.
It\'s like a bridge illustration - if no bridge, we may even get 99% across a gap by our great good deeds, but we still fall in the ravine.
January 29th, 2019 04:21
But is it Poetry?
Fay Slimm. said:
Poetry exposes the heart and mind so all writings are poetry to those who look at its art dear Goldi
January 28th, 2019 18:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Poetry exposes the heart and mind so all writings are poetry to those who look at its art dear Goldi
January 28th, 2019 18:16
But is it Poetry?
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Angela. My feeling about writing poetry is that it must convey feelings and for me to do it that way I find Tharp the ‘rules’ of writing poetry get in the way if my feelings. Andy
January 28th, 2019 16:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Angela. My feeling about writing poetry is that it must convey feelings and for me to do it that way I find Tharp the ‘rules’ of writing poetry get in the way if my feelings. Andy
January 28th, 2019 16:29
But is it Poetry?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi UNCLE ANDY : Love Miles : great horn & great Jazz Classic one of our Favorite. Im trying to be a more COHERANT POET : wit a little help from BRIAN. My POEM for tomorrow \"WELLINGTON\" the capital of NZ : is a \"Barrel Acrostic\" but alas it does not follow Briab\'s strict syllabic rubric. However I am reminded that MODERN POETRY is sans : form or function or grammar etc it is simply WORDS : but not necessarily in the right order ! My only criteria for a POEM is that (like all Burns poems) it must be recitable and in the reciting give \"pleasure\" ! That usually demands a snippet of Rhyme & Rhythm & Reason !
Blessings & Love to you BOTH
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 28th, 2019 16:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi UNCLE ANDY : Love Miles : great horn & great Jazz Classic one of our Favorite. Im trying to be a more COHERANT POET : wit a little help from BRIAN. My POEM for tomorrow \"WELLINGTON\" the capital of NZ : is a \"Barrel Acrostic\" but alas it does not follow Briab\'s strict syllabic rubric. However I am reminded that MODERN POETRY is sans : form or function or grammar etc it is simply WORDS : but not necessarily in the right order ! My only criteria for a POEM is that (like all Burns poems) it must be recitable and in the reciting give \"pleasure\" ! That usually demands a snippet of Rhyme & Rhythm & Reason !
Blessings & Love to you BOTH
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
January 28th, 2019 16:21
But is it Poetry?
Joseph M Marion said:
I read an article recently about critics and poets it was the most absurd thing I\'ve ever read but I love what you wrote it would shut the critic up. Good job
January 28th, 2019 16:18
Joseph M Marion said:
I read an article recently about critics and poets it was the most absurd thing I\'ve ever read but I love what you wrote it would shut the critic up. Good job
January 28th, 2019 16:18
But is it Poetry?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
This certainly is , a super poem at that. However a poet expresses is unique and if it is like this then it is awesome to read. Mine too us not professional, conventional, my wandering musing ah. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 09:22
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
This certainly is , a super poem at that. However a poet expresses is unique and if it is like this then it is awesome to read. Mine too us not professional, conventional, my wandering musing ah. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 09:22
But is it Poetry?
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I believe we should follow how we feel and let are hearts do the writing, not all great poetry needs to make sense or even be relatable there\'s just some art that grabs us eye deep and just click to our souls. great write, G.
January 28th, 2019 05:00
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
I believe we should follow how we feel and let are hearts do the writing, not all great poetry needs to make sense or even be relatable there\'s just some art that grabs us eye deep and just click to our souls. great write, G.
January 28th, 2019 05:00
But is it Poetry?
dusk arising said:
It always dismays me when i hear some twerp identify one artists work (usually a musician, or a bunch of them) as being \'the best\'. How narrow minded and blinkered.
There are several genres of music, performance art and visual arts which do not appeal to me but one has to appreciate that others have a different and equally valid point of view.
Something i hate to hear is \'i hate jazz\' from people who have no idea what jazz is.
January 28th, 2019 04:50
dusk arising said:
It always dismays me when i hear some twerp identify one artists work (usually a musician, or a bunch of them) as being \'the best\'. How narrow minded and blinkered.
There are several genres of music, performance art and visual arts which do not appeal to me but one has to appreciate that others have a different and equally valid point of view.
Something i hate to hear is \'i hate jazz\' from people who have no idea what jazz is.
January 28th, 2019 04:50
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