Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



My Road to Paradise.
orchidee said:

A \'classical\' type of write Gold.
But one composer leads to the other place \'down there\'. Starts with S? Did Beacham hate his music?

March 22nd, 2020 03:33

My Road to Paradise.
Michael Edwards said:

And I love the music of every composer included here - what an inspired write.

March 22nd, 2020 03:16

Ironing Sadness.
Saxon Crow said:

GF xxxx

March 21st, 2020 06:47

Ironing Sadness.
Michael Edwards said:

And that made my eyes swell as well - some write.

March 21st, 2020 05:42

Ironing Sadness.
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Gold.
Do you keep any of her possessions - clothing and /or other things?
Our animal sadness. A piggy departed, as she was poorly. I got another one for company for the remaining piggy.
But yet another piggy lives alone now. He seems OK with it. We have 5 piggies in all.

March 21st, 2020 02:51

Ironing Sadness.
dusk arising said:

These sad occasions will spring out of the woodwork at you many mire times and remind you of your humanity. It\'s good that they do. Those tears and the very act of crying/sobbing is I think like a discharge of the underlying stress or grief we carry somewhere lodged in our subconscious. Thank goodness you are man enough to allow yourself such release and further to show it here.
Stay well, how are you getting on with your grocery shopping?


March 21st, 2020 02:33

They Paved Paradise.
FredPeyer said:

Great writing Goldie!

March 20th, 2020 21:30

They Paved Paradise.
Fay Slimm. said:

First class impression of a credible title and apt for the topic - good that you are using the net for the group - - - every best wish for this one Andy.

March 20th, 2020 16:53

They Paved Paradise.
dusk arising said:

Excellent piece and such a meaningful message.

Fortunately we can find places in this paradise which refresh and renew our spirit and faith. It goes without saying that in these unusual times that faith becomes a strength.

Stay well.

March 20th, 2020 10:57

They Paved Paradise.
Michael Edwards said:

This one is top notch Andy and so apt - great write.

March 20th, 2020 03:28

They Paved Paradise.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
Hooray - one good thing at least is coming out of the \'evil\' of the present time. They are not making episodes of EastEnders!
That should be the least of our concerns though.

March 20th, 2020 02:57

Beautiful Lives Tanka.
dusk arising said:

Tread that path at moderate pace for the scenery can be amazing, and there\'s no going back if you dash

March 19th, 2020 03:52

Beautiful Lives Tanka.
Michael Edwards said:

Always look forward - not easy at the present time but we must continue to nurture optimism. Another good write.

March 19th, 2020 03:22

Beautiful Lives Tanka.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

March 19th, 2020 03:16

Wordiku Six.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Angela here - Thanks for sharing U Andy. Love Rachmaniov - it stimulates all the senses - esecially when one is playing it on the pioanforte ! Love WORDIKU ! Here is mine with title !

WILDER THAN 21st C WOMAN !

unaproachable
Australopithicusess
unrestrainable

BRIAN tells me thats still your *Average Woman of OZ*
Blessings to You & Yours
Love ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™
Please check *POETICIANS* Thanks !

March 18th, 2020 09:24

Wordiku Six.
Michael Edwards said:

Love it Andy

simplification
editorializing
creativiy.



March 18th, 2020 07:40

Wordiku Six.
Saxon Crow said:

Yes

March 18th, 2020 03:50

Wordiku Six.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

March 18th, 2020 02:56

Wordiku Six.
dusk arising said:

Clever stuff.

March 18th, 2020 02:10

William Holman Hunt.
dusk arising said:

Never heard of the fellow you pay tribute to here. I shall return later and google .

March 17th, 2020 13:10

William Holman Hunt.
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Gold. Yes, poor scapegoat. It lived, while the other goat was sacrificed for sins. But was its lot much better?

March 17th, 2020 02:56

William Holman Hunt.
Michael Edwards said:

The Pre-Raphaelites are not my favourite artists - a bit too close to realism but WHH was one of the best

March 17th, 2020 02:15

Thoughts Version 2.
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes - I have for so long believed that the best is yet to come - - your verses are full of positive thought dear friend. -- - thank you for sharing them with us.

March 16th, 2020 17:36

Thoughts Version 2.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks Uncle Andy ~ Loved the Music by Chet ~ great introduction on the Cello. Memories from the past & hope for the Future ~ AMEN

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

March 16th, 2020 10:30

Thoughts Version 2.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. Someone said \'I will write you a song\'. They gave me a blank sheet of paper. Were they trying to tell me something? (don\'t sing?!).

March 16th, 2020 02:47

Thoughts Version 2.
Saxon Crow said:

Lovely write GF


March 16th, 2020 01:59

Thoughts Version 2.
Michael Edwards said:

I admire your resolve and wonder if I could still write all my light hearted nonesense should I lose my dear Jeanne. Keep writing Andy.

March 16th, 2020 01:36

Thoughts Version 2.
dusk arising said:

Just keep it coming. Life flows like your river, carrying everything from where it\'s been to where it goes. Along the way way what would it see?

March 16th, 2020 01:32

Thoughts Version 1.
dusk arising said:

I repeat what ME wrote above. I only write when inspiration leads me to.

March 15th, 2020 18:02

Thoughts Version 1.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS FOR SHARING UNCLE ANDY ~ Good Evening ~ Blighters Wrock ~ we all suffer from it !

The stagnant MUSE doth move ~
But having moved ~ too quickly ~ it moves on
Nor all thy Poets Piety & Wit
Can lure her back - to share just half a line
Nor all thy tears recall a Word of it

Apologies to the *Rhubarb Cat of Homer the Man !*

Love the BARBER ~ very soothing
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›

March 15th, 2020 15:19



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