Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Swing From Paris Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write about times of joy brought by a group of musicians. Music so closely tuned to the beating of the heart
November 2nd, 2024 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write about times of joy brought by a group of musicians. Music so closely tuned to the beating of the heart
November 2nd, 2024 05:18
Samhain Sonnet.
Doggerel Dave said:
Remain totally in awe that you can dash out a rich piece like that before breakfast… In order to explain, I think you could resort to Neville’s ‘a gentleman…’. Speaking of which, I’ll take you and N’s interaction above as sufficient info. Sounds Druidic to me??
November 1st, 2024 15:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Remain totally in awe that you can dash out a rich piece like that before breakfast… In order to explain, I think you could resort to Neville’s ‘a gentleman…’. Speaking of which, I’ll take you and N’s interaction above as sufficient info. Sounds Druidic to me??
November 1st, 2024 15:15
Samhain Sonnet.
MendedFences27 said:
Loved it. Wonderful poem, Andy. Great craftsmanship. My fav line was \"and distant chimes of spectral midnight bells.\" The eeriness just \"crawls \" through your poem. - Phil A.
November 1st, 2024 11:13
MendedFences27 said:
Loved it. Wonderful poem, Andy. Great craftsmanship. My fav line was \"and distant chimes of spectral midnight bells.\" The eeriness just \"crawls \" through your poem. - Phil A.
November 1st, 2024 11:13
Samhain Sonnet.
Parisab said:
The thinning veil, as autumn nights descend,
Reveals the breath of those who walked before,
A whispered chill where golden leaves suspend,
And stirs the silent hearth with tales of yore.
A masterful representation of this seasonal transition.
November 1st, 2024 11:05
Parisab said:
The thinning veil, as autumn nights descend,
Reveals the breath of those who walked before,
A whispered chill where golden leaves suspend,
And stirs the silent hearth with tales of yore.
A masterful representation of this seasonal transition.
November 1st, 2024 11:05
Samhain Sonnet.
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome Samhain Sonnet
picturesque and serene! 👍
Eye pleasing imagery,
picturesque and serene!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 1st, 2024 10:27
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome Samhain Sonnet
picturesque and serene! 👍
Eye pleasing imagery,
picturesque and serene!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 1st, 2024 10:27
Samhain Sonnet.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Was it that church group - Universal Church, or Unified Church, is it? Sorry, I forgot the name.
November 1st, 2024 03:07
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Was it that church group - Universal Church, or Unified Church, is it? Sorry, I forgot the name.
November 1st, 2024 03:07
Samhain Sonnet.
David Wakeling said:
This is a master piece mi amigo.I love the cadence, and the rhyme. Wonderful celebration. Excellent
November 1st, 2024 02:46
David Wakeling said:
This is a master piece mi amigo.I love the cadence, and the rhyme. Wonderful celebration. Excellent
November 1st, 2024 02:46
Samhain Sonnet.
Neville said:
Neva heard of the guy but a great little dedication nevertheless .. Unless of course, you mean the old Gaelic festival to mark the end of harvest .. & the Irish term for November 😎👍
November 1st, 2024 01:51
Neville said:
Neva heard of the guy but a great little dedication nevertheless .. Unless of course, you mean the old Gaelic festival to mark the end of harvest .. & the Irish term for November 😎👍
November 1st, 2024 01:51
Smiling Sonnet.
Dove said:
So cute... I see you are writing in sonnet style...
October 31st, 2024 07:31
Dove said:
So cute... I see you are writing in sonnet style...
October 31st, 2024 07:31
Autumn Equinox Sonnet.
Dove said:
Lovely .. I enjoyed the softness of the poem. A pleasure to read
October 31st, 2024 07:30
Dove said:
Lovely .. I enjoyed the softness of the poem. A pleasure to read
October 31st, 2024 07:30
Bad To Best.
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. My dad always says everything happens for a reason, and he\'s usually right. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Tom.
October 31st, 2024 06:45
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. My dad always says everything happens for a reason, and he\'s usually right. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Tom.
October 31st, 2024 06:45
Halloween Acrostic.
arqios said:
As a child and somehow still the lore and thrill leaves me quaking in me boots!
October 31st, 2024 05:31
arqios said:
As a child and somehow still the lore and thrill leaves me quaking in me boots!
October 31st, 2024 05:31
Halloween Acrostic.
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read Gold and very appropriate for the day
October 31st, 2024 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read Gold and very appropriate for the day
October 31st, 2024 04:07
Halloween Acrostic.
orchidee said:
KP will be riding her broomstick. She took off her face mask and really scared me! lol.
An old friend has wedding anniversary - they really did marry on Halloween.
October 31st, 2024 03:32
orchidee said:
KP will be riding her broomstick. She took off her face mask and really scared me! lol.
An old friend has wedding anniversary - they really did marry on Halloween.
October 31st, 2024 03:32
Croquet Again Sonnet.
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Andy. And glad you enjoyed playing again.
October 30th, 2024 09:58
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Andy. And glad you enjoyed playing again.
October 30th, 2024 09:58
Bad To Best.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful Andy! The pattern repetition in these lines really drive the point home, that tough circumstances in life can really flip around to bring positive change. “When something happens, / Happens to bring sorrow, / Sorrow and sadness in life” and “And took us to the best things, / The best things that happen / That happen in our life.” Masterfully written! 👏🌹🖤❤️🖤
October 30th, 2024 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful Andy! The pattern repetition in these lines really drive the point home, that tough circumstances in life can really flip around to bring positive change. “When something happens, / Happens to bring sorrow, / Sorrow and sadness in life” and “And took us to the best things, / The best things that happen / That happen in our life.” Masterfully written! 👏🌹🖤❤️🖤
October 30th, 2024 08:59
Bad To Best.
arqios said:
What was meant to be bad turned out for benefit- a beautiful outcome. Hope that doesn’t mean the end had justified the means 👍🏻
October 30th, 2024 05:48
arqios said:
What was meant to be bad turned out for benefit- a beautiful outcome. Hope that doesn’t mean the end had justified the means 👍🏻
October 30th, 2024 05:48
Bad To Best.
David Wakeling said:
This is very true. Good Bad or Ugly it all contributes to a rich life. Great poem
October 30th, 2024 05:31
David Wakeling said:
This is very true. Good Bad or Ugly it all contributes to a rich life. Great poem
October 30th, 2024 05:31
Bad To Best.
sorenbarrett said:
Gold I have for many years believed that everything happens for the best we just don\'t know it at the time. Whether true or not if your truely believe it you have nothing to fear and nothing to regret it guarentees joy and happieness and what else is worth having in this life. A lovely write that I am in agreement with
October 30th, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Gold I have for many years believed that everything happens for the best we just don\'t know it at the time. Whether true or not if your truely believe it you have nothing to fear and nothing to regret it guarentees joy and happieness and what else is worth having in this life. A lovely write that I am in agreement with
October 30th, 2024 04:48
Bad To Best.
orchidee said:
Good write gold. We may not always seem to see, or to think there\'s a way through, when we\'re in the middle of the bad times.
October 30th, 2024 03:55
orchidee said:
Good write gold. We may not always seem to see, or to think there\'s a way through, when we\'re in the middle of the bad times.
October 30th, 2024 03:55
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