Comments received on poems by whisperingquill
Cornered in a circle
Sanjana Varma said:
Wow! Absorbing like the fabric of the universe!
April 6th, 2020 14:11
Sanjana Varma said:
Wow! Absorbing like the fabric of the universe!
April 6th, 2020 14:11
A magnum opus for insanities symphony # thirteen
kevin browne said:
Woe!! like a 77 set Orchestra set. Brilliantly composed. Great work.
April 8th, 2019 17:28
kevin browne said:
Woe!! like a 77 set Orchestra set. Brilliantly composed. Great work.
April 8th, 2019 17:28
Salvaging fragments of us
Lauraš» said:
Whisperingquill,
You do have a way with words and with choosing a great song/video to complement your poem! A fascinating read! I do appreciate your author comments!
Great! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 27th, 2019 18:22
Lauraš» said:
Whisperingquill,
You do have a way with words and with choosing a great song/video to complement your poem! A fascinating read! I do appreciate your author comments!
Great! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 27th, 2019 18:22
Salvaging fragments of us
Sunshinefalling said:
Cannablistic stars. My favorite. āļø
March 27th, 2019 18:19
Sunshinefalling said:
Cannablistic stars. My favorite. āļø
March 27th, 2019 18:19
No Second Whispers
Neville said:
I was not expecting to stumble upon these... I dunno what I was expecting but hell yes indeed... a stretched page to include four seemingly angst fueled and filled little tainted gems still glowing a shimmer from somewhere dark... or maybe one larger than life and up close and dirty masterpiece .. who knows.. and what does it matter... now thoroughly enjoyed... Neville
March 24th, 2019 02:40
Neville said:
I was not expecting to stumble upon these... I dunno what I was expecting but hell yes indeed... a stretched page to include four seemingly angst fueled and filled little tainted gems still glowing a shimmer from somewhere dark... or maybe one larger than life and up close and dirty masterpiece .. who knows.. and what does it matter... now thoroughly enjoyed... Neville
March 24th, 2019 02:40
No Second Whispers
sylviasearcher said:
Sociopolitical yet highly sexualised? I guess itās the same thing.
I could feel a bad desire being fed and then shamed.
Such as they would serve to keep.
Locked in the chains of our desires and shame.
Or maybe something else entirely?
Exquisitely written nonetheless!
March 21st, 2019 06:51
sylviasearcher said:
Sociopolitical yet highly sexualised? I guess itās the same thing.
I could feel a bad desire being fed and then shamed.
Such as they would serve to keep.
Locked in the chains of our desires and shame.
Or maybe something else entirely?
Exquisitely written nonetheless!
March 21st, 2019 06:51
Weight
sylviasearcher said:
Good to see your words!
And what a profound thing they speak.
True of course but donāt tell anyone I admitted that!
March 19th, 2019 11:58
sylviasearcher said:
Good to see your words!
And what a profound thing they speak.
True of course but donāt tell anyone I admitted that!
March 19th, 2019 11:58
Folding Existence
elmina said:
your word play and descriptions are to die for! excellent!!
March 1st, 2019 00:09
elmina said:
your word play and descriptions are to die for! excellent!!
March 1st, 2019 00:09
Coronating a nightshade dawn
Lauraš» said:
Whisperingquill,
An awesome write! Thank you for sharing and for your author comment!
~Laura~
February 26th, 2019 07:37
Lauraš» said:
Whisperingquill,
An awesome write! Thank you for sharing and for your author comment!
~Laura~
February 26th, 2019 07:37
Fallen Benedictus
kevin browne said:
Such love is unbalancing sometimes, and I think you captured that imagery really well. More to this poem then greets the eye.
February 15th, 2019 19:12
kevin browne said:
Such love is unbalancing sometimes, and I think you captured that imagery really well. More to this poem then greets the eye.
February 15th, 2019 19:12
Recalcitrant Synaesthesia
kevin browne said:
Another wonder you have created. Yet again, you\'ve passed the grade, my friend. Top writer by a top bloke.
February 2nd, 2019 23:32
kevin browne said:
Another wonder you have created. Yet again, you\'ve passed the grade, my friend. Top writer by a top bloke.
February 2nd, 2019 23:32
Seasons inside a grey breathing nightmare
kevin browne said:
Wow!! this is how poetry should be written. Your vocabulary is totally stunning. Especially with the metaphor of using the under lying passage of a message about how crooked humans and life can be. This is by far the greatest poem I\'ve ever read on MPS. Congratulations.
February 1st, 2019 23:53
kevin browne said:
Wow!! this is how poetry should be written. Your vocabulary is totally stunning. Especially with the metaphor of using the under lying passage of a message about how crooked humans and life can be. This is by far the greatest poem I\'ve ever read on MPS. Congratulations.
February 1st, 2019 23:53
Avvolto nella pennellata del destino
sylviasearcher said:
Obviously I could only understand the translation and I imagine something may have been lost, yet still it was awe- sensing
I made that word up awe some seemed insufficient .
January 25th, 2019 06:51
sylviasearcher said:
Obviously I could only understand the translation and I imagine something may have been lost, yet still it was awe- sensing
I made that word up awe some seemed insufficient .
January 25th, 2019 06:51
Avvolto nella pennellata del destino
psychofemale said:
thanks for sharing this
January 24th, 2019 18:13
psychofemale said:
thanks for sharing this
January 24th, 2019 18:13
Avvolto nella pennellata del destino
Lauraš» said:
Whisperingquill,
Una poesia incantevole! Dopo averla letta e digerita, sono rimasta avvolta In quella āpennellata del destinoā.
~Laura~
January 24th, 2019 00:39
Lauraš» said:
Whisperingquill,
Una poesia incantevole! Dopo averla letta e digerita, sono rimasta avvolta In quella āpennellata del destinoā.
~Laura~
January 24th, 2019 00:39
Stuck
Fay Slimm. said:
The erotic\'s vivid heat clearly portrayed yet full of discreet metaphor makes this a special for me.
January 23rd, 2019 04:22
Fay Slimm. said:
The erotic\'s vivid heat clearly portrayed yet full of discreet metaphor makes this a special for me.
January 23rd, 2019 04:22
Stuck
kevin browne said:
Superb is all I\'d like to suggest about your enchanting poem
January 23rd, 2019 00:26
kevin browne said:
Superb is all I\'d like to suggest about your enchanting poem
January 23rd, 2019 00:26
Stuck
psychofemale said:
I loved the last line and how it all tied together :) great write
January 22nd, 2019 23:29
psychofemale said:
I loved the last line and how it all tied together :) great write
January 22nd, 2019 23:29
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