Comments received on poems by whisperingquill
Reflection Weary Judgement
FredPeyer said:
Yes, what the hell are you going to post next?
Whisperingquill, your poems are exasperating, taking me hours to look up all the words in the dictionnary!!! :-)
Thank God my mother tongue is German, so at least I understood \"Schadenfreude\"! Thank you for that!
Another tour de force, thank you!
July 11th, 2017 10:20
FredPeyer said:
Yes, what the hell are you going to post next?
Whisperingquill, your poems are exasperating, taking me hours to look up all the words in the dictionnary!!! :-)
Thank God my mother tongue is German, so at least I understood \"Schadenfreude\"! Thank you for that!
Another tour de force, thank you!
July 11th, 2017 10:20
Drifting Into Solace/ Cryptic Incursions
FredPeyer said:
Whisperingquill you sent my head spinning with your eclectic writing. Maybe I am just too dumb to understand it all, but it sound beautiful.
July 10th, 2017 04:19
FredPeyer said:
Whisperingquill you sent my head spinning with your eclectic writing. Maybe I am just too dumb to understand it all, but it sound beautiful.
July 10th, 2017 04:19
Hot Lead Alliteration
Nicholas Browning said:
I have to give you credit. Your style is rough and all over the place. The flow variates, It\'s unkempt. That doesn\'t mean it isn\'t good though. Your use of actual history makes me feel like I\'ve lost a bit, haha. I\'m actually in the process of writing something similar, but it won\'t be ready for another few months. The fact that you included Osiris in this blew my mind, and made me keep reading. Well done, wonderful job.
P.S.
Harsh criticism means I like it quite a bit.
July 10th, 2017 02:06
Nicholas Browning said:
I have to give you credit. Your style is rough and all over the place. The flow variates, It\'s unkempt. That doesn\'t mean it isn\'t good though. Your use of actual history makes me feel like I\'ve lost a bit, haha. I\'m actually in the process of writing something similar, but it won\'t be ready for another few months. The fact that you included Osiris in this blew my mind, and made me keep reading. Well done, wonderful job.
P.S.
Harsh criticism means I like it quite a bit.
July 10th, 2017 02:06
Hot Lead Alliteration
Heather T said:
So today we have an Egyptian god, martial arts weapons, Caesar, Mad Sam and Pacino. If you can\'t pull that off, then no one can. Veni, vidi, amavi.
July 9th, 2017 21:43
Heather T said:
So today we have an Egyptian god, martial arts weapons, Caesar, Mad Sam and Pacino. If you can\'t pull that off, then no one can. Veni, vidi, amavi.
July 9th, 2017 21:43
Hot Lead Alliteration
Augustus said:
You got a little of that slime on my shoe. If you don\'t clean it I\'m going to come over and kick your arse. LOL
July 9th, 2017 18:58
Augustus said:
You got a little of that slime on my shoe. If you don\'t clean it I\'m going to come over and kick your arse. LOL
July 9th, 2017 18:58
Hot Lead Alliteration
kevin browne said:
Brilliant so can we have more of this, please?
July 9th, 2017 18:33
kevin browne said:
Brilliant so can we have more of this, please?
July 9th, 2017 18:33
Hot Lead Alliteration
FredPeyer said:
Well Whisperingquill, with this poem you \"veni, vidi, vici\" allright. Nuff said!
July 9th, 2017 18:13
FredPeyer said:
Well Whisperingquill, with this poem you \"veni, vidi, vici\" allright. Nuff said!
July 9th, 2017 18:13
Obnoxious Entrapment
Heather T said:
Disturbingly, exotically sick. You\'re always a hookah trip of strange delights.
July 9th, 2017 18:05
Heather T said:
Disturbingly, exotically sick. You\'re always a hookah trip of strange delights.
July 9th, 2017 18:05
Obnoxious Entrapment
malubotelho said:
Nicely done. A bold statement. Thank you.
July 8th, 2017 23:01
malubotelho said:
Nicely done. A bold statement. Thank you.
July 8th, 2017 23:01
Obnoxious Entrapment
FredPeyer said:
The writing is definitely NOT sick. You use extraordinary language. The subject matter might be upsetting to some people who might object to some of the words, but I think we need to be open to all kinds of creative writing. In my opinion you turned what by some could be regarded as \"porn\" into a work of art.
I would like to add that I for one am more concentrating on the writing than on the subject matter.
July 8th, 2017 19:17
FredPeyer said:
The writing is definitely NOT sick. You use extraordinary language. The subject matter might be upsetting to some people who might object to some of the words, but I think we need to be open to all kinds of creative writing. In my opinion you turned what by some could be regarded as \"porn\" into a work of art.
I would like to add that I for one am more concentrating on the writing than on the subject matter.
July 8th, 2017 19:17
Obnoxious Entrapment
Augustus said:
Pretty damned sick I\'d say. I need a bath and a towel after reading this. Enjoyed.
July 8th, 2017 17:33
Augustus said:
Pretty damned sick I\'d say. I need a bath and a towel after reading this. Enjoyed.
July 8th, 2017 17:33
Charmed
Augustus said:
I did not read it all sad. The end seemed redemptive. Anyway, thoroughly enjoyed especially fushcia hued apathy . Hugs.
July 6th, 2017 22:04
Augustus said:
I did not read it all sad. The end seemed redemptive. Anyway, thoroughly enjoyed especially fushcia hued apathy . Hugs.
July 6th, 2017 22:04
Vantablack Viking
kevin browne said:
I live in the county of Somerset in the uk and in this county there is a town called Glastonbury which is where I was brought up, I actually lived at the time in the next town which is actually a village and remains to be the smallest village in Britain, Glastonbury is the most Gothic of all the places you could ever wish for. your poem is so beautifully crafted that Glasto suddenly came to mind. thank you x
July 5th, 2017 20:50
kevin browne said:
I live in the county of Somerset in the uk and in this county there is a town called Glastonbury which is where I was brought up, I actually lived at the time in the next town which is actually a village and remains to be the smallest village in Britain, Glastonbury is the most Gothic of all the places you could ever wish for. your poem is so beautifully crafted that Glasto suddenly came to mind. thank you x
July 5th, 2017 20:50
Clarity/ For You. Leave The Light On/ Hawk Winds Collateral
Heather T said:
I enjoyed the second work in particular. You seemed...invested. The last was like a psychotropic benediction.
June 28th, 2017 22:57
Heather T said:
I enjoyed the second work in particular. You seemed...invested. The last was like a psychotropic benediction.
June 28th, 2017 22:57
Clarity/ For You. Leave The Light On/ Hawk Winds Collateral
kevin browne said:
what a superbly written piece of work. you must be really proud of this one. I love your style in it. thanks for sharing with us.
June 28th, 2017 15:03
kevin browne said:
what a superbly written piece of work. you must be really proud of this one. I love your style in it. thanks for sharing with us.
June 28th, 2017 15:03
Screwed
FredPeyer said:
Whisperingquill you DO have way with words. Wonderful free play of thought.
June 26th, 2017 11:37
FredPeyer said:
Whisperingquill you DO have way with words. Wonderful free play of thought.
June 26th, 2017 11:37
Paid in Full/ Pith Buffet
Heather T said:
Just thought I caught a little, referenced here and there. Shweet.
June 22nd, 2017 19:46
Heather T said:
Just thought I caught a little, referenced here and there. Shweet.
June 22nd, 2017 19:46
Paid in Full/ Pith Buffet
Heather T said:
I could be totally wrong, but am wondering if you are a Deftones or APC fan...? :) Enjoyed.
June 22nd, 2017 17:33
Heather T said:
I could be totally wrong, but am wondering if you are a Deftones or APC fan...? :) Enjoyed.
June 22nd, 2017 17:33
Collective Particles
Augustus said:
My hair on my head is electrified and all of my senses are tuned to your gyroscope. I\'m flipping out dude. Great fun write.
June 16th, 2017 19:47
Augustus said:
My hair on my head is electrified and all of my senses are tuned to your gyroscope. I\'m flipping out dude. Great fun write.
June 16th, 2017 19:47
Tethered
Augustus said:
My I enter your ethereal world and join you. I could be the harp player or seducer. Please not the hiccup or duodenum. Wild man, wild.
June 11th, 2017 12:30
Augustus said:
My I enter your ethereal world and join you. I could be the harp player or seducer. Please not the hiccup or duodenum. Wild man, wild.
June 11th, 2017 12:30
Simpatico Giggles
Augustus said:
At first I was lost. Reread it again and it made perfect sense. Nice.
June 9th, 2017 10:07
Augustus said:
At first I was lost. Reread it again and it made perfect sense. Nice.
June 9th, 2017 10:07
Droplets Of Etiquette
Heather T said:
This was a treat best read outloud. Much enjoyed the trip around your words.
June 8th, 2017 22:43
Heather T said:
This was a treat best read outloud. Much enjoyed the trip around your words.
June 8th, 2017 22:43
Droplets Of Etiquette
Augustus said:
To \"kiss the ovum of celestial consequence\", well I won\'t go there, there are ladies present. Great line. Hugs.
June 8th, 2017 11:09
Augustus said:
To \"kiss the ovum of celestial consequence\", well I won\'t go there, there are ladies present. Great line. Hugs.
June 8th, 2017 11:09
Buried Purity
Augustus said:
Lots of thought on this enigmatic piece. Like the brevity and rhyme.
June 5th, 2017 22:03
Augustus said:
Lots of thought on this enigmatic piece. Like the brevity and rhyme.
June 5th, 2017 22:03
Cathartic Lacerations
Augustus said:
Takes on a life of its own like trying to reign in a run away horse. Through hell and back followed by a deep sleep. Kudos.
June 4th, 2017 12:37
Augustus said:
Takes on a life of its own like trying to reign in a run away horse. Through hell and back followed by a deep sleep. Kudos.
June 4th, 2017 12:37
Cathartic Lacerations
kevin browne said:
great words fitted together perfectly. good work, my friend x
June 4th, 2017 06:11
kevin browne said:
great words fitted together perfectly. good work, my friend x
June 4th, 2017 06:11
Cathartic Lacerations
Fay Slimm. said:
An exciting read which sits very well in the form you chose - love the alliteration.
June 4th, 2017 05:56
Fay Slimm. said:
An exciting read which sits very well in the form you chose - love the alliteration.
June 4th, 2017 05:56
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