Comments received on poems by whisperingquill
Oh Yeah
FredPeyer said:
A venerable tour de force! So many incredible lines, so many imaginative expressions! You turned writing about lovemaking into art of the highest degree, right up there with Dali, Picasso, Miro, and Klimt.
July 22nd, 2017 11:57
FredPeyer said:
A venerable tour de force! So many incredible lines, so many imaginative expressions! You turned writing about lovemaking into art of the highest degree, right up there with Dali, Picasso, Miro, and Klimt.
July 22nd, 2017 11:57
Iridescence
whisperingquill said:
I\'m honored bro thank you.
How do you categorize a favorite on here though can you ?
July 21st, 2017 17:03
whisperingquill said:
I\'m honored bro thank you.
How do you categorize a favorite on here though can you ?
July 21st, 2017 17:03
Symbiotic Stigmata
whisperingquill said:
Thank you Brother so are you this piece here is really personal so a little more oomph went into this. 🍻
July 21st, 2017 15:38
whisperingquill said:
Thank you Brother so are you this piece here is really personal so a little more oomph went into this. 🍻
July 21st, 2017 15:38
Glinted
FredPeyer said:
\'In the ruby of eternity\'s eye\'
You have an incredibly vivid imagination, love your writing!
July 21st, 2017 13:42
FredPeyer said:
\'In the ruby of eternity\'s eye\'
You have an incredibly vivid imagination, love your writing!
July 21st, 2017 13:42
Liberate Me Ex Inferis
FredPeyer said:
Just wonder if this poem has something to do with Zao and Dante\'s Inferno and the title means \"Liberate yourself from Hell\"?
But no matter what, I like it. And where the heck did you get \"phallus asphyxiaton\" from? Don\'t get graphic in your answer, I don\'t wanna go there!
July 20th, 2017 03:52
FredPeyer said:
Just wonder if this poem has something to do with Zao and Dante\'s Inferno and the title means \"Liberate yourself from Hell\"?
But no matter what, I like it. And where the heck did you get \"phallus asphyxiaton\" from? Don\'t get graphic in your answer, I don\'t wanna go there!
July 20th, 2017 03:52
Fading
Q said:
Wow, love the medieval theme. Well written and very thought provoking.
July 20th, 2017 01:29
Q said:
Wow, love the medieval theme. Well written and very thought provoking.
July 20th, 2017 01:29
Sleep In Your Exhale
whisperingquill said:
Thank you JaneEVE yours is pretty magnanimous also 😜
July 20th, 2017 00:57
whisperingquill said:
Thank you JaneEVE yours is pretty magnanimous also 😜
July 20th, 2017 00:57
Fading
kevin browne said:
like the forget me nots how the heck can I forget about your supreme poetry skills. beautifully written. keep this brilliant work alive.
July 20th, 2017 00:11
kevin browne said:
like the forget me nots how the heck can I forget about your supreme poetry skills. beautifully written. keep this brilliant work alive.
July 20th, 2017 00:11
Liberate Me Ex Inferis
kevin browne said:
word wizardry is a fascination of mine so you hit me right between the eyes when I finished reading this stunning new piece.
July 19th, 2017 19:41
kevin browne said:
word wizardry is a fascination of mine so you hit me right between the eyes when I finished reading this stunning new piece.
July 19th, 2017 19:41
Sleep In Your Exhale
FredPeyer said:
Wow! Like the whole thing, but absolutely love this one:
Rembrandt perfection
racing along every curve
July 18th, 2017 02:01
FredPeyer said:
Wow! Like the whole thing, but absolutely love this one:
Rembrandt perfection
racing along every curve
July 18th, 2017 02:01
Symbiotic Stigmata
Quemis said:
Holy shit. 10/10 would shiver again.
Seriously though, good work.
July 17th, 2017 21:43
Quemis said:
Holy shit. 10/10 would shiver again.
Seriously though, good work.
July 17th, 2017 21:43
Symbiotic Stigmata
FredPeyer said:
Igniting the Japanese and English knights, only you could come up with something like that! And I hope it is OK to like your poems, even if my little brain doesn\'t understand everything.
July 17th, 2017 12:36
FredPeyer said:
Igniting the Japanese and English knights, only you could come up with something like that! And I hope it is OK to like your poems, even if my little brain doesn\'t understand everything.
July 17th, 2017 12:36
Clinks of Shamans
kevin browne said:
exquisite memories I must say. lovely poem.
July 16th, 2017 07:46
kevin browne said:
exquisite memories I must say. lovely poem.
July 16th, 2017 07:46
Ouránia Melodía
Heather T said:
Good. Gosh. This is stunningly beautiful, and I want to traipse through your language again and again and again.
July 15th, 2017 18:47
Heather T said:
Good. Gosh. This is stunningly beautiful, and I want to traipse through your language again and again and again.
July 15th, 2017 18:47
Ouránia Melodía
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t think one can say \'I love you\' any more mystical than that. Truly enjoy reading your poems, even though they are not easy to read. Surely were not easy to write either.
Love \'shedding auric symmetry\', imagine the two auras becoming one.
July 15th, 2017 17:45
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t think one can say \'I love you\' any more mystical than that. Truly enjoy reading your poems, even though they are not easy to read. Surely were not easy to write either.
Love \'shedding auric symmetry\', imagine the two auras becoming one.
July 15th, 2017 17:45
Bleeding Acceptance of Desiderata Disintegration
FredPeyer said:
The word Desiderata in your title rang a bell, a little one though, I couldn\'t remember. So I looked it up and voila,
Max Ehrmann with his Desiderata poem, which in a way is the opposite of yours. Since yours talks about disintegration of Desiderata, I was wondering if this was on your mind.
By the way, I love the line with Divine Stupidity, describes me to a T.
July 13th, 2017 03:16
FredPeyer said:
The word Desiderata in your title rang a bell, a little one though, I couldn\'t remember. So I looked it up and voila,
Max Ehrmann with his Desiderata poem, which in a way is the opposite of yours. Since yours talks about disintegration of Desiderata, I was wondering if this was on your mind.
By the way, I love the line with Divine Stupidity, describes me to a T.
July 13th, 2017 03:16
Bleeding Acceptance of Desiderata Disintegration
whisperingquill said:
Thank you burning it\'s very true
funny how certain people change others
And then they get mad when you don\'t open up no more lol. Yet they cause the change so why cant they live with it ?
July 13th, 2017 01:16
whisperingquill said:
Thank you burning it\'s very true
funny how certain people change others
And then they get mad when you don\'t open up no more lol. Yet they cause the change so why cant they live with it ?
July 13th, 2017 01:16
Bleeding Acceptance of Desiderata Disintegration
burning-embers said:
I love it, a smack in the face for your reader. Strong, powerful, potent reading. I hated the standpoint you made - it connected with me big time. I felt angry. Really well written provocative piece. Excellent!
July 13th, 2017 01:00
burning-embers said:
I love it, a smack in the face for your reader. Strong, powerful, potent reading. I hated the standpoint you made - it connected with me big time. I felt angry. Really well written provocative piece. Excellent!
July 13th, 2017 01:00
For The Master
Augustus said:
Beware, I have never missed a carotid or femoral artery or heart or liver with my blade, if you try to sneak up on me with that Jeet-kune-do. Lol. in all seriousness, he was remarkable and inspiring. Nicely done.
July 12th, 2017 16:33
Augustus said:
Beware, I have never missed a carotid or femoral artery or heart or liver with my blade, if you try to sneak up on me with that Jeet-kune-do. Lol. in all seriousness, he was remarkable and inspiring. Nicely done.
July 12th, 2017 16:33
For The Master
FredPeyer said:
Even though my knowledge of the martial arts is very limited, I kind of assume you are talking about Bruce Lee. Don\'t understand half of your poem, but love it anyway. It is just so much fun to read it.
You have a style all your own, imaginative with an incredible choice of words.
Thank you!
July 12th, 2017 12:55
FredPeyer said:
Even though my knowledge of the martial arts is very limited, I kind of assume you are talking about Bruce Lee. Don\'t understand half of your poem, but love it anyway. It is just so much fun to read it.
You have a style all your own, imaginative with an incredible choice of words.
Thank you!
July 12th, 2017 12:55
For The Master
malubotelho said:
A very nice tribute. I liked Bruce very much. Very well put together your writing. Thanks
July 12th, 2017 08:40
malubotelho said:
A very nice tribute. I liked Bruce very much. Very well put together your writing. Thanks
July 12th, 2017 08:40
Reflection Weary Judgement
burning-embers said:
Prying masticates the cat. What a wonderful line. You have a really creative mind.
July 11th, 2017 16:09
burning-embers said:
Prying masticates the cat. What a wonderful line. You have a really creative mind.
July 11th, 2017 16:09
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