Comments received on poems by whisperingquill
Shifting Adagios
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh the emotion and pathos of music and verse together in this excellent write - you have talent beyond measure with words dear poet.
January 21st, 2019 17:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh the emotion and pathos of music and verse together in this excellent write - you have talent beyond measure with words dear poet.
January 21st, 2019 17:13
Moribund Mollycoddle
Lauraš» said:
whisperingquill,
Sei veramente un genio con le tue poesie scritte!
A super write. I especially like...
ādescending in the curl
of a nascent uprising
bleeding the firmament dry
dripping Amrita tearsā
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2019 10:36
Lauraš» said:
whisperingquill,
Sei veramente un genio con le tue poesie scritte!
A super write. I especially like...
ādescending in the curl
of a nascent uprising
bleeding the firmament dry
dripping Amrita tearsā
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2019 10:36
Proximity
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate write on the meaning of emotional neglect when love is facing us - - a great read and thanks for posting it.
January 17th, 2019 09:41
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate write on the meaning of emotional neglect when love is facing us - - a great read and thanks for posting it.
January 17th, 2019 09:41
Proximity
sylviasearcher said:
Buddy birdhouse,
I feel like my unrequited soulmate should have written this for me. Did he ask you to post it for him?
Seriously beautiful poem.
I\'d love to unpick where it all come from one day. Humans fascinate me.
January 17th, 2019 02:33
sylviasearcher said:
Buddy birdhouse,
I feel like my unrequited soulmate should have written this for me. Did he ask you to post it for him?
Seriously beautiful poem.
I\'d love to unpick where it all come from one day. Humans fascinate me.
January 17th, 2019 02:33
All groans play in grey/Morning Glory kisses from Mot/Reach for me
sylviasearcher said:
Ahhh now you have a trio of fans for your beautifil trio of poetry.
I hope your modesty is intact š
I thought the second was my favourite, then I thought it was the first.
Then I realised they for me the three poems belonged together.
Beginning with tenderness I felt awoken from a grey and taken into a beautiful world of hope and glory.
Settled and conforted and able to indulge in reaching.
Poetry is very powerful.
Thanks for sharing these words and providing a fleeting evaporation of my grey.
January 16th, 2019 02:28
sylviasearcher said:
Ahhh now you have a trio of fans for your beautifil trio of poetry.
I hope your modesty is intact š
I thought the second was my favourite, then I thought it was the first.
Then I realised they for me the three poems belonged together.
Beginning with tenderness I felt awoken from a grey and taken into a beautiful world of hope and glory.
Settled and conforted and able to indulge in reaching.
Poetry is very powerful.
Thanks for sharing these words and providing a fleeting evaporation of my grey.
January 16th, 2019 02:28
Charmed
sylviasearcher said:
This is my new favourite.
I feel the shattering of hope, the lingering, the craving of real magic.
It\'s very vulnerable.
It\'s beautiful
January 15th, 2019 10:04
sylviasearcher said:
This is my new favourite.
I feel the shattering of hope, the lingering, the craving of real magic.
It\'s very vulnerable.
It\'s beautiful
January 15th, 2019 10:04
Clasp
sylviasearcher said:
Just wanted to read the first poem you published here as I\'m a bit weird.
I once wrote a short story about the rise of the lotus.
It\'s lost now like many of my short stories.
Your last verse is incredible. But very sad in how I interpret it.
January 15th, 2019 03:42
sylviasearcher said:
Just wanted to read the first poem you published here as I\'m a bit weird.
I once wrote a short story about the rise of the lotus.
It\'s lost now like many of my short stories.
Your last verse is incredible. But very sad in how I interpret it.
January 15th, 2019 03:42
Poets we be
sylviasearcher said:
Maybe it is my twisted interpretations, but sometimes I get the same feelings repeating and reversing when I read your most recent works.
There is a certain passion that verges iin rage that I feel compelled to soothe with a lullaby. Yet I have to set off to work now... Maybe we could collaborate?
January 14th, 2019 03:43
sylviasearcher said:
Maybe it is my twisted interpretations, but sometimes I get the same feelings repeating and reversing when I read your most recent works.
There is a certain passion that verges iin rage that I feel compelled to soothe with a lullaby. Yet I have to set off to work now... Maybe we could collaborate?
January 14th, 2019 03:43
Stealing La Petit Morts underneath a cerise moon/Velvet Strands
Fay Slimm. said:
Compelling read and so adeptly crafted - - a favourite for sure. Thanks for crystallizing the feel of yielding to love \"under a cerise moon\".
January 11th, 2019 03:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Compelling read and so adeptly crafted - - a favourite for sure. Thanks for crystallizing the feel of yielding to love \"under a cerise moon\".
January 11th, 2019 03:26
Stealing La Petit Morts underneath a cerise moon/Velvet Strands
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I think this one could be my favourite.
I like the contrasts.
The invitation to dwell amidst the light and shade of desire.
The heavenly, endless, divine, celestial.
The raw, the human, the transient, the flesh.
And I like that they intertwine and feel perfect beside each other.
Yes I agree with Bo, perefecr bedtime reading, but it was also nice to wake up to.
January 11th, 2019 02:30
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I think this one could be my favourite.
I like the contrasts.
The invitation to dwell amidst the light and shade of desire.
The heavenly, endless, divine, celestial.
The raw, the human, the transient, the flesh.
And I like that they intertwine and feel perfect beside each other.
Yes I agree with Bo, perefecr bedtime reading, but it was also nice to wake up to.
January 11th, 2019 02:30
Stealing La Petit Morts underneath a cerise moon/Velvet Strands
Bo said:
Iām very new to this site so I donāt know how to like a poem exactly so Iāll leave this. Thank you for the beautiful poetry before bed.
January 11th, 2019 00:54
Bo said:
Iām very new to this site so I donāt know how to like a poem exactly so Iāll leave this. Thank you for the beautiful poetry before bed.
January 11th, 2019 00:54
Shangri-la Front Lines/ Trapped in Tantric never never land
sylviasearcher said:
I am not sufficiently eloquent or learned to understand all of your words at first reading.
But they give me this achey intoxicated feeling and kind of wrap themselves around me in such a way that the whole becomes greater than its parts and the words I don\'t understand seem not to matter.
January 8th, 2019 04:29
sylviasearcher said:
I am not sufficiently eloquent or learned to understand all of your words at first reading.
But they give me this achey intoxicated feeling and kind of wrap themselves around me in such a way that the whole becomes greater than its parts and the words I don\'t understand seem not to matter.
January 8th, 2019 04:29
Masticating inverted seraphs
sylviasearcher said:
This is like offering the sweet poison apple to the lips of the discontented disconnect.
Yet that last verse lingers...
Your sky fall
On my abyss
Of withered dreams
There is a tragic inevitability which is bitter sweet.
January 7th, 2019 04:27
sylviasearcher said:
This is like offering the sweet poison apple to the lips of the discontented disconnect.
Yet that last verse lingers...
Your sky fall
On my abyss
Of withered dreams
There is a tragic inevitability which is bitter sweet.
January 7th, 2019 04:27
Mask upon Masks
sylviasearcher said:
I need to learn Italian so I can full appreciate your poems.
I adore the rhythm and flow.
It feels relentless.
This is 3 because I counted out of order.
Sorry!
January 6th, 2019 03:51
sylviasearcher said:
I need to learn Italian so I can full appreciate your poems.
I adore the rhythm and flow.
It feels relentless.
This is 3 because I counted out of order.
Sorry!
January 6th, 2019 03:51
Shutter
sylviasearcher said:
I wonder how it would sound to hear these words out loud.
I often feel that your words build like a crescendo it mirrors the rise and fall and satisfactions of a desire.
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January 6th, 2019 03:43
sylviasearcher said:
I wonder how it would sound to hear these words out loud.
I often feel that your words build like a crescendo it mirrors the rise and fall and satisfactions of a desire.
4
January 6th, 2019 03:43
Fade away with me, my love
sylviasearcher said:
Your poems take me in a sensuous linguistic journey.
Your beliefs linger and I get to the end and feel their absence.
January 6th, 2019 03:40
sylviasearcher said:
Your poems take me in a sensuous linguistic journey.
Your beliefs linger and I get to the end and feel their absence.
January 6th, 2019 03:40
Velvet Sabres/Trickle/Saturating Sighs
sylviasearcher said:
You made me speechless
This is amazing beautiful stirring
Could you put some in my tea?
1
January 6th, 2019 03:38
sylviasearcher said:
You made me speechless
This is amazing beautiful stirring
Could you put some in my tea?
1
January 6th, 2019 03:38
Victims Aren\'t We All/ Cracked Headboards and Napalm Whips
sylviasearcher said:
I like how you led me in gently.
Bold.
January 4th, 2019 11:23
sylviasearcher said:
I like how you led me in gently.
Bold.
January 4th, 2019 11:23
Everything fades as spent rays/ She wilts from lavender chaos
sylviasearcher said:
Phew, you are in intense!
January 4th, 2019 08:26
sylviasearcher said:
Phew, you are in intense!
January 4th, 2019 08:26
Clubbing
sylviasearcher said:
Oh now I see what you mean.
Sounds like the goings on outside our village pub on new year\'s eve as we walked home from my sister\'s.
The world\'s bad. š
January 3rd, 2019 03:23
sylviasearcher said:
Oh now I see what you mean.
Sounds like the goings on outside our village pub on new year\'s eve as we walked home from my sister\'s.
The world\'s bad. š
January 3rd, 2019 03:23
Clubbing
sylviasearcher said:
Sounds like I\'d better watch the video when my boys aren\'t around.
January 2nd, 2019 11:59
sylviasearcher said:
Sounds like I\'d better watch the video when my boys aren\'t around.
January 2nd, 2019 11:59
Apostasy
sylviasearcher said:
I love how you do it fragmented madness. It was like a surreal vision playing in my head that half of me fully understood and the other half ducked.
January 2nd, 2019 03:20
sylviasearcher said:
I love how you do it fragmented madness. It was like a surreal vision playing in my head that half of me fully understood and the other half ducked.
January 2nd, 2019 03:20
Consummatum est
Lauraš» said:
Whisperingquill,
An outstanding write!
Sean Roweās lyrics suitably complement your poem!
An amazing read, especially the ending...
āMay you drink in the star of I
to birth the gravity of you.ā
~Laura~
December 24th, 2018 08:48
Lauraš» said:
Whisperingquill,
An outstanding write!
Sean Roweās lyrics suitably complement your poem!
An amazing read, especially the ending...
āMay you drink in the star of I
to birth the gravity of you.ā
~Laura~
December 24th, 2018 08:48
Consummatum est
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow..this is stunning..I have to look up a couple of the words u used even, which is rare for me...brilliant
December 24th, 2018 03:27
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow..this is stunning..I have to look up a couple of the words u used even, which is rare for me...brilliant
December 24th, 2018 03:27
Mil Mortes Pequenas
whisperingquill said:
ahhh grazie
la mia elegante filatrice della passione
December 23rd, 2018 22:35
whisperingquill said:
ahhh grazie
la mia elegante filatrice della passione
December 23rd, 2018 22:35
Fade away with me, my love
Lauraš» said:
whisperingquill,
An interesting write which I enjoyed reading! I like very much how youāve woven some Italian words throughout your excellent poem!
I actually have the music video of āIāll Beā. Awesome song!
~Laura~
December 22nd, 2018 18:05
Lauraš» said:
whisperingquill,
An interesting write which I enjoyed reading! I like very much how youāve woven some Italian words throughout your excellent poem!
I actually have the music video of āIāll Beā. Awesome song!
~Laura~
December 22nd, 2018 18:05
Popping Bubbled Prisms
Neville said:
thoroughly enjoyed by me.. I hope others will visit this page, when I have gone..
December 16th, 2018 13:17
Neville said:
thoroughly enjoyed by me.. I hope others will visit this page, when I have gone..
December 16th, 2018 13:17
Looking into the eyes of your murderer, and instilling forgiveness.
whisperingquill said:
Thank you my friend
Muito amor o seu caminho tambƩm.
December 16th, 2018 08:20
whisperingquill said:
Thank you my friend
Muito amor o seu caminho tambƩm.
December 16th, 2018 08:20
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