Comments received on poems by whisperingquill
That\'s Crazy Talk
kevin browne said:
this is quite a paradoxical poem I believe. in one way it shows the total skill of word usage in such an array it becomes almost delusional yet deep in such thoughtful expression it blows the mind with excitement. brilliantly composed my friend.
August 3rd, 2017 11:52
kevin browne said:
this is quite a paradoxical poem I believe. in one way it shows the total skill of word usage in such an array it becomes almost delusional yet deep in such thoughtful expression it blows the mind with excitement. brilliantly composed my friend.
August 3rd, 2017 11:52
That\'s Crazy Talk
FredPeyer said:
WQ, I read it, I enjoyed it, I don\'t understand it. Reminds me of the saying: Men never understand women, but if you love them you don\'t have to understand them. Same with your writing!!! ;-)
August 3rd, 2017 11:46
FredPeyer said:
WQ, I read it, I enjoyed it, I don\'t understand it. Reminds me of the saying: Men never understand women, but if you love them you don\'t have to understand them. Same with your writing!!! ;-)
August 3rd, 2017 11:46
Entwined Under an Aster Sky
Heather T said:
Ahh one of THOSE trances. Well, you can go on for days in my humble opinion. Hypnotic.
August 2nd, 2017 14:34
Heather T said:
Ahh one of THOSE trances. Well, you can go on for days in my humble opinion. Hypnotic.
August 2nd, 2017 14:34
Entwined Under an Aster Sky
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic phrasing in this tribute to artful erotica Quil - - the power of your word-use grabbed my attention from the first line.
August 2nd, 2017 03:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic phrasing in this tribute to artful erotica Quil - - the power of your word-use grabbed my attention from the first line.
August 2nd, 2017 03:43
Entwined Under an Aster Sky
kevin browne said:
wow, this took me line by little line and I loved the huge array or great wording. certainly opens up the minds of avid poets. great stuff.
August 2nd, 2017 01:45
kevin browne said:
wow, this took me line by little line and I loved the huge array or great wording. certainly opens up the minds of avid poets. great stuff.
August 2nd, 2017 01:45
Entwined Under an Aster Sky
whisperingquill said:
Yeah I would have to title it something like \"it\'s a sex story\" lol. Ha! 👍🏼😭
August 2nd, 2017 01:43
whisperingquill said:
Yeah I would have to title it something like \"it\'s a sex story\" lol. Ha! 👍🏼😭
August 2nd, 2017 01:43
Entwined Under an Aster Sky
FredPeyer said:
As usual I do like your poems very much! They are high class erotica, written only for high IQ people who understand art. That, by the way, is why I have such a hard time understanding all of it.
I don\'t know if there is such a thing as high class harlequin novels, but if there is, you should submit them. :-)
(Just a respectful, gentle tease!)
August 2nd, 2017 01:36
FredPeyer said:
As usual I do like your poems very much! They are high class erotica, written only for high IQ people who understand art. That, by the way, is why I have such a hard time understanding all of it.
I don\'t know if there is such a thing as high class harlequin novels, but if there is, you should submit them. :-)
(Just a respectful, gentle tease!)
August 2nd, 2017 01:36
Second Chances For Sole Orb / Vim
Heather T said:
I know each time I open you up that I\'m going somewhere. Where I\'ll fly I never know, only that I will, and that I\'ll come home with new synapses.
August 1st, 2017 09:55
Heather T said:
I know each time I open you up that I\'m going somewhere. Where I\'ll fly I never know, only that I will, and that I\'ll come home with new synapses.
August 1st, 2017 09:55
Second Chances For Sole Orb / Vim
FredPeyer said:
Trees with auras, tickling the brain, coaxing the fracture of my own star in the constellation Ursa Minor, tossing droplets of blood from the immortal flower into the wind......where do you get all this?
Your poems, good as they are, are also very challenging. Had to look up meanings right and left. But hey, at least I learned something!
August 1st, 2017 01:53
FredPeyer said:
Trees with auras, tickling the brain, coaxing the fracture of my own star in the constellation Ursa Minor, tossing droplets of blood from the immortal flower into the wind......where do you get all this?
Your poems, good as they are, are also very challenging. Had to look up meanings right and left. But hey, at least I learned something!
August 1st, 2017 01:53
Naze Oniya/Cherokee Rose
Heather T said:
Oh my...the Cherokee Rose heartened the women on the tearful trail. Love. Glad I came back by.
July 31st, 2017 17:32
Heather T said:
Oh my...the Cherokee Rose heartened the women on the tearful trail. Love. Glad I came back by.
July 31st, 2017 17:32
Naze Oniya/Cherokee Rose
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful writing! One problem though, how do you improve on perfection?
July 31st, 2017 12:14
FredPeyer said:
Wonderful writing! One problem though, how do you improve on perfection?
July 31st, 2017 12:14
All Is Now Never Blinks
FredPeyer said:
I agree with Heather, Cat, and Kevin. Couldn\'t have said it any better myself!
July 31st, 2017 11:42
FredPeyer said:
I agree with Heather, Cat, and Kevin. Couldn\'t have said it any better myself!
July 31st, 2017 11:42
Naze Oniya/Cherokee Rose
Heather T said:
Gor. Geous. I loved each syllable. And when I get up in the morning, I\'m going to read and love it again.
July 31st, 2017 00:37
Heather T said:
Gor. Geous. I loved each syllable. And when I get up in the morning, I\'m going to read and love it again.
July 31st, 2017 00:37
All Is Now Never Blinks
kevin browne said:
I had to get the dictionary out for this array or awesome wording. it certainly capture the imagination. gripping stuff my friend.
July 30th, 2017 13:59
kevin browne said:
I had to get the dictionary out for this array or awesome wording. it certainly capture the imagination. gripping stuff my friend.
July 30th, 2017 13:59
All Is Now Never Blinks
Heather T said:
I love your alliterative language and your choice of word pairings. I don\'t have to understand when I can roll the words around in my mouth. In fact, some of my own favorite words are made up entirely 😁
July 30th, 2017 13:25
Heather T said:
I love your alliterative language and your choice of word pairings. I don\'t have to understand when I can roll the words around in my mouth. In fact, some of my own favorite words are made up entirely 😁
July 30th, 2017 13:25
Will
FredPeyer said:
Whisperingquill, I faithfully read all of your poems, but this one is way over my head. I did try to ingest this pill of goodwill, but it didn\'t work. :-)
July 29th, 2017 12:45
FredPeyer said:
Whisperingquill, I faithfully read all of your poems, but this one is way over my head. I did try to ingest this pill of goodwill, but it didn\'t work. :-)
July 29th, 2017 12:45
Basorexia/ Star Mother
FredPeyer said:
Have to agree with Diamond, love Star Mother. Am not so sure yet about Basorexia (love that word). Where does the urge to kiss come in?
July 28th, 2017 15:15
FredPeyer said:
Have to agree with Diamond, love Star Mother. Am not so sure yet about Basorexia (love that word). Where does the urge to kiss come in?
July 28th, 2017 15:15
Seethed
kevin browne said:
I hope the stars don\'t weep, they need to be smiling but I would happy fall with you into satin innocence anytime you want me to. this is such a lovely write and to round it off I fell in love with it.
July 27th, 2017 05:26
kevin browne said:
I hope the stars don\'t weep, they need to be smiling but I would happy fall with you into satin innocence anytime you want me to. this is such a lovely write and to round it off I fell in love with it.
July 27th, 2017 05:26
Seethed
FredPeyer said:
Whisperingquill, I released a forgotten pyre (my name is Peyer), and found my great grand-father!
July 27th, 2017 04:41
FredPeyer said:
Whisperingquill, I released a forgotten pyre (my name is Peyer), and found my great grand-father!
July 27th, 2017 04:41
Ethereal Medicine
FredPeyer said:
Whisperingquill, I herewith declare you the official medicine man of this forum!
July 26th, 2017 10:09
FredPeyer said:
Whisperingquill, I herewith declare you the official medicine man of this forum!
July 26th, 2017 10:09
Hoops Of Dirae
kevin browne said:
your words are total magic. I love your work, its fab x
July 25th, 2017 17:10
kevin browne said:
your words are total magic. I love your work, its fab x
July 25th, 2017 17:10
Hoops Of Dirae
FredPeyer said:
What a way to write about female demonic spirits, comatose ghosts.
You do have an incredible way with words!
July 25th, 2017 12:08
FredPeyer said:
What a way to write about female demonic spirits, comatose ghosts.
You do have an incredible way with words!
July 25th, 2017 12:08
Mask upon Masks
kevin browne said:
we is definitely mostly crazy and that\'s fact. a well worthy poem.
July 24th, 2017 18:40
kevin browne said:
we is definitely mostly crazy and that\'s fact. a well worthy poem.
July 24th, 2017 18:40
Mask upon Masks
kevin browne said:
we is definitely mostly crazy and that\'s fact. a well worthy poem.
July 24th, 2017 18:38
kevin browne said:
we is definitely mostly crazy and that\'s fact. a well worthy poem.
July 24th, 2017 18:38
Mask upon Masks
FredPeyer said:
And \'cerebral enhancement\' I got, need to read it a few more times though to get the full \'benefit\'!
July 24th, 2017 12:17
FredPeyer said:
And \'cerebral enhancement\' I got, need to read it a few more times though to get the full \'benefit\'!
July 24th, 2017 12:17
Got Your Soul
FredPeyer said:
Before reading Cat\'s comment, I wanted to mention the same few lines! Great poem.
July 23rd, 2017 15:10
FredPeyer said:
Before reading Cat\'s comment, I wanted to mention the same few lines! Great poem.
July 23rd, 2017 15:10
Got Your Soul
kevin browne said:
this is a style of life and poetry that captures my heart of which I also write about also, a fascinating write my friend.
July 23rd, 2017 13:39
kevin browne said:
this is a style of life and poetry that captures my heart of which I also write about also, a fascinating write my friend.
July 23rd, 2017 13:39
Oh Yeah
Augustus said:
I can just hear the response, \"Yes! Yes! Yes! Ohhhhhhhhhh!\"
July 22nd, 2017 22:23
Augustus said:
I can just hear the response, \"Yes! Yes! Yes! Ohhhhhhhhhh!\"
July 22nd, 2017 22:23
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