Comments received on poems by Stella_Suicide
Drowning
SorrowfullyHappy said:
you will find what you are looking for but first you must be willing to look for it
i hope you find it stella
September 22nd, 2017 10:10
SorrowfullyHappy said:
you will find what you are looking for but first you must be willing to look for it
i hope you find it stella
September 22nd, 2017 10:10
killed myself
Mugsdaddy said:
A deafening scream at all those who should have cared and fuck their own regrets. Very powerful.
Mugsdaddy
September 11th, 2017 20:12
Mugsdaddy said:
A deafening scream at all those who should have cared and fuck their own regrets. Very powerful.
Mugsdaddy
September 11th, 2017 20:12
killed myself
HeartfullyFallen said:
I really like this, my favorite thing about it was the repetition of the words \"white little\" in the beginning and how everytime it was used a little different. Also, I know it means nothing from some random chick on a poem site but if you even need you can message me :)
September 11th, 2017 16:20
HeartfullyFallen said:
I really like this, my favorite thing about it was the repetition of the words \"white little\" in the beginning and how everytime it was used a little different. Also, I know it means nothing from some random chick on a poem site but if you even need you can message me :)
September 11th, 2017 16:20
Drowning
Christina8 said:
Great poem, though heartwrenching. I can identify with some of this, and it breaks my heart! Your daddy may have never given you what you feel you needed to get on in this life but you are doing a great job without him! Can\'t wait to read more of your work! (I too am sorry for your pain!)
September 5th, 2017 22:55
Christina8 said:
Great poem, though heartwrenching. I can identify with some of this, and it breaks my heart! Your daddy may have never given you what you feel you needed to get on in this life but you are doing a great job without him! Can\'t wait to read more of your work! (I too am sorry for your pain!)
September 5th, 2017 22:55
Drowning
Simple-Man87 said:
Oh my. That last part, gave me goosebumps. Very emotional. Excellent write.
September 5th, 2017 15:02
Simple-Man87 said:
Oh my. That last part, gave me goosebumps. Very emotional. Excellent write.
September 5th, 2017 15:02
Drowning
BlueDays said:
This is so clearly an emotional and poignant piece, well written. I can relate it to my father too. I am sorry for your pain. Be strong.
September 5th, 2017 13:24
BlueDays said:
This is so clearly an emotional and poignant piece, well written. I can relate it to my father too. I am sorry for your pain. Be strong.
September 5th, 2017 13:24
My Forever
SorrowfullyHappy said:
I\'m happy for you looks lie you found someone who could do what i could not
i hope you two last
August 30th, 2017 11:02
SorrowfullyHappy said:
I\'m happy for you looks lie you found someone who could do what i could not
i hope you two last
August 30th, 2017 11:02
My Forever
Simple-Man87 said:
That was beautiful. Thank you for sharing. I loved it.
August 29th, 2017 10:04
Simple-Man87 said:
That was beautiful. Thank you for sharing. I loved it.
August 29th, 2017 10:04
Devil\'s Daughter
swingline said:
Love the duality of this poem or I should say three poems . The first poem the lines that are not crossed through , the second one , that which the lines are crossed through , and thirdly all lines togethe . By doing so you get an in depth glimpse of three different people . Makes me want to ask if you are Bi-polar .
May 5th, 2017 00:36
swingline said:
Love the duality of this poem or I should say three poems . The first poem the lines that are not crossed through , the second one , that which the lines are crossed through , and thirdly all lines togethe . By doing so you get an in depth glimpse of three different people . Makes me want to ask if you are Bi-polar .
May 5th, 2017 00:36
Him.
swingline said:
Love like ballast in a ship\'s hull keeps the ship upright , balanced , and running fast and free .
May 5th, 2017 00:30
swingline said:
Love like ballast in a ship\'s hull keeps the ship upright , balanced , and running fast and free .
May 5th, 2017 00:30
-Please-
swingline said:
Do you put your razorblades in your mouth and suck on them to warm them up . Do you wrap your wrists with gauze before you cut so the gauze can soak up the blood and not make a mess . What is your favorite music to cut by . Sounds so script . Like a B movie , a spaghetti western , or another cop show on TV . The real nightmare is happening in Washington D C . Your little sideshow should you succeed won\'t even make the news and the obit will say she passed away . Or you could write another poem and buy another day . And another one for tomorrow and the day after that . Poems are the bandaids you put on the hurts of life . Untill you are completely cover from head to toe . But one day they will have to come off because you have healed . No more necessary poems because the pain is gone .
May 5th, 2017 00:26
swingline said:
Do you put your razorblades in your mouth and suck on them to warm them up . Do you wrap your wrists with gauze before you cut so the gauze can soak up the blood and not make a mess . What is your favorite music to cut by . Sounds so script . Like a B movie , a spaghetti western , or another cop show on TV . The real nightmare is happening in Washington D C . Your little sideshow should you succeed won\'t even make the news and the obit will say she passed away . Or you could write another poem and buy another day . And another one for tomorrow and the day after that . Poems are the bandaids you put on the hurts of life . Untill you are completely cover from head to toe . But one day they will have to come off because you have healed . No more necessary poems because the pain is gone .
May 5th, 2017 00:26
-Savior-
swingline said:
It seems birds of a feather flock together . Here both parties dine on the ecstacy of pain , sin and abuse . One feeds the other but when their is an absense it can only inflict actual pain .
May 4th, 2017 15:45
swingline said:
It seems birds of a feather flock together . Here both parties dine on the ecstacy of pain , sin and abuse . One feeds the other but when their is an absense it can only inflict actual pain .
May 4th, 2017 15:45
-Fear-
SorrowfullyHappy said:
im afraid to love for fear that i will hurt someone i don\'t fear pain and i always regret the things i do
May 4th, 2017 00:39
SorrowfullyHappy said:
im afraid to love for fear that i will hurt someone i don\'t fear pain and i always regret the things i do
May 4th, 2017 00:39
-Fear-
swingline said:
Fear is a natural instinct of survival . It tells us when to run or fight , to hide or stand . A soldier may have a sword and shield but one of his greatest weapons is fear . And in love where there is fear , there is doubt . Love has no room for either
May 3rd, 2017 18:49
swingline said:
Fear is a natural instinct of survival . It tells us when to run or fight , to hide or stand . A soldier may have a sword and shield but one of his greatest weapons is fear . And in love where there is fear , there is doubt . Love has no room for either
May 3rd, 2017 18:49
-Please-
SorrowfullyHappy said:
just don\'t hand me the gun cause i would shoot myself
May 1st, 2017 11:37
SorrowfullyHappy said:
just don\'t hand me the gun cause i would shoot myself
May 1st, 2017 11:37
Him.
SorrowfullyHappy said:
as i said you are a great poet
hope you to are happy together
May 1st, 2017 11:34
SorrowfullyHappy said:
as i said you are a great poet
hope you to are happy together
May 1st, 2017 11:34
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