Comments received on poems by LukeMorrison
Valencian episode
Fay Slimm. said:
A gem of a read Luke - the flow drew me into the local festivities and the metre started my feet tapping at that \"drink-drenched\" Valencian Wedding.
November 26th, 2017 10:58
Fay Slimm. said:
A gem of a read Luke - the flow drew me into the local festivities and the metre started my feet tapping at that \"drink-drenched\" Valencian Wedding.
November 26th, 2017 10:58
Voices
mbird72 said:
He can\'t convince you of anything. I struggle like this person. I felt something too familiar when I read it. Thank you
July 14th, 2017 03:48
mbird72 said:
He can\'t convince you of anything. I struggle like this person. I felt something too familiar when I read it. Thank you
July 14th, 2017 03:48
Ready
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"Difficulties\" are to be expected, are quite natural and human but unfortunately, are often incorrectly labeled as \"doubts.\"
May 10th, 2017 23:01
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"Difficulties\" are to be expected, are quite natural and human but unfortunately, are often incorrectly labeled as \"doubts.\"
May 10th, 2017 23:01
Veins of fire
orchidee said:
Good write. It is so, often just for the \'fix\' of a \'good\' or \'high\' feeling. Then that goes, and another fix is needed. Some try it just to dabble, but then are hooked on it.
April 8th, 2017 11:28
orchidee said:
Good write. It is so, often just for the \'fix\' of a \'good\' or \'high\' feeling. Then that goes, and another fix is needed. Some try it just to dabble, but then are hooked on it.
April 8th, 2017 11:28
The Doom
Bibbeck said:
The last two verses, so true of modern generation. Excellent reflection and definitely thought-provoking.
April 8th, 2017 03:19
Bibbeck said:
The last two verses, so true of modern generation. Excellent reflection and definitely thought-provoking.
April 8th, 2017 03:19
Veins of fire
Bibbeck said:
Fabulous stuff! Simply explanatory, bringing you in to the subject & thought provoking. My kind of style.
April 8th, 2017 03:02
Bibbeck said:
Fabulous stuff! Simply explanatory, bringing you in to the subject & thought provoking. My kind of style.
April 8th, 2017 03:02
Teardrop streams
Michael Edwards said:
A great write and somewhat enigmatic - I\'ve never used the language you do and doubt if I ever will but have no problems with it so no worries there.
April 7th, 2017 00:52
Michael Edwards said:
A great write and somewhat enigmatic - I\'ve never used the language you do and doubt if I ever will but have no problems with it so no worries there.
April 7th, 2017 00:52
The Doom
mariannebmo said:
I like this a lot, the last paragraph especially has some bite!
April 6th, 2017 08:59
mariannebmo said:
I like this a lot, the last paragraph especially has some bite!
April 6th, 2017 08:59
Beautiful
Fay Slimm. said:
Lots of food for thought in this poem Luke - - a good comparison and presented with engaging imagery. I look forward to reading more of your work and welcome to M.P.S.
April 6th, 2017 02:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Lots of food for thought in this poem Luke - - a good comparison and presented with engaging imagery. I look forward to reading more of your work and welcome to M.P.S.
April 6th, 2017 02:29
Beautiful
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LUKE ~ Thanks for your first poem (on MPS) well structured and replete with rhyme and rhythm ~ the hallmarks of a good recitable poem. The theme and linguistic content is also excellent. It is true ~ as you say ~ \"That mighty Oaks from little Acorns grow\" But its not just the DNA in the acorn that makes the oak ! It is the nutrients in the soil ~ it is the water in the rain ~ it is the heat and radiation from the sun ~ also the (oft castigated) carbon dioxide in the atmosphere without which there would be no photosynthesis and no growth. Beauty (the acorn & the oak) working in harmony with that which is less beautiful ~ soil ~ water ~ worms ~ soil bacteria ~ NPK ~ nitrogen ~ phosphorus ~ potassium and CO2 ~ awesome ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my odes ~ Thanks B.
April 5th, 2017 12:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LUKE ~ Thanks for your first poem (on MPS) well structured and replete with rhyme and rhythm ~ the hallmarks of a good recitable poem. The theme and linguistic content is also excellent. It is true ~ as you say ~ \"That mighty Oaks from little Acorns grow\" But its not just the DNA in the acorn that makes the oak ! It is the nutrients in the soil ~ it is the water in the rain ~ it is the heat and radiation from the sun ~ also the (oft castigated) carbon dioxide in the atmosphere without which there would be no photosynthesis and no growth. Beauty (the acorn & the oak) working in harmony with that which is less beautiful ~ soil ~ water ~ worms ~ soil bacteria ~ NPK ~ nitrogen ~ phosphorus ~ potassium and CO2 ~ awesome ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my odes ~ Thanks B.
April 5th, 2017 12:58
Beautiful
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LUKE ~ Thanks for your first poem (on MPS) well structured and replete with rhyme and rhythm ~ the hallmarks of a good recitable poem. The theme and linguistic content is also excellent. It is true ~ as you say ~ \"That mighty Oaks from little Acorns grow\" But its not just the DNA in the acorn that makes the oak ! It is the nutrients in the soil ~ it is the water in the rain ~ it is the heat and radiation from the sun ~ also the (oft castigated) carbon dioxide in the atmosphere without which there would be no photosynthesis and no growth. Beauty (the acorn & the oak) working in harmony with that which is less beautiful ~ soil ~ water ~ worms ~ soil bacteria ~ NPK ~ nitrogen ~ phosphorus ~ potassium and CO2 ~ awesome ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my odes ~ Thanks B.
April 5th, 2017 12:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LUKE ~ Thanks for your first poem (on MPS) well structured and replete with rhyme and rhythm ~ the hallmarks of a good recitable poem. The theme and linguistic content is also excellent. It is true ~ as you say ~ \"That mighty Oaks from little Acorns grow\" But its not just the DNA in the acorn that makes the oak ! It is the nutrients in the soil ~ it is the water in the rain ~ it is the heat and radiation from the sun ~ also the (oft castigated) carbon dioxide in the atmosphere without which there would be no photosynthesis and no growth. Beauty (the acorn & the oak) working in harmony with that which is less beautiful ~ soil ~ water ~ worms ~ soil bacteria ~ NPK ~ nitrogen ~ phosphorus ~ potassium and CO2 ~ awesome ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my odes ~ Thanks B.
April 5th, 2017 12:58
