Comments received on poems by lanaevans



My House Is Filled With Blues
onepauly said:

good meaning.
not to serious
that\'s a great part of poetry
among others.

April 29th, 2018 16:01

College Dropout
FredPeyer said:

Lana, you paint a very realistic situation here with some well placed words. Nearly like a movie scene. I do like your straight forward, tell it as it is kind of writing. Am hoping though that this is imagination and not the real you!
PS: I think half the world\'s population is not emotionally stable!

January 14th, 2018 02:48

I\'m Not Dead Yet.
FredPeyer said:

Portrayal of a tortured soul. I could feel the anguish in your writing. Well done Lana!

January 5th, 2018 11:31

My Life Is A Mess
FredPeyer said:

I feel for you lana, but sometimes you just gotta get up and clean! You might be surprised at what you find in that mess. The positive is hiding somewhere in all that negative.

December 30th, 2017 20:48

My Life Is A Mess
SunSearcher said:

So sad :( I hope you get out in bask in the sun, it is amazing how it can lift you\'re spirits! Good luck to you, we\'ll done.

December 30th, 2017 09:37

Somebody
FredPeyer said:

Lana, we hear you loud and clear!
Your writing says it all. The main reason why you should be happy to be you is you. You are unique, you are a great writer, your writing shows you have compassion. Three reasons already to be happy.

September 15th, 2017 22:57

Somebody
dusk arising said:

Why should somebody help you? Answer that and you\'ll realise you dont need anybody elses help.

September 15th, 2017 22:16

911
FredPeyer said:

You are right, when it is our time we don\'t have much choice but to accept it. But in the meantime, live your dreams!

September 11th, 2017 19:54

Walking the Earth While Dead
Candlewitch said:

....what they (the other comments) said... I completely agree with! and you have the art of the written word and it makes you lovely!

I don\'t look like my sisters and mother condemned me for it. she always made me feel ugly....my husband thinks I\'m beautiful...beauty is just a concept.

*hugs, Cat

September 10th, 2017 13:37

Walking the Earth While Dead
dusk arising said:

There you go gal..... all men are the same! You said it - \"except that all men are interested in the same kind\".

If that were true you might as well give up now. Funny that you dont hear men saying that about women though.... most men say they cant understand women because they know women like to hear that.
Cliches cliches cliches....

Love yourself hun, you know you\'re loveable and the more you act like it the more attractive you\'ll be.
I do like the way you\'ve written this piece though.

September 10th, 2017 11:28

A Different Kind
Mugsdaddy said:

Very raw with emotion you can feel the disgust you have for this man. Very well written.

September 10th, 2017 01:54

Drop Dead
Mugsdaddy said:

These words could have been taken straight out of my head you are not alone in feeling this way but you have an advantage over most you have a beautiful talent that is worthless only to those who are to stupid or close minded to read it. Here you have worth here you possess beauty, here you are Loved
Mugsdaddy

September 7th, 2017 00:56

Drop Dead
FredPeyer said:

\'Worthless poetry written for nobody but for you to read and provide your sympathy\'
No poetry is worthless! You are a good writer, so no, you can\'t just drop dead!
And you\'re not getting any sympathy from me. No matter how you grew up, no matter where you are, YOU are the one who decides how you want to live. There is a tale of two brothers who grew up with an alcoholic father who was a thief and in prison most of the time. One brother became an alcoholic and thief, the other one a medical doctor. When they were asked why they became who they were, both answered with: What do you think, with a father like that!

From your writing I can tell that you are smart. Forget that \'mentally challenged\' bs. Learn to love yourself first, regardless of what happened, decide to be happy no matter what. I am 69 years old, and believe me, I know it works!

September 6th, 2017 23:32

You Got Weed?
myself and me said:

\"I need something to occupy my time, so give me whatever it is that drives me out my head. \"
I hope after writing this poem, help you a bit.
Wonderful writing.

September 4th, 2017 18:58

You Got Weed?
Mugsdaddy said:

I want some of what you\'re smoking. Great piece touches all ends of the spectrum at once. Brilliant

September 4th, 2017 16:39

You Got Weed?
Poetic Dan said:

Weed got me on the start of a flow
Of learning to let go
Music could take me away
But yet the same place I could stay

Mushrooms got me out of my room
When my mind wanted to consume
Then the lesson from all this
Was I once did this all as a kid

Thank you for inspiring this ;)
Great work

September 4th, 2017 16:31

My Daddy\'s Daughter
Accidental Poet said:

There\'s an old saying \"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder\". Don\'t base your confidence on those who do not know beauty. Look within and see all the beauty you are. ; )

September 4th, 2017 16:18

You Got Weed?
Accidental Poet said:

Great write lana, I\'m reminded of a Gordon Lightfoot song called. \"Race Among the Ruins\" where part of the lyrics are :
\"If you plan to face tomorrow
Do it soon\"

September 4th, 2017 15:57

Accidental Birth
dusk arising said:

Cool. Rant over ? Try reading positive stuff and making a positive move or two.... or ask for prozac. I know which i\'d do. You could start by reading a poem called Desiderata by a guy called Max Ehrmann,.... google it and print it off.... hang it behind the bathroom door and read it everytime u use the bathroom. Brainwash yourself back into sanity by reading it. Meanwhile, leave a comment on my stuff please.


September 3rd, 2017 08:25

Losing Faith
Gary Edward Geraci said:

That bullet would be an affront to the Creator whom alone decides when our lives are done here. In His loving estimation of you - you are unique and unrepeatable - he gives you a wide space of freedom to figure this out. Suicide is never the answer my friend nor is there any beauty or art in it for that matter. If things get too heavy for you go to NAMI.

August 31st, 2017 22:56

Losing Faith
NikitaPassmore said:

I love this the ending is so relatable \"bullet to the brain always seemed like a good idea.\"

August 31st, 2017 20:17

The Perverts Don\'t Like Me
Egyptianqt79 said:

I love this

August 28th, 2017 23:25

My Daddy\'s Daughter
P.H.Rose said:

This poem breaks
My heart lanaevans
First can I say it\'s
Really very good
I have two daughters
Who I love more than
Life itself I also have
A granddaughter and
Love her the same way
I am an ugly man but
They are beautiful.
Great poem...

May 26th, 2017 02:21

My Daddy\'s Daughter
lanaevans said:

Thank you both!

May 25th, 2017 22:58

My Daddy\'s Daughter
Frank Prem said:

Woof. Strong expression, Lana. Good work.

May 25th, 2017 22:57

My Daddy\'s Daughter
Louis Gibbs said:

Beauty comes from within, and you obviously have the soul of a poet, which is a beautiful thing.

May 25th, 2017 22:37

To Live
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write.

May 11th, 2017 01:41

To Live
Papi Y said:

I love it, well expressed!

May 10th, 2017 23:44

Back on My Feet
Goldfinch60 said:

The Lord be with You.

April 17th, 2017 00:47

How to Cope With Being So Unpretty
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

April 14th, 2017 07:20

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