Comments on community poems by SLR
- Where did you go? (Lovemariah_45)
Welcome to MPS! Good flow. Emotive write. Keep posting!
June 17th, 2018 23:55 - I\'ll Fight (Finley Fire)
I\'ve read your other work and I don\'t know if you\'re having a good day...
June 17th, 2018 23:44 - a dark room (_the_girl_who_cuts_)
I hate when someone says that they know how someone else feels if they...
June 17th, 2018 23:33 - Black Vultures (W c)
This is so true. Most people don\'t realize the good that they do. Just...
June 17th, 2018 23:15 - Wind in heaven (Koolness)
This is really good. Heartfelt and good rhythm.
June 17th, 2018 21:15 - Stranger at My Window (Vanabba3)
This is a little like a short story of mine. The little girl is murdered...
June 17th, 2018 18:27 - The Lady in White (Vanabba3)
I would be interested to know which town. I lived in Missouri for several...
June 17th, 2018 18:05 - Birdsong (W c)
Lyrical and light. Love the pic, love cardinals. Great post! Thank you for...
June 16th, 2018 23:16 - Trapped (DesertWords)
Too funny! This is great, thank you for sharing it!
June 16th, 2018 23:07 - hello again my enemy (GON)
This is profound in an almost casual way. Gets you to think. Good write,...
June 16th, 2018 23:04 - Where Have all the Senses Gone......... (Snowflake Incorrigable)
Wise words from a wise mother. Wise of you to follow them. Great message....
June 16th, 2018 22:45 - Dragon (Jabberwocky)
Good flow and rhythm. I\'d be interested to read a longer version of this....
June 16th, 2018 22:38 - They deserve no less. (Appletree)
Great example of the love and devotion/obsession we feel for our children....
June 16th, 2018 22:16 - The Blazing Rag (Kevin Michael Bloor)
I love this! Great descriptive write. Paints a vivid pic of the place....
June 16th, 2018 22:11 - I Fear The Reaper (AmateurSomeone)
It speaks to me. Really well written and emotive write. Welcome to MPS! ...
June 14th, 2018 20:02
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