Comments on community poems by SLR
- A Pleasant Sound (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Music is great therapy, great for relaxing, perfect for getting inspired,...
June 7th, 2018 19:48 - Coffeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (Lorna)
One of my favorite addictions. All day, every day. Almost every kind I\'ve...
June 7th, 2018 19:44 - Little Pennies (W c)
This brings back some happy childhood memories. Great write!
June 7th, 2018 19:13 - The Latest In A Series... (DesertWords)
So heartbreaking. So true. Devastating. Every parents worst nightmare.
May 21st, 2018 22:07 - From a Daydream (MrNobody40)
I agree with Gold finch. You are seen. The people around you see you, but...
May 21st, 2018 21:59 - Flame (Teyonce)
I hope you don\'t mind if I screen shot it! Got to save it for later! ...
May 21st, 2018 21:53 - To the end. From the spark of life (Poetic Dan)
Meaningful and thought provoking. Great post! I think a lot of parents ask...
May 21st, 2018 21:50 - Faded Sun (Static)
Thought provoking write. The darkness can be many things to us depending...
May 21st, 2018 21:45 - Self-Love (Clarita)
A good reminder to stop and remember our own worth. Great post.
May 21st, 2018 17:40 - Cold to the World (\"Carter Wills\")
Well written. I often find myself being less tactful than I probably...
May 21st, 2018 15:30 - Down the Rabbit Hole (MrNobody40)
They\'re right. You left us hanging there. When is part two when she...
May 21st, 2018 15:05 - Blue Ice Cream (Jabberwocky)
Too funny, so cute!
May 21st, 2018 14:54 - Dear family (Jodie)
This feels like a suicide note. If that is the case, please tell someone....
May 20th, 2018 16:13 - MUMBLES (Turtle)
Poignant and powerful.
May 20th, 2018 15:57 - The seesaw of life (Poetic Dan)
I think we all, at one time or another, reevaluate who we are. It helps us...
May 19th, 2018 21:51 - To Whom It May Concern (Karakter)
We all have pain and deal with it in different ways. The important thing...
May 19th, 2018 19:55 - Easygoing Free Flowing (AlexHoy)
I\'ll admit I did wonder if you could make the rhyme work all the way...
May 18th, 2018 23:30 - I Write... (CathBee)
Great write. I have the same compulsion to write (although I\'m old...
May 18th, 2018 23:27 - Languidly Basking (Syd)
We have to find our relaxation wherever we can. :-) love the lines...
May 18th, 2018 23:09 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #69: under the skin (Frank Prem)
Is this actually a set of twins or a nice way to say schizophrenic? (It...
May 18th, 2018 22:58 - Empathy not judgement (DJ)
This is a wonderful reminder to 1. Be grateful for your current life. 2....
May 18th, 2018 22:49 - Your loss. (Liya Sunrise)
I feel a frustration for the friend who didn\'t see the real you. That...
May 18th, 2018 22:41 - BUTTERFLY (Michael Edwards)
I love butterflies. So delicately beautiful. God sighs and butterflies...
May 18th, 2018 22:18 - What If Heaven (MaddieJ)
I understand the \'profound knowing\' you\'re talking about existing in...
May 18th, 2018 21:58 - Mellow (Nmurner)
I like it too and it\'d be interesting to know the tune in your mind while...
May 18th, 2018 21:53 - The Falling (Kbreinich)
Tragically beautiful. It really does shatter you inside. Rips your heart...
May 18th, 2018 21:42 - *ARE WE THE SAME....?* (Missfit88)
I\'m not sure I ever had freedom of expression. Maybe when I was too young...
May 18th, 2018 21:34 - A Friend of Mine (CathBee)
Wow, did you take a trip through my subconscious mind?? I have these same...
May 18th, 2018 21:22 - Lifes Plight (Salem_B911)
This is beautiful and profound. Well written. And SO TRUE!!! Great post!
May 18th, 2018 20:45 - Song In The Trees (DesertWords)
Beautiful, dare I say, melodic! Great write.
May 18th, 2018 19:06 - An April Snow (PACollin)
We\'ve had a bit of spring but summer is already pushing it away. We\'re...
May 18th, 2018 19:02 - On Loan (Kurt Philip Behm)
So true. Never take ANY of your blessings for granted. They can be taken...
May 17th, 2018 22:22 - Be me (Netashi)
I also had very different goals for myself than my parents did. Take small...
May 17th, 2018 22:08 - ME (Broken_kingdom)
Believe it or not, I do know how you feel. I\'ve been there. All I can say...
May 17th, 2018 21:54 - May 13 (AlinaVanderson)
Your \'Words are sorrow ...line and the very last line are really...
May 17th, 2018 21:37 - The king and his army have arrived. (A)
You classified it as fantasy but it feels spiritual to me. This sounds...
May 17th, 2018 20:46 - Finding You (MrNobody40)
Wow. I bet she LOVED it! So romantic.
May 17th, 2018 20:29 - Pendulum (Baylee)
This is so pretty and heart warming.
May 17th, 2018 18:15 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #68: before breakfast (Frank Prem)
A dear friend of mine was on a few meds and an emergency room doctor gave...
May 17th, 2018 16:13 - Wheeled Freedom. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful images. Great mental pics! There\'s nothing like communing with...
May 17th, 2018 08:59 - Unspoken Words of Fear (Gabriela)
Really pretty and moving. Good post.
May 17th, 2018 08:42 - Victory (YangYin)
Not many can say that they will die with no regrets. Most people already...
May 17th, 2018 07:26 - a crazy ride (Ella)
Always be yourself. Great message. Happy birthday. The year I was fifteen...
May 17th, 2018 07:18 - Fateful Day (Ian Primmer)
This tells the other side. My uncle\'s brakes went out on his motorcycle...
May 17th, 2018 07:09 - Bit By Bit (Brooklyn6timesplus)
The catch is that you can\'t give up. So many times in life when things...
May 17th, 2018 06:57 - The One Who Knew What Was Going On (Leostars_poems)
People who purposely hurt others are never happy, never satisfied....
May 17th, 2018 06:53 - Depression (Whitepearl)
I\'m sure most of us have felt this way at some point in our lives. I\'ve...
May 17th, 2018 06:48 - My True Love (DarkNationLocal)
There is no love like the love parents have for their children. Great...
May 17th, 2018 06:42 - Its hard.... (Mj_santos)
This is so true. Great message. Lots of feeling.
May 17th, 2018 06:38 - Meeting Time (W c)
Count me in! Coffee, cake and encouraging conversation! Sounds wonderful!
May 16th, 2018 23:20 - Stars (Ccmeeker)
Calming and very descriptive images. Good post.
May 16th, 2018 23:05 - PREJUDICES (Michael Edwards)
So true. We have to get past any prejudices before we can truly open our...
May 16th, 2018 22:55 - Father (JADED)
If the prayers the preachers taught were more like this I think more...
May 16th, 2018 22:50 - Mindset of a Logophile (A)
I love it. I also love words. Their importance in everyday life, on...
May 16th, 2018 22:34 - Heading Down A Corruptive Path (Brooklyn6timesplus)
So right. You often end up like the people you surround yourself with....
May 16th, 2018 22:19 - Touch the Sky (Trapazoid)
This is really good. Well written, descriptive and makes you think. I read...
May 16th, 2018 22:17 - Pool Hustling Presidents. (Grange_m)
Love this! Very original concept. Funny! I can see them in a pool hall...
May 16th, 2018 21:54 - Falling (Aa Harvey)
For just a portion of the day, I can smile again. Great line! You can feel...
May 16th, 2018 21:34 - My Sun (Karoline)
Short and powerful. It showcases our propensity to be drawn to something...
May 16th, 2018 21:30 - Israel and Palestine (MLHnow)
I thought you did the line thing on purpose. If you look closely it looks...
May 16th, 2018 21:27 - picture girl (Jakey (minako))
You can feel her frustration that no-one seems to realize the truth of the...
May 16th, 2018 21:21 - Thin Veils (EmiliasLillith)
Well written. You can feel the helpless frustration. Too exhausted to...
May 16th, 2018 21:18 - Y O U (Karakter)
So sweet! You can feel the dedication to her. Well expressed.
May 16th, 2018 21:14 - I See in a Thousand Colors (MrNobody40)
I would rather see the thousand colours. Good and bad. To know parts of...
May 16th, 2018 21:01 - Horse Shoe Nail (Jabberwocky)
Pride is a pitfall for so many. To lose something so important, so vital...
May 16th, 2018 20:54 - Ill Set You Free (DarkNationLocal)
Tragically beautiful.
May 16th, 2018 20:44 - SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY (Michael Edwards)
This is beautiful. I have different beliefs about the end of someone life...
May 16th, 2018 19:44 - My love (Coleworld25)
Welcome to MPS! It\'s never too late to start again. Look forward to...
May 15th, 2018 22:47 - Iv always liked baths anyways. (WhyB)
This is so sad and disturbing. Too familiar. Please continue to use your...
May 15th, 2018 22:43 - My Essence (EmiliasLillith)
Regrets will do you in. They will take up your time, energy and emotions...
May 15th, 2018 22:28 - How Fast Is Fast Enough (DesertWords)
I love this. It shows how we change and priorities change as we grow...
May 15th, 2018 22:19 - Songs of the Rain (A)
I see that we have some things in common. I also hear a song when it...
May 15th, 2018 22:06 - A rhyme a day (Poetic Dan)
I love this! And I\'ve always loved the \'dr\' !
May 15th, 2018 21:52 - I miss you (Nicki Jackson)
Wow, this is so tragic. It shows to never take someone for granted because...
May 15th, 2018 21:49 - Regret (Leostars_poems)
This is a profound piece for one so young. Great post! Welcome to MPS!
May 15th, 2018 21:43 - BRINGER OF DREAMS (Turtle)
Great write. The descriptive images and word combinations are powerful....
May 15th, 2018 21:37 - Silent Prison (MrNobody40)
I can really relate to this. The mind CAN be a prison. Really like this....
May 15th, 2018 21:14 - my singing voice has gone (DJ)
I think we\'ve all felt this way. Like we didn\'t have full control of...
May 15th, 2018 21:11 - Making a Move (Karakter)
Great write. Tells the guys perspective. Women tend to think men are so...
May 15th, 2018 21:03 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #65: Furball and Freddie (Frank Prem)
Laura is right. I have a clear picture in my mind of the two of them....
May 15th, 2018 20:55 - Conceit (Jabberwocky)
You call it conceit but I\'ve got to admit my heart would call it justice....
May 15th, 2018 20:34 - A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Mankind\'s unrelenting obliviousness of the direct result of their...
May 14th, 2018 12:41 - Raft of reeds (Dusk arising)
You were right dusk, our minds were running on the same thread today. Love...
May 14th, 2018 11:25 - Closing the door (SLR)
Thank you. I will definitely check out your poem. I agree that love comes...
May 14th, 2018 11:16 - pines and canaries (Abora)
You paint a vivid picture. Grass, so much grass, laze about the roots....
May 13th, 2018 22:43 - Pleading Eyes (Amy)
Great post, great beginning. But remember, we are here to listen. To read...
May 13th, 2018 22:39 - All (SheWasTheSun)
This is powerful. It\'s not said but I feel pain in it. Really like this....
May 13th, 2018 22:35 - Confused (Carmine)
Powerful and definitely things to think on. I think you have an old soul....
May 13th, 2018 22:31 - Lyrics (Carmine)
Just saw this one. This feels like a lot of heartfelt raging against the...
May 13th, 2018 22:26 - Mother\'s Are Always There (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I have been very fortunate to have a wonderful mom. Some aren\'t. This is...
May 13th, 2018 22:10 - To Be a Star (Trapazoid)
Wow, such a thought provoking piece! And it\'s your first post?! Wow...
May 13th, 2018 21:56 - Eternally (Kevin Michael Bloor)
What is it you said? A versifying vagabond with delusions of grandeur? ...
May 13th, 2018 21:49 - *MINI MELTDOWN* (Missfit88)
I love the line, the same bad, familiar feelings have crept up once more....
May 13th, 2018 21:38 - Stop Guessing (Jmcg)
I think a lot of us have some kind of identity crisis sometime in our...
May 13th, 2018 21:10 - Shed tears for a stranger (E-Poems)
Holy cow, girl! You just threw down the gauntlet for some people!! LOVE...
May 13th, 2018 20:55 - Just - a - Note #2 Tick Tock (Swyndell)
This reminds me of Poe\'s work! One in particular. Are you familiar with...
May 13th, 2018 20:47 - Somewhere (MillyT)
I love this! It acknowledges the challenges and pain in life but gives...
May 13th, 2018 20:45 - How dare you (Lovely_rose)
Welcome to MPS! Powerful, evocative start!
May 13th, 2018 20:40 - A New Hope. (Grange_m)
This reminds me of a bad forest fire we had in the area a couple years...
May 13th, 2018 20:18 - Beached (Jabberwocky)
She has no idea what she\'s lost and she\'ll realize too late. That was my...
May 13th, 2018 20:10
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