Comments on community poems by SLR
- humble boy.. (Lea cobain .)
Sweet. Good flow.
May 13th, 2018 19:34 - Franks Psychiatry 5 #64: mad till knock-off (Frank Prem)
I looked up hostel we don\'t have that word here) and it said lodging for...
May 13th, 2018 18:09 - sands of time (Turtle)
I think more of us feel this way than is thought. Outside ourselves....
May 13th, 2018 17:45 - Spinning (SLR)
Tepo, I want you thank you again for your comment. Where I live a belt can...
May 13th, 2018 12:01 - I’m Not Afraid (LukeCoomer)
So true. Sometimes animals are more humane than humans. It would never...
May 12th, 2018 21:52 - NEVER SO LOST (Turtle)
\"I\'m plagued by life and loved by death, the pain it finds every...
May 12th, 2018 21:39 - Get On Course (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I like how the steps/process given is to find happiness. Because each of...
May 12th, 2018 21:32 - Enough (Jabberwocky)
Sad. Like a sad, pathetic hope for at least a little of her time....
May 12th, 2018 20:15 - An Insomniac Nightmare (Dohiser)
I disagree. I\'ve been heartbroken, had my heart shattered and then ripped...
May 12th, 2018 19:54 - *A TOUCHING THOUGHT* (Missfit88)
There is very little more comforting and as \'de-stressing\' as the touch...
May 12th, 2018 18:00 - refreshed (Onepauly)
This reminds me of a placei used to live. Nearby there was a cave and a...
May 12th, 2018 17:50 - AS AN ARTIST SEES (Michael Edwards)
I think you\'re very blessed to be able to show your unique view into the...
May 12th, 2018 15:45 - Freedom (Last Shadow)
It sounds wonderful. Very calming in a chaotic world.
May 12th, 2018 13:54 - The Die is Cast (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Very pretty and inspirational.
May 12th, 2018 13:32 - The Voice That Stole My Heart (Cutelilcardinal)
So pretty. It makes me want to hear them sing too.
May 12th, 2018 13:31 - Spectrum (Noah)
I completely agree with ms Lorna! Color word pics. Good job Noah.
May 12th, 2018 13:20 - The Poem That Will Never End (DesertWords)
TOO FUNNY!! I love this!! Great flow, and word combos. Definitely a...
May 12th, 2018 13:09 - What? Is Love? (Karakter)
I just saw that you are new to MPS!! Welcome!!
May 11th, 2018 23:36 - You Killed The Old Me (Izithemermaid)
I feel like people do change, sometimes drastically, after a major event...
May 11th, 2018 23:29 - What? Is Love? (Karakter)
I can tell this is really heartfelt. I love the line \" the softness I...
May 11th, 2018 23:07 - Now and forever (Jonathan Dylan)
Sounds like first love. Young love. Sweet. Thank you for such a sweet...
May 11th, 2018 22:57 - *SHOCK,SHOCK...REALITY* (Missfit88)
Parents often try to scare their children straight when they\'re scared...
May 11th, 2018 22:54 - Take That Chance (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I agree. Procrastinators tend to have lots of regrets about things they...
May 11th, 2018 22:51 - SEA OF SADNESS (Turtle)
It\'s sad but had a hopeful and triumphant ending. Conquered the chaos,...
May 11th, 2018 22:40 - Confession Time (Cutelilcardinal)
If this is an actual issue for you, must bigger towns (and lots of small...
May 11th, 2018 22:31 - Girl, Woman, Mother (Jonathan Dylan)
I just saw this one. BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING!!!!! LOVE, LOVE IT!!!
May 11th, 2018 20:54 - The Duality of WoMan (Aa Harvey)
No-one is ALL good. I used to think that no-one was ALL bad but I\'ve met...
May 11th, 2018 19:45 - People (Jay-money)
So true. Where\'s the fun in \"normal\" ? People talk about originality...
May 11th, 2018 19:27 - The Sun Sets With Love (ForeverJesus7)
LOVE IT!!! True love will stand the test of time if both people will work...
May 11th, 2018 19:13 - Consequences of love (Agiel)
It\'s sad when you realize how many people end their lives because of the...
May 11th, 2018 19:01 - SELF-HOOD. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful piece ms Fay! If I close my eyes I can hear the birds and feel...
May 11th, 2018 18:04 - Handover (Jabberwocky)
The unspoken hope here is heartbreaking. Tragic. I love the flow of words...
May 11th, 2018 18:00 - Words from the soul (Poetic Dan)
Great message. Never take your day for granted, It may be your last. No...
May 11th, 2018 17:57 - Tears (SLR)
Thank you both so much. It happened years ago. I think of her sometimes. ...
May 11th, 2018 06:41 - Ocean (Bailey)
I\'ve always been fascinated by the oceans. Such untouched beauty and...
May 11th, 2018 00:21 - Promise (Bailey)
Sometimes it\'s hard to believe love is real until is proven itself. I...
May 11th, 2018 00:16 - What if Humans weren\'t the smart ones? (E-Poems)
This is so fanciful and fun! Like a Dr Seuss book! Love it! A unique...
May 11th, 2018 00:13 - WORDS (Michael Edwards)
Great message about the power and importance of words. I\'m a little...
May 10th, 2018 23:55 - RESTITUTION (Michael Edwards)
Tidal waves of deep despair. Great line, you can feel the pain here. Swept...
May 10th, 2018 23:46 - A LIFELESS LAND (Michael Edwards)
I really like the third and fourth lines. Weeping willows have always...
May 10th, 2018 23:37 - Dearth (Jabberwocky)
Good flow with a real message. Great last two lines. Sums it up nicely.
May 10th, 2018 23:26 - The lucky one (Xeson)
Survivors guilt can cause severe depression. You\'ve expressed it very...
May 10th, 2018 23:01 - Thislife (Raymond)
Well written, smooth flow. Good work!
May 10th, 2018 22:34 - dreams (Turtle)
It\'s so sad to me that many people are so busy planning for the future...
May 10th, 2018 21:53 - Mommy\'s story (Turtle)
Heart wrenching! All I can say after reading this. You are gifted. LOVE,...
May 10th, 2018 21:48 - Haunting grace (Turtle)
I just joined poetic side a few days ago but I\'ve been reading as many...
May 10th, 2018 21:44 - Allow your life to freeze. (E-Poems)
I LOVE the last two lines, I\'ve always felt that people are so focused on...
May 10th, 2018 21:39 - colors of my heart (Lea cobain .)
Interesting word combos. I read A LOT! And you\'ve used phrases and word...
May 10th, 2018 21:27 - I never knew.... (Wjmdotnet)
True love is an awakening. You\'ve shown this in your poem. Simple, sweet,...
May 10th, 2018 21:21 - Dreams and Reality (WhiteWolf23)
A sweet reminder to keep dreaming!
May 9th, 2018 21:52 - Rope (Ariel Melody)
So true. Life can end in a moment.
May 9th, 2018 21:49 - Daytime Dawning (W c)
Great reminder to never take each day for granted! We never know which...
May 9th, 2018 21:46 - Truth Unwraps (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I agree, very relatable. Good cadence. Great message!
May 9th, 2018 21:40 - Reflection (Cutelilcardinal)
I love this! I do the same thing, I have to remind myself of my assets and...
May 9th, 2018 21:34 - Sleepless Nights (JackCoria)
It does seem like difficult times tend to give inspiration for good work....
May 9th, 2018 21:21 - This Life (Jabberwocky)
This is great! But I do wonder... When have you been to my house??? This...
May 9th, 2018 21:14 - Astray (Poetry O\'Leilah)
This shows the love and dedication parents should have for their children....
May 9th, 2018 20:50 - Baby girl (SLR)
Thank you SO MUCH! It\'s always been special to me.
May 9th, 2018 06:17 - Batman (Jabberwocky)
TOO CUTE! It reminds me of my kids when they were younger. Thank you for...
May 8th, 2018 22:39 - Franks Psychiatry 4 #60: weary (Frank Prem)
This reminds me of that saying; you don\'t notice you\'re drowning because...
May 8th, 2018 22:36 - SILHOUETTED (Michael Edwards)
It\'s funny, I have in my mind a memory of that place. But I\'ve never...
May 8th, 2018 22:33 - song birds (Turtle)
I love this! I really like your style, the voice that you write with.
May 8th, 2018 22:00 - “I\'m fine” (Arianna Smith)
I agree. So many people seem to say that they\'re \"fine\" when they have...
May 8th, 2018 21:55 - Daffodil Daisy (Jonathan Dylan)
SO SWEET! Love that name too, Daffodil Daisy!
May 8th, 2018 21:51 - Will to Survive (Cass Fate)
It speaks to me. Thank you for posting it.
May 8th, 2018 21:48 - THE PUPPETEER (Turtle)
I really like the flow of the words. Has a nice cadence, and I think most...
May 8th, 2018 07:41 - Introduction (SLR)
Thank you. I\'m new to posting online so I\'m not sure what exactly to...
May 8th, 2018 07:30
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