Comments on community poems by SLR

• humble boy.. (Lea cobain .) Sweet. Good flow.
  May 13th, 2018 19:34
• Franks Psychiatry 5 #64: mad till knock-off (Frank Prem) I looked up hostel we don\'t have that word here) and it said lodging for...
  May 13th, 2018 18:09
• sands of time (Turtle) I think more of us feel this way than is thought. Outside ourselves....
  May 13th, 2018 17:45
• Spinning (SLR) Tepo, I want you thank you again for your comment. Where I live a belt can...
  May 13th, 2018 12:01
• I’m Not Afraid (LukeCoomer) So true. Sometimes animals are more humane than humans. It would never...
  May 12th, 2018 21:52
• NEVER SO LOST (Turtle) \"I\'m plagued by life and loved by death, the pain it finds every...
  May 12th, 2018 21:39
• Get On Course (Brooklyn6timesplus) I like how the steps/process given is to find happiness. Because each of...
  May 12th, 2018 21:32
• Enough (Jabberwocky) Sad. Like a sad, pathetic hope for at least a little of her time....
  May 12th, 2018 20:15
• An Insomniac Nightmare (Dohiser) I disagree. I\'ve been heartbroken, had my heart shattered and then ripped...
  May 12th, 2018 19:54
• *A TOUCHING THOUGHT* (Missfit88) There is very little more comforting and as \'de-stressing\' as the touch...
  May 12th, 2018 18:00
• refreshed (Onepauly) This reminds me of a placei used to live. Nearby there was a cave and a...
  May 12th, 2018 17:50
• AS AN ARTIST SEES (Michael Edwards) I think you\'re very blessed to be able to show your unique view into the...
  May 12th, 2018 15:45
• Freedom (Last Shadow) It sounds wonderful. Very calming in a chaotic world.
  May 12th, 2018 13:54
• The Die is Cast (Kevin Michael Bloor) Very pretty and inspirational.
  May 12th, 2018 13:32
• The Voice That Stole My Heart (Cutelilcardinal) So pretty. It makes me want to hear them sing too.
  May 12th, 2018 13:31
• Spectrum (Noah) I completely agree with ms Lorna! Color word pics. Good job Noah.
  May 12th, 2018 13:20
• The Poem That Will Never End (DesertWords) TOO FUNNY!! I love this!! Great flow, and word combos. Definitely a...
  May 12th, 2018 13:09
• What? Is Love? (Karakter) I just saw that you are new to MPS!! Welcome!!
  May 11th, 2018 23:36
• You Killed The Old Me (Izithemermaid) I feel like people do change, sometimes drastically, after a major event...
  May 11th, 2018 23:29
• What? Is Love? (Karakter) I can tell this is really heartfelt. I love the line \" the softness I...
  May 11th, 2018 23:07
• Now and forever (Jonathan Dylan) Sounds like first love. Young love. Sweet. Thank you for such a sweet...
  May 11th, 2018 22:57
• *SHOCK,SHOCK...REALITY* (Missfit88) Parents often try to scare their children straight when they\'re scared...
  May 11th, 2018 22:54
• Take That Chance (Brooklyn6timesplus) I agree. Procrastinators tend to have lots of regrets about things they...
  May 11th, 2018 22:51
• SEA OF SADNESS (Turtle) It\'s sad but had a hopeful and triumphant ending. Conquered the chaos,...
  May 11th, 2018 22:40
• Confession Time (Cutelilcardinal) If this is an actual issue for you, must bigger towns (and lots of small...
  May 11th, 2018 22:31
• Girl, Woman, Mother (Jonathan Dylan) I just saw this one. BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING!!!!! LOVE, LOVE IT!!!
  May 11th, 2018 20:54
• The Duality of WoMan (Aa Harvey) No-one is ALL good. I used to think that no-one was ALL bad but I\'ve met...
  May 11th, 2018 19:45
• People (Jay-money) So true. Where\'s the fun in \"normal\" ? People talk about originality...
  May 11th, 2018 19:27
• The Sun Sets With Love (ForeverJesus7) LOVE IT!!! True love will stand the test of time if both people will work...
  May 11th, 2018 19:13
• Consequences of love (Agiel) It\'s sad when you realize how many people end their lives because of the...
  May 11th, 2018 19:01
• SELF-HOOD. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful piece ms Fay! If I close my eyes I can hear the birds and feel...
  May 11th, 2018 18:04
• Handover (Jabberwocky) The unspoken hope here is heartbreaking. Tragic. I love the flow of words...
  May 11th, 2018 18:00
• Words from the soul (Poetic Dan) Great message. Never take your day for granted, It may be your last. No...
  May 11th, 2018 17:57
• Tears (SLR) Thank you both so much. It happened years ago. I think of her sometimes. ...
  May 11th, 2018 06:41
• Ocean (Bailey) I\'ve always been fascinated by the oceans. Such untouched beauty and...
  May 11th, 2018 00:21
• Promise (Bailey) Sometimes it\'s hard to believe love is real until is proven itself. I...
  May 11th, 2018 00:16
• What if Humans weren\'t the smart ones? (E-Poems) This is so fanciful and fun! Like a Dr Seuss book! Love it! A unique...
  May 11th, 2018 00:13
• WORDS (Michael Edwards) Great message about the power and importance of words. I\'m a little...
  May 10th, 2018 23:55
• RESTITUTION (Michael Edwards) Tidal waves of deep despair. Great line, you can feel the pain here. Swept...
  May 10th, 2018 23:46
• A LIFELESS LAND (Michael Edwards) I really like the third and fourth lines. Weeping willows have always...
  May 10th, 2018 23:37
• Dearth (Jabberwocky) Good flow with a real message. Great last two lines. Sums it up nicely.
  May 10th, 2018 23:26
• The lucky one (Xeson) Survivors guilt can cause severe depression. You\'ve expressed it very...
  May 10th, 2018 23:01
• Thislife (Raymond) Well written, smooth flow. Good work!
  May 10th, 2018 22:34
• dreams (Turtle) It\'s so sad to me that many people are so busy planning for the future...
  May 10th, 2018 21:53
• Mommy\'s story (Turtle) Heart wrenching! All I can say after reading this. You are gifted. LOVE,...
  May 10th, 2018 21:48
• Haunting grace (Turtle) I just joined poetic side a few days ago but I\'ve been reading as many...
  May 10th, 2018 21:44
• Allow your life to freeze. (E-Poems) I LOVE the last two lines, I\'ve always felt that people are so focused on...
  May 10th, 2018 21:39
• colors of my heart (Lea cobain .) Interesting word combos. I read A LOT! And you\'ve used phrases and word...
  May 10th, 2018 21:27
• I never knew.... (Wjmdotnet) True love is an awakening. You\'ve shown this in your poem. Simple, sweet,...
  May 10th, 2018 21:21
• Dreams and Reality (WhiteWolf23) A sweet reminder to keep dreaming!
  May 9th, 2018 21:52
• Rope (Ariel Melody) So true. Life can end in a moment.
  May 9th, 2018 21:49
• Daytime Dawning (W c) Great reminder to never take each day for granted! We never know which...
  May 9th, 2018 21:46
• Truth Unwraps (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) I agree, very relatable. Good cadence. Great message!
  May 9th, 2018 21:40
• Reflection (Cutelilcardinal) I love this! I do the same thing, I have to remind myself of my assets and...
  May 9th, 2018 21:34
• Sleepless Nights (JackCoria) It does seem like difficult times tend to give inspiration for good work....
  May 9th, 2018 21:21
• This Life (Jabberwocky) This is great! But I do wonder... When have you been to my house??? This...
  May 9th, 2018 21:14
• Astray (Poetry O\'Leilah) This shows the love and dedication parents should have for their children....
  May 9th, 2018 20:50
• Baby girl (SLR) Thank you SO MUCH! It\'s always been special to me.
  May 9th, 2018 06:17
• Batman (Jabberwocky) TOO CUTE! It reminds me of my kids when they were younger. Thank you for...
  May 8th, 2018 22:39
• Franks Psychiatry 4 #60: weary (Frank Prem) This reminds me of that saying; you don\'t notice you\'re drowning because...
  May 8th, 2018 22:36
• SILHOUETTED (Michael Edwards) It\'s funny, I have in my mind a memory of that place. But I\'ve never...
  May 8th, 2018 22:33
• song birds (Turtle) I love this! I really like your style, the voice that you write with.
  May 8th, 2018 22:00
• “I\'m fine” (Arianna Smith) I agree. So many people seem to say that they\'re \"fine\" when they have...
  May 8th, 2018 21:55
• Daffodil Daisy (Jonathan Dylan) SO SWEET! Love that name too, Daffodil Daisy!
  May 8th, 2018 21:51
• Will to Survive (Cass Fate) It speaks to me. Thank you for posting it.
  May 8th, 2018 21:48
• THE PUPPETEER (Turtle) I really like the flow of the words. Has a nice cadence, and I think most...
  May 8th, 2018 07:41
• Introduction (SLR) Thank you. I\'m new to posting online so I\'m not sure what exactly to...
  May 8th, 2018 07:30