Comments on community poems by SLR

• Lion (Olivergreenwood20) Sometimes the only way to affect a change is to show them the error of...
  January 9th, 2019 22:21
• Assumptions (E-Poems) I could go on and on about all the things I like about this one, but I\'m...
  July 12th, 2018 20:33
• Home To Roost (Kevin Michael Bloor) Great flow and word usage/combos. Great post as always!
  July 12th, 2018 10:40
• \'They say\' ...Who is \'They\'? (E-Poems) SO TRUE!! I always want to know who said what. I\'ll ask someone that says...
  June 28th, 2018 16:29
• The Security Fowl (W c) I\'ve always found it amazing that a group of guineas will attack and kill...
  June 28th, 2018 15:20
• PRECIOUS (Melissa Daly) I find it ironic that you can get a group of people together and no-one...
  June 28th, 2018 15:07
• Asylum (DesertWords) This is beautifully heartbreaking. Achingly tragic. I know some illegal...
  June 27th, 2018 17:11
• Birthday Pie (W c) I love this! Especially the second stanza. :-):-) Great flow. Tell him...
  June 27th, 2018 17:05
• MY ENCOUNTER. (Fay Slimm.) This is so cute. I recently had a similar experience with a baby deer. I...
  June 27th, 2018 16:46
• Heal me. (E-Poems) First, I love the first stanza. Great word combos/usage. Second, this...
  June 27th, 2018 16:22
• THE EAGLE IN THE SKY (Frogspoetry) I have different beliefs but I love the first few lines and that you...
  June 27th, 2018 16:10
• Flames (Olivergreenwood20) I love how this ends. So many don\'t appreciate friends and family. This...
  June 27th, 2018 15:59
• 93 And Rising Fast (DesertWords) We also have horrendously hot summers. If I wasn\'t melting into the...
  June 27th, 2018 15:52
• This Day - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) This feels so peaceful to me. And goodness knows we could all use more...
  June 22nd, 2018 20:30
• Intensity Of A Flame (Satishverma) I love the third stanza. Powerful all on it\'s own. I do tend to interpret...
  June 22nd, 2018 20:15
• Change in me. (Ng Um) Find your smiles and laughter again. Self growth should be a positive...
  June 22nd, 2018 20:08
• Mirrors Shmirrors (Michela Vismara) I\'m glad you put your comment, I did wonder what you were talking about...
  June 22nd, 2018 18:42
• Smoke To Smoke (Noah Malice) I didn\'t read it as a religious piece. The only thing I saw was the...
  June 22nd, 2018 17:16
• Humanity (Lyssa19) Prime example of how we can end up destroying something/someone that we...
  June 22nd, 2018 16:59
• Life On Hold (W c) Too funny! I\'m technologically and electronically disabled. I have had...
  June 22nd, 2018 15:08
• Marble Soul (Olivergreenwood20) This is beautiful. Tragic but beautiful. Great work.
  June 22nd, 2018 14:14
• You... (Andrew Charles Forrest) Sweetly romantic. Love is magnified when it\'s appreciated and...
  June 21st, 2018 13:21
• The Golden Year (Kevin Michael Bloor) Gently romantic. Great rhythm and flow. Fluid word use. Really good work....
  June 21st, 2018 13:11
• Loves Confusion (Olivergreenwood20) This is really good. Very well written.Great job.
  June 21st, 2018 12:24
• Fitness Holiday. (Goldfinch60) I\'ve always loved this piece by Chopin. You can listen to it as you...
  June 21st, 2018 11:55
• FORLORN. (Fay Slimm.) I really like this Ms Fay, but I have to add that flowers, like people,...
  June 21st, 2018 10:59
• A LITTER OF LANTURNES (Michael Edwards) Thought-provoking as always Michael. Like the first one best. So true....
  June 21st, 2018 10:50
• Cosmic Epiphanies In Men’s Clothing (A.H. Browning) It\'s a terrible thing when one of your enemies is your own closet. I...
  June 21st, 2018 10:37
• Corazon (Willyweed) This is wonderful. Vivid story. Great word usage/combos. Great post Willy!
  June 20th, 2018 21:40
• Rachel’s Poem (Rachels.Poem) Welcome to MPS! A write from the heart is a Great start.
  June 20th, 2018 16:36
• The World (Dream bigger) This is true love; When you can fall apart in each other\'s arms and come...
  June 20th, 2018 16:01
• little princess (Brianna jean zeiger) Emotional, painful write. Are you brave enough to let your mom read it?...
  June 20th, 2018 15:52
• 3:30 am argument with the page (Andrew Charles Forrest) Love this! Is there anything as intimidating as a blank piece of paper?! ...
  June 20th, 2018 15:25
• Kneading Emotions. (Goldfinch60) My mom made the best homemade bread I\'ve had. I\'ve always loved that...
  June 20th, 2018 15:04
• THREE PICTURES PAINTED (Michael Edwards) This is why I always have to check out your work. Wonderful word combos...
  June 20th, 2018 14:54
• Teardrop (SLR) I\'m far from grateful for all my issues but i will say they\'ve made me...
  June 20th, 2018 14:28
• My Dog Diesel (Darren) We used to have a Rott named Annie. She was the sweetest, most loyal,...
  June 19th, 2018 21:42
• Alone (Michela Vismara) Always Lonely Only Need the End Here\'s one that just came to...
  June 19th, 2018 21:32
• The illusion of angels (In memory of Paul) Elegy #1 (Andrew Charles Forrest) This is beautiful. Touching. Heartfelt. I\'m speechless. Love it. Love
  June 19th, 2018 19:36
• I am here, I am the storm (Andrew Charles Forrest) I\'ll always loved that motto. Fear the storm? I AM THE STORM!! So many...
  June 19th, 2018 19:29
• My perfect little Daffodil... (Andrew Charles Forrest) I\'ve just seen your work. I really like your style. Love this! So many...
  June 19th, 2018 19:16
• The Disciples (Andrew Charles Forrest) Great spiritual piece, without being preachy like so many do. Great post.
  June 19th, 2018 19:11
• Unfinished Business #1 (Andrew Charles Forrest) I really like this. It reminds me of times when I was growing up. Exactly...
  June 19th, 2018 19:07
• SOME SHORTIES (575) (Michael Edwards) I\'ve missed your work. I hope all is well. Do I miss my guess or are...
  June 18th, 2018 00:14
• Bruised but not Broken (HangingbyaHalo) The first part reminded me of one of my favorite phrases. \"If you could...
  June 18th, 2018 00:02
• Where did you go? (Lovemariah_45) Welcome to MPS! Good flow. Emotive write. Keep posting!
  June 17th, 2018 23:55
• I\'ll Fight (Finley Fire) I\'ve read your other work and I don\'t know if you\'re having a good day...
  June 17th, 2018 23:44
• a dark room (_the_girl_who_cuts_) I hate when someone says that they know how someone else feels if they...
  June 17th, 2018 23:33
• Black Vultures (W c) This is so true. Most people don\'t realize the good that they do. Just...
  June 17th, 2018 23:15
• Wind in heaven (Koolness) This is really good. Heartfelt and good rhythm.
  June 17th, 2018 21:15
• Stranger at My Window (Vanabba3) This is a little like a short story of mine. The little girl is murdered...
  June 17th, 2018 18:27
• The Lady in White (Vanabba3) I would be interested to know which town. I lived in Missouri for several...
  June 17th, 2018 18:05
• Birdsong (W c) Lyrical and light. Love the pic, love cardinals. Great post! Thank you for...
  June 16th, 2018 23:16
• Trapped (DesertWords) Too funny! This is great, thank you for sharing it!
  June 16th, 2018 23:07
• hello again my enemy (Noah Malice) This is profound in an almost casual way. Gets you to think. Good write,...
  June 16th, 2018 23:04
• Where Have all the Senses Gone......... (Snowflake Incorrigable) Wise words from a wise mother. Wise of you to follow them. Great message....
  June 16th, 2018 22:45
• Dragon (Jabberwocky) Good flow and rhythm. I\'d be interested to read a longer version of this....
  June 16th, 2018 22:38
• They deserve no less. (Appletree) Great example of the love and devotion/obsession we feel for our children....
  June 16th, 2018 22:16
• The Blazing Rag (Kevin Michael Bloor) I love this! Great descriptive write. Paints a vivid pic of the place....
  June 16th, 2018 22:11
• I Fear The Reaper (AmateurSomeone) It speaks to me. Really well written and emotive write. Welcome to MPS! ...
  June 14th, 2018 20:02
• Silently Suffering (HangingbyaHalo) Beautifully tragic. Speaks to me on a way too personal level. Truly...
  June 14th, 2018 10:47
• the ravens wing (Willyweed) Call me morbid but I\'ve always found cemeteries to be peaceful,...
  June 14th, 2018 10:43
• Silence (MrNobody40) Is there anything as intimidating to a writer as a blank sheet of...
  June 14th, 2018 10:40
• CO-EXISTENCE. (Fay Slimm.) Love the last two stanzas. Nature will bring out the child in us, if we...
  June 14th, 2018 10:26
• The Undivided (Kevin Michael Bloor) Great write about true, endearing, enduring love. Great post. Romantic.
  June 14th, 2018 10:21
• Welcome the Nights (Lorna) I enjoyed this as I also look forward to late evening/night hours. I spend...
  June 14th, 2018 10:19
• The past, the future (Chris frank) Great emotional write. I do wonder, why does she pause? Is she not sure?...
  June 14th, 2018 10:14
• Grandad, (Michela Vismara) Very touching. Good flow. Emotive write. Great post.
  June 14th, 2018 10:02
• Monday Mistake (DesertWords) I got a chuckle out of this as I\'ve had a similar experience myself one...
  June 13th, 2018 22:41
• Mistakes (Appletree) Great post, very relatable. And you use humour to express frustration,...
  June 13th, 2018 22:15
• Crushing (Michela Vismara) You don\'t have to say anything. You make eye contact, hold for few...
  June 13th, 2018 22:09
• Through Sleeping Trees (A.H. Browning) I liked the poem as I read it but after reading your comment and...
  June 13th, 2018 21:43
• it\'s midnight (Willyweed) great message. So true. REAL love, in all its forms, should definitely be...
  June 13th, 2018 21:23
• The Illusion (MrNobody40) Profound and thought provoking. Again. Great post Nic.
  June 13th, 2018 21:01
• LET US GO. (Fay Slimm.) Sweetly sexy and romantic. Love it Ms Fay. Hope you don\'t mind if I...
  June 13th, 2018 20:50
• Loss (Mary73223) I\'m sorry for your loss. It\'s sounds like someone died that you cared...
  June 13th, 2018 20:47
• Nobody (Frogspoetry) Great write, very well expressed.
  June 13th, 2018 20:25
• Bridge Over Troubled Water (ForeverJesus7) I\'ve always loved this song. Thank you for sharing it. Great message!
  June 11th, 2018 18:09
• A Honey of a Day (Lorna) Such a sad reminiscent piece. So poignant. Great write Lorna!
  June 11th, 2018 16:35
• My Lovebird (Kevin Michael Bloor) Love this. So lyrical and light. Romantic. Very nice! Great post.
  June 11th, 2018 16:26
• Blocked Aisles. (Goldfinch60) Too funny Gold! We have that here but we have SO many rude millennials...
  June 11th, 2018 15:29
• AFTER SCHOOL. (Fay Slimm.) I had somewhat of a hobby growing up. There were bullies in our school, as...
  June 11th, 2018 15:13
• A New book (I-dont-even-know) About one of my favorite subjects; reading! But what about reading just...
  June 11th, 2018 14:58
• BENEATH (Michael Edwards) Nice flow and very descriptive. Great job Michael. Although I feel bad for...
  June 11th, 2018 14:52
• The Setting Sun (MrNobody40) It\'s a sad fact of life that even if someone means well, they can...
  June 11th, 2018 12:59
• The Wonder Of Whales (Jhe) I\'ve always loved whales and I HATE pollution in all its forms so even...
  June 11th, 2018 12:47
• A Rose Is Lovely (W c) Well written and sweet. The classic romantic rose is represented very...
  June 11th, 2018 09:32
• Sleepless Night (A.H. Browning) Insomnia can feel like it\'s making you go insane little by little. I...
  June 10th, 2018 21:31
• Fake (Christina8) This is a great write Ms Christina. Heartfelt and definitely pulls at the...
  June 10th, 2018 19:20
• Inevitable (MrNobody40) Short and powerful. Had to screenshot this one for later.
  June 10th, 2018 19:04
• Music is Life. (Goldfinch60) Music is art form, art separates us from the animals. It\'s one of the few...
  June 10th, 2018 18:59
• The Downs and Pick Yourself Ups of Life (Lorna) Great message! Love it!
  June 10th, 2018 18:53
• Girl From the Kissing Gate (Kevin Michael Bloor) This is really good! I agree with the three of them! Perfect from the...
  June 10th, 2018 18:50
• Both of Us (SLR) Thank you and congratulations on 43 years! That\'s wonderful!
  June 8th, 2018 20:12
• Serenity (MrNobody40) Love this. I do this all the time when my mind needs an escape. Really...
  June 7th, 2018 22:02
• PERCEPTION (Michael Edwards) Trump is a horrific joke come true. He was featured in cartoons decades...
  June 7th, 2018 21:43
• I lost a friend today (Goodman) A lot of repressed pain here. I\'ve also lost close friends. I\'m sorry...
  June 7th, 2018 21:03
• through tears (Dusk arising) Love this! This is exactly IT! Thank you so much for putting into words...
  June 7th, 2018 20:45
• Posting Poetry (Jane Frye) This is great! Love it! Thanks for sharing!
  June 7th, 2018 20:29
• THE BOATYARD (Michael Edwards) I\'ve always admired the craftsmanship that goes into each boat. This is a...
  June 7th, 2018 20:24