Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- My Speech to the Genie (MaddieJ)
I think you have a genuine quality of relatability in your choice phrasing...
August 20th, 2020 03:39 - body part (Dusk arising)
like the twist,
must have been fun to write, it definitely was to read...
August 18th, 2020 03:08 - Wake up (Smileeshellyy)
beautiful in its artistic ambition while exploding with raw untameable...
August 18th, 2020 03:02 - A Mermaids Tale (Neville)
a fairy tale grounded in the reality of intricate details, wonderfully...
August 18th, 2020 02:36 - for VJ Day (Dusk arising)
that second stanza got me well and good, a wonderfully tender and emotive...
August 17th, 2020 04:35 - Chocolate City Baby (Narcisa)
this is so raw, so true, so controlled: dripping with flow and beaming...
August 17th, 2020 04:10 - Sleep\'s Acres. (Fay Slimm.)
that last line is such a quirky twist - it anchors your chosen writing...
August 17th, 2020 04:01 - Wax Butterflies (Neville)
how easy your words flow, tripping us from one stanza to the next, simple...
August 17th, 2020 03:45 - I AM The Resurrection And The Life - Part 2 (Orchidee)
Lazarus: the \'Phoenix\' of pre 19th century biblical authority, an...
August 17th, 2020 03:36 - THE WATER CYCLES ~ AN ACROSTIC ~ BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
experiencing this past week of summer heatwave madness in \'rainy\' UK,...
August 15th, 2020 06:49 - my reflection (Siranswerer)
a measured and understated work of self-reflection, genuinely capturing...
August 15th, 2020 06:44 - Steph at Thirty. (Goldfinch60)
\'A wonderful relationship
Where two generations apart
Come together...
August 15th, 2020 06:33 - Autumn-Imbued. (Fay Slimm.)
\'sand lakes feeling like basins of gold water
tickling my toes in...
August 15th, 2020 06:20 - Theory of Endurance (Neville)
conversational style poetry is so under valued, it allows for so much...
August 15th, 2020 06:15 - Eye Due (MendedFences27)
it definitely made me think and read other\'s comment responses and try to...
August 15th, 2020 05:58 - Remains. (Fay Slimm.)
what a subtle and contemplative last stanza,
akin to Thomas Gray\'s...
August 14th, 2020 06:38 - Maybe Old but Not Daft (Neville)
this stirred up long forgotten flavours of Hemingway\'s: \'the old man and...
August 14th, 2020 06:28 - Times of Youth. (Goldfinch60)
still, my friend -your watch will stop again, lost within nature\'s...
August 14th, 2020 06:22 - Who Said ! (Fay Slimm.)
Amen!
I like the jagged, sharp wordage you used purposely, poetry need...
August 14th, 2020 06:12 - DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (2) (Michael Edwards)
in this suffocating heatwave we are experiencing (UK), rain with a side of...
August 12th, 2020 02:31 - All I ask (Aa Harvey)
all you ask: is for everything!
what a truthful testimony to how needy...
August 11th, 2020 02:43 - DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (4) (Michael Edwards)
the layers here...!
so witty and full of diamond sharp sarcasm,
as...
August 11th, 2020 02:37 - Bottles of Pandemic. (Goldfinch60)
though depicting a literal event of an everyday occurrence,
there is a...
August 11th, 2020 02:22 - Ms. Dickinson—Come out your room! (Noah Malice)
She travelled the depths and breaths of human nature like few ever have or...
August 10th, 2020 05:43 - MSM (Goldfinch60)
an indicatively penned sharing of such feverishly felt indignation,
I...
August 10th, 2020 05:36 - Skin Deep (SharonMoemise)
\'I\'m a woman who brought forth man and was left with silver...
August 10th, 2020 05:16 - Contrivance. (Fay Slimm.)
you have such a wide range in styles and tone,
another insightful and...
August 10th, 2020 05:09 - FUSION POETRY ~ OK ! ~ A SIX SIX TWO ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
sounds fun, I\'m too new to start my own but will participate...
August 10th, 2020 05:04 - Freckles (Neville)
wonderful, the last two stanzas are some of my favourite I have read on...
August 10th, 2020 04:59 - fate hangs (Dusk arising)
powerful and deftly woven words of volcanic rage,
appreciated the broken...
August 10th, 2020 04:54 - Something in the Air (Neville)
the only other poem I recall using the word doilies (or doily to be...
August 7th, 2020 04:30 - I Hear Music FIB. (Goldfinch60)
indeed!
its so essential, that even nature provided us with a pulsating...
August 7th, 2020 04:18 - I. (Chanel T.)
more power to you Sister,
soar high, soar free and soar with those...
August 7th, 2020 04:12 - CONVENIENCE STORE (Joe Marcello)
love the title, adds such brevity to the powerful statement of truth you...
August 7th, 2020 04:08 - A CLEAN SHEET ~ A PANTOUM ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
the never ending struggle to assimilate faith as close to its orthodox...
August 7th, 2020 03:59 - all i ask (Queer-with-a-pen)
wonderful, simplicity is so overlooked in our strive for poetic...
August 7th, 2020 03:54 - Now looking Back (Neville)
brilliant demonstration of how to instil effortless flow without using the...
August 7th, 2020 03:35 - Nectar. (Fay Slimm.)
wonderful throwback, sad that even smaller farms nowadays utilise...
August 7th, 2020 03:25 - Quota Of Qualities (Orchidee)
as spine-tingling, smooth and powerful: as Aretha\'s voice
August 7th, 2020 03:17 - Two Way Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
as vividly picturesque in written form as it must have been to view it in...
August 7th, 2020 03:12 - Love-Light. (Fay Slimm.)
wonderful flow, with a strong message
if this was a song, I imagine...
August 5th, 2020 04:26 - Finn (Benevolentbluebabe)
I find myself imagining the voice of Captain Ahab from Moby-Dick, in your...
August 5th, 2020 04:10 - Silence The Silence (Philip Daniel Cook)
solitude is never daunting, if our mind continues to meditate and seek...
August 5th, 2020 04:02 - NO LONGER HEARD (Michael Edwards)
I think you captured that subtle state of introspection, spontaneous and...
August 5th, 2020 03:57 - Homeless (Aa Harvey)
what a true plague homelessness is and how concisely you\'ve captured its...
August 4th, 2020 02:23 - Fantasia (Kurt Philip Behm)
hindsight often has the luxury of relaxed perspectives, that the turmoil...
August 4th, 2020 02:16 - peacemaker (Dusk arising)
wonderful tribute, may he rest in peace
August 4th, 2020 02:01 - Smile For All. (Goldfinch60)
positivity in mindset, naturally translates to a wider lensed scope of the...
August 4th, 2020 01:54 - DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (3) (Michael Edwards)
- and swim in the hollowness
of a life: without biting...
August 3rd, 2020 05:57 - Changes (Fay Slimm.)
A war cry: for mother nature,
for Female superiority (at the very least...
August 3rd, 2020 05:48 - 2020 THAT WAS THE YEAR .. ! ~ YEAR OF COVID 19 ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
what depths of insight you mined, so much truth here and far too sobering...
August 3rd, 2020 05:28 - Star of Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
how rare a gift, you\'ve been bestowed
what a fitting testimony you\'ve...
August 3rd, 2020 05:13 - SHE (TWENTY3)
to Survive, and still stride on the Right side of life!
what an...
August 1st, 2020 04:44 - Guilt Trip. (Goldfinch60)
reminds me of a poem by William Carlos Williams titled \'This is just to...
August 1st, 2020 04:35 - Fido Rant (Orchidee)
beggars belief, some 7 months and millions of cases - astonishing death...
August 1st, 2020 04:26 - A FORTY~NINER ~ A FORM POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I liked the film and soundtrack, informative write, thank you for keeping...
August 1st, 2020 04:10 - DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (1) (Michael Edwards)
truly insightful:
what reflects is what awaits, once that last tip of...
July 31st, 2020 05:45 - Struck Down. (Goldfinch60)
a nice change of pace to begin my day with, lol
July 29th, 2020 02:55 - Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor)
As tender, immersive and proud: as Shelley\'s last note to Keats,
my...
July 29th, 2020 02:47 - pulsing fluff (Dusk arising)
dreamy, with a soothing lyrical tone
such a poetic lullaby
July 29th, 2020 02:36 - Two Weeks in July (Neville)
really appreciate your nuanced control throughout, unravelling your...
July 28th, 2020 03:35 - Answered (Tayama)
\'The(y) day she turned around to see who was speaking...I felt the need...
July 28th, 2020 03:25 - promise me (Dusk arising)
well I for one am very thankful you reposted,
the kind of raw...
July 28th, 2020 03:13 - LOVE IS MANIFEST (Michael Edwards)
tender words that read like musical harmonies,
tipping the mind to...
July 28th, 2020 03:05 - suicidal (MelissaJA)
Let it all out!
Then, begin again...
Keep on repeating: that anxiety -...
July 28th, 2020 02:55 - So Many Happy Times. (Goldfinch60)
\'My name was her final word.\'
Vulnerable and brave: raw emotion on a...
July 28th, 2020 02:49 - Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60)
regret will never remember me, so I too choose: to forget
travelling...
July 27th, 2020 07:24 - A Happier Place. (Goldfinch60)
indeed, so true
July 27th, 2020 07:16 - Me & My Best Friend, Steve Sorrow. (Kevin Michael Bloor)
quirky and conversational, with genuine depth
July 27th, 2020 07:13 - If Only. (Fay Slimm.)
a melodic orchestra of choice \'wordlets\', immersing us with the...
July 27th, 2020 07:09 - Eyeing. (Fay Slimm.)
really liked the structure of each verse, almost an outline of a fish
and...
July 24th, 2020 03:01 - LIFE GETS TEDIOUS DON* IT ~ BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
full of wit and insight, a generation\'s exacerbation encapsulated on a...
July 24th, 2020 02:43 - of Elspenore part4 (Dusk arising)
made me look for parts 1 to 3, what pages are they on in your published...
July 23rd, 2020 04:38 - I Was There. (Goldfinch60)
what concise imagery and flow, makes me wish I was there, too
July 23rd, 2020 04:23 - AGEING COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards)
brilliantly quirky and actually works on quite a few levels
thanks for...
July 22nd, 2020 01:07 - OUR FIRST GARDEN ~ BRIAN ~ A MODERN TRI-OCTET POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I am jealous of Smokey!
A wonderfully rhythmic work, I especially like...
July 21st, 2020 02:46 - Cold Showers (Cali Kittana)
\'My expression blank, My mind full\'
wonderful depth of self-awareness...
July 21st, 2020 02:27 - A Woman in Love (MelissaJA)
Intimate, revealing and delicate
appreciate the tone and reemphasised...
July 21st, 2020 02:17 - I Love You (Goldfinch60)
revealing, vulnerable and empowering!
thanks for sharing
July 21st, 2020 02:07 - Crushed by your Hate (DianeKey6)
Isn\'t it wonderful, some pay hundreds of dollars an hour to sit across a...
July 21st, 2020 01:30 - an interesting day (Dusk arising)
great example of structure complimenting delivery,
cascading glimpses at...
July 20th, 2020 05:57 - Adrift With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
\'I lay down and let nature breath on me\' - decadently emotive,
I took...
July 20th, 2020 05:44 - No Separation. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful sentiment and poignant message, with a fitting title.
Thank...
July 18th, 2020 04:24 - Aye passively plead death to please release me from agonizing clutches (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Full of ambition, wit and with highly invocative cultural references...
July 18th, 2020 04:19 - L O N E L I N E S S ~ ANGELA ~ A MODERN POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A time capsule of angst, with a strong sense of self-awareness.
Like...
July 18th, 2020 03:54 - You\'re a Homewrecker (TWENTY3)
Brilliantly innovative and unashamedly bold - in its depiction of untamed:...
July 17th, 2020 06:14 - Kindred. (Fay Slimm.)
appreciate how loyal you kept to the natural beat of the poem,...
July 17th, 2020 06:03 - dawns delight (Dusk arising)
musicality, at its free spirited best
capturing that freshly oven-baked...
July 17th, 2020 05:56 - Quality Control: FAIL (DianeKey6)
I found this a brave and engaging window into the vulnerabilities we all...
July 17th, 2020 05:25
« Return to the profile of L. B. Mek
