Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- Dispirited hope (RiverJordan)
really like the poetic ambition in this write, some insightful commentary...
September 29th, 2020 02:04 - Come-a-Day (Neville)
wonderful first couplet, hooks you in quick
great write!
September 29th, 2020 01:57 - Shallow Brown. (Goldfinch60)
yup, I think Music be the breath we inhale through our ears, keeping us...
September 29th, 2020 01:53 - Sleeper (Neville)
I can re-read this ten times and find ten new elements to rave about, I...
September 28th, 2020 05:01 - From The Source (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
one must be careful to taste only those edible elements of Plato, still...
September 28th, 2020 04:55 - “Palindrome” Passion (Dove)
creative, has a meditatively warming element to it as well
September 28th, 2020 04:49 - Song of a poor scavenger. (Trenz Pruca)
there is so many ways to view the truth in the term: My way, as \'My\' is...
September 28th, 2020 04:46 - Hope is There. (Goldfinch60)
wonderfully life affirming kick-up-the-backside message Andy, lol
September 28th, 2020 04:30 - SO IT\'S SUNDAY (Michael Edwards)
brilliant picture!
indeed: who truly knows what comes from those...
September 28th, 2020 04:27 - Discarded 2 (Neville)
I am a fan of your writes, voicing those stripped back and raw wandering...
September 28th, 2020 04:24 - Enmeshed (Fay Slimm.)
reads like a poetic minute-by-minute account of an eye witness...
September 28th, 2020 04:10 - “ Promises of Vows (Dove)
truly captured the duality that exists in the remnants of broken (though...
September 28th, 2020 04:02 - A Day of Reckoning (Gerrylegister)
even removed from its religious context this is a well thought-out...
September 28th, 2020 03:47 - Will She Sing to Me? (Goldfinch60)
memory is a unique gift in our lives, especially how meaningfully choosy...
September 28th, 2020 03:03 - One Summer’s Day (Dove)
it\'s all fun and games until they mess with my \'Wotsits\': then it\'s...
September 25th, 2020 03:23 - Where Am I. (Goldfinch60)
and may you reign in your \'good place\' to that last - sweet sip, of a...
September 25th, 2020 03:07 - DILLEMA OF DOWNSIZING ~ A SALUTARY TALE ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
such an uplifting demonstration of a caring and pro-active community,...
September 24th, 2020 04:26 - Just Supposing (Neville)
I feel USA has lost 8 years to a devolving political system of underhanded...
September 24th, 2020 04:15 - I don\'t know. (Quemis)
wonderfully intertwined metaphors, I like its stubborn unwillingness to...
September 24th, 2020 04:03 - Sex Saves Lives. (Goldfinch60)
well then, thanks doc for the prescription... don\'t mind me if I go...
September 24th, 2020 03:58 - Sweetness. (Fay Slimm.)
I read a wonderfully written description of a mesmeric depiction...
September 24th, 2020 03:54 - My Apologies (Merissa)
to feel sorry for ourselves is a virtue! without it - we would know little...
September 22nd, 2020 05:04 - From the Old Sailor on the Death of his Friend Sylvie. (Trenz Pruca)
\'I loved Sylvie not because of who she was, but because of who I was when...
September 22nd, 2020 04:52 - Sister Mary (Gary Edward Geraci)
a wonderful read
September 22nd, 2020 04:44 - Death Of An Angel (Satishverma)
Wow! Such a refined write, yet effortlessly simple to connect with, a...
September 22nd, 2020 04:42 - Color (Looking for advice) (MelissaJA)
firstly a brilliantly imaginative piece of writing,
may I humbly suggest...
September 22nd, 2020 04:37 - Next To Nature (Orchidee)
\'Here going on our journey\'s way
Your presence assures us each day
O...
September 22nd, 2020 04:25 - Before Lockdown. (Goldfinch60)
ha! I like the positivity in your certainty of a time to come: \'after...
September 21st, 2020 03:49 - LEADERS IN CLERIHEWS (Michael Edwards)
sadly, I doubt we can expect to see an egg of any worth from your three...
September 21st, 2020 03:21 - Many may think (Poetic Dan)
brave sharing, yet written without too much detail, so as to allow readers...
September 19th, 2020 03:45 - Mutual Exclusion (Kurt Philip Behm)
Amen!
disagreements existing purely on the premise of the...
September 19th, 2020 03:37 - The Avatar (Trenz Pruca)
purposely written so that it can be customised in meaning to the...
September 19th, 2020 03:31 - Venus Destroyed. (Goldfinch60)
this has the making of an intriguing premise for a sci-fi novella Andy,...
September 19th, 2020 03:26 - Hope of Heavenly Help (Orchidee)
\'Hide me \'neath show of your wings
So then safe, my soul to you...
September 19th, 2020 03:18 - Clerihews- comic verses (Dove)
if it was as much fun to write as it was to read, then I imagine you had a...
September 19th, 2020 03:12 - OWN GOAL (Michael Edwards)
ah the abundant irony of reality: always a defibrillator around after...
September 19th, 2020 03:08 - WHAT CITY WOULD YOU LIKE TO VISIT FREE ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
thanks for letting me know about this fun imagination exercise Brian, I...
September 19th, 2020 02:54 - WORK ~ HOME OR AWAY ? WHICH WOULD U CHOOSE ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
\'BRIAN & I ~ We cant *Work from Home*
Because both our Jobs are *Hands...
September 18th, 2020 04:17 - ONION (Michael Edwards)
hella dark: leave poor onion alone, cos Dog\'s rule and that\'s a bark!...
September 18th, 2020 04:12 - Compatible. (Fay Slimm.)
\'Oh that happy hand-in-glove fit
of regenerative pleasure
which we...
September 18th, 2020 04:05 - Geographia (Neville)
contemplative write, or maybe just musings under heat stroke? lol,
September 16th, 2020 02:07 - Intake. (Fay Slimm.)
the loving way you write of Dawn so often makes me think you must have...
September 16th, 2020 02:02 - Let me Serenade You (Dove)
wonderful flow and beautiful imagery
September 16th, 2020 01:55 - Empty (MelissaJA)
a wonderfully authentic write, using easily relatable yet transformative...
September 16th, 2020 01:51 - Endless daze, sweaty nights (Trenz Pruca)
\'It\'s a long night till morning,
Dream breasted, shadow...
September 16th, 2020 01:33 - wild horses (Dusk arising)
anyone who ever wished they had tried \'just one more time\' with a...
September 15th, 2020 02:57 - BEAUTY ~ PURPOS\\E ~ ORDER & DESIGN ~ LIFE ON PLANET EARTH ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
totally agree!
September 15th, 2020 02:52 - Opening and Shutting Doors. (Goldfinch60)
I relate to this mainly because I recognise my past actions in your words,...
September 15th, 2020 02:50 - Given. (Fay Slimm.)
one of the most beautiful Aurora\'s I have ever witnessed was on a quite...
September 15th, 2020 02:43 - Dilettalia (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
wonderful flow
September 15th, 2020 02:29 - Three Haiku (Trenz Pruca)
wonderful read, especially liked the last one
September 15th, 2020 02:27 - Nameless expression (RiverJordan)
good read, liked the flamboyant imagery: \'capeless heroism interwells...
September 15th, 2020 02:20 - of irish spring soap and absent fathers (Queer-with-a-pen)
brilliantly raw and reads like a stream of consciousness diary entry, as...
September 15th, 2020 02:15 - Together. (Goldfinch60)
a loving tribute, \'Together once more\' your hopeful line reads, but I\'m...
September 15th, 2020 01:58 - DOWNTOWN GIRL (Laura🌻)
wonderful tribute! If you are thinking of her: then consider the...
September 12th, 2020 03:39 - I live on borrowed things (Trenz Pruca)
I connect with this write on so many levels, brilliantly insightful and...
September 12th, 2020 03:30 - Goodbye (Brooke Snyder)
an emotive write without that much use of imagery or metaphor, just raw...
September 12th, 2020 03:26 - IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
I have been to a few premises that fit your poems description, I\'m not...
September 12th, 2020 03:21 - Weird Enjoyment. (Goldfinch60)
lol, hey I enjoy ironing as well:
in-front of the telly while watching...
September 12th, 2020 03:15 - I Flow Like Oceans (Asrealastheycome)
brilliant! reads like eloquent rap lyrics, although I still consider it a...
September 12th, 2020 03:05 - Between Worlds. (Fay Slimm.)
impressive in its ambitious scope, wonderfully creative
September 11th, 2020 03:23 - The glitch inside the mind (RiverJordan)
we are all tethered to that tree of life somehow, liked your creative...
September 11th, 2020 03:19 - How Are You? Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
poignant, really hits home the tepid steps we have to take, when wading...
September 11th, 2020 03:15 - The better Gems (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
wonderfully written, imbued with so much passion and packed with creative...
September 11th, 2020 03:00 - mill street bridge (Dusk arising)
art is at its best, when taking such a sombre and bleak subject, then...
September 10th, 2020 03:23 - Still binge reading Bertrand Russell.. September 8th, 2020 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Russell is a gem, personally I gravitate more to the smooth prose and...
September 10th, 2020 03:20 - TWO FOR ONE THOUSAND (Michael Edwards)
great achievement! congrats Michael,
really like the picture as...
September 10th, 2020 03:13 - Clarity and Freedom. (Goldfinch60)
uplifting and insightful, a wonderful message to share
September 10th, 2020 03:10 - Waking. (Fay Slimm.)
beautiful, like how you hid a separate rhythmic layer of the poem within...
September 10th, 2020 03:07 - Unnoticed (MrNobody40)
it takes rare depths of insight and wisdom, to appreciate something while...
September 10th, 2020 03:00 - FARMERS & POETS ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
\'*Rhyme while you May* Muse may not stir again !\'
I\'m sure this line...
September 10th, 2020 02:56 - Full.. (Poetic Dan)
brilliantly pro humanity, with a galvanising message of unity!
written...
September 10th, 2020 02:52 - Poem, Day by Day (AwHec8)
liked the author comment, so quirky and true, made me laugh,
really...
September 10th, 2020 02:38 - Modernia (Kurt Philip Behm)
brilliant!
September 10th, 2020 02:35 - Homeostasis (RiverJordan)
wonderfully ambitious poetry with some truly insightful commentary on life
September 10th, 2020 02:34 - Looking Around (Satishverma)
reads like an elongated haiku, or a budding renga (it will make a good...
September 10th, 2020 02:32 - Diverse Paths. (Goldfinch60)
\'We are here,
Here in that place we should be,
Knowing that the paths...
September 10th, 2020 02:23 - FOR SUCH A TIME AS THIS ! ~ BRIAN ~ A KYRIELLE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
genuinely romantic and dripping with the sweet essence of your love and...
September 10th, 2020 02:17 - the nightmare (Crowns4Christ)
brilliantly quirky,
reminds me of Getrude Stein\'s refusal to answer a...
September 8th, 2020 04:04 - solar system (MelissaJA)
appreciate how long you kept with the Sun metaphors, its not an easy thing...
September 8th, 2020 03:50 - A HAPPY BIRTHDAY ~ BRIAN ~ A 1 5 8 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
happy birthday!
I\'m sure you\'ll have a great day, you certainly...
September 8th, 2020 03:46 - Balls. (Goldfinch60)
so imaginative, I was lost for most of it though lol
September 8th, 2020 03:41 - Brief Encounter (Jabberwocky)
lol, humour is a virtuous kindness when penning
those bitter-pill...
September 8th, 2020 03:37 - A Treasure within my Soul (Dove)
wonderfully rhythmic and blessed with that rare quality of effortless flow
September 7th, 2020 04:06 - Chimerical (Fay Slimm.)
encapsulates the mysticism qualities of wind chimes wonderfully,
great...
September 7th, 2020 04:04 - Broken Can Still Heal (\"Carter Wills\")
it is empowering to other\'s when they see or read examples of people\'s...
September 7th, 2020 03:59 - Awakened Side – Page 17 (Nafis Light)
has a meditative mantra element to it, an intriguing read
September 7th, 2020 03:53 - La’ libertas : Fantasies (Dove)
I second what Andy said above,
like your wonderful flow as well
September 7th, 2020 03:50 - Audio Rock (Ifeanyichukwu)
an emotive write, though bleak its wrapped tight with a thin veil of...
September 7th, 2020 03:45 - One Moonless Night (Satishverma)
wonderful image of the solitude that invades us at times, in those bleak...
September 7th, 2020 03:42 - Maybe (Ron parrish aka wordman)
a lullaby to beckon dreams of that significant other - no longer at our...
September 7th, 2020 03:39 - Eye of the Universe (Insanibean)
wonderful image and an intriguing write
September 7th, 2020 03:32 - YOUR BOTANICALS ~ A 4 10 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
such an informative and vitally important write,
though it is hard to...
September 7th, 2020 03:30 - WOVEN IDIOMS (Michael Edwards)
I\'m gonna be chuckling to myself about the Dentist and Doctor all...
September 7th, 2020 03:22 - is this not a lament, captain? (Queer-with-a-pen)
\'because, really, what kind
of poet would he be
if heartbreak weren’t...
September 7th, 2020 03:19 - Disguised. (Fay Slimm.)
wonderfully empowering metaphor of that time when all beautiful roses...
September 7th, 2020 03:12 - EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (2) (Michael Edwards)
yup, all would be just grand if we all could tell the difference between a...
September 5th, 2020 03:58 - SEPTEMBER LOVES 💛BRIAN 💛 A 9 5 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I also agree, in some cases the quality of lives we lead can be influenced...
September 5th, 2020 03:51 - EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (3) (Michael Edwards)
Ha, indeed.
Though Glenit runs into his fair share of unfortunate...
September 5th, 2020 03:39 - Absolutely Stunning! (Goldfinch60)
wonderfully uplifting picture and message you have shared
September 5th, 2020 03:36
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