Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- SHORTLIES (2) (Michael Edwards)
wonderfully life affirming words, in contrast to that rather spooky...
November 9th, 2020 06:57 - Happy Anniversary Joyce. (Goldfinch60)
beautiful! not purely for its raw sentimental elements but moreover for...
November 9th, 2020 06:55 - 🧡 AMERICA 🤍 AMERICA 💙 ~ ACROSTIC 7 - 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
truly, so many great landmarks in one of the youngest country\'s in the...
November 9th, 2020 06:48 - Groan (up) (Aa Harvey)
good write!
I like the multiple perspectives you\'re depicting within...
November 6th, 2020 06:32 - Her(Don’t leave me) (TyraWilliams)
a wonderful dedication, has a raw quality that is easy to relate with
November 6th, 2020 06:28 - Lockdown Once More. (Goldfinch60)
oh the irony, as thick as that gravy that I assume will be adorning your...
November 6th, 2020 06:08 - SHORTLIES (1) (Michael Edwards)
When old age creeps up on us, inevitably
and those thundering steps - to...
November 6th, 2020 06:01 - TWIN PEEKS (Joe Marcello)
\'Good at guessing what you\'re going to wear\'
like your witty style,
November 6th, 2020 05:49 - THE Rook (FineB)
intriguing read, like your flow
November 6th, 2020 05:46 - Turning Leaf (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Brilliant!!!
imbued with brevity of truth, great insightful commentary as...
November 6th, 2020 05:42 - Winter spouse (Arobot)
wish I understood it all, enjoyed reading your first stanza very much
November 6th, 2020 05:37 - Butterfly (A Boy With Roses)
firstly, I think you have a wonderful gift for innovative imagery and I...
November 5th, 2020 05:21 - Numberless (Fay Slimm.)
you took a mere \'fly by\' and cultivated words articulating each minutia...
November 5th, 2020 05:12 - SEASONS FOR ALL REASONS ~ FOUR BALANCED 575 HAIKU (ANGELA & BRIAN)
good read,
had the first fog enveloped morning of winter today,
I...
November 5th, 2020 05:05 - ASSURANCE NURTURES JOY (Michael Edwards)
\'Actually sad to say the ads are better than the rubbish programmes...
November 5th, 2020 05:00 - Violence Solved? (Goldfinch60)
\'As if you see a mosquito
And it lands on your balls,
You have to...
November 5th, 2020 04:54 - to have been cheated so (Conradconrad)
1) \'less of what\'s to be done
and more of what\'s to be...
how i...
November 5th, 2020 04:47 - She Was Back Once More. (Goldfinch60)
wonderful,
that you can see the tint of Sunshine through the storms of...
November 3rd, 2020 07:21 - Roosting (Neville)
what a welcome song to Winter,
even within frozen bitterness remains the...
November 3rd, 2020 07:05 - imperial purple (łysy) (Conradconrad)
1) and language is no longer
a freedom:
it\'s no more a quest
for...
November 3rd, 2020 06:48 - Inscription Plus... (Doggerel Dave)
share your sentiments,
thank you for introducing me to A.D. Hope\'s gem...
November 3rd, 2020 05:42 - Hunger (Fay Slimm.)
good read Fay,
though I\'m intrigued by the picture: any story behind...
November 2nd, 2020 06:44 - Peevish Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
good write!
November 2nd, 2020 06:40 - CHRISTMAS PRESENTS ~ CHRISTMAS SPENDING ~ SIX RHYMING QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
yikes, way too early for me, presents are remembered in those moments...
November 2nd, 2020 06:37 - Now to Eternity (Gerrylegister)
a daunting yet unerringly insightful words of commentary, a haunting...
November 2nd, 2020 06:27 - Heydays (Fay Slimm.)
how you captured the poetic mood of adolescence\'s musical scales, we have...
November 2nd, 2020 06:14 - Little Shepherdesses (Neville)
good enough to make me look-up meaning of \'shepherdesses\',
a slide...
November 2nd, 2020 05:52 - Love will find a way (Poetic Dan)
wonderful dedication, brilliant imagery and a seamless rhythmic...
November 2nd, 2020 05:37 - Autumns Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
good read,
I\'m also an Autumn guy, though admittedly more \'Fall\' and...
November 2nd, 2020 05:33 - UNRELATED (1, 2, 3) (Michael Edwards)
in your picture I find the muscle, within your words I hear each pulsating...
November 2nd, 2020 05:30 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
wonderful read,
a dreamy song - full: of the wonder of love
October 30th, 2020 04:32 - Note to Self... (Orchidee)
\'I wish people would talk English
By the time I found out what Carpe...
October 30th, 2020 04:27 - Summit of Life. (Goldfinch60)
\'But each time I arose into a better person.
There have been fissures...
October 30th, 2020 04:19 - No Pain No Gain (Quemis)
no \'P\' words were harmed in the formulation of this write, lol
good
October 30th, 2020 04:15 - And So the Waves Whispered... (Dove)
\'It was our waves in twilight hours
as the sunset coated the sky
Upon...
October 30th, 2020 04:13 - See? (Tayama)
\'The drama is often a mask she says...
Give the people a chance to see...
October 30th, 2020 04:01 - It’s nothing personal (Aa Harvey)
sadly, I pity what reflection you see in that poisonous mirror,
at least...
October 30th, 2020 03:58 - This Time. (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed, we have so many \'such Times\' piled up aside those ghosts of...
October 29th, 2020 05:27 - I AM (Trenz Pruca)
wonderfully self empowering,
Indeed: You are!
I wrote something...
October 29th, 2020 05:10 - UNSAME (2) (Michael Edwards)
thanks for teaching me a new word Michael (colicky),
I found this a...
October 29th, 2020 05:03 - A Dark Cloud (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
another insightful write
October 29th, 2020 04:48 - Kiss me twice (Aa Harvey)
good read, nice flow
October 29th, 2020 04:47 - Innerness (Neville)
\'Where you would have boundaries
there is a burn mark on my...
October 29th, 2020 04:45 - Remainers (Fay Slimm.)
challenging at times but highly enjoyable read, as always I took a walk...
October 29th, 2020 04:42 - Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60)
Indeed, contemplative write Andy
October 29th, 2020 04:27 - ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER (Michael Edwards)
fun read,
found your pic a bit psychedelic even if only black n white
October 29th, 2020 04:25 - Every Now, or Then? (Nicholas M. Langford)
wonderful imagery, I admit your overall message was lot to me, but all the...
October 29th, 2020 04:18 - Voice (Nicholas M. Langford)
insightful commentary and a wonderfully articulated argument for...
October 29th, 2020 04:15 - As If It Is Hard Enough To Have Good Friends Of The Opposite Sex (Gary Edward Geraci)
😂
Lmao!
those dastardly pitfalls...
October 29th, 2020 04:11 - Boy Next Door (A Boy With Roses)
in any writing course for the chapter \'show, not tell\': they should have...
October 29th, 2020 04:08 - One with Nature (Dove)
\'I am one with nature
bugs can\'t get me down
I see the clouds ...
October 27th, 2020 04:25 - my lady of the ocean and the waves (Queer-with-a-pen)
another sea captain or same one from your other write? lol
good...
October 27th, 2020 04:15 - My Place of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
so vivid, a wonderful write Andy
October 27th, 2020 04:08 - Tall Tales (Fay Slimm.)
thank you for imbuing your write (as ever) with a breath of Nature\'s...
October 26th, 2020 05:08 - Dear Autism (LeighB)
I second everything that Dusk arising so eloquently stated in his comment!...
October 26th, 2020 04:59 - becalmed beyond escape (Dusk arising)
\'becalmed beyond escape
she took us
men of steel
wooden...
October 26th, 2020 04:50 - Us (Dasim)
bravely invasive in its level of detail and penned with its own winding...
October 26th, 2020 04:38 - My Invisible Hero (LeighB)
So glad I found this, in the words of John Keats:
\"Beauty is truth,...
October 26th, 2020 04:28 - Chaos (Catdeu)
in the word of Tom Cruise, you had me at:
\'serenity, my dear
i long for...
October 26th, 2020 04:12 - Transactional Love (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Brilliant!
October 26th, 2020 04:05 - Thoughts of a survivor (TheLonelyPoet90)
wonderfully impowering, we curate ourselves into what we want to believe...
October 26th, 2020 04:03 - fallen dreams (Dusk arising)
\'Fallen\': three times rang, in your lines: like the tap count to...
October 26th, 2020 03:52 - Nostalgia. (Fay Slimm.)
what a visceral depiction of scenic Sunset Fay,
October 26th, 2020 03:47 - Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
often Dylan Thomas\' words are utilised for times of struggle and...
October 26th, 2020 03:40 - Tempus Ephemera (Kurt Philip Behm)
thought provoking, reads like philosophically meditative questions on the...
October 26th, 2020 03:27 - Wasted eden (MelissaJA)
like the imagery and conversational tone of voice, while clearly...
October 26th, 2020 03:16 - Catching Myself (Satishverma)
\'The craft of harvesting
will not stand the acid test.
What do you see...
October 26th, 2020 03:08 - Dawn (Steve Unruh)
good write, wonderful imagery and tempo
October 26th, 2020 03:04 - I KID YOU NOT AT ALL (Michael Edwards)
wait until the Hispanic regions begin their version of \'cancel culture\'...
October 24th, 2020 04:50 - In The Last Century. (Goldfinch60)
distance is incomprehensible in its complexity,
light as time travel...
October 24th, 2020 04:19 - We Made It Another Day (Felicityjones)
a poignant message for these trouble times, good read
\'I know right now...
October 24th, 2020 04:07 - a date with death (Conradconrad)
1) \'seems like: perhaps i was a boy then...
and the beloved dog of the...
October 24th, 2020 03:59 - Commitment (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed! Although, our dilemma - at least initially, rests with the fact...
October 23rd, 2020 04:50 - VOYAGE AROUND MY FATHER (TheOzGreenMan)
wonderful dedication,
may your father rest in peace and father-Time...
October 23rd, 2020 04:40 - To the Light Outside my Window (Micromorth)
I like your attention to detail, imagine this took a few drafts to shape...
October 23rd, 2020 04:28 - Afraid (Dasim)
\'Or will your steps be heavy
With regret and loneliness as...
October 23rd, 2020 04:20 - Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo (Jarcher54)
I second everything that Dusk Arising so eloquently stated,
a great...
October 22nd, 2020 06:42 - Freedom Favour (Orchidee)
\'In this land of living
My cry I to you bring
Attend to me, I am...
October 22nd, 2020 06:36 - you ask me why? (Dusk arising)
Beautiful, imbued with the warmth that only \'being in love\' can bestow,...
October 22nd, 2020 06:24 - The Man From The Pru. (Goldfinch60)
the only part of your memories I can directly relate to is the milk...
October 22nd, 2020 06:20 - The Ocean (MMadrid)
I too share your fascination with the Sea and your picture just leaps-out,...
October 22nd, 2020 06:05 - the black cracovite & the three sisters amber (adventures in paragraph) (Conradconrad)
firstly, be wary of all the SA(ist\'s) - who equate using rulers to...
October 22nd, 2020 05:59 - Scary Sister -- A Fun Halloween Poem For My Kids (BlueHeron77)
Beautiful, and that\'s just your Author\'s comment!
Nothing more pleasing...
October 22nd, 2020 05:00 - Joker44’s Side – I Play (Nafis Light)
what a timely write of positivity, thanks for sharing the good vibes
October 22nd, 2020 04:52 - Little Man (Dasim)
like Dusk Arising mentioned already, I like the beat to your writes - even...
October 22nd, 2020 04:50 - Hold Hard. (Fay Slimm.)
wonderful picture and words Fay, when viewing sunsets or sunrises near...
October 22nd, 2020 04:43 - R E S P O N S I B I L I T Y ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Congratulations! Glad that you\'re both reaping the fruits of your...
October 22nd, 2020 04:34 - Lost Pictures. (Goldfinch60)
I relate completely Andy, the only time I guarantee I have a decent camera...
October 22nd, 2020 04:30 - UNSAME 1 - 3 (Michael Edwards)
wonderful artwork, I spent a few minutes just engrossed in all its little...
October 22nd, 2020 04:24 - Moonshine Cherries (Goddess of the Mist)
good read, not sure if intentional but this has a light touch and a fun...
October 22nd, 2020 04:09 - An Electric Affair (Satishverma)
brilliant!
I will admit, I read your write\'s hoping to learn as much as...
October 22nd, 2020 04:05 - Night Visit (Dasim)
like the unfolding thought patterns in your write, wonderful imagery and...
October 22nd, 2020 04:01 - SONG OF A FIST (Ifeanyichukwu)
what a timely write, my thoughts are with you and my hopes are that common...
October 22nd, 2020 03:46 - The Way, The Truth, and The Life -- Triplet of Haikus on John 14:6 (BlueHeron77)
apart from \'the way\', I like how you try and respect the ethos of the...
October 22nd, 2020 03:32 - But (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Are we doomed to be unhappy,
or does it involve a choice
Do our...
October 22nd, 2020 03:26 - I maybe poor but I love her (ShanikiSmith)
a wonderful dedication, raw emotion on our reading platter
October 22nd, 2020 03:22 - A Beautiful Ghost (Gerrylegister)
\'Your chastised mind stirring to strive,
Dare the sun to rise again and...
October 20th, 2020 03:26 - The Truth, My Truth (KayDied)
Today won\'t be your last day
and Tomorrow need not be the \'First\' of...
October 20th, 2020 03:23 - One Rose Shall Hint When Summer Wakes (WilliamEdwardNight)
wonderful read!
like your well measured tone, imagery and metaphors...
October 20th, 2020 03:08 - Humanity in Process (Dlherrmann)
poignant questions that is relatable to 99% of humanity, if we look back -...
October 20th, 2020 03:01
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