Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- BE OPTIMISTIC ~ THE BEST CHOICE ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
admire the uplifting sentiments in all your writes, a great gift
October 9th, 2020 04:09 - anchored, in one way or another (Queer-with-a-pen)
like the tempo and natural flow, like the writer\'s voice becoming more...
October 9th, 2020 04:06 - So Met. (Fay Slimm.)
what a haunting last couplet, questions of insightful observations,...
October 9th, 2020 04:00 - an afternoon with edvard estlin c. (Conradconrad)
you will scare away a lot of readers by the simple scope of your ambitious...
October 8th, 2020 04:19 - Grab the Day (Trenz Pruca)
simple, yet undeniably life affirming
October 8th, 2020 04:05 - Fear (Dove)
\'Do you fear the unknown
walking at night,
afraid someone may kill...
October 8th, 2020 04:03 - Next stage.... (Poetic Dan)
good write, I appreciate its uplifting positivity and insightful...
October 8th, 2020 03:55 - Three Palms (Doggerel Dave)
your last two stanzas are deceptively brilliant,
really like the tone...
October 8th, 2020 03:53 - Battlegrounds in the Mind (MaddieJ)
refreshing in its ingenuity of delivery and well measured pace of rhythmic...
October 8th, 2020 03:45 - ALPACA SOCKS (Michael Edwards)
hilarious!
the aggressively protective elements to Alpaca\'s would have...
October 8th, 2020 03:42 - Blue Light (Neville)
there is a gross side to me that reads your words and hints at the use of...
October 8th, 2020 03:31 - Battle (Fay Slimm.)
I really appreciate the gentle rhythmic sway of owned brilliance in all...
October 8th, 2020 03:15 - Ode to a Sticky D Key (Lorna)
lol, if this wasn\'t written by someone with your subtle touch for razor...
October 8th, 2020 03:01 - The Night Male (Doggerel Dave)
so witty, a wonderful read
October 8th, 2020 02:52 - Moveable Feast (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
it seems with every week you are refining your distinct style of seamless...
October 8th, 2020 02:48 - familiar bench scenarios (пицбургэр) (Conradconrad)
oh my, what a talent you\'ve let us glimpse with this monumental...
October 8th, 2020 02:40 - Another Bout of Loneliness Overtakes Me (SpiceNoodles)
the first stanza, is a match for some of the most authentically vulnerable...
October 8th, 2020 02:18 - There you are (Saxon Crow)
wonderfully soothing in its gentle tone and rhythm,
good write
October 8th, 2020 02:15 - Bucket List Senryu (Lorna)
innovatively witty, remind me of one by Benjamin Zephaniah:
Haiku - by...
October 8th, 2020 02:12 - Happiness Butterfly. (Goldfinch60)
wonderful imagery, sweet: in its simple and sincere delivery
October 8th, 2020 02:00 - Attrition (Neville)
the absurd chain of haphazardly circumstantial events that manipulated a...
October 6th, 2020 04:05 - Dear America, (Jezika J)
I like your strong voice, I like your use of realistic imagery and your...
October 6th, 2020 03:44 - One Lasting Wish (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
really like your take on the contrasting duality in our mind\'s at times,...
October 6th, 2020 03:32 - On Cobbled Trail (Satishverma)
a wonderful take: wording the empowering \'attitude\' in the term \'owning...
October 6th, 2020 03:15 - Little creatures (SpiceNoodles)
we are all \'little critters\' in the great scheme of things I guess,
oh...
October 6th, 2020 03:11 - Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60)
Happy Birthday Andy!
Brilliant that this year is ending with you viewing...
October 6th, 2020 03:05 - COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A FREE VERSE ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
a timely write of hope, wrapped in the life affirming positivity that...
October 5th, 2020 03:56 - the sea (Dusk arising)
\'here inside... to the spiritual me
becalming unanswered...
October 5th, 2020 03:53 - STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
a witty take, as always!
oh the irony that is life...
October 5th, 2020 03:48 - Mr. Mediocre (Neville)
needs to be read a few times for its layers to be unravelled,
an abstract...
October 5th, 2020 03:46 - Beauty (Dove)
your \'rosy glasses\' - perspective\'s adding a positive twist to your...
October 5th, 2020 03:38 - Not All Nations Have Pearls (Gerrylegister)
truly: what is value, when the scales themselves are so far removed from...
October 5th, 2020 03:32 - Blackhole (FarscapEddie)
a pearl of intrigue wrapped in delectable rhymes,
well chosen image...
October 5th, 2020 03:27 - New Joys. (Goldfinch60)
soothing, even to those who can\'t claim to know of the grief you...
October 5th, 2020 03:19 - THE TIDE (Michael Edwards)
I see a cyclical pattern to most of nature and existence as a whole, so...
October 5th, 2020 03:11 - Wished-For (Fay Slimm.)
indeed, we live as much in the shared sorrow and joy of those who grace...
October 5th, 2020 03:07 - Fearless Faith - Isaiah Series (4) (Orchidee)
\'Though you as a worm, and I great
I leave you not to fate\'
a...
October 5th, 2020 03:03 - Stalled (Fay Slimm.)
\'Shall the caged heart\'s talons gnawing at need
not see night\'s silk...
October 2nd, 2020 04:34 - The World at My Table. (Goldfinch60)
one way to \'bring the world to you\', like the mindset, imagination...
October 2nd, 2020 04:30 - SAVE A SYLLABLE (Michael Edwards)
😂🤣😅😌....
🙂😄😆🤣😂...
😁😁😁
what a...
October 2nd, 2020 04:26 - AN ARMY OF TONGUE (Joe Marcello)
no Sir, not the anonymous sources - instead I urge you to search out the...
October 2nd, 2020 04:21 - Was it just a Dream (Dove)
oh snap, we both mused on dreaming in our last posts lol,
I like the...
October 2nd, 2020 04:17 - Love is not splendid (Trenz Pruca)
alarmingly those blisters manifest during swimming practise and that empty...
October 2nd, 2020 04:11 - Poetic Side – Page 6 (Nafis Light)
writes like this have much more value than their Poetic currency, for one...
October 2nd, 2020 04:04 - The Endless Cycle (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'He sang old songs, romanced the strong,
the weak then cast away
The...
October 2nd, 2020 03:58 - THE POLITICIANS ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
poignant, witty and well informed points,
good write!
October 2nd, 2020 03:54 - SHADES OF GREEN ~ ANGELA ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
a love song for all things green!
but wait I think a family member was...
October 1st, 2020 04:21 - lies to kill for (Dusk arising)
I think the human failings within All Religious establishments (not merely...
October 1st, 2020 04:15 - The Undisturbed (Fay Slimm.)
really like the picture and was immersed in the write from first line,...
October 1st, 2020 03:48 - A Patchwork of Ashes (Neville)
liked the form, alternating the two voices added another layer to both...
October 1st, 2020 03:45 - “Sonnet” From the Ashes (Dove)
wonderful demonstration of natural flow coexisting with established Poetry...
October 1st, 2020 03:39 - The Bottom From Where I Continue to Emerge (SpiceNoodles)
there is a rhythm to our pulsed existence, up and down it pumps - round n...
October 1st, 2020 03:23 - Each Way Endlessly (Quemis)
liked the poetic elements and flow but this got real dark - real quick,...
October 1st, 2020 03:10 - Oblivious (Neville)
smooth with it - who needs pickup lines, they just don\'t have a chance...
October 1st, 2020 03:03 - A WINTER NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
yup it\'s been a year of \'what the heck(s)\',
lol looks like Glenit is...
October 1st, 2020 02:52 - Autumn\'s Glory. (Goldfinch60)
feels strange but weather\'s been kinda good lately (near me) and there\'s...
October 1st, 2020 02:46 - Myself (Fay Slimm.)
such a therapeutic read during our COVID horror reality, as we remain
-...
October 1st, 2020 02:37 - Forward Faintless - Isaiah Series (3) (Orchidee)
\'Shall renew their strength great
They shall mount up as with wings
As...
October 1st, 2020 02:28 - GINGERBREAD~MAN~BLUES A TRIOLET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
wonderful dedication,
gingerbread on a damp rainy morning reminds me...
September 29th, 2020 02:26 - Circle of the Stove (MendedFences27)
a wild ride for sure and a fun read,
lol that\'s one rather twisted...
September 29th, 2020 02:17 - Dispirited hope (RiverJordan)
really like the poetic ambition in this write, some insightful commentary...
September 29th, 2020 02:04 - Come-a-Day (Neville)
wonderful first couplet, hooks you in quick
great write!
September 29th, 2020 01:57 - Shallow Brown. (Goldfinch60)
yup, I think Music be the breath we inhale through our ears, keeping us...
September 29th, 2020 01:53 - Sleeper (Neville)
I can re-read this ten times and find ten new elements to rave about, I...
September 28th, 2020 05:01 - From The Source (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
one must be careful to taste only those edible elements of Plato, still...
September 28th, 2020 04:55 - “Palindrome” Passion (Dove)
creative, has a meditatively warming element to it as well
September 28th, 2020 04:49 - Song of a poor scavenger. (Trenz Pruca)
there is so many ways to view the truth in the term: My way, as \'My\' is...
September 28th, 2020 04:46 - Hope is There. (Goldfinch60)
wonderfully life affirming kick-up-the-backside message Andy, lol
September 28th, 2020 04:30 - SO IT\'S SUNDAY (Michael Edwards)
brilliant picture!
indeed: who truly knows what comes from those...
September 28th, 2020 04:27 - Discarded 2 (Neville)
I am a fan of your writes, voicing those stripped back and raw wandering...
September 28th, 2020 04:24 - Enmeshed (Fay Slimm.)
reads like a poetic minute-by-minute account of an eye witness...
September 28th, 2020 04:10 - “ Promises of Vows (Dove)
truly captured the duality that exists in the remnants of broken (though...
September 28th, 2020 04:02 - A Day of Reckoning (Gerrylegister)
even removed from its religious context this is a well thought-out...
September 28th, 2020 03:47 - The Interview (MendedFences27)
intriguing: as fragmented in delivery as our mind would seem if we were to...
September 28th, 2020 03:29 - Will She Sing to Me? (Goldfinch60)
memory is a unique gift in our lives, especially how meaningfully choosy...
September 28th, 2020 03:03 - One Summer’s Day (Dove)
it\'s all fun and games until they mess with my \'Wotsits\': then it\'s...
September 25th, 2020 03:23 - Where Am I. (Goldfinch60)
and may you reign in your \'good place\' to that last - sweet sip, of a...
September 25th, 2020 03:07 - DILLEMA OF DOWNSIZING ~ A SALUTARY TALE ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
such an uplifting demonstration of a caring and pro-active community,...
September 24th, 2020 04:26 - Just Supposing (Neville)
I feel USA has lost 8 years to a devolving political system of underhanded...
September 24th, 2020 04:15 - I don\'t know. (Quemis)
wonderfully intertwined metaphors, I like its stubborn unwillingness to...
September 24th, 2020 04:03 - Sex Saves Lives. (Goldfinch60)
well then, thanks doc for the prescription... don\'t mind me if I go...
September 24th, 2020 03:58 - Sweetness. (Fay Slimm.)
I read a wonderfully written description of a mesmeric depiction...
September 24th, 2020 03:54 - My Apologies (Merissa)
to feel sorry for ourselves is a virtue! without it - we would know little...
September 22nd, 2020 05:04 - From the Old Sailor on the Death of his Friend Sylvie. (Trenz Pruca)
\'I loved Sylvie not because of who she was, but because of who I was when...
September 22nd, 2020 04:52 - Sister Mary (Gary Edward Geraci)
a wonderful read
September 22nd, 2020 04:44 - Death Of An Angel (Satishverma)
Wow! Such a refined write, yet effortlessly simple to connect with, a...
September 22nd, 2020 04:42 - Color (Looking for advice) (MelissaJA)
firstly a brilliantly imaginative piece of writing,
may I humbly suggest...
September 22nd, 2020 04:37 - Next To Nature (Orchidee)
\'Here going on our journey\'s way
Your presence assures us each day
O...
September 22nd, 2020 04:25 - Before Lockdown. (Goldfinch60)
ha! I like the positivity in your certainty of a time to come: \'after...
September 21st, 2020 03:49 - LEADERS IN CLERIHEWS (Michael Edwards)
sadly, I doubt we can expect to see an egg of any worth from your three...
September 21st, 2020 03:21 - Many may think (Poetic Dan)
brave sharing, yet written without too much detail, so as to allow readers...
September 19th, 2020 03:45 - Mutual Exclusion (Kurt Philip Behm)
Amen!
disagreements existing purely on the premise of the...
September 19th, 2020 03:37 - The Avatar (Trenz Pruca)
purposely written so that it can be customised in meaning to the...
September 19th, 2020 03:31 - Venus Destroyed. (Goldfinch60)
this has the making of an intriguing premise for a sci-fi novella Andy,...
September 19th, 2020 03:26 - Hope of Heavenly Help (Orchidee)
\'Hide me \'neath show of your wings
So then safe, my soul to you...
September 19th, 2020 03:18 - Clerihews- comic verses (Dove)
if it was as much fun to write as it was to read, then I imagine you had a...
September 19th, 2020 03:12 - OWN GOAL (Michael Edwards)
ah the abundant irony of reality: always a defibrillator around after...
September 19th, 2020 03:08 - WHAT CITY WOULD YOU LIKE TO VISIT FREE ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
thanks for letting me know about this fun imagination exercise Brian, I...
September 19th, 2020 02:54 - WORK ~ HOME OR AWAY ? WHICH WOULD U CHOOSE ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
\'BRIAN & I ~ We cant *Work from Home*
Because both our Jobs are *Hands...
September 18th, 2020 04:17 - ONION (Michael Edwards)
hella dark: leave poor onion alone, cos Dog\'s rule and that\'s a bark!...
September 18th, 2020 04:12
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