Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- All on a pleasant meadow (Jarcher54)
wonderful artwork and I like the imagery in your write,
very creative -...
October 20th, 2020 02:54 - Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
you certainly can\'t deny the chemistry in the love - you depict so...
October 20th, 2020 02:49 - Late (Dasim)
wonderful flow, it reads like a refreshing stream paving its own path down...
October 20th, 2020 02:45 - A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
a witty write, just reading it makes me crave a curry,
I\'m with you...
October 19th, 2020 06:38 - Regret (Fay Slimm.)
such a subtle depiction of the nuances within Regret, sacrifice of self -...
October 19th, 2020 06:33 - NIGELLA (Michael Edwards)
lmao!
I agree she definitely profited from showcasing the elegant...
October 19th, 2020 03:26 - go then (Dusk arising)
\'until i may one day
follow,
take with you the love
of lost...
October 19th, 2020 03:07 - Ode to Calochilus robertsonii, or Purple beard orchid. (TheOzGreenMan)
good write!
(when referencing I always try to share a link to the...
October 19th, 2020 02:54 - at a hospilatier\'s request (Conradconrad)
1) \'ask them...
to drink alone...
and tell them: would you
please...
October 19th, 2020 02:48 - The Face (Dasim)
it is necessary to look for meaning, to confront the reality of not...
October 19th, 2020 02:13 - Waiting to Start (Tayama)
I like the feel and tone of your write, there is an element of genuine...
October 19th, 2020 01:54 - A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Hoping for the best for you and Jeanne, glad you utilised the outlet...
October 17th, 2020 04:17 - in fields of green (Dusk arising)
\'For each bears a name, a soul departed.
Young men from far away brought...
October 17th, 2020 04:08 - Very,Very Fast Food. (Goldfinch60)
\'Talk about fast food,
I had seen rashers of bacon
Thicker than that...
October 17th, 2020 03:58 - Waving at Dolphins (Neville)
beautiful rhyme and tone, immersive imagery and crisp clear...
October 17th, 2020 03:48 - Another Time (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
subtly layered yet defiantly loud, imbued with the crisp diction of...
October 16th, 2020 04:38 - Staying Alive (Lorna)
wonderful,
I would think such a write would have a healing effect on the...
October 16th, 2020 04:29 - I THINK, I HEAR (Joe Marcello)
thought provoking words to meditate over, though always remember: heinous...
October 16th, 2020 04:19 - walking, \"again\" (Conradconrad)
1) \'that painting is all eye
that poetry is all ear and perhaps
the...
October 16th, 2020 04:09 - WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF WASPS ? ~ AN AFFIRMATIVE PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
well I for one am glad Neville\'s write nudged loose this informative drop...
October 16th, 2020 03:47 - of november fallen (Dusk arising)
Brilliant!
the picture was so atmospheric as well, as a whole: a...
October 16th, 2020 03:37 - Revitalize. (Fay Slimm.)
didactic in tone
yet not - a clone,
generously shared wisdom and a good...
October 16th, 2020 03:24 - LIMERICK No 69 (Michael Edwards)
brevity in its crisp message, yet unimposing while enticing with its...
October 15th, 2020 04:28 - Wasps (Neville)
a certain Queen might dispute your disregard for their ferocious cousins,...
October 15th, 2020 04:19 - LIVERPOOL ~ SILENCED BY COVID 19 ~ AN ACROSTIC EULOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
YNWA!
October 15th, 2020 04:13 - The Sheets and Time (Lorna)
I like the metaphor, there is an off-kilter and quirky quality to the...
October 15th, 2020 04:11 - Moses was a strange man (Trenz Pruca)
2020 and we still look down at those pigeons with their miniscule brain...
October 15th, 2020 03:59 - All Roads Lead...To Spinoza (Kurt Philip Behm)
good write
October 15th, 2020 03:31 - i am here by some irritating conjunction of bad jokes (Conradconrad)
I\'ll highlight what you try to hide:
1) \'my new earned pleasure:
to...
October 15th, 2020 03:28 - the downstream tide (Dusk arising)
I admire the poetic ambition in your write, so free and defiant
October 15th, 2020 03:09 - Family Plowing (Dlherrmann)
very much like the Seamus Heaney poem...
October 15th, 2020 03:03 - Death Missed. (Goldfinch60)
wonderfully uplifting read to start a day with, thank you for sharing
October 15th, 2020 02:53 - Left Behind. (Fay Slimm.)
I like the spacing, reemphasises the wondrously dramatic nuances in...
October 15th, 2020 02:50 - Tracks. (Fay Slimm.)
I don\'t think it\'s an exaggeration to say the Thatcher\'s era...
October 13th, 2020 04:40 - The Four Letter Word (Lorna)
nice rhyme scheme - elegantly simple in message and tone,
wonderful read
October 13th, 2020 04:24 - Dashing sculptures (Straight circles)
teases readers to delve into their own corridors of hidden memories,...
October 13th, 2020 04:22 - EFFECT OF COVID 19 ~ A 6 3 5 LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
like your songs choice, my personal COVID19 song choice (and mantra) has...
October 13th, 2020 04:14 - Anxiety (93tmarie)
\'Vision is blurry
Words don\'t flow out
You just considered
You\'re...
October 13th, 2020 04:01 - Sometime Life Happens. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ll second everything that Neville eloquently said!
wonderfully...
October 13th, 2020 03:55 - Awayness (Fay Slimm.)
learned a new word, gained a new fav to add to my re-reading buffet: guess...
October 13th, 2020 03:51 - The Great Debate. (Trenz Pruca)
what an acute portrait you have penned in that first stanza, would be...
October 12th, 2020 05:49 - Yellow Umbrella\'s (Neville)
lol, what delightfully \'free\' partner(s) you have encountered, how lucky...
October 12th, 2020 05:45 - Lunch at My House (Lorna)
an apt metaphor for so much about life, reminds me of the opening stanza...
October 12th, 2020 05:37 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
the ageless representation of Moon and Sun as lover\'s kept apart, but...
October 12th, 2020 05:29 - Rosalie Avila (Nikhil Vadher)
wonderful sentiment and message in your write
October 12th, 2020 05:13 - Taste of Temptation (Dove)
effortless flow and a wonderful portrait of attraction and yearning in...
October 12th, 2020 05:11 - My Memoir in honor of Taliesin (Trenz Pruca)
outside of the last two lines, there is a balance of multiply angled...
October 12th, 2020 05:05 - Last one before sun (Poetic Dan)
\'No matter the amount of rational thinking, I feel emotion rooted...
October 12th, 2020 04:48 - \'Hope,\' I told her (Abu Aeesh)
firstly, your perfectly chosen picture immediately gifts the reader the...
October 12th, 2020 04:37 - Another One of Those Times. (Goldfinch60)
sweet words - as always, a seemingly depthless pool of inspiration you...
October 12th, 2020 04:31 - Peoples Praises (Orchidee)
I care-not for theological merits of other\'s argued perspectives, but I...
October 12th, 2020 04:26 - Where do Dreams Go (Neville)
or maybe, just maybe if hindsight were to arrive early - for once, he...
October 12th, 2020 04:10 - Woollen Stockings (Neville)
... and with the Daughters parents dreaming of a day when she can play...
October 9th, 2020 04:35 - Happy Trad. (Goldfinch60)
yup, tap - tapping away
October 9th, 2020 04:19 - ...AND... (Michael Edwards)
I\'m as lost as Glenit\'s feet with this one Michael,
a questioning of...
October 9th, 2020 04:17 - BE OPTIMISTIC ~ THE BEST CHOICE ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
admire the uplifting sentiments in all your writes, a great gift
October 9th, 2020 04:09 - anchored, in one way or another (Queer-with-a-pen)
like the tempo and natural flow, like the writer\'s voice becoming more...
October 9th, 2020 04:06 - So Met. (Fay Slimm.)
what a haunting last couplet, questions of insightful observations,...
October 9th, 2020 04:00 - an afternoon with edvard estlin c. (Conradconrad)
you will scare away a lot of readers by the simple scope of your ambitious...
October 8th, 2020 04:19 - Grab the Day (Trenz Pruca)
simple, yet undeniably life affirming
October 8th, 2020 04:05 - Fear (Dove)
\'Do you fear the unknown
walking at night,
afraid someone may kill...
October 8th, 2020 04:03 - Next stage.... (Poetic Dan)
good write, I appreciate its uplifting positivity and insightful...
October 8th, 2020 03:55 - Three Palms (Doggerel Dave)
your last two stanzas are deceptively brilliant,
really like the tone...
October 8th, 2020 03:53 - Battlegrounds in the Mind (MaddieJ)
refreshing in its ingenuity of delivery and well measured pace of rhythmic...
October 8th, 2020 03:45 - ALPACA SOCKS (Michael Edwards)
hilarious!
the aggressively protective elements to Alpaca\'s would have...
October 8th, 2020 03:42 - Blue Light (Neville)
there is a gross side to me that reads your words and hints at the use of...
October 8th, 2020 03:31 - Battle (Fay Slimm.)
I really appreciate the gentle rhythmic sway of owned brilliance in all...
October 8th, 2020 03:15 - Ode to a Sticky D Key (Lorna)
lol, if this wasn\'t written by someone with your subtle touch for razor...
October 8th, 2020 03:01 - The Night Male (Doggerel Dave)
so witty, a wonderful read
October 8th, 2020 02:52 - Moveable Feast (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
it seems with every week you are refining your distinct style of seamless...
October 8th, 2020 02:48 - familiar bench scenarios (пицбургэр) (Conradconrad)
oh my, what a talent you\'ve let us glimpse with this monumental...
October 8th, 2020 02:40 - Another Bout of Loneliness Overtakes Me (SpiceNoodles)
the first stanza, is a match for some of the most authentically vulnerable...
October 8th, 2020 02:18 - There you are (Saxon Crow)
wonderfully soothing in its gentle tone and rhythm,
good write
October 8th, 2020 02:15 - Bucket List Senryu (Lorna)
innovatively witty, remind me of one by Benjamin Zephaniah:
Haiku - by...
October 8th, 2020 02:12 - Happiness Butterfly. (Goldfinch60)
wonderful imagery, sweet: in its simple and sincere delivery
October 8th, 2020 02:00 - Attrition (Neville)
the absurd chain of haphazardly circumstantial events that manipulated a...
October 6th, 2020 04:05 - Dear America, (Jezika J)
I like your strong voice, I like your use of realistic imagery and your...
October 6th, 2020 03:44 - One Lasting Wish (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
really like your take on the contrasting duality in our mind\'s at times,...
October 6th, 2020 03:32 - On Cobbled Trail (Satishverma)
a wonderful take: wording the empowering \'attitude\' in the term \'owning...
October 6th, 2020 03:15 - Little creatures (SpiceNoodles)
we are all \'little critters\' in the great scheme of things I guess,
oh...
October 6th, 2020 03:11 - Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60)
Happy Birthday Andy!
Brilliant that this year is ending with you viewing...
October 6th, 2020 03:05 - COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A FREE VERSE ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
a timely write of hope, wrapped in the life affirming positivity that...
October 5th, 2020 03:56 - the sea (Dusk arising)
\'here inside... to the spiritual me
becalming unanswered...
October 5th, 2020 03:53 - STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
a witty take, as always!
oh the irony that is life...
October 5th, 2020 03:48 - Mr. Mediocre (Neville)
needs to be read a few times for its layers to be unravelled,
an abstract...
October 5th, 2020 03:46 - Beauty (Dove)
your \'rosy glasses\' - perspective\'s adding a positive twist to your...
October 5th, 2020 03:38 - Not All Nations Have Pearls (Gerrylegister)
truly: what is value, when the scales themselves are so far removed from...
October 5th, 2020 03:32 - Blackhole (FarscapEddie)
a pearl of intrigue wrapped in delectable rhymes,
well chosen image...
October 5th, 2020 03:27 - New Joys. (Goldfinch60)
soothing, even to those who can\'t claim to know of the grief you...
October 5th, 2020 03:19 - THE TIDE (Michael Edwards)
I see a cyclical pattern to most of nature and existence as a whole, so...
October 5th, 2020 03:11 - Wished-For (Fay Slimm.)
indeed, we live as much in the shared sorrow and joy of those who grace...
October 5th, 2020 03:07 - Fearless Faith - Isaiah Series (4) (Orchidee)
\'Though you as a worm, and I great
I leave you not to fate\'
a...
October 5th, 2020 03:03 - Stalled (Fay Slimm.)
\'Shall the caged heart\'s talons gnawing at need
not see night\'s silk...
October 2nd, 2020 04:34 - The World at My Table. (Goldfinch60)
one way to \'bring the world to you\', like the mindset, imagination...
October 2nd, 2020 04:30 - SAVE A SYLLABLE (Michael Edwards)
😂🤣😅😌....
🙂😄😆🤣😂...
😁😁😁
what a...
October 2nd, 2020 04:26 - AN ARMY OF TONGUE (Joe Marcello)
no Sir, not the anonymous sources - instead I urge you to search out the...
October 2nd, 2020 04:21 - Was it just a Dream (Dove)
oh snap, we both mused on dreaming in our last posts lol,
I like the...
October 2nd, 2020 04:17 - Love is not splendid (Trenz Pruca)
alarmingly those blisters manifest during swimming practise and that empty...
October 2nd, 2020 04:11 - Poetic Side – Page 6 (Nafis Light)
writes like this have much more value than their Poetic currency, for one...
October 2nd, 2020 04:04 - The Endless Cycle (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'He sang old songs, romanced the strong,
the weak then cast away
The...
October 2nd, 2020 03:58
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