Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- AUTUMN TO WINTER ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
good read, took me on a brief nostalgia trip to winter\'s where we had a...
November 30th, 2020 06:20 - The Jetway (Lowkey)
you have me picturing the moment when we exit a plane, good read
November 30th, 2020 06:09 - Half (Brittany Jo)
reads raw and bravely true
November 30th, 2020 06:07 - Song Of The Nightingale (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Today is but folly,
tomorrow a fool,
the past like fine wine ages...
November 30th, 2020 06:02 - Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley (Kevin Michael Bloor)
good read, like the imagery and relatability
November 30th, 2020 05:59 - A beggars banquet (RDS)
\'Plucking sour grapes, unripened off the vine. Making bitter wine with...
November 30th, 2020 05:41 - Caught You (Carolkirby1952)
witty and with much more depth than its seemingly cat-n-mouse...
November 30th, 2020 05:32 - GENDER NEUTRAL (Michael Edwards)
*Michael, your write triggered me - again, so I ended up on another tirade...
November 30th, 2020 05:28 - I didn\'t know this until you came to exist (Poetic Dan)
another of your life affirmingly exclamation write\'s that has me...
November 30th, 2020 04:34 - My Lady Was a Poem (Neville)
\'My lady
was a poem
just waiting to happen
On the lips of her...
November 28th, 2020 07:00 - Decisive (Fay Slimm.)
so immersive and vivid, a wonderful read you\'ve penned here Fay
November 28th, 2020 06:55 - Whittled By 9PM (Harry Atkinson)
admittedly I cant quite grasp the context or meaning but I appreciate the...
November 28th, 2020 06:52 - She Was My Muse (PoeticBiscuit)
wonderful flow, good write
November 28th, 2020 06:51 - Choice. (Goldfinch60)
so true, even the act of being able to read is sadly - a choice taken for...
November 28th, 2020 06:49 - summer No 17 (Dusk arising)
\'With a stolen kiss
. i watched a dream unfold in moonlit...
November 28th, 2020 06:47 - In the End (Neville)
Indeed!
if all fails: we of existence are aligned by the unfailing truth...
November 28th, 2020 06:46 - About The Rapist (SirenBrenda)
hope your words can give you a semblance of meditative equilibrium,...
November 28th, 2020 06:41 - Haiku (Jerry Reynolds)
wonderful sentiments, a comforting haiku with enough elements of nature to...
November 28th, 2020 06:38 - We are not in control (Tayama)
good read, direct in delivery yet still has a message that is in-itself...
November 28th, 2020 06:36 - Where Nobody Has Gone Before. (Goldfinch60)
lol, reads like a paragraph from hitchhikers guide to the galaxy
November 27th, 2020 03:55 - Destination unknown (Dakota)
\'But what does it mean to write words that will never be read like a tree...
November 27th, 2020 03:50 - The Girl Who Loaned Me A Pencil (Dylan Lawler)
A harrowing depiction of horrific tragedy, if it\'s an imagined tale or...
November 27th, 2020 03:42 - We sang the same songs (Trenz Pruca)
simple in delivery but penetrates with insightful precession at that raw...
November 27th, 2020 03:20 - Me & my Singing Bowl (Neville)
you have a seemingly innate ability to tease at the risqué borderline...
November 27th, 2020 03:04 - Home To Roost (Kevin Michael Bloor)
purely from a poetic perspective this is a good write, unfiltered in...
November 27th, 2020 02:53 - Covid 19 pain (RDS)
\'Covid was the cruelest blow to your lifestyle of pleasures retired,...
November 27th, 2020 02:47 - IF (Fay Slimm.)
a truly moving dedication Fay, you have some heart-wrenchingly tender...
November 26th, 2020 05:04 - HARD CHEESE (Michael Edwards)
Michael this theme is getting a bit cheesy, or maybe that\'s just me and...
November 26th, 2020 05:00 - I rhyme better than I can act (Poetic Dan)
great write,
we all tend to prance on our keyboard of high horses but...
November 26th, 2020 04:53 - lonely (Queer-with-a-pen)
distance is immeasurable in the realms of feeling\'s, warmth is the first...
November 26th, 2020 04:44 - Quarks and larks in apple trees (RDS)
\'We could build an end to humanity yet discover no sense of...
November 26th, 2020 04:28 - Sorrow\'s Season (Kevin Michael Bloor)
good read,
rare to come across conversational themed works so this was a...
November 26th, 2020 04:24 - 11. Humble B. Bumble : Bee-for (Aa Harvey)
ok, I think its time you changed your intro from story to Novella or even...
November 26th, 2020 04:18 - Challenge (Fay Slimm.)
\'Time has grinding anvils,
ego-made,
clothed with traps,
me-ism...
November 26th, 2020 04:07 - chemical strawberries (Conradconrad)
1) \'i\'ve seen further afield and turned my gaze
away from the scarred...
November 26th, 2020 03:59 - In My Mind. (Goldfinch60)
what a comfort your pain must be to Joyce - we never consider that side...
November 26th, 2020 03:37 - WORD OF THE YEAR 2020 ~ OXFORD ENGLISH DICTIONARY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
\'Vacations morphed to *Staycations* due to tra*vel restriction\'
a...
November 26th, 2020 03:20 - neu ernst / alt blau (Conradconrad)
1) \'beside: i begin where i left off...
from the cinema calender of...
November 24th, 2020 06:25 - Asking. (Fay Slimm.)
heart wrenchingly raw in its relatability and subtly simplistic...
November 24th, 2020 05:40 - the long goodnight (Dusk arising)
emotive writing, I like your use of everyday metaphors, it grounds the...
November 24th, 2020 05:16 - Nature\'s Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
good read and great timing with your picture, thanks for sharing
November 24th, 2020 05:08 - Those Who Would Love Light (Neville)
well Sir, this here be testimony to resulting fruition of poetry dipped in...
November 24th, 2020 05:05 - Under The Lens (Satishverma)
I shall just repeat \'just wow\' from now on, I lack the vocabulary to...
November 24th, 2020 04:56 - A Special Poet Friend of Mine (Kevin Michael Bloor)
good read
November 24th, 2020 04:49 - MISS SYLLA BERLES (Michael Edwards)
well I bow to the mastery that is Dusk Arising\'s comment above,
but for...
November 24th, 2020 04:40 - Scenes of the Spirit - Isaiah Series (26) (Orchidee)
\'And shall reprove with equity for the meek
Of the earth, the...
November 23rd, 2020 05:17 - Becoming...Human – The Last For 2020 (Nafis Light)
first and foremost: write for yourself,
let your words be a conversation...
November 23rd, 2020 05:10 - It Is So Easy. (Goldfinch60)
for a fellow foody like me, this here be true metaphorical lament of...
November 23rd, 2020 05:01 - UK CHRISTMAS 2020 STAMPS ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
never knew such stamps existed, (there is seemingly no end to ones...
November 23rd, 2020 04:53 - Retracing My Steps (Satishverma)
just wow!
wish I had a modicum of your talent
November 23rd, 2020 04:46 - Another Golden Dawn (Neville)
well, that\'s one memorable morning - Eos gifted you my friend, though...
November 23rd, 2020 04:40 - Android Analysis (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
as ever a thought provokingly prickly write, intuitively witty
November 23rd, 2020 04:29 - The Widecombe Fair Chestnut Mare (Alan .S. Jeeves)
beautifully constructed,
as ever I am left in awe at Poetry\'s endless...
November 23rd, 2020 04:26 - An Ordained Beauty (Pushpatuladhar)
what a detailed effort, while I could not appreciate the spiritual...
November 23rd, 2020 04:14 - Dirty Shoes (Jabberwocky)
great read,
I gravitate to the fun element you added (deliberately or...
November 23rd, 2020 04:03 - Helping hands (RDS)
great read!
thirty years a Londoner and I still revel in any reveal of...
November 23rd, 2020 03:57 - With Every Step. (Goldfinch60)
\'My River had reached out to me
And said “Why are you ignoring...
November 23rd, 2020 03:43 - An Ecopoem (Satishverma)
\'Beneath moonlight
dark tears of stones flow.
Someday the mountains...
November 23rd, 2020 03:34 - Need (Christina8)
good read
November 23rd, 2020 03:31 - Picture You (Clara)
\'When fear knocked upon my door and my heart was a heavy weight upon the...
November 23rd, 2020 03:30 - It is Autumn now (Trenz Pruca)
I\'m hot blooded by nature and so tend to favour cooler climates but...
November 21st, 2020 05:37 - This Oyster Shell (Clara)
I like your direct voice and engaging metaphors, with an ending structured...
November 21st, 2020 05:31 - Reflections on ecstasy (RDS)
such emotive imagery utilised deftly, entwined within a seamlessly natural...
November 21st, 2020 05:23 - Reflections on Love. (Fay Slimm.)
wise words, from one who has a clear understanding of true love\'s inner...
November 21st, 2020 05:19 - UNSAMES (2) 1-3 (Michael Edwards)
Brilliant!
and great news about Jeanne, stay strong my friend
November 20th, 2020 04:58 - How Far. (Goldfinch60)
\'reflection is indeed a tool of evolution\', we must recognise our...
November 20th, 2020 04:55 - An Ocean Speaks (Satishverma)
wonderful! just that title alone is worth the entry fee, but then you...
November 20th, 2020 04:50 - That’s life (Arazimus)
Hate, is ever frail - like all fuel, it burns boldly wild and is seemingly...
November 20th, 2020 04:38 - My Liege (Kurt Philip Behm)
but \'Why\' is ever the answer, to it all...
November 20th, 2020 04:26 - Love Poem For a Cloud (Noveyre)
\'You, a stranger,
a curl of white
against the blue
that keeps me...
November 20th, 2020 04:24 - Walk Away (Clara)
wonderful, so real and written with such succinct and emotive word...
November 20th, 2020 04:22 - Time & space (Poetic Dan)
Brilliant!
November 20th, 2020 04:16 - Silent Music (Fay Slimm.)
I admit I\'m a little confused Fay, but the imagery was so immersive I...
November 20th, 2020 04:14 - Prosperity Promises - Isaiah Series (23) (Orchidee)
\'The sun shall no more be their light
Nor the moon shall shine then...
November 19th, 2020 05:12 - Into Another Place. (Goldfinch60)
nothing better, than the marriage of another\'s creativity to our own...
November 19th, 2020 05:09 - PRECOGNITION (Michael Edwards)
brilliant last line!
for some reason all I can see in your picture are...
November 19th, 2020 05:04 - Windfallen (Neville)
really like your last stanza and the \'feel - tone\' of the voice in this...
November 19th, 2020 04:58 - Isle of Skye (Clara)
good read,
but I struggled with the font a little
November 19th, 2020 04:49 - vacations (Jackeggz)
like your quirky flow and the lack of punctuation works well
November 19th, 2020 04:45 - If You’re Anything Like Me (Jbritt321)
a fun read
November 19th, 2020 04:37 - VACCINES RULE KO ! A PANDEMIC PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
let\'s hope it can help, at least it sounds like a decisively proactive...
November 19th, 2020 04:34 - Feelings (Fay Slimm.)
elegantly executed, an immersive write with an element of inclusivity - as...
November 19th, 2020 04:19 - Trench Life (Neville)
a moving and dispiritingly vivid tribute, good write
& may we never...
November 19th, 2020 04:14 - Beginner to Winner. (Goldfinch60)
very true Andy
November 19th, 2020 04:06 - The Stillness (Jesse G.)
like the self-empowerment element to your voice
November 19th, 2020 04:04 - ALWAYS ENCOURAGE EACH OTHER ~ A PRACTICAL PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Amen!
November 17th, 2020 05:32 - Hippies. (Goldfinch60)
totally agree,
though with a reminder to enjoy the pleasure\'s of life...
November 17th, 2020 05:31 - SHORTLIES (4) (Michael Edwards)
erm try a joke, that doesn\'t chalk: like \'how much weight, in the wisdom...
November 17th, 2020 05:27 - Short stories light our lives (Trenz Pruca)
what language is this? forgive my ignorance I just found the alphabet so...
November 17th, 2020 05:10 - Give me attention (Pberko1)
look in the mirror, find that gaze that judges you so harshly, smile back...
November 17th, 2020 05:04 - Half Life (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Echo’s howling endlessly
—prophecy reminds\'
good write, I posted...
November 17th, 2020 04:48 - 2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie) (Aa Harvey)
wonderfully intriguing premise, has me thinking it could be start of a...
November 17th, 2020 04:46 - please, so much (Dusk arising)
a great read, is there such a thing as tasteful eroticism or did you just...
November 17th, 2020 04:34 - Mediators of life (Poetic Dan)
again wonderfully life affirming, a good read
November 17th, 2020 04:30 - Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.)
\'I saw wisdom delivering itself to fate\'
just wow!!!
loved that whole...
November 17th, 2020 04:09 - Keys Lost. (Goldfinch60)
fun read Andy
November 17th, 2020 04:05 - WATERFALLS ~ A FLOW SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
oh I agree, nothing more magnificent in Nature,
sadly I barely remember...
November 17th, 2020 04:04 - Atlas (PoeticBiscuit)
wonderful flow and yes physical strength alone is never enough, nor sadly...
November 17th, 2020 03:57 - Injurious Destiny (Eugene S.)
like the intensity, a good read
November 17th, 2020 03:45 - muse (Mysleze)
I\'m not so sure, it tends to be the jaggedly imperfect edges of our...
November 17th, 2020 03:41
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