Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- becalmed beyond escape (Dusk arising)
\'becalmed beyond escape
she took us
men of steel
wooden...
October 26th, 2020 04:50 - Us (Dasim)
bravely invasive in its level of detail and penned with its own winding...
October 26th, 2020 04:38 - My Invisible Hero (LeighB)
So glad I found this, in the words of John Keats:
\"Beauty is truth,...
October 26th, 2020 04:28 - Chaos (Catdeu)
in the word of Tom Cruise, you had me at:
\'serenity, my dear
i long for...
October 26th, 2020 04:12 - Transactional Love (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Brilliant!
October 26th, 2020 04:05 - Thoughts of a survivor (TheLonelyPoet90)
wonderfully impowering, we curate ourselves into what we want to believe...
October 26th, 2020 04:03 - fallen dreams (Dusk arising)
\'Fallen\': three times rang, in your lines: like the tap count to...
October 26th, 2020 03:52 - Nostalgia. (Fay Slimm.)
what a visceral depiction of scenic Sunset Fay,
October 26th, 2020 03:47 - Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
often Dylan Thomas\' words are utilised for times of struggle and...
October 26th, 2020 03:40 - Tempus Ephemera (Kurt Philip Behm)
thought provoking, reads like philosophically meditative questions on the...
October 26th, 2020 03:27 - Wasted eden (MelissaJA)
like the imagery and conversational tone of voice, while clearly...
October 26th, 2020 03:16 - Catching Myself (Satishverma)
\'The craft of harvesting
will not stand the acid test.
What do you see...
October 26th, 2020 03:08 - Dawn (Steve Unruh)
good write, wonderful imagery and tempo
October 26th, 2020 03:04 - I KID YOU NOT AT ALL (Michael Edwards)
wait until the Hispanic regions begin their version of \'cancel culture\'...
October 24th, 2020 04:50 - In The Last Century. (Goldfinch60)
distance is incomprehensible in its complexity,
light as time travel...
October 24th, 2020 04:19 - We Made It Another Day (Felicityjones)
a poignant message for these trouble times, good read
\'I know right now...
October 24th, 2020 04:07 - a date with death (Conradconrad)
1) \'seems like: perhaps i was a boy then...
and the beloved dog of the...
October 24th, 2020 03:59 - Commitment (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed! Although, our dilemma - at least initially, rests with the fact...
October 23rd, 2020 04:50 - VOYAGE AROUND MY FATHER (TheOzGreenMan)
wonderful dedication,
may your father rest in peace and father-Time...
October 23rd, 2020 04:40 - To the Light Outside my Window (Micromorth)
I like your attention to detail, imagine this took a few drafts to shape...
October 23rd, 2020 04:28 - Afraid (Dasim)
\'Or will your steps be heavy
With regret and loneliness as...
October 23rd, 2020 04:20 - Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo (Jarcher54)
I second everything that Dusk Arising so eloquently stated,
a great...
October 22nd, 2020 06:42 - Freedom Favour (Orchidee)
\'In this land of living
My cry I to you bring
Attend to me, I am...
October 22nd, 2020 06:36 - you ask me why? (Dusk arising)
Beautiful, imbued with the warmth that only \'being in love\' can bestow,...
October 22nd, 2020 06:24 - The Man From The Pru. (Goldfinch60)
the only part of your memories I can directly relate to is the milk...
October 22nd, 2020 06:20 - The Ocean (MMadrid)
I too share your fascination with the Sea and your picture just leaps-out,...
October 22nd, 2020 06:05 - the black cracovite & the three sisters amber (adventures in paragraph) (Conradconrad)
firstly, be wary of all the SA(ist\'s) - who equate using rulers to...
October 22nd, 2020 05:59 - Scary Sister -- A Fun Halloween Poem For My Kids (BlueHeron77)
Beautiful, and that\'s just your Author\'s comment!
Nothing more pleasing...
October 22nd, 2020 05:00 - Joker44’s Side – I Play (Nafis Light)
what a timely write of positivity, thanks for sharing the good vibes
October 22nd, 2020 04:52 - Little Man (Dasim)
like Dusk Arising mentioned already, I like the beat to your writes - even...
October 22nd, 2020 04:50 - Hold Hard. (Fay Slimm.)
wonderful picture and words Fay, when viewing sunsets or sunrises near...
October 22nd, 2020 04:43 - R E S P O N S I B I L I T Y ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Congratulations! Glad that you\'re both reaping the fruits of your...
October 22nd, 2020 04:34 - Lost Pictures. (Goldfinch60)
I relate completely Andy, the only time I guarantee I have a decent camera...
October 22nd, 2020 04:30 - UNSAME 1 - 3 (Michael Edwards)
wonderful artwork, I spent a few minutes just engrossed in all its little...
October 22nd, 2020 04:24 - Moonshine Cherries (Goddess of the Mist)
good read, not sure if intentional but this has a light touch and a fun...
October 22nd, 2020 04:09 - An Electric Affair (Satishverma)
brilliant!
I will admit, I read your write\'s hoping to learn as much as...
October 22nd, 2020 04:05 - Night Visit (Dasim)
like the unfolding thought patterns in your write, wonderful imagery and...
October 22nd, 2020 04:01 - SONG OF A FIST (Ifeanyichukwu)
what a timely write, my thoughts are with you and my hopes are that common...
October 22nd, 2020 03:46 - The Way, The Truth, and The Life -- Triplet of Haikus on John 14:6 (BlueHeron77)
apart from \'the way\', I like how you try and respect the ethos of the...
October 22nd, 2020 03:32 - But (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Are we doomed to be unhappy,
or does it involve a choice
Do our...
October 22nd, 2020 03:26 - I maybe poor but I love her (ShanikiSmith)
a wonderful dedication, raw emotion on our reading platter
October 22nd, 2020 03:22 - A Beautiful Ghost (Gerrylegister)
\'Your chastised mind stirring to strive,
Dare the sun to rise again and...
October 20th, 2020 03:26 - The Truth, My Truth (KayDied)
Today won\'t be your last day
and Tomorrow need not be the \'First\' of...
October 20th, 2020 03:23 - One Rose Shall Hint When Summer Wakes (WilliamEdwardNight)
wonderful read!
like your well measured tone, imagery and metaphors...
October 20th, 2020 03:08 - Humanity in Process (Dlherrmann)
poignant questions that is relatable to 99% of humanity, if we look back -...
October 20th, 2020 03:01 - All on a pleasant meadow (Jarcher54)
wonderful artwork and I like the imagery in your write,
very creative -...
October 20th, 2020 02:54 - Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
you certainly can\'t deny the chemistry in the love - you depict so...
October 20th, 2020 02:49 - Late (Dasim)
wonderful flow, it reads like a refreshing stream paving its own path down...
October 20th, 2020 02:45 - A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
a witty write, just reading it makes me crave a curry,
I\'m with you...
October 19th, 2020 06:38 - Regret (Fay Slimm.)
such a subtle depiction of the nuances within Regret, sacrifice of self -...
October 19th, 2020 06:33 - NIGELLA (Michael Edwards)
lmao!
I agree she definitely profited from showcasing the elegant...
October 19th, 2020 03:26 - go then (Dusk arising)
\'until i may one day
follow,
take with you the love
of lost...
October 19th, 2020 03:07 - Ode to Calochilus robertsonii, or Purple beard orchid. (TheOzGreenMan)
good write!
(when referencing I always try to share a link to the...
October 19th, 2020 02:54 - at a hospilatier\'s request (Conradconrad)
1) \'ask them...
to drink alone...
and tell them: would you
please...
October 19th, 2020 02:48 - The Face (Dasim)
it is necessary to look for meaning, to confront the reality of not...
October 19th, 2020 02:13 - Waiting to Start (Tayama)
I like the feel and tone of your write, there is an element of genuine...
October 19th, 2020 01:54 - A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Hoping for the best for you and Jeanne, glad you utilised the outlet...
October 17th, 2020 04:17 - in fields of green (Dusk arising)
\'For each bears a name, a soul departed.
Young men from far away brought...
October 17th, 2020 04:08 - Very,Very Fast Food. (Goldfinch60)
\'Talk about fast food,
I had seen rashers of bacon
Thicker than that...
October 17th, 2020 03:58 - Waving at Dolphins (Neville)
beautiful rhyme and tone, immersive imagery and crisp clear...
October 17th, 2020 03:48 - Another Time (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
subtly layered yet defiantly loud, imbued with the crisp diction of...
October 16th, 2020 04:38 - Staying Alive (Lorna)
wonderful,
I would think such a write would have a healing effect on the...
October 16th, 2020 04:29 - I THINK, I HEAR (Joe Marcello)
thought provoking words to meditate over, though always remember: heinous...
October 16th, 2020 04:19 - walking, \"again\" (Conradconrad)
1) \'that painting is all eye
that poetry is all ear and perhaps
the...
October 16th, 2020 04:09 - WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF WASPS ? ~ AN AFFIRMATIVE PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
well I for one am glad Neville\'s write nudged loose this informative drop...
October 16th, 2020 03:47 - of november fallen (Dusk arising)
Brilliant!
the picture was so atmospheric as well, as a whole: a...
October 16th, 2020 03:37 - Revitalize. (Fay Slimm.)
didactic in tone
yet not - a clone,
generously shared wisdom and a good...
October 16th, 2020 03:24 - LIMERICK No 69 (Michael Edwards)
brevity in its crisp message, yet unimposing while enticing with its...
October 15th, 2020 04:28 - Wasps (Neville)
a certain Queen might dispute your disregard for their ferocious cousins,...
October 15th, 2020 04:19 - LIVERPOOL ~ SILENCED BY COVID 19 ~ AN ACROSTIC EULOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
YNWA!
October 15th, 2020 04:13 - The Sheets and Time (Lorna)
I like the metaphor, there is an off-kilter and quirky quality to the...
October 15th, 2020 04:11 - Moses was a strange man (Trenz Pruca)
2020 and we still look down at those pigeons with their miniscule brain...
October 15th, 2020 03:59 - All Roads Lead...To Spinoza (Kurt Philip Behm)
good write
October 15th, 2020 03:31 - i am here by some irritating conjunction of bad jokes (Conradconrad)
I\'ll highlight what you try to hide:
1) \'my new earned pleasure:
to...
October 15th, 2020 03:28 - the downstream tide (Dusk arising)
I admire the poetic ambition in your write, so free and defiant
October 15th, 2020 03:09 - Family Plowing (Dlherrmann)
very much like the Seamus Heaney poem...
October 15th, 2020 03:03 - Death Missed. (Goldfinch60)
wonderfully uplifting read to start a day with, thank you for sharing
October 15th, 2020 02:53 - Left Behind. (Fay Slimm.)
I like the spacing, reemphasises the wondrously dramatic nuances in...
October 15th, 2020 02:50 - Tracks. (Fay Slimm.)
I don\'t think it\'s an exaggeration to say the Thatcher\'s era...
October 13th, 2020 04:40 - The Four Letter Word (Lorna)
nice rhyme scheme - elegantly simple in message and tone,
wonderful read
October 13th, 2020 04:24 - Dashing sculptures (Straight circles)
teases readers to delve into their own corridors of hidden memories,...
October 13th, 2020 04:22 - EFFECT OF COVID 19 ~ A 6 3 5 LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
like your songs choice, my personal COVID19 song choice (and mantra) has...
October 13th, 2020 04:14 - Anxiety (93tmarie)
\'Vision is blurry
Words don\'t flow out
You just considered
You\'re...
October 13th, 2020 04:01 - Sometime Life Happens. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ll second everything that Neville eloquently said!
wonderfully...
October 13th, 2020 03:55 - Awayness (Fay Slimm.)
learned a new word, gained a new fav to add to my re-reading buffet: guess...
October 13th, 2020 03:51 - The Great Debate. (Trenz Pruca)
what an acute portrait you have penned in that first stanza, would be...
October 12th, 2020 05:49 - Yellow Umbrella\'s (Neville)
lol, what delightfully \'free\' partner(s) you have encountered, how lucky...
October 12th, 2020 05:45 - Lunch at My House (Lorna)
an apt metaphor for so much about life, reminds me of the opening stanza...
October 12th, 2020 05:37 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
the ageless representation of Moon and Sun as lover\'s kept apart, but...
October 12th, 2020 05:29 - Rosalie Avila (Nikhil Vadher)
wonderful sentiment and message in your write
October 12th, 2020 05:13 - Taste of Temptation (Dove)
effortless flow and a wonderful portrait of attraction and yearning in...
October 12th, 2020 05:11 - My Memoir in honor of Taliesin (Trenz Pruca)
outside of the last two lines, there is a balance of multiply angled...
October 12th, 2020 05:05 - Last one before sun (Poetic Dan)
\'No matter the amount of rational thinking, I feel emotion rooted...
October 12th, 2020 04:48 - \'Hope,\' I told her (Abu Aeesh)
firstly, your perfectly chosen picture immediately gifts the reader the...
October 12th, 2020 04:37 - Another One of Those Times. (Goldfinch60)
sweet words - as always, a seemingly depthless pool of inspiration you...
October 12th, 2020 04:31 - Peoples Praises (Orchidee)
I care-not for theological merits of other\'s argued perspectives, but I...
October 12th, 2020 04:26 - Where do Dreams Go (Neville)
or maybe, just maybe if hindsight were to arrive early - for once, he...
October 12th, 2020 04:10 - Woollen Stockings (Neville)
... and with the Daughters parents dreaming of a day when she can play...
October 9th, 2020 04:35 - Happy Trad. (Goldfinch60)
yup, tap - tapping away
October 9th, 2020 04:19 - ...AND... (Michael Edwards)
I\'m as lost as Glenit\'s feet with this one Michael,
a questioning of...
October 9th, 2020 04:17
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