Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- Dreaming of Tomorrow (Gerrylegister)
\'Through the darkness, I feel lonely.
Sometimes I weep and fall...
December 8th, 2020 05:27 - Spiders (Jerry Reynolds)
ok so I aint got time for spiders (some of nature\'s cruellest creatures),...
December 8th, 2020 05:14 - 22. Humble B. Bumble : Bee Beautiful (Aa Harvey)
Bee great if time would allow all to heal and flow like honey and we can...
December 8th, 2020 05:05 - Swansong (Neville)
lol, this is so relatable to us scribblers, what W B Yeats took a page to...
December 8th, 2020 05:02 - If i could stay (Dusk arising)
wow, damn what a FIND!
thank you for not posting in a while, truly: or...
December 7th, 2020 07:21 - Knowledge & unknown (Poetic Dan)
\'For many people you can blag, even yourself into facts but nature and...
December 7th, 2020 07:13 - Life Song. (Fay Slimm.)
wonderful, a write that can help bring an uplifting mood to this year\'s...
December 7th, 2020 07:05 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (4) (Michael Edwards)
lol, true: it\'s those silent, stealthy - that are the most deadly
December 7th, 2020 06:57 - Brubeck Lives On. (Goldfinch60)
sadly this music is new to me, but enjoyed the clip,
may he rest in
December 7th, 2020 06:55 - A Higher Enchantment (Kurt Philip Behm)
indeed, what a wonderful read,
find myself just nodding away in
December 7th, 2020 06:33 - Fun Stuff (Jerry Reynolds)
lol, witty, worth reading again just to make sure I didn\'t miss any of...
December 7th, 2020 06:29 - It’s Christmas (Ajon4wheels)
well, if I wasn\'t looking forward to the festive season before: I am now,...
December 7th, 2020 06:24 - Poetry is guiding me (Poetic Dan)
good write, you never shirk from telling it as it is - always, so...
December 7th, 2020 06:15 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (3) (Michael Edwards)
yikes, I must reflect on the sense of guilt that resonates deep within,...
December 7th, 2020 06:12 - Carbonito de Sophie (Neville)
Beautifully worded, almost as simplistic in wording as those child fairy...
December 7th, 2020 06:01 - To School. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant!
so undeniably relatable, mainly due to your insightful choice,...
December 7th, 2020 05:54 - Two for one because you are worth it! (Poetic Dan)
in the words of Jerry Maguire - you had me at:
\'Not sure what to write...
December 4th, 2020 07:26 - If (Tayama)
a wonderfully modern take on Kipling\'s...
December 4th, 2020 07:19 - Locked In (Fay Slimm.)
what a cascading serenade of soothing wisdom you\'ve penned dear Fay,...
December 4th, 2020 07:13 - Manifesto or Look Beyond the Name. (Doggerel Dave)
Brilliant!
when we learn to hear that voice of free thought emanating...
December 4th, 2020 06:58 - Marvellous Marriage (Orchidee)
a person of faith with the ability to question and speak-out against the...
December 4th, 2020 06:05 - Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville)
wonderfully simple but exponentially insightful, I imagine one could...
December 3rd, 2020 06:42 - Strictly, Here I Come! (Goldfinch60)
I guess a certain someone, you treasure close in that place where your...
December 3rd, 2020 06:24 - DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (1) (Michael Edwards)
I like how you\'re developing those small pattern pictures from a few...
December 3rd, 2020 06:17 - Act of Defiance (Eugene S.)
a wonderful write and image
December 3rd, 2020 06:04 - lost skin (Siranswerer)
\'I write rhyming exercises,
Nonsensical sentences, strung...
December 3rd, 2020 06:01 - Collecting Flowers (Poetrygurl98)
no my dear, the morose reality of humanity is we\'re made more of...
December 3rd, 2020 05:53 - Dust (Birddie Jane)
all puzzles come boxed - in shattered pieces, until that fateful day when...
December 3rd, 2020 05:35 - Daylight Robbery (Harry Atkinson)
I admire the control in your write, let it all out, every last ounce -...
December 3rd, 2020 05:13 - random thoughts inspired on walks experiencing life through five senses (Jerry Reynolds)
bright petals
glistening eager
windswept glum,
a good read, thanks for...
December 3rd, 2020 05:05 - 17. Humble B. Bumble : It will never bee (Aa Harvey)
oh no, poor humble losing out to that \'Tiny\' dancer, (well with the...
December 3rd, 2020 04:26 - December Sunset (Fay Slimm.)
from picture to very last full stop: this here be Art, immersive yet...
December 3rd, 2020 04:05 - In reflection (RDS)
a wonderful nature walk: within words,
immersive writing in the...
December 3rd, 2020 03:56 - RECALLING (Michael Edwards)
what a seamless flow of remembrance, exquisitely depicting a treasured...
December 3rd, 2020 03:50 - With Nature Once More (Goldfinch60)
agree, nothing like that symphony shower of glorious nature to flow and...
December 3rd, 2020 03:36 - MORNING HAS BROKEN ~ AGAIN AMEN ! ~ A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN)
great last stanza, a wonderfully uplifting read - despite containing some...
December 3rd, 2020 03:26 - longings and losses (Krishna hari)
\'show, not tell\' at its smooth flowing best, thanks for sharing
December 3rd, 2020 03:13 - A Song About a Song (Quemis)
good write, like the way you weaved the same theme from start to finish,...
December 3rd, 2020 03:10 - The Truth (John McChord)
well, now we\'re playing the game of real Poetry and you Sir, bring a...
December 3rd, 2020 03:06 - Peace Prominent - Isaiah Series (29) (Orchidee)
\'Shall beat their swords into plow-shares
Beat spears to pruning knives,...
December 1st, 2020 07:06 - CAD. (Goldfinch60)
oh the duality of humanity, see I crave to cry Amen to your potent...
December 1st, 2020 07:00 - I DREW (Michael Edwards)
\'colour(ed)\' as a stand alone word is not offensive my sharp witted...
December 1st, 2020 06:50 - My Poetic Side (RDS)
like I say, when all else fails, lean on the words of true genius: alas,...
December 1st, 2020 06:23 - Body Song (Lovedud)
you have a talent for vividly immersive phrasing and uniquely quirky...
December 1st, 2020 06:17 - The Sun (SirenBrenda)
thank you for introducing me to the word flagitious, a good read
December 1st, 2020 05:34 - Six Ways from Sunday (Kurt Philip Behm)
worth a few reads, to let this knag of a write: nag, at those stifled...
December 1st, 2020 05:31 - traffic light boy (Tylerintheclouds)
like that you purposely group your imagery and metaphors to make your...
December 1st, 2020 05:09 - The boat in the harbour. (Marymoon)
you took me on a journey as stormy and rewarding as Melville, though...
December 1st, 2020 05:06 - 16. Humble B. Bumble : Beeloved? (Aa Harvey)
\'Sorry Bruv, I only know real love, and not infatuation.
You like her,...
December 1st, 2020 04:58 - OF LOVE WRITTEN (RDS)
brilliantly well crafted, couplets weaved seamlessly aside off-rhyming...
December 1st, 2020 04:48 - Remaining Span (Suresh)
really well navigated flow, with brevity of language, a rewarding read
December 1st, 2020 04:41 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
\'emptied desire to its deepest dregs\',
well that\'s one very vivid book...
December 1st, 2020 04:38 - Silly Little Rascal (Harry Atkinson)
wonderful characterisation of a self-portrait whilst negotiation a...
November 30th, 2020 06:32 - Life Changer. (Goldfinch60)
like the twist Andy, a write imbued with life affirming positivity,
good...
November 30th, 2020 06:27 - Curveball (PoeticBiscuit)
like the confident tone, has me imagining a young father using these words...
November 30th, 2020 06:25 - AUTUMN TO WINTER ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
good read, took me on a brief nostalgia trip to winter\'s where we had a...
November 30th, 2020 06:20 - The Jetway (Lowkey)
you have me picturing the moment when we exit a plane, good read
November 30th, 2020 06:09 - Half (Brittany Jo)
reads raw and bravely true
November 30th, 2020 06:07 - Song Of The Nightingale (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\'Today is but folly,
tomorrow a fool,
the past like fine wine ages...
November 30th, 2020 06:02 - Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley (Kevin Michael Bloor)
good read, like the imagery and relatability
November 30th, 2020 05:59 - A beggars banquet (RDS)
\'Plucking sour grapes, unripened off the vine. Making bitter wine with...
November 30th, 2020 05:41 - Caught You (Carolkirby1952)
witty and with much more depth than its seemingly cat-n-mouse...
November 30th, 2020 05:32 - GENDER NEUTRAL (Michael Edwards)
*Michael, your write triggered me - again, so I ended up on another tirade...
November 30th, 2020 05:28 - I didn\'t know this until you came to exist (Poetic Dan)
another of your life affirmingly exclamation write\'s that has me...
November 30th, 2020 04:34 - My Lady Was a Poem (Neville)
\'My lady
was a poem
just waiting to happen
On the lips of her...
November 28th, 2020 07:00 - Decisive (Fay Slimm.)
so immersive and vivid, a wonderful read you\'ve penned here Fay
November 28th, 2020 06:55 - Whittled By 9PM (Harry Atkinson)
admittedly I cant quite grasp the context or meaning but I appreciate the...
November 28th, 2020 06:52 - She Was My Muse (PoeticBiscuit)
wonderful flow, good write
November 28th, 2020 06:51 - Choice. (Goldfinch60)
so true, even the act of being able to read is sadly - a choice taken for...
November 28th, 2020 06:49 - summer No 17 (Dusk arising)
\'With a stolen kiss
. i watched a dream unfold in moonlit...
November 28th, 2020 06:47 - In the End (Neville)
Indeed!
if all fails: we of existence are aligned by the unfailing truth...
November 28th, 2020 06:46 - About The Rapist (SirenBrenda)
hope your words can give you a semblance of meditative equilibrium,...
November 28th, 2020 06:41 - Haiku (Jerry Reynolds)
wonderful sentiments, a comforting haiku with enough elements of nature to...
November 28th, 2020 06:38 - We are not in control (Tayama)
good read, direct in delivery yet still has a message that is in-itself...
November 28th, 2020 06:36 - Where Nobody Has Gone Before. (Goldfinch60)
lol, reads like a paragraph from hitchhikers guide to the galaxy
November 27th, 2020 03:55 - Destination unknown (Dakota)
\'But what does it mean to write words that will never be read like a tree...
November 27th, 2020 03:50 - The Girl Who Loaned Me A Pencil (Dylan Lawler)
A harrowing depiction of horrific tragedy, if it\'s an imagined tale or...
November 27th, 2020 03:42 - We sang the same songs (Trenz Pruca)
simple in delivery but penetrates with insightful precession at that raw...
November 27th, 2020 03:20 - Me & my Singing Bowl (Neville)
you have a seemingly innate ability to tease at the risqué borderline...
November 27th, 2020 03:04 - Home To Roost (Kevin Michael Bloor)
purely from a poetic perspective this is a good write, unfiltered in...
November 27th, 2020 02:53 - Covid 19 pain (RDS)
\'Covid was the cruelest blow to your lifestyle of pleasures retired,...
November 27th, 2020 02:47 - IF (Fay Slimm.)
a truly moving dedication Fay, you have some heart-wrenchingly tender...
November 26th, 2020 05:04 - HARD CHEESE (Michael Edwards)
Michael this theme is getting a bit cheesy, or maybe that\'s just me and...
November 26th, 2020 05:00 - I rhyme better than I can act (Poetic Dan)
great write,
we all tend to prance on our keyboard of high horses but...
November 26th, 2020 04:53 - lonely (Queer-with-a-pen)
distance is immeasurable in the realms of feeling\'s, warmth is the first...
November 26th, 2020 04:44 - Quarks and larks in apple trees (RDS)
\'We could build an end to humanity yet discover no sense of...
November 26th, 2020 04:28 - Sorrow\'s Season (Kevin Michael Bloor)
good read,
rare to come across conversational themed works so this was a...
November 26th, 2020 04:24 - 11. Humble B. Bumble : Bee-for (Aa Harvey)
ok, I think its time you changed your intro from story to Novella or even...
November 26th, 2020 04:18 - Challenge (Fay Slimm.)
\'Time has grinding anvils,
ego-made,
clothed with traps,
me-ism...
November 26th, 2020 04:07 - chemical strawberries (Conradconrad)
1) \'i\'ve seen further afield and turned my gaze
away from the scarred...
November 26th, 2020 03:59 - In My Mind. (Goldfinch60)
what a comfort your pain must be to Joyce - we never consider that side...
November 26th, 2020 03:37 - WORD OF THE YEAR 2020 ~ OXFORD ENGLISH DICTIONARY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
\'Vacations morphed to *Staycations* due to tra*vel restriction\'
a...
November 26th, 2020 03:20 - neu ernst / alt blau (Conradconrad)
1) \'beside: i begin where i left off...
from the cinema calender of...
November 24th, 2020 06:25 - Asking. (Fay Slimm.)
heart wrenchingly raw in its relatability and subtly simplistic...
November 24th, 2020 05:40 - the long goodnight (Dusk arising)
emotive writing, I like your use of everyday metaphors, it grounds the...
November 24th, 2020 05:16 - Nature\'s Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
good read and great timing with your picture, thanks for sharing
November 24th, 2020 05:08 - Those Who Would Love Light (Neville)
well Sir, this here be testimony to resulting fruition of poetry dipped in...
November 24th, 2020 05:05 - Under The Lens (Satishverma)
I shall just repeat \'just wow\' from now on, I lack the vocabulary to...
November 24th, 2020 04:56 - A Special Poet Friend of Mine (Kevin Michael Bloor)
good read
November 24th, 2020 04:49 - MISS SYLLA BERLES (Michael Edwards)
well I bow to the mastery that is Dusk Arising\'s comment above,
but for...
November 24th, 2020 04:40
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