Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek

• The Day The Carousel Stopped (DesertWords) deep, deep insight to the fallible aspects within humankind, some thought...
  August 27th, 2020 03:05
• Morning Landscape (Satishverma) wonderful! I wish I wasn\'t as ignorant of some of the context you were...
  August 27th, 2020 02:45
• Behind Their Peers! (Goldfinch60) \'Are not children due equal education?\' what a pertinent question in any...
  August 27th, 2020 02:39
• Wise Ways To Walk (Orchidee) Psalm verses are some of the Poetic works to have ever been...
  August 27th, 2020 02:31
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (9-12) (Michael Edwards) these are getting edgy, also is Glenit facing backwards? lol I also think...
  August 27th, 2020 02:24
• If. (Fay Slimm.) If, Rudyard Kipling wrote with the empathetic grace of a liberated...
  August 25th, 2020 03:56
• Why Do I Love Thee (Neville) so glad I skulked about long enough in your catalogue to find this gem,...
  August 25th, 2020 03:38
• giggle strips (Dusk arising) like the playful rhythm that reinforces the witty tone and highlights the...
  August 25th, 2020 03:22
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (1-4) (Michael Edwards) I appreciate the inclusivity of your judgemental eyes: no hat types were...
  August 25th, 2020 03:14
• Bohemian Rhapsody. (Goldfinch60) life wouldn\'t be so precious if it weren\'t so damn elusive... I say...
  August 25th, 2020 03:08
• Drop Me off @ the Next Stop (Neville) like the play between the title and the poem itself, sobering truths you...
  August 25th, 2020 02:57
• MUSIC ~ MUSIC ~ MUSIC 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 ESSENTIAL FOOD OF LIFE ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) indeed, where would we be without a rhythmic tune or two, to sway along -...
  August 24th, 2020 05:29
• Bridges (Neville) oh my talented friend how deftly you capture those wishful winds of young...
  August 24th, 2020 05:18
• Watching. (Fay Slimm.) instinctively moving, reads like a diary of a young heart\'s: untainted...
  August 24th, 2020 05:08
• Licking Razor Blades (Syd) you have an instinctive talent for seamless rhythm, though bleak in...
  August 24th, 2020 04:59
• Tosca Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) dramatic and moving accompaniment to the video, well measured
  August 24th, 2020 04:39
• Sun Shy (Neville) entertainingly witty, a skip - back to days of eager pulses, with...
  August 24th, 2020 04:35
• Dream (Rose~) \'Do not listen to those, who do not wish to dream with...
  August 24th, 2020 04:24
• Battle of the Somme (Gavin) Amen! Brilliantly worded, I shall never tire of works penned in honour...
  August 24th, 2020 04:18
• Full Spate. (Fay Slimm.) the first deep breath I take after reading one of your nature poems, is...
  August 24th, 2020 04:10
• Beautiful Contradictions (Neville) I really like this style/form of delivery you\'ve used lately, engaging,...
  August 22nd, 2020 03:44
• Lush (Fay Slimm.) \'Deep lush of bunched purple winds in trust around...
  August 22nd, 2020 03:39
• IDIOMS REMODELED (5-8) (Michael Edwards) witty and light-hearted but it also makes you think a little more about...
  August 22nd, 2020 03:03
• Carol\'s Autumn. (Goldfinch60) wonderful picture, the wind swept wrath of mother nature in Autumn - I can...
  August 22nd, 2020 02:55
• about Lisa (Dusk arising) enticing with its simplicity, immersive with its complexity of...
  August 21st, 2020 05:12
• It’s called RAPE (Kaychee) there shall never be enough regret or apology in the world to heal some of...
  August 21st, 2020 05:06
• The Abdicate (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) brilliant imagery and seamless flow, well thought-out
  August 20th, 2020 05:43
• Tomorrow I won’t. (Madyson) yes, we need to shed: to make room for the \'better\' new I\'m drawn to...
  August 20th, 2020 05:38
• Natures Glory. (Goldfinch60) I too have been entrapped by the dazzling brilliance of that mesmeric...
  August 20th, 2020 05:19
• NO LITTER   (Michael Edwards) 😂 \'but there\'s one at each end\'... genius!
  August 20th, 2020 05:12
• Best (Fay Slimm.) Amen! an emotive tribute to that quickly burning - passion fuelled...
  August 20th, 2020 05:09
• Crimson Ribbon (Neville) subtle, ever so subtle in delivery but, thunderously poignant! indeed a...
  August 20th, 2020 05:00
• Void (Brycycle) \'everything\'s going to be ok\' because if you yourself can write it:...
  August 20th, 2020 04:48
• grey area (Madyson) I like the metaphors, I like the flow of your words and lines, but I...
  August 20th, 2020 04:38
• a little of England (Dusk arising) wonderfully uplifting! a timely write that will serenade some of the...
  August 20th, 2020 04:27
• NO CAT FOR ME (Michael Edwards) no cat for me, its my Husky \'Thor\' that barks with glee, with...
  August 20th, 2020 04:14
• Driving in the Rain. (Goldfinch60) I\'ll be truthful I was chuckling away after just reading the author\'s...
  August 20th, 2020 03:49
• Pretty as a Pin (Neville) my friend have you been reading Harry Flashman\'s tales - again... \'whey...
  August 20th, 2020 03:44
• My Speech to the Genie (MaddieJ) I think you have a genuine quality of relatability in your choice phrasing...
  August 20th, 2020 03:39
• body part (Dusk arising) like the twist, must have been fun to write, it definitely was to read...
  August 18th, 2020 03:08
• Wake up (Smileeshellyy) beautiful in its artistic ambition while exploding with raw untameable...
  August 18th, 2020 03:02
• A Mermaids Tale (Neville) a fairy tale grounded in the reality of intricate details, wonderfully...
  August 18th, 2020 02:36
• for VJ Day (Dusk arising) that second stanza got me well and good, a wonderfully tender and emotive...
  August 17th, 2020 04:35
• Chocolate City Baby (Narcisa) this is so raw, so true, so controlled: dripping with flow and beaming...
  August 17th, 2020 04:10
• Sleep\'s Acres. (Fay Slimm.) that last line is such a quirky twist - it anchors your chosen writing...
  August 17th, 2020 04:01
• Wax Butterflies (Neville) how easy your words flow, tripping us from one stanza to the next, simple...
  August 17th, 2020 03:45
• I AM The Resurrection And The Life - Part 2 (Orchidee) Lazarus: the \'Phoenix\' of pre 19th century biblical authority, an...
  August 17th, 2020 03:36
• THE WATER CYCLES ~ AN ACROSTIC ~ BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) experiencing this past week of summer heatwave madness in \'rainy\' UK,...
  August 15th, 2020 06:49
• my reflection (Siranswerer) a measured and understated work of self-reflection, genuinely capturing...
  August 15th, 2020 06:44
• Steph at Thirty. (Goldfinch60) \'A wonderful relationship Where two generations apart Come together...
  August 15th, 2020 06:33
• Autumn-Imbued. (Fay Slimm.) \'sand lakes feeling like basins of gold water tickling my toes in...
  August 15th, 2020 06:20
• Theory of Endurance (Neville) conversational style poetry is so under valued, it allows for so much...
  August 15th, 2020 06:15
• Eye Due (MendedFences27) it definitely made me think and read other\'s comment responses and try to...
  August 15th, 2020 05:58
• Remains. (Fay Slimm.) what a subtle and contemplative last stanza, akin to Thomas Gray\'s...
  August 14th, 2020 06:38
• Maybe Old but Not Daft (Neville) this stirred up long forgotten flavours of Hemingway\'s: \'the old man and...
  August 14th, 2020 06:28
• Times of Youth. (Goldfinch60) still, my friend -your watch will stop again, lost within nature\'s...
  August 14th, 2020 06:22
• Who Said ! (Fay Slimm.) Amen! I like the jagged, sharp wordage you used purposely, poetry need...
  August 14th, 2020 06:12
• DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (2) (Michael Edwards) in this suffocating heatwave we are experiencing (UK), rain with a side of...
  August 12th, 2020 02:31
• All I ask (Aa Harvey) all you ask: is for everything! what a truthful testimony to how needy...
  August 11th, 2020 02:43
• DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (4) (Michael Edwards) the layers here...! so witty and full of diamond sharp sarcasm, as...
  August 11th, 2020 02:37
• Bottles of Pandemic. (Goldfinch60) though depicting a literal event of an everyday occurrence, there is a...
  August 11th, 2020 02:22
• Ms. Dickinson—Come out your room! (Noah Malice) She travelled the depths and breaths of human nature like few ever have or...
  August 10th, 2020 05:43
• MSM (Goldfinch60) an indicatively penned sharing of such feverishly felt indignation, I...
  August 10th, 2020 05:36
• Skin Deep (SharonMoemise) \'I\'m a woman who brought forth man and was left with silver...
  August 10th, 2020 05:16
• Contrivance. (Fay Slimm.) you have such a wide range in styles and tone, another insightful and...
  August 10th, 2020 05:09
• FUSION POETRY ~ OK ! ~ A SIX SIX TWO ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) sounds fun, I\'m too new to start my own but will participate...
  August 10th, 2020 05:04
• Freckles (Neville) wonderful, the last two stanzas are some of my favourite I have read on...
  August 10th, 2020 04:59
• fate hangs (Dusk arising) powerful and deftly woven words of volcanic rage, appreciated the broken...
  August 10th, 2020 04:54
• Something in the Air (Neville) the only other poem I recall using the word doilies (or doily to be...
  August 7th, 2020 04:30
• I Hear Music FIB. (Goldfinch60) indeed! its so essential, that even nature provided us with a pulsating...
  August 7th, 2020 04:18
• I. (Chanel T.) more power to you Sister, soar high, soar free and soar with those...
  August 7th, 2020 04:12
• CONVENIENCE STORE (Joe Marcello) love the title, adds such brevity to the powerful statement of truth you...
  August 7th, 2020 04:08
• A CLEAN SHEET ~ A PANTOUM ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) the never ending struggle to assimilate faith as close to its orthodox...
  August 7th, 2020 03:59
• all i ask (Queer-with-a-pen) wonderful, simplicity is so overlooked in our strive for poetic...
  August 7th, 2020 03:54
• Now looking Back (Neville) brilliant demonstration of how to instil effortless flow without using the...
  August 7th, 2020 03:35
• Nectar. (Fay Slimm.) wonderful throwback, sad that even smaller farms nowadays utilise...
  August 7th, 2020 03:25
• Quota Of Qualities (Orchidee) as spine-tingling, smooth and powerful: as Aretha\'s voice
  August 7th, 2020 03:17
• Two Way Clouds. (Goldfinch60) as vividly picturesque in written form as it must have been to view it in...
  August 7th, 2020 03:12
• Love-Light. (Fay Slimm.) wonderful flow, with a strong message if this was a song, I imagine...
  August 5th, 2020 04:26
• Finn (Benevolentbluebabe) I find myself imagining the voice of Captain Ahab from Moby-Dick, in your...
  August 5th, 2020 04:10
• Silence The Silence (Philip Daniel Cook) solitude is never daunting, if our mind continues to meditate and seek...
  August 5th, 2020 04:02
• NO LONGER HEARD (Michael Edwards) I think you captured that subtle state of introspection, spontaneous and...
  August 5th, 2020 03:57
• Homeless (Aa Harvey) what a true plague homelessness is and how concisely you\'ve captured its...
  August 4th, 2020 02:23
• Fantasia (Kurt Philip Behm) hindsight often has the luxury of relaxed perspectives, that the turmoil...
  August 4th, 2020 02:16
• peacemaker (Dusk arising) wonderful tribute, may he rest in peace
  August 4th, 2020 02:01
• Smile For All. (Goldfinch60) positivity in mindset, naturally translates to a wider lensed scope of the...
  August 4th, 2020 01:54
• DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (3) (Michael Edwards) - and swim in the hollowness of a life: without biting...
  August 3rd, 2020 05:57
• Changes (Fay Slimm.) A war cry: for mother nature, for Female superiority (at the very least...
  August 3rd, 2020 05:48
• 2020 THAT WAS THE YEAR .. ! ~ YEAR OF COVID 19 ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) what depths of insight you mined, so much truth here and far too sobering...
  August 3rd, 2020 05:28
• Star of Eternity. (Goldfinch60) how rare a gift, you\'ve been bestowed what a fitting testimony you\'ve...
  August 3rd, 2020 05:13
• SHE (TWENTY3) to Survive, and still stride on the Right side of life! what an...
  August 1st, 2020 04:44
• Guilt Trip. (Goldfinch60) reminds me of a poem by William Carlos Williams titled \'This is just to...
  August 1st, 2020 04:35
• Fido Rant (Orchidee) beggars belief, some 7 months and millions of cases - astonishing death...
  August 1st, 2020 04:26
• A FORTY~NINER ~ A FORM POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) I liked the film and soundtrack, informative write, thank you for keeping...
  August 1st, 2020 04:10
• DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (1) (Michael Edwards) truly insightful: what reflects is what awaits, once that last tip of...
  July 31st, 2020 05:45
• Struck Down. (Goldfinch60) a nice change of pace to begin my day with, lol
  July 29th, 2020 02:55
• Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor) As tender, immersive and proud: as Shelley\'s last note to Keats, my...
  July 29th, 2020 02:47
• pulsing fluff (Dusk arising) dreamy, with a soothing lyrical tone such a poetic lullaby
  July 29th, 2020 02:36
• Two Weeks in July (Neville) really appreciate your nuanced control throughout, unravelling your...
  July 28th, 2020 03:35
• Answered (Tayama) \'The(y) day she turned around to see who was speaking...I felt the need...
  July 28th, 2020 03:25