Comments on community poems by David Wakeling
- on writing a love letter (Peter Gates)
I tried to read this but words are missing so I gave up.
April 4th, 2023 06:17 - But Where Has The Time Gone? (Goldfinch60)
That the eternal question.Even Einstein himself said it was an illusion.If...
April 4th, 2023 01:15 - Understanding (Kmills)
I read this twice but I guess I am too dumb to understand it. Too many big...
April 4th, 2023 00:32 - The Prince Of Sorrow (Andino)
I read this twice but I don\'t believe in the devil so I couldn\'t relate.
April 4th, 2023 00:30 - Sea of Memories (Undreamed_friend)
This is okay.Very thoughtful and poetic
April 3rd, 2023 16:17 - The Sermon on the Hill. (David Wakeling)
Thanks for reading
April 2nd, 2023 05:51 - What Lies Inside (SweetOdodoGrass43)
I read this twice but there are too many big words.I didn\'t understand...
April 1st, 2023 20:40 - Jesus (Cedrick)
This is okay if you believe in fairy tales.
April 1st, 2023 20:39 - We are the stuff that screams are made of. (David Wakeling)
Thank you so much
April 1st, 2023 20:35 - Family in the Flowers (Ernie lawton)
This is okay.It needs the characters to be named.Otherwise it has no...
March 31st, 2023 16:11 - Dog Show (Hacklec)
I hate Dogs.They serve no purpose any more.The poem is tedious
March 31st, 2023 16:08 - The House of Tears. (David Wakeling)
Good for you.I\'ll be there as well once they let me out of the house of...
March 31st, 2023 02:10 - Pamela Strong and the Lemon Meringue Pie. (David Wakeling)
Thanks for reading
March 30th, 2023 23:12 - Lonely (Sorenbarrett)
Who cares??Go get a puppy.
March 30th, 2023 16:11 - overindulgent (Lovedud)
I read this twice but sadly the metaphor drowns the meaning.That\'s if...
March 30th, 2023 16:10
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