Comments on community poems by David Wakeling
- It started with an ending (A lockless key)
This is a bit confronting.Lots of unforgivable things here.Many...
March 9th, 2023 02:01 - Sands of Time (John_Bingham)
Time certainly is a mystery.Einstein said it was an illusion. It is used...
March 8th, 2023 05:14 - Gravity is love …gravity is a woman (Domilla)
This is certainly a tribute to Women.I am not sure all women can be...
March 8th, 2023 05:11 - The Train to Auschwitz. (David Wakeling)
Indeed.I hope so.All Nazi\'s should have a special place in Hell
March 7th, 2023 05:09 - Impeccable (Satishverma)
I read this twice but the metaphors drown the meaning so I really have no...
March 6th, 2023 20:58 - Newly-Felt. (Fay Slimm.)
I read this twice and while it is well written I am too dumb to understand...
March 6th, 2023 05:36 - The Beautiful World Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for reminding me how much I love music.Well done I am dusting...
March 6th, 2023 05:34 - Today I went to the Valley of Erudition. (David Wakeling)
Indeed it is.thank you for reading my work
March 6th, 2023 05:32 - Yasmen takes her Hajib off. (David Wakeling)
We do indeed.Thanks for commenting
March 5th, 2023 04:45 - Small To Large Steps. (Goldfinch60)
Life is a dance put you have to learn the steps.This is well done filled...
March 4th, 2023 04:48 - Ugly Sue. (David Wakeling)
Indeed.thanks for your comments
March 3rd, 2023 15:24 - Ok To Admit You’re Not Ok (Mark The Phenomenon)
This is okay.I like the message and the rhyme Well done
March 3rd, 2023 02:00 - The Pearl Necklace. (David Wakeling)
Thank you
March 2nd, 2023 05:29 - I am so sorry (Pocev_Gjoshe)
This is a chunky read.It is condescending to women and really quite...
March 1st, 2023 17:09 - The Tiger (Kinsley Lee)
This is okay.I like the rhyme and the use of adjectives.It seems...
March 1st, 2023 17:07
« Return to the profile of David Wakeling