Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• It’s no Citizen Kane (An Apocalypse in Noir) (Pazuzu) This is quite good.Reminds me of The Big Sleep or The Maltese Falcon.Gotta...
  March 9th, 2023 15:52
• It started with an ending (A lockless key) This is a bit confronting.Lots of unforgivable things here.Many...
  March 9th, 2023 02:01
• Sands of Time (John_Bingham) Time certainly is a mystery.Einstein said it was an illusion. It is used...
  March 8th, 2023 05:14
• Gravity is love …gravity is a woman (Domilla) This is certainly a tribute to Women.I am not sure all women can be...
  March 8th, 2023 05:11
• The Train to Auschwitz. (David Wakeling) Indeed.I hope so.All Nazi\'s should have a special place in Hell
  March 7th, 2023 05:09
• Impeccable (Satishverma) I read this twice but the metaphors drown the meaning so I really have no...
  March 6th, 2023 20:58
• Newly-Felt. (Fay Slimm.) I read this twice and while it is well written I am too dumb to understand...
  March 6th, 2023 05:36
• The Beautiful World Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Thank you for reminding me how much I love music.Well done I am dusting...
  March 6th, 2023 05:34
• Today I went to the Valley of Erudition. (David Wakeling) Indeed it is.thank you for reading my work
  March 6th, 2023 05:32
• Yasmen takes her Hajib off. (David Wakeling) We do indeed.Thanks for commenting
  March 5th, 2023 04:45
• Small To Large Steps. (Goldfinch60) Life is a dance put you have to learn the steps.This is well done filled...
  March 4th, 2023 04:48
• Ugly Sue. (David Wakeling) Indeed.thanks for your comments
  March 3rd, 2023 15:24
• Ok To Admit You’re Not Ok (Mark The Phenomenon) This is okay.I like the message and the rhyme Well done
  March 3rd, 2023 02:00
• The Pearl Necklace. (David Wakeling) Thank you
  March 2nd, 2023 05:29
• I am so sorry (Pocev_Gjoshe) This is a chunky read.It is condescending to women and really quite...
  March 1st, 2023 17:09