Comments on community poems by David Wakeling
- The fears of the world (Nature)
Some good advice here
March 22nd, 2023 01:45 - Cloud Watching (Netashi)
I read this twice but I guess I am too dumb to know what it is about.I...
March 21st, 2023 21:47 - Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling)
Indeed
March 21st, 2023 16:06 - The Days of Milk and Marmalade. (David Wakeling)
Regrets are all we have
March 21st, 2023 16:04 - The Lady Who Liked Mangos. (David Wakeling)
Its in Melbourne
March 21st, 2023 16:02 - Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling)
Good one
March 21st, 2023 05:02 - Death Of Joy (NilavroNill)
This is okay.I have no idea what it is about because nothing is explained...
March 21st, 2023 02:11 - POSTCARD STORIES (Shadow424)
Is this a Spelling test.I have dyslexia so I\'m not good and Spelling .Why...
March 20th, 2023 21:41 - Crucifixion (Satishverma)
I read this twice but cannot understand a single word.To be meaningful you...
March 20th, 2023 21:40 - My Imagination (River)
I actually found the real world to be threatening and boring.I too live in...
March 20th, 2023 06:02 - Sometimes it rains at night. (David Wakeling)
Okay
March 18th, 2023 23:34 - Shakespeare Doesn\'t Live Here Anymore (Charles69)
Although a lot of work has been put in to write this I could really...
March 18th, 2023 05:56 - Walk Back In (Ambersaldiva)
Because the characters are not named the reader is not engaged and...
March 16th, 2023 16:09 - The Tigris (Markthetabor)
This was irritating to read.There is too much space between words.It made...
March 16th, 2023 16:06 - The Boy With Warm Hands (Gie)
This ia okay.Sadly when you ask questions in a poem you don\'t get any...
March 16th, 2023 16:04
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