Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• Spirit Of Life. (Goldfinch60) Life as a river is a wonderful idea.Excellent poem mi amigo
  May 12th, 2025 06:56
• Look In The Eye. (Poetic Licence) A case of mistaken identity.Very clever with a twist.Enjoyed reading
  May 12th, 2025 06:55
• velveteen quietude (Arqios) a masterpiece of rhyme cadence and theme. So many vivid images created...
  May 12th, 2025 06:54
• Shorty (Sorenbarrett) she sounds like an amazing person. Wonderfully constructed poem.I thought...
  May 12th, 2025 06:50
• The Tennessee Volunteers (Tony Grannell) This is a masterpiece both as a poem and a song.I could here the banjo...
  May 11th, 2025 18:28
• Wise Man Say (11). (Poetic Licence) Some great wisdom here.Fun to read.
  May 11th, 2025 03:57
• Weeds grow (Sorenbarrett) I read this as a metaphor for love and or war. Very deep and...
  May 11th, 2025 03:56
• Two Sided Life. (Goldfinch60) A very positive message here.Enjoyable read
  May 11th, 2025 03:54
• momEntary deEp (Arqios) wow so much to unpack here.I like the cadence.The poem is enjoyable to...
  May 11th, 2025 03:52
• Unity For All Nations Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful positive message about a delightful place. Good luck on your...
  May 10th, 2025 04:41
• Adventures of Mary and Harry (4) (Poetic Licence) A bitter sweet story of mistaken lotion near the ocean. A good fun read mi...
  May 10th, 2025 04:38
• Before we knew better (Sorenbarrett) i sometimes long for those days of childhood when wishing made it so,This...
  May 10th, 2025 04:34
• A Caring Smile. (Poetic Licence) Some good advice here.very caring message.
  May 9th, 2025 05:09
• When the east wind cries (Sorenbarrett) This is an amazing fable inspired by the Aztecs. Very enjoyable read....
  May 9th, 2025 05:08
• Pound In Your Hand. (Poetic Licence) We all feel like that at times.We are all begging at the door of the...
  May 8th, 2025 16:38
• Too many (Sorenbarrett) Okay now that is a list that some up the human condition. A powerful poem...
  May 8th, 2025 16:36
• Words Written Limerick. (Goldfinch60) This is a very clever limerick mi amigo. I enjoyed reading
  May 7th, 2025 05:52
• Shade (Sorenbarrett) As I get older I look forward to sleep more and more. Wonderfully created...
  May 7th, 2025 05:50
• One Day It Will Happen. (Goldfinch60) Thanks to you Andy I do have a positive view of life.Wonderful poem
  May 6th, 2025 05:13
• Haltia, spirit (Mourgana of the Fey) This is quite charming.I have the sense of optimism towards the end. A...
  May 6th, 2025 05:11
• I thought I knew (Sorenbarrett) That\'s progress I guess.They don\'t knock down buildings they knock down...
  May 6th, 2025 05:09
• the thread between us (Arqios) This raises a profound question about free will and wether it exists or...
  May 6th, 2025 05:06
• there is no lack in you (Arqios) This is quite a tribute to the gentle art of poesy and the poets...
  May 5th, 2025 06:28
• Devil deeds angel thoughts (Sorenbarrett) I like the exceptional cadence here and rhyme. Some good advice as well...
  May 5th, 2025 03:59
• Love People Tanka. (Goldfinch60) What a wonderful message. Great poem and message
  May 5th, 2025 03:48
• Sacrifice, take the hit (Sorenbarrett) A wonderful essay on the virtue of sacrifice.So many ways inanimate...
  May 4th, 2025 05:32
• revelatory (Arqios) I like the cadence here .It reads so well.A great exploration of the...
  May 4th, 2025 05:28
• the fury\'s chant (Arqios) Wow certainly some anger here.Justified anger I\'m sure.Powerful poem
  May 3rd, 2025 03:32
• No Expiration Date. (Goldfinch60) This is so true.Age should not stop you having a go at anything.Great...
  May 3rd, 2025 03:31
• Who said that? (Sorenbarrett) I had to smile at this one. Well constructed and a fun read
  May 3rd, 2025 03:29
• A lot of wind (Sorenbarrett) an amazing tale of the wind creating havoc, An enjoyable read.Excellent
  May 2nd, 2025 05:11
• for the Unbroken (Arqios) Oh this captures the human condition.We are the stuff that screams are...
  May 1st, 2025 17:37
• The candle (Tony36) This is quite beautiful.I was taken to a river somewhere in asia.Wonderful...
  May 1st, 2025 17:34
• A Rustling (Tony Grannell) Wow I am amazed by the elegant construction here.The poem capture the...
  May 1st, 2025 17:33
• Valley Of Contentment (Goldfinch60) I would like to visit that valley.Wonderful poem mi amigo
  May 1st, 2025 05:21
• Ponderings (Sorenbarrett) This is some amazing word play. Some enigmatic sounds to ponder.Great read
  May 1st, 2025 05:20
• A Place (Arqios) Well this is very thoughtful.We all need a Place.A sanctuary between the...
  April 30th, 2025 04:52
• Blackness\' light (Sorenbarrett) i think this is a wonderful powerful poem.So well constructed and...
  April 30th, 2025 04:49
• O Frenzied Light! (Arqios) Wow this is dramatic.I enjoyed reading so much.I had to look up some of...
  April 29th, 2025 05:19
• Footprints on a beaten path (Sorenbarrett) A clever well written piece here. A wonderful metaphor about embers and...
  April 29th, 2025 05:17
• roaring tides (Arqios) Wonderful dithyramb.I always learn something reading your work cobber.
  April 28th, 2025 05:06
• I Choose Love. (Goldfinch60) wow what a wondeful list of choices.I agree with all of them and above all...
  April 28th, 2025 05:04
• Sleep on (Sorenbarrett) i know the feelings expressed here.Very relatable.Well done mi amigo
  April 28th, 2025 05:02
• Lifetime Of Love. (Goldfinch60) You are very lucky mi amigo.This is a beautiful tribute to finding your...
  April 27th, 2025 05:40
• hymn of the exiles (Arqios) This certainly is inspirational.It reminds me of the sixties when many...
  April 27th, 2025 05:38
• Autumn\'s Sonneteer (Tony Grannell) This is a masterpiece. Incredible structure and cadence and rhyme.It is as...
  April 26th, 2025 17:29
• printed word (Arqios) This is wonderful.I enjoyed reading this piece.Well written with an...
  April 26th, 2025 05:18
• Live A Better Life. (Goldfinch60) good for you mi amigo.You certainly spread the joy to others.A wonderful...
  April 26th, 2025 05:15
• Good taste (Sorenbarrett) This certainly is clever.A touch of Sardonic humour here.Made me laugh....
  April 26th, 2025 05:13
• Within a hair (Sorenbarrett) Nothing wrong with a beard. Keeps you warm in winter. Interesting poem
  April 25th, 2025 05:19
• Respect All. (Goldfinch60) Treat others kindly and they will treat you well.A gret poem and a great...
  April 25th, 2025 02:55
• Ypres, lest we forget (Arqios) Indeed.I must say I get emotional on Anzac Day. A nice tribute poem.Well...
  April 25th, 2025 02:54
• Wonder Times. (Goldfinch60) I certainly know the feeling. Just part of the deal I\'m afraid.Nice poem...
  April 24th, 2025 05:16
• once again (Arqios) I think this makes a profound point about writing. It can be seen as...
  April 24th, 2025 05:14
• Hard Words (Sorenbarrett) This is well constructed as always.Sad about the bird but hey that\'s...
  April 24th, 2025 05:11
• Moving Forward Tanka. (Goldfinch60) So true.We would be lost in space without the Sun.Great poem.
  April 23rd, 2025 05:38
• a miscreant yearns (Arqios) It is so true that Beauty finds its form in articulation.Interesting poem....
  April 23rd, 2025 05:37
• What\'s in a name (Sorenbarrett) What an amazing poem. All the great states of mind: Love Passion Charity...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:35
• Overdone romance sonnet (Sorenbarrett) Sounds like my 21st.Well Gordon Ramsey would have a field day here. Some...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:27
• Chopin\'s Nocturnes. (Goldfinch60) I love Chopin\' music.This poem is a great tribute to a great musician
  April 22nd, 2025 03:05
• cavernous (Arqios) This is very clever.The text is shaped like a vase.Very inspirational with...
  April 22nd, 2025 03:04
• a poem’s succession (Arqios) A wonderful evaluation of the power of poetry.A very clever poem.I enjoyed...
  April 21st, 2025 05:12
• Foggy morning (Sorenbarrett) Having the rhyme in the middle gives the work an amazing musical cadence....
  April 21st, 2025 05:10
• A Better Person Today. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful message here of improvement of each person.A great inspirational...
  April 20th, 2025 05:21
• see you there (Arqios) I like the imagery this piece evokes.The night sky and the passage of...
  April 20th, 2025 05:18
• Thank You (Poetic Licence) Some wonderful wisdom and advice here.Inspirational
  April 20th, 2025 05:16
• THE EARTH IS CRYING (Nephilim56) This certainly has all the headlines here. I guess we need to work harder...
  April 20th, 2025 05:15
• Lies of romance (Sorenbarrett) This is quite beautifully written.Very well constructed.Enjoyable read
  April 20th, 2025 05:13
• Cry (Tony36) Yes we all cry from time to time.It focuses the soul about what is...
  April 19th, 2025 17:06
• Words (Teardrop) Wonderful poem.I think words are amazing.Enjoyable read
  April 19th, 2025 17:04
• Harrys Easter Egg for Mary (Poetic Licence) This was a fun tale.Enjoyed reading.Well done
  April 19th, 2025 05:09
• Think Hippie Thoughts. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love the idea of hippies. Make love not war. One day it will come...
  April 19th, 2025 05:07
• w o r d s (Arqios) Yes words are powerful things.They can hurt or heal.Wonderful tribute...
  April 19th, 2025 05:05
• twilight trek (Arqios) I enjoyed this.Hope keeps as going.Excellent
  April 18th, 2025 03:04
• The Air That You Breathe. (Goldfinch60) Amazing stuff air.We would be lost without it.Nice tribute poem.Made me...
  April 18th, 2025 03:03
• Heart or Mind. (Poetic Licence) Thats a tough question.I think they are both important.Great poem.Made me...
  April 18th, 2025 03:01
• Acts (Sorenbarrett) Birds are wonderful.They sing and fly.This is a clever tribute.Well done...
  April 18th, 2025 03:00
• but a flesh wound (Arqios) An amazing tale of the culinary arts.An enjoyable read chef
  April 17th, 2025 05:32
• Muse\'s blood (Sorenbarrett) Well-constructed, with the trademark middle rhyme. A tribute to poesy....
  April 17th, 2025 05:29
• Not Perfect. (Goldfinch60) None of us are perfect.But this poem is a clear expression of love and...
  April 16th, 2025 05:31
• pot plants (Arqios) Yes pot plants can be problematic.they are always drying out in...
  April 16th, 2025 05:29
• Tick Tock. (Poetic Licence) This is very clever.It captures the concept of time both in text and...
  April 16th, 2025 05:26
• Redeemer pains through window panes (Sorenbarrett) This is a wonderful poem with imagery to spare.I like the references.I...
  April 16th, 2025 05:25
• Go to sleep (Tony36) Gotta love Sleep.A Wonderful lullaby
  April 15th, 2025 15:30
• Loyal Hearts. (Goldfinch60) They say they are mans best friend.Wonderful tribute poem here.Excellent
  April 15th, 2025 05:40
• letting go: Anton Ego (Arqios) I had flash backs to Master chief\' I find it difficult for someone to...
  April 15th, 2025 05:39
• Change of Heart (Poetic Licence) what a powerful postive triumph.It is inspirational.Well done
  April 15th, 2025 05:35
• Who died and made you God (Sorenbarrett) A powerful well constructed piece.There is certainly some anger here.Very...
  April 15th, 2025 05:33
• Tests In Life. (Goldfinch60) People can be the best and the worst.I guess the secret is stay with those...
  April 14th, 2025 05:46
• Pleasing Everyone Else (Poetic Licence) yes a powerful message here about dancing to your own tune and not...
  April 14th, 2025 05:44
• midnight courage (Arqios) The midnight hour. It certainly is a creative time.The poem highlights the...
  April 14th, 2025 05:43
• Differences (Sorenbarrett) This poem explores the link between Love and Passion.I think people get...
  April 14th, 2025 05:40
• Tip Toe In Life. (Goldfinch60) Some great wisdom here mi amigo.I always learn something from your work
  April 13th, 2025 05:35
• Elphin (Mourgana of the Fey) What a delightful poem.I love the word images and the cadence is...
  April 13th, 2025 05:34
• Wise Man Say (10). (Poetic Licence) Lots of un and wisdom here,Excellent
  April 13th, 2025 05:32
• Passing on (Sorenbarrett) This shoots like a machine gun.Wonderful construction and wisdom.Well done
  April 13th, 2025 05:31
• song to the stars (Arqios) Some childhood memories here with a touch of regret.Always a delight to...
  April 13th, 2025 05:30
• Gratitude For Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful positive message here in this well constructed piece.Enjoyable...
  April 12th, 2025 16:40
• celestial threads (Arqios) I see a poet writing about the universe. Very powerful images here.
  April 12th, 2025 16:38
• the killing of a conifer (Mourgana of the Fey) Trees are amazing.Well highlighted in this powerful work.It made me...
  April 12th, 2025 16:35