Comments on community poems by David Wakeling
- my everything. (Ayathebest55)
This doesn\'t make sense. If you wanted to forget someone why write a poem...
February 22nd, 2023 23:30 - The Complexity of Being Human. (Aurelian Swift)
This is okay.It actually has a coherent theme.Well done
February 22nd, 2023 20:17 - Long Distance (Debake)
The characters are not named so the reader is not engaged.Nothing is...
February 21st, 2023 22:59 - My name is Mary Judith MaCallister (David Wakeling)
No can do amigo no can do.Thanks for reading
February 21st, 2023 16:01 - The Night (2781)
fantasy
February 21st, 2023 03:00 - Lock Up (R.J.Stone)
The poem is repetitive and unclear.It does not stand on its own.No reason...
February 19th, 2023 15:43 - Mr Bellmeister catches the bus. (David Wakeling)
Indeed.Thanks for your comments
February 19th, 2023 15:39 - The Dawn is just a Cobweb away (Arobot)
This reads like the author wants to give some life advice.Unfortunately...
February 19th, 2023 04:50 - The Train to Treblinka. (David Wakeling)
Thank you for your comments.Much appreciated
February 18th, 2023 02:15 - 6 what my anxiety feels like (MiddleMood)
This is quite personal.Hopefully it was cathartic for you.It is well...
February 17th, 2023 00:32 - Little Davy Blue Eyes. (David Wakeling)
Joy....do you need the definiton
February 17th, 2023 00:26 - Except (Mara \"Marzipan\")
This is quite self indulgent. more like a dating profile than a poem. But...
February 16th, 2023 16:49 - Earth Colors (Descovia)
This is certainly a positive view life.well done
February 16th, 2023 16:46 - We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home. (David Wakeling)
Thank you for your comments.Much apreciated
February 15th, 2023 05:38 - The House of Tears. (David Wakeling)
February 13th, 2023 05:50
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