Comments on community poems by Christina8
- Today (Christina K)
Good flow to your poem. I hope you\'ve worked things out!
October 30th, 2016 13:37 - It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back (Doll in Wonderland)
This is a beautiful and powerful poem. I hope you are healing. Great job!
October 30th, 2016 13:28 - Sacrifice (Ternic73)
Very powerful write and flow to your words. Great job!
October 30th, 2016 10:00 - Damaged (BlueiBlondie)
This is a really great write. I can relate to this..\"running from her...
October 30th, 2016 09:56 - The Flaws Of Education (Liam Lawless)
Yes I agree with you. I think your poem is wonderful. I have a teen that...
October 30th, 2016 09:37 - I Swore an Oath (Evan50)
Good first poem! Thanks for your service as well!
October 30th, 2016 09:27 - Hurt (Jamesedwards)
Good write! I hope you find the one!
October 30th, 2016 09:21 - My Boots (WriteBeLight)
great flow to your poem! I feel ya! Wish I had a rockin\' pair of boots...
October 30th, 2016 09:14 - LEADERSHIP & LOVE ~ AN ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen! Thanks for your very thoughtful write indeed! Great job!
October 30th, 2016 09:10 - False Hope Again (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is an excellent poem. I love how you wrote \"the paradigm floats on...
October 30th, 2016 08:45 - Without Hope (K.T Williams)
Good write. but God hasn\'t given up on you, I hope you start to feel...
October 29th, 2016 21:52 - Meaning of Love (Magno1988)
Good write. Welcome to the site! A lot of meaningful questions posed.
October 29th, 2016 21:27 - Depression (Rosepetals09)
Welcome to the site! I know about depression. Hopefully yours gets better!
October 29th, 2016 21:21 - PICTURES (Ternic73)
Very powerful write! Great use of imagery in your poem. Nice rhymes.
October 29th, 2016 19:23 - A Writer (Christina K)
Your poem is very good! I had a similiar incident. Just keep writing!
October 29th, 2016 19:21 - I LOVE CHRISTMAS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
By the way I forgot to mention how much I love this beautiful acrostic...
October 29th, 2016 18:40 - I LOVE CHRISTMAS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I would love to add on but I don\'t see where I can. hugs!
October 29th, 2016 18:39 - Is It Love ? (Ron parrish aka wordman)
I think this is a very sweet poem. Good job!
October 29th, 2016 18:35 - Deprivation (Walkingmess)
Great write but can I suggest a larger font? A little hard to see. But I...
October 29th, 2016 17:08 - Laid to Rest (Autumn Breeze)
Welcome to the site! Great rhyme scheme. You did a beautiful job!
October 29th, 2016 17:06 - BETWEEN A JOCK AND A HARD FACE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The first thing I did was belly laugh! You did quite a good job with this...
October 29th, 2016 17:01 - Sense Of Humor (Augustus)
this is a really good write and now I see why you are \"suddenly...
October 29th, 2016 14:24 - Kiss Her Deeply (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Very sweet poem. You did a great job!
October 29th, 2016 14:08 - Break (Moreofme)
Good freestyle poem. I hope you figure out your struggle.
October 29th, 2016 13:45 - Kiss You Goodbye (Doll in Wonderland)
This is an impressive freestyle poem! I loved the words you used. Sorry...
October 29th, 2016 13:41 - woman (Tony36)
Well what a gentleman! Good job on this one!
October 29th, 2016 10:12 - Numb (BlueiBlondie)
I think your poem is tragically beautiful. I hope you heal and post more...
October 29th, 2016 10:10 - Universe (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Yes we have always been. Love your write!
October 29th, 2016 10:08 - Fourteen Years (Augustus)
great poem! Very romantic!
October 29th, 2016 10:03 - All Wonder Returned (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice poem.. Isn\'t it great to write for yourself and not for someone else...
October 29th, 2016 10:01 - Be An Inspiration (Brooklyn6timesplus)
A positive free verse. Nice poem!
October 28th, 2016 18:53 - G I R L OF MY D R E A M S (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great job! I love poems like these!
October 28th, 2016 18:51 - The House (Christina K)
Very well done. You do make it sound like a home instead of a house. Sorry...
October 28th, 2016 18:35 - ROCKIN\' CHAIR MY OL\' ROCKIN\' CHAIR ~ ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are so happy and jovial in your writes! \"coming home to see my...
October 28th, 2016 18:32 - Your Baby is Dead (Augustus)
Powerful write, great poem
October 28th, 2016 08:41 - One More Tomorrow (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is a really excellent piece! Your words are graceful. As always! :-)
October 28th, 2016 08:36 - I Am Free (Tony36)
Great write! Very encouraging!
October 28th, 2016 08:16 - Bad Mood (WriteBeLight)
On point, Well said. Short and sweet. Good job!
October 28th, 2016 07:42 - Life On Hold (Jeff)
I like this poem. You\'re not blaming anybody else and yet you keep on...
October 28th, 2016 07:40 - There Are Worse Things (MisKylie)
Nice poem but might I suggest a larger font in something darker. I\'m not...
October 28th, 2016 06:57 - Alone Again (Jeff)
I love the rhymes but so tragic is the piece. But I can relate. You did a...
October 28th, 2016 06:54 - I\'m Still In Love With You (Jeff)
I like this freestyle poem. Too bad you have a broken heart to go with it....
October 28th, 2016 06:49 - Thoughts from a cereal bowl (Kaychee)
Very deep freestyle. I like it! Great job!
October 28th, 2016 06:47 - Turning Me Back Around (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is a really nice piece. I also think we should thank Laura! I just...
October 27th, 2016 21:31 - WE ARE WHAT WE EAT (BRIAN & ANGELA)
As a nurse and a poet I\'d say you covered your ground quite well here!...
October 27th, 2016 21:22 - Untitled (K.T Williams)
Great free verse poem. Sounds like an anxiety attack? I feel ya. Thanks...
October 27th, 2016 21:14 - The Cave (Based on Plato\'s Allegory of the Cave) (Danielcortorreal)
Great poem ! Great subject material.
October 27th, 2016 20:33 - Guys arn\'t girls (SilentLaugh)
Really good write! Good use of repetition.
October 27th, 2016 20:29 - Stars (Writemeasmile)
Beautiful freestyle poem!
October 27th, 2016 20:27 - If only... (Thollin)
This is a very good poem and like augustus says speaks volumes. Sounds...
October 27th, 2016 20:24 - Fractured (Stephanie Showers)
Wow very vivid imagery. Sorry you were hurt. Great rhymes
October 27th, 2016 20:19 - I Learned, Hard (Lost123rejoice)
Great write. Good luck with that harsh love.
October 27th, 2016 19:16 - It Hits Me (Abpoet18)
Really good write.
October 27th, 2016 19:13 - Drowning in a famine (Carlosv1101)
Done very well. Great job!
October 27th, 2016 19:10 - My love (Lordfranki)
wow, this is a really great poem. I bet your wife loved it!
October 27th, 2016 19:06 - I WANNA BREAK FREE ~ SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Really good message in your poem. I want the world to stop too, let me...
October 27th, 2016 15:55 - Just Because (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice poem! It\'s beautiful
October 27th, 2016 14:40 - Do Not Settle For Less (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Very well done poem. Very encouraging. Good job!
October 26th, 2016 22:05 - Money (BSmooth)
Great write. Money is the root of all evil. It dictates everything we do...
October 26th, 2016 20:55 - Appreciate Me (Dannie_51715)
I love this rhyming poem but you are so sad! Maybe someday it will all...
October 26th, 2016 20:40 - Nonsense (Christina K)
Brilliant! You go girl! Awesome poem.
October 26th, 2016 20:34 - I Would Have Known (Augustus)
Another fine rhyming poem. Lamenting about what \"worlds we would have...
October 26th, 2016 20:33 - Sense (Augustus)
This is really good rhyming verse. I love the way you describe a womans...
October 26th, 2016 20:29 - Slashed Tires (The 2 A.M Writer)
Great free verse poem!
October 26th, 2016 20:25 - Nihilistic Weirdo Of The Midwest Act. 1 (N.W.O.T.M) (The 2 A.M Writer)
Very nice free verse poem. Its odd to feel old some days while we\'re...
October 26th, 2016 20:21 - FIELD COURSE ~ OF COURSE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
oh how I love me some iambic pentameter. I\'m not kidding. It just flows...
October 26th, 2016 20:19 - Detention (Christina8)
Thanks to all who reviewed. BRIANSODES, what a lovely review! I do love...
October 26th, 2016 20:07 - A King\'s Lament (Danielcortorreal)
I really enjoyed this piece. Hope to see more of your writing!
October 26th, 2016 13:57 - Don\'t Judge Me (Tony36)
this is a beautiful write tony and would like to think i wouldn\'t treat...
October 26th, 2016 13:54 - A Child is Born (BSmooth)
Great write! And may I say congrats! I like your free verse style.
October 26th, 2016 13:41 - Detention (Christina8)
Thanks Tony36! I appreciate it!
October 26th, 2016 13:35 - My Wait Begins Again (Kurt Philip Behm)
So now you have a cold shoulder and you\'ve washed your footsteps from the...
October 26th, 2016 12:19 - All Kindled Lies Afire (Kurt Philip Behm)
All around love the metaphors and the cadence of your poem. Fabulous!
October 26th, 2016 12:11 - Free Of Its Stain (Kurt Philip Behm)
OK, if we were giving stars away here i\"d give you 11! Which is...
October 26th, 2016 12:02 - Jumbo jet versus jackdaws or Jays (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Very nice poem, although I \'m unfamiliar with a jackdaw. Hmm. I like ...
October 26th, 2016 11:52 - Calla Lily (Christina8)
Thanks, most people don\'t find as much interest in this poem even though...
October 26th, 2016 11:46 - FOOD OF THE MONTH (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well, I like June. No seriously I\'ve never been to the united kingdom and...
October 25th, 2016 11:29 - BESIDE A SEASIDE ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice acrostic poem! But it also works as a sonnet. It must be terrible...
October 25th, 2016 11:25 - Passions (Christina8)
Thanks to you both for reviewing. Again Briansodes you caught my erotic...
October 25th, 2016 11:19 - Need (Christina8)
And of course thanks hodgetiger, i do think the son is a bastard. I\'m a...
October 25th, 2016 11:15 - Need (Christina8)
I wasn\'t expecting such great reviews. I wrote it on the fly. Thanks to...
October 25th, 2016 11:13 - Forever Here (Grange_m)
this is an excellent poem. Sounds like you\'re a sad soldier. You did an...
October 24th, 2016 17:25 - Calla Lily (Christina8)
Thank you. I never thought anyone would read this! LOL
October 24th, 2016 17:03 - A soilders goodbye (Wolf2778)
Very good poem. I love the rhyming style, Very descriptive in how hard it...
October 24th, 2016 15:53 - MY LOVE FOR YOU ~ A TRIOLET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thats a really beautiful poem. I myself like to find new ways to write in...
October 20th, 2016 22:02 - Dichotomous Consciousness (Kyran)
I think it was well done slam poetry and I liked when it rhymed. Very...
October 20th, 2016 21:51 - Have That Voice (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Very inspiring. It\'s a really good poem all around. I hope we can all...
October 20th, 2016 21:26 - Appliance (The 2 A.M Writer)
\"why do I love your fever?\" Ver poetic! But sounds like you need a...
October 20th, 2016 21:18
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