Comments on community poems by Christina8
- Just Me. (Ddraeg)
Welcome to the site! Beautiful rhymes that ring so true. Keep these poems...
November 1st, 2016 11:23 - you (Daniellewilliams)
Welcome to the site! Exquisite metaphors. Lovely poem!
November 1st, 2016 11:03 - The Garden\'s Colors Tend to Fade (John Snowdon)
This is a beautifully crafted rhyming poem. Graceful!
November 1st, 2016 10:14 - Its Magic Exposed (Kurt Philip Behm)
Breathtaking piece. Sometimes we choose each other without realizing it.
November 1st, 2016 10:00 - untitled (ShadedSorrow)
Great poem. Albert Einstein thought he was crazy too. We\'re all a bit
November 1st, 2016 09:04 - I\'m Not Unfriendly (WriteBeLight)
Very nice poem. I think you\'re very friendly!
November 1st, 2016 08:56 - God is My Hero (Survivor48)
Beautiful poem. Well done!
November 1st, 2016 08:43 - DONKEY OR ELEPHANT ~ THE CHOICE IS YOURS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Indeed there are other candidates! Very well crafted poem and a great...
November 1st, 2016 08:41 - I Did Not Know. (Zwitterion)
Welcome to the site. Awesome first poem.
October 31st, 2016 20:30 - The Black Market (Habibi)
Great poem! Awesome imagery.
October 31st, 2016 20:06 - Braille (Elchupacabra)
Powerful write. Cuz when you love somebody the scars dont matter--I like...
October 31st, 2016 19:59 - Wonder (Fob.lina)
Beautiful poem! Your second stanza is hauntingly good, I can relate.
October 31st, 2016 19:55 - Love verses the Mind (Magno1988)
This is a beautifully written love poem. You\'ve described I think how we...
October 31st, 2016 16:15 - AUTUMN\'S CLOAK (Irishred)
Excellent job portraying metaphors. The imagery is lovely.
October 31st, 2016 16:12 - Moth to Flame (Scorchedwings)
Beautiful and amazing rhymes! Nice job!
October 31st, 2016 11:38 - Broken Family (Poetic_demise425)
This is an excellent piece. Great work,
October 31st, 2016 11:19 - Acceptance (Liam Lawless)
Very nice poem and so true!
October 31st, 2016 10:57 - Mean Streak (WriteBeLight)
Very neat presentation! I liked your poem!
October 31st, 2016 10:01 - The Wind (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautiful message in your poem!
October 31st, 2016 09:35 - Trapped (BlueiBlondie)
Excellent poem! I wonder if more of us than will admit struggle with those...
October 31st, 2016 09:18 - Shattered Image (BlueiBlondie)
Beautiful write. Very strong message and I hope you are better now or are...
October 31st, 2016 09:07 - Word Of God Speak (Tony36)
Good write Tony!
October 31st, 2016 08:23 - Yatee Yata (Augustus)
Definitely not for the faint of heart as you have so aptly written! Good...
October 31st, 2016 08:10 - HALLOWEEN ~ NEEWOLLAH (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are so good with acrostics brian! Great mirror poem. Happy Halloween!
October 31st, 2016 08:07 - Death (BronyVinyl)
I like your poem. Some people try to avoid the subject but like you said,...
October 30th, 2016 20:18 - All The Tools Are There (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Wise words. Great poem!
October 30th, 2016 19:59 - Blind love (Kingpoetic)
Good write. If it is to be it will be. Trust me, cuz I\'ve been there, I...
October 30th, 2016 19:51 - lost (Nic)
Good write. Its easy to get lost in someone. Check out my poems if you get...
October 30th, 2016 19:41 - Why you left I\'ll never know (Teenageheartbreak)
I love the rhymes and rhythm of this poem. Very well done!
October 30th, 2016 18:46 - Night Terrors (CDiazp01)
Well done. I used to have terrible nightmares but not terrors, I can\'t...
October 30th, 2016 18:44 - Distorted Mind (CDiazp01)
Powerful poem. I hope you feel better!
October 30th, 2016 18:35 - Brightening the gloom (Willyweed)
Very nice poem. I enjoyed the ending! Happy Halloween to you!
October 30th, 2016 16:26 - All I need is just a try (Quietstorm_Dru)
Very nice write. She\'s a lucky lady!
October 30th, 2016 13:41 - Today (Christina K)
Good flow to your poem. I hope you\'ve worked things out!
October 30th, 2016 13:37 - It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back (Doll in Wonderland)
This is a beautiful and powerful poem. I hope you are healing. Great job!
October 30th, 2016 13:28 - Sacrifice (Ternic73)
Very powerful write and flow to your words. Great job!
October 30th, 2016 10:00 - Damaged (BlueiBlondie)
This is a really great write. I can relate to this..\"running from her...
October 30th, 2016 09:56 - The Flaws Of Education (Liam Lawless)
Yes I agree with you. I think your poem is wonderful. I have a teen that...
October 30th, 2016 09:37 - I Swore an Oath (Evan50)
Good first poem! Thanks for your service as well!
October 30th, 2016 09:27 - Hurt (Jamesedwards)
Good write! I hope you find the one!
October 30th, 2016 09:21 - My Boots (WriteBeLight)
great flow to your poem! I feel ya! Wish I had a rockin\' pair of boots...
October 30th, 2016 09:14 - LEADERSHIP & LOVE ~ AN ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen! Thanks for your very thoughtful write indeed! Great job!
October 30th, 2016 09:10 - False Hope Again (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is an excellent poem. I love how you wrote \"the paradigm floats on...
October 30th, 2016 08:45 - Without Hope (K.T Williams)
Good write. but God hasn\'t given up on you, I hope you start to feel...
October 29th, 2016 21:52 - Meaning of Love (Magno1988)
Good write. Welcome to the site! A lot of meaningful questions posed.
October 29th, 2016 21:27 - Depression (Rosepetals09)
Welcome to the site! I know about depression. Hopefully yours gets better!
October 29th, 2016 21:21 - PICTURES (Ternic73)
Very powerful write! Great use of imagery in your poem. Nice rhymes.
October 29th, 2016 19:23 - A Writer (Christina K)
Your poem is very good! I had a similiar incident. Just keep writing!
October 29th, 2016 19:21 - I LOVE CHRISTMAS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
By the way I forgot to mention how much I love this beautiful acrostic...
October 29th, 2016 18:40 - I LOVE CHRISTMAS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I would love to add on but I don\'t see where I can. hugs!
October 29th, 2016 18:39 - Is It Love ? (Ron parrish aka wordman)
I think this is a very sweet poem. Good job!
October 29th, 2016 18:35 - Deprivation (Walkingmess)
Great write but can I suggest a larger font? A little hard to see. But I...
October 29th, 2016 17:08 - Laid to Rest (Autumn Breeze)
Welcome to the site! Great rhyme scheme. You did a beautiful job!
October 29th, 2016 17:06 - BETWEEN A JOCK AND A HARD FACE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The first thing I did was belly laugh! You did quite a good job with this...
October 29th, 2016 17:01 - Sense Of Humor (Augustus)
this is a really good write and now I see why you are \"suddenly...
October 29th, 2016 14:24 - Kiss Her Deeply (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Very sweet poem. You did a great job!
October 29th, 2016 14:08 - Break (Moreofme)
Good freestyle poem. I hope you figure out your struggle.
October 29th, 2016 13:45 - Kiss You Goodbye (Doll in Wonderland)
This is an impressive freestyle poem! I loved the words you used. Sorry...
October 29th, 2016 13:41 - woman (Tony36)
Well what a gentleman! Good job on this one!
October 29th, 2016 10:12 - Numb (BlueiBlondie)
I think your poem is tragically beautiful. I hope you heal and post more...
October 29th, 2016 10:10 - Universe (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Yes we have always been. Love your write!
October 29th, 2016 10:08 - Fourteen Years (Augustus)
great poem! Very romantic!
October 29th, 2016 10:03 - All Wonder Returned (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice poem.. Isn\'t it great to write for yourself and not for someone else...
October 29th, 2016 10:01 - Be An Inspiration (Brooklyn6timesplus)
A positive free verse. Nice poem!
October 28th, 2016 18:53 - G I R L OF MY D R E A M S (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great job! I love poems like these!
October 28th, 2016 18:51 - The House (Christina K)
Very well done. You do make it sound like a home instead of a house. Sorry...
October 28th, 2016 18:35 - ROCKIN\' CHAIR MY OL\' ROCKIN\' CHAIR ~ ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are so happy and jovial in your writes! \"coming home to see my...
October 28th, 2016 18:32 - Your Baby is Dead (Augustus)
Powerful write, great poem
October 28th, 2016 08:41 - One More Tomorrow (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is a really excellent piece! Your words are graceful. As always! :-)
October 28th, 2016 08:36 - I Am Free (Tony36)
Great write! Very encouraging!
October 28th, 2016 08:16 - Bad Mood (WriteBeLight)
On point, Well said. Short and sweet. Good job!
October 28th, 2016 07:42 - Life On Hold (Jeff)
I like this poem. You\'re not blaming anybody else and yet you keep on...
October 28th, 2016 07:40 - There Are Worse Things (MisKylie)
Nice poem but might I suggest a larger font in something darker. I\'m not...
October 28th, 2016 06:57 - Alone Again (Jeff)
I love the rhymes but so tragic is the piece. But I can relate. You did a...
October 28th, 2016 06:54 - I\'m Still In Love With You (Jeff)
I like this freestyle poem. Too bad you have a broken heart to go with it....
October 28th, 2016 06:49 - Thoughts from a cereal bowl (Kaychee)
Very deep freestyle. I like it! Great job!
October 28th, 2016 06:47 - Turning Me Back Around (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is a really nice piece. I also think we should thank Laura! I just...
October 27th, 2016 21:31 - WE ARE WHAT WE EAT (BRIAN & ANGELA)
As a nurse and a poet I\'d say you covered your ground quite well here!...
October 27th, 2016 21:22 - Untitled (K.T Williams)
Great free verse poem. Sounds like an anxiety attack? I feel ya. Thanks...
October 27th, 2016 21:14 - The Cave (Based on Plato\'s Allegory of the Cave) (Danielcortorreal)
Great poem ! Great subject material.
October 27th, 2016 20:33 - Guys arn\'t girls (SilentLaugh)
Really good write! Good use of repetition.
October 27th, 2016 20:29 - Stars (Writemeasmile)
Beautiful freestyle poem!
October 27th, 2016 20:27 - If only... (Thollin)
This is a very good poem and like augustus says speaks volumes. Sounds...
October 27th, 2016 20:24 - Fractured (Stephanie Showers)
Wow very vivid imagery. Sorry you were hurt. Great rhymes
October 27th, 2016 20:19 - I Learned, Hard (Lost123rejoice)
Great write. Good luck with that harsh love.
October 27th, 2016 19:16 - It Hits Me (Abpoet18)
Really good write.
October 27th, 2016 19:13 - Drowning in a famine (Carlosv1101)
Done very well. Great job!
October 27th, 2016 19:10 - My love (Lordfranki)
wow, this is a really great poem. I bet your wife loved it!
October 27th, 2016 19:06 - I WANNA BREAK FREE ~ SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Really good message in your poem. I want the world to stop too, let me...
October 27th, 2016 15:55 - Just Because (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice poem! It\'s beautiful
October 27th, 2016 14:40 - Do Not Settle For Less (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Very well done poem. Very encouraging. Good job!
October 26th, 2016 22:05 - Money (BSmooth)
Great write. Money is the root of all evil. It dictates everything we do...
October 26th, 2016 20:55 - Appreciate Me (Dannie_51715)
I love this rhyming poem but you are so sad! Maybe someday it will all...
October 26th, 2016 20:40 - Nonsense (Christina K)
Brilliant! You go girl! Awesome poem.
October 26th, 2016 20:34 - I Would Have Known (Augustus)
Another fine rhyming poem. Lamenting about what \"worlds we would have...
October 26th, 2016 20:33 - Sense (Augustus)
This is really good rhyming verse. I love the way you describe a womans...
October 26th, 2016 20:29 - Slashed Tires (The 2 A.M Writer)
Great free verse poem!
October 26th, 2016 20:25 - Nihilistic Weirdo Of The Midwest Act. 1 (N.W.O.T.M) (The 2 A.M Writer)
Very nice free verse poem. Its odd to feel old some days while we\'re...
October 26th, 2016 20:21 - FIELD COURSE ~ OF COURSE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
oh how I love me some iambic pentameter. I\'m not kidding. It just flows...
October 26th, 2016 20:19 - Detention (Christina8)
Thanks to all who reviewed. BRIANSODES, what a lovely review! I do love...
October 26th, 2016 20:07
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