Comments received on poems by kelseyroy
Face down in the dirt , she says it doesnt hurt.
Paul Price said:
I'm not very good at commenting....Very good. Very dark..
I admire how you can say so much with such few words ; )
October 10th, 2011 11:25
Paul Price said:
I'm not very good at commenting....Very good. Very dark..
I admire how you can say so much with such few words ; )
October 10th, 2011 11:25
Homeless ,
Paul Price said:
Your very good. although it is sad I loved reading it..
October 8th, 2011 18:58
Paul Price said:
Your very good. although it is sad I loved reading it..
October 8th, 2011 18:58
Deaths eyes
Paul Price said:
Wow... short but a very powerful poem. Well done!!
October 8th, 2011 18:54
Paul Price said:
Wow... short but a very powerful poem. Well done!!
October 8th, 2011 18:54
Face down in the dirt , she says it doesnt hurt.
Anna said:
I agree with the comment above mine... Chilly, eerie... And very good written!!
September 27th, 2011 17:16
Anna said:
I agree with the comment above mine... Chilly, eerie... And very good written!!
September 27th, 2011 17:16
Face down in the dirt , she says it doesnt hurt.
Cheeky Missy said:
Eerie, haunting, chilling. Something almost like a familiar story. Chasing that elusive satisfaction, that impossible romance that always leaves her drowning. Thought-provoking and bitter. Great imagery.
September 26th, 2011 21:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Eerie, haunting, chilling. Something almost like a familiar story. Chasing that elusive satisfaction, that impossible romance that always leaves her drowning. Thought-provoking and bitter. Great imagery.
September 26th, 2011 21:28
Never Thought..
Anna said:
Your poem is brilliantly written, and I really get a powerful emotion when I read it... Great job! XD
June 20th, 2011 20:05
Anna said:
Your poem is brilliantly written, and I really get a powerful emotion when I read it... Great job! XD
June 20th, 2011 20:05
Life At Last..
Vember-Reigh said:
What was your inspirations for this piece ?
January 30th, 2011 23:16
Vember-Reigh said:
What was your inspirations for this piece ?
January 30th, 2011 23:16
Life At Last..
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful. I love how you expressed it. You built up to it with your assessment on life and relationships, their damaging effects, then brought it to the theme, and wove it together in the conclusion...very nicely done. I enjoyed it, for all it is so sorrowful, you wrote it well.
January 26th, 2011 22:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful. I love how you expressed it. You built up to it with your assessment on life and relationships, their damaging effects, then brought it to the theme, and wove it together in the conclusion...very nicely done. I enjoyed it, for all it is so sorrowful, you wrote it well.
January 26th, 2011 22:33
Distance is a test.
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I know what you mean. And when you hear their voice again, and get to see their face and be with them....can anyone but a sister can understand how dear a brother is? I can miss mine so badly I just don't think about it. I love this poem. It is a wonderful tribute to brothers and sisters.
January 2nd, 2011 23:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I know what you mean. And when you hear their voice again, and get to see their face and be with them....can anyone but a sister can understand how dear a brother is? I can miss mine so badly I just don't think about it. I love this poem. It is a wonderful tribute to brothers and sisters.
January 2nd, 2011 23:57
Love Me, Hate Me, Just Baby Dont Break Me.
Cheeky Missy said:
Your picture heading it off is sweet...and fitting for the plea. It is sad because it sounds like the speaker has been used and is hurting...crying for love against the face of hate.
December 16th, 2010 20:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Your picture heading it off is sweet...and fitting for the plea. It is sad because it sounds like the speaker has been used and is hurting...crying for love against the face of hate.
December 16th, 2010 20:56
Please, Dont Leave Me..
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You drew the scene very well. It is moving, and tender, sweet and sorrowful. Was that goodbye?
December 15th, 2010 23:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You drew the scene very well. It is moving, and tender, sweet and sorrowful. Was that goodbye?
December 15th, 2010 23:09
I Cry , And Forever Try.
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is VERY sad. And it is true. I wish I could take you like a sister and comfort you.
November 28th, 2010 22:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is VERY sad. And it is true. I wish I could take you like a sister and comfort you.
November 28th, 2010 22:40
Drunken Nights
Cheeky Missy said:
Your picture especially with what follows is so sweet....the poem is such a helpless plea of pain, with no deliverance in sight. It is so sorrowful.
November 21st, 2010 22:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Your picture especially with what follows is so sweet....the poem is such a helpless plea of pain, with no deliverance in sight. It is so sorrowful.
November 21st, 2010 22:18
I Choose Both Of You ,
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet.....that is what I wish people would realize when they decide to "love" each other and chance to have children....never make the poor children take sides!
November 20th, 2010 12:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet.....that is what I wish people would realize when they decide to "love" each other and chance to have children....never make the poor children take sides!
November 20th, 2010 12:19
Homeless ,
a soldiers wife13 said:
In november my mom became suicidel and killed her self by overdosing.. luckely my step dad took her to a hospital.. in that time my dad took me away and in a week i ended up on the streets in the rain.. but i was luckey to have my cuzin take me in and take me back to my moms....to this day all i can remember the harsh words she yelled at me..."thanx alot, u just ruined my life!" i still cry my self to sleep with these words in my mind.. this is absilutly good....
November 19th, 2010 14:28
a soldiers wife13 said:
In november my mom became suicidel and killed her self by overdosing.. luckely my step dad took her to a hospital.. in that time my dad took me away and in a week i ended up on the streets in the rain.. but i was luckey to have my cuzin take me in and take me back to my moms....to this day all i can remember the harsh words she yelled at me..."thanx alot, u just ruined my life!" i still cry my self to sleep with these words in my mind.. this is absilutly good....
November 19th, 2010 14:28
I forgot,
Lifewellspoken said:
To forget how important you are to me would be a shame.
To forget how you make me feel would be tragic.
To forget so many times you held me would be a mistake.
I once forgot how your kisses touched my heart.
Important, feelings, holding me, kissing me...all that I will always remember.
Your poem "I forgot" is amazing, and well said. Thanks for the smile and Kelsey...I will always remember and never forget.
November 16th, 2010 12:36
Lifewellspoken said:
To forget how important you are to me would be a shame.
To forget how you make me feel would be tragic.
To forget so many times you held me would be a mistake.
I once forgot how your kisses touched my heart.
Important, feelings, holding me, kissing me...all that I will always remember.
Your poem "I forgot" is amazing, and well said. Thanks for the smile and Kelsey...I will always remember and never forget.
November 16th, 2010 12:36
I Wish It Was Youu ..
Vember-Reigh said:
imma sound like a nerd when i say this but ;
thiss is a great moving poem , the way you wright it i can connect with what your saying and relate :)
amazing poem.
October 25th, 2010 15:28
Vember-Reigh said:
imma sound like a nerd when i say this but ;
thiss is a great moving poem , the way you wright it i can connect with what your saying and relate :)
amazing poem.
October 25th, 2010 15:28
Im a barbie doll..
jabberm said:
very witty and trying to be quiet . i like it .thanks for the pleasure u gave me asa a reader.
September 29th, 2010 16:24
jabberm said:
very witty and trying to be quiet . i like it .thanks for the pleasure u gave me asa a reader.
September 29th, 2010 16:24
Give it your own name. :)
SOLO said:
this was a nice poem
you have talent keep it up i want
to read more
September 28th, 2010 21:18
SOLO said:
this was a nice poem
you have talent keep it up i want
to read more
September 28th, 2010 21:18
A Girl Made Of Glass ..
nikhilps said:
great! great work dude............. has the feel and flow.......
i read it with my mind!!! wonderful! i loved this one very much!!!!!
September 11th, 2010 07:19
nikhilps said:
great! great work dude............. has the feel and flow.......
i read it with my mind!!! wonderful! i loved this one very much!!!!!
September 11th, 2010 07:19
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