Comments received on poems by Fluatist
So what?
Aislinn Wilson said:
So hopeful, so powerful, and so vulnerable. Good poem!
January 18th, 2018 09:35
Aislinn Wilson said:
So hopeful, so powerful, and so vulnerable. Good poem!
January 18th, 2018 09:35
I can\'t find anyone.
AlinaVanderson said:
have hope even if all you have to do is wait.
believe me i\'m in the middle of the same cycle sister
December 2nd, 2017 22:13
AlinaVanderson said:
have hope even if all you have to do is wait.
believe me i\'m in the middle of the same cycle sister
December 2nd, 2017 22:13
So what?
Heather T said:
I\'m sorry you feel like your family doesn\'t love you. I assure you that MOST of the time that is not the case. Sometimes with families, if something happens or a choice is made, or something turned out contradictory to an ideal they had for you, it\'s a process. Dealing with you as a sexual being AT ALL at your young age, regardless of attraction, is tough for moms and dads. I hope there is counseling available to you and family, and I pray for mending and lots of grace.
June 27th, 2017 09:46
Heather T said:
I\'m sorry you feel like your family doesn\'t love you. I assure you that MOST of the time that is not the case. Sometimes with families, if something happens or a choice is made, or something turned out contradictory to an ideal they had for you, it\'s a process. Dealing with you as a sexual being AT ALL at your young age, regardless of attraction, is tough for moms and dads. I hope there is counseling available to you and family, and I pray for mending and lots of grace.
June 27th, 2017 09:46
So what?
Goldfinch60 said:
Just be yourself. As long as you a happy within yourself that is wonderful. If others do not like that it is not your problem, it is theirs.
June 27th, 2017 07:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Just be yourself. As long as you a happy within yourself that is wonderful. If others do not like that it is not your problem, it is theirs.
June 27th, 2017 07:56
So what?
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Be yourself always...Who cares what the people in your town thin...don\'t they get that who you fuck is YOUR BUSINESS and doesn\'t make who you are...I will never understand why people make judgements on things that have NOTHING to do with them, but I guess there will always be haters out there somewhere...The TRUTH in the matter is, we all have to come together in UNITY...the ones who choose otherwise are going to pay the price and it will be a Miraculous day after that SHIT clears...good write either way...AGAIN...don\'t hold back JUST BE YOU
June 27th, 2017 06:46
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Be yourself always...Who cares what the people in your town thin...don\'t they get that who you fuck is YOUR BUSINESS and doesn\'t make who you are...I will never understand why people make judgements on things that have NOTHING to do with them, but I guess there will always be haters out there somewhere...The TRUTH in the matter is, we all have to come together in UNITY...the ones who choose otherwise are going to pay the price and it will be a Miraculous day after that SHIT clears...good write either way...AGAIN...don\'t hold back JUST BE YOU
June 27th, 2017 06:46
You used her
Clairie840 said:
Wow i could relate to this whole poem well done xx
June 25th, 2017 05:30
Clairie840 said:
Wow i could relate to this whole poem well done xx
June 25th, 2017 05:30
Forget
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful, thank you.
Always take a risk
Lesson to be learned
Forgive and forgot
This is for yourself.
That\'s what your poem told me ;)
June 18th, 2017 05:26
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful, thank you.
Always take a risk
Lesson to be learned
Forgive and forgot
This is for yourself.
That\'s what your poem told me ;)
June 18th, 2017 05:26
I just can\'t
Louis Gibbs said:
The word \'can\'t\' is but a meaningless, self imposed restriction we burden ourselves with. Give it time ... as you already know by your poem\'s last statement, you can and will, Fluatist.
June 16th, 2017 10:49
Louis Gibbs said:
The word \'can\'t\' is but a meaningless, self imposed restriction we burden ourselves with. Give it time ... as you already know by your poem\'s last statement, you can and will, Fluatist.
June 16th, 2017 10:49
I just can\'t
Goldfinch60 said:
You could always keep him in your mind and still move on.
June 16th, 2017 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
You could always keep him in your mind and still move on.
June 16th, 2017 02:13
It was my decision
The Invisible said:
Wow, I wish I had enough strength to do that. I\'m sorry she didn\'t realize what she had that\'s her fault. I\'m sure your awesome lol
June 12th, 2017 14:28
The Invisible said:
Wow, I wish I had enough strength to do that. I\'m sorry she didn\'t realize what she had that\'s her fault. I\'m sure your awesome lol
June 12th, 2017 14:28
It was my decision
swingline said:
Stop talking to her just shows you were hurt . And it wasn\'t her fault . Just because someone doesn\'t return your affection doesn\'t mean they don\'t like them . Grow up and go find someone who shares your affections . You can get most girls to like you simple by talking to them .
June 12th, 2017 02:37
swingline said:
Stop talking to her just shows you were hurt . And it wasn\'t her fault . Just because someone doesn\'t return your affection doesn\'t mean they don\'t like them . Grow up and go find someone who shares your affections . You can get most girls to like you simple by talking to them .
June 12th, 2017 02:37
It\'s always my fault
The Invisible said:
I feel like this a lot especially when it comes to guys because then I feel it\'s me if they aren\'t exactly good boyfriends and that\'s just not true. You can only be you, if they wish to see that and love you for it then there you go but if they choose to ignore it then they just lost the chance to have someone really amazing in their life. And that\'s their fault.
June 11th, 2017 18:03
The Invisible said:
I feel like this a lot especially when it comes to guys because then I feel it\'s me if they aren\'t exactly good boyfriends and that\'s just not true. You can only be you, if they wish to see that and love you for it then there you go but if they choose to ignore it then they just lost the chance to have someone really amazing in their life. And that\'s their fault.
June 11th, 2017 18:03
It\'s always my fault
Augustus said:
Head over heals to reality. Get up, dust yourself off and take heed of the lesson learned. Well thought out and written.
June 11th, 2017 12:07
Augustus said:
Head over heals to reality. Get up, dust yourself off and take heed of the lesson learned. Well thought out and written.
June 11th, 2017 12:07
It\'s always my fault
Jooles said:
Awww your so young. Good write.....don\'t be so hard on yourself. ...you have years of punishment ahead lol I kid. Loves....attraction is hard....
June 11th, 2017 07:30
Jooles said:
Awww your so young. Good write.....don\'t be so hard on yourself. ...you have years of punishment ahead lol I kid. Loves....attraction is hard....
June 11th, 2017 07:30
It\'s always my fault
Jooles said:
Awww your so young. Good write.....don\'t be so hard on yourself. ...you have years of punishment ahead lol I kid. Loves....attraction is hard....
June 11th, 2017 06:59
Jooles said:
Awww your so young. Good write.....don\'t be so hard on yourself. ...you have years of punishment ahead lol I kid. Loves....attraction is hard....
June 11th, 2017 06:59
It\'s always my fault
swingline said:
Ha ha , no you can\'t claim all as your fault . Save some for the rest of us . And if you are looking for something special and I told you I hid it under a rock wouldn\'t you look under every rock until you found it . I started writing poetry when I was your age some 53 years ago . Don\'t become discouraged .
June 11th, 2017 02:38
swingline said:
Ha ha , no you can\'t claim all as your fault . Save some for the rest of us . And if you are looking for something special and I told you I hid it under a rock wouldn\'t you look under every rock until you found it . I started writing poetry when I was your age some 53 years ago . Don\'t become discouraged .
June 11th, 2017 02:38
My Memories
alisha said:
i feel the same way right now, old memories are always the worst.
June 9th, 2017 15:34
alisha said:
i feel the same way right now, old memories are always the worst.
June 9th, 2017 15:34
My Memories
Louis Gibbs said:
Who would we be without our memories? I don\'t think they come back so much as they never leave ... thank goodness! Good write, Fluatist.
June 9th, 2017 13:03
Louis Gibbs said:
Who would we be without our memories? I don\'t think they come back so much as they never leave ... thank goodness! Good write, Fluatist.
June 9th, 2017 13:03
Thoughts
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i can relate to this i have written a song called i thought i knew and what one of the lines were was \" it was a to good to be true fairytale, and thats how everything ended up to be ...a to good to be true fairytale\"
June 9th, 2017 08:58
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i can relate to this i have written a song called i thought i knew and what one of the lines were was \" it was a to good to be true fairytale, and thats how everything ended up to be ...a to good to be true fairytale\"
June 9th, 2017 08:58
My Memories
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i feel the exact same way about this poem its just that the memories can haunt you and break you down ya know?
June 9th, 2017 08:54
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i feel the exact same way about this poem its just that the memories can haunt you and break you down ya know?
June 9th, 2017 08:54
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