Comments received on poems by Mandi
Megan
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, your love and friendship abounds in these words.
May 2nd, 2017 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, your love and friendship abounds in these words.
May 2nd, 2017 02:12
I Live In A Box
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MANDI ~ Love the form and rhythm of your Poem. In classical poetry ~ repetition is very important ! I get the message I LIVE IN A BOX ! You are special ~ but not too different ~ we all (in the UK) live in BOXES ~ made out of ticky~tacky and they all look the same. BUT I like to get out of my BOX (especially if love comes calling !) or I invite the LADY in .............. ! Love the last line ~ you eventually broke loose from you BOX ~ AMEN Some can\'t and some never do ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my poems YOURS ~ BRIAN (UK)
May 1st, 2017 05:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MANDI ~ Love the form and rhythm of your Poem. In classical poetry ~ repetition is very important ! I get the message I LIVE IN A BOX ! You are special ~ but not too different ~ we all (in the UK) live in BOXES ~ made out of ticky~tacky and they all look the same. BUT I like to get out of my BOX (especially if love comes calling !) or I invite the LADY in .............. ! Love the last line ~ you eventually broke loose from you BOX ~ AMEN Some can\'t and some never do ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my poems YOURS ~ BRIAN (UK)
May 1st, 2017 05:37
Little Terrors
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, you wouldn\'t be without them though.
May 1st, 2017 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, you wouldn\'t be without them though.
May 1st, 2017 00:38
My Nightmare
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, I will keep you in my prayers.
April 30th, 2017 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, I will keep you in my prayers.
April 30th, 2017 02:13
My Nightmare
LML said:
I\'m so sorry😭 My husband is gone for a different reason and it\'s so lonley sometimes u exsplined it perfectly
April 30th, 2017 00:00
LML said:
I\'m so sorry😭 My husband is gone for a different reason and it\'s so lonley sometimes u exsplined it perfectly
April 30th, 2017 00:00
My Nightmare
BeckyJo said:
My heart goes out to you. I want to let you know I am appreciative to the both of you for your service. I was a USN Wife for pert near 20 years. He did 23. It\'s a hard life for all concerned. My hat is off to you
April 29th, 2017 23:26
BeckyJo said:
My heart goes out to you. I want to let you know I am appreciative to the both of you for your service. I was a USN Wife for pert near 20 years. He did 23. It\'s a hard life for all concerned. My hat is off to you
April 29th, 2017 23:26
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