Comments received on poems by Mandi



Sleep
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

I agree MANDI ~ Sleep is indeed Divine. I thanks GOD that I never have any difficulty in getting to sleep @ night. Having a clear conscience and no big worries helps ~ Hugs BRIAN

May 15th, 2017 10:05

Sleep
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I will have to go and have a lay down now.

May 15th, 2017 09:59

7 Deadly Sins
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing (and caring) MANDI ! Love BOSCH a very srrealist Painter and you in your turn have painted a great Tone Poem on the SDS. WRATH ~ LUST ~ GLUTTONY are negative opportunities we face everyday and are three evil DEMONS destroying \"Polite Society\" GREED ~ SLOTH ~ ENVY these three (and the worst of these is GREED) control Business & Commerce and especially POLITICS ! We all need to have a modicum of SELF ESTEEM but PRIDE flaunts it and often precedes a fall ! Check Galatians 5 (New Testament) for the nine Fruit of the Spirit (Love ~ Joy ~ Peace etc). They are the antithisis of the SDS and the traits we should cultivate ~ Thanks BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B.

May 14th, 2017 09:45

Bogeyman
Gino said:

Exactly the same feeling I had when I first saw the Exorcist many years ago...haha nice write...

May 13th, 2017 15:17

Bogeyman
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

As you know MANDI ~ the world is replete with BOGEYMEN who lie in wait to ravish lovely Ladies like you. I am praying you will be safe day & night ~ because you are lovely ! Hugs BRIAN

May 13th, 2017 07:40

Bogeyman
WriteBeLight said:

Ohhh Noo! Scary write :)

May 13th, 2017 05:50

He Feeds My Soul
orchidee said:

A fine write.

May 12th, 2017 08:48

He Feeds My Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, may your love grow stronger each day.

May 12th, 2017 08:36

Break A Leg
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, very true.

May 11th, 2017 01:44

Break A Leg
Michael Edwards said:

Enjoyed this Mandi

May 11th, 2017 00:14

Wet Dreams
Mandi said:

I added a few lines...hope it didn\'t ruin it😅

May 10th, 2017 10:03

Broken
LML said:

I feel so this way too🙈 This is a beautiful poem👍🏼 Keep up the good work🙂

May 10th, 2017 02:13

Ocean
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MANDI for another beautiful poem ~ I love the OCEAN it is always mysterious and infinite. It awakens all the senses ~ trouble is we can\'t ocean gaze for ever ! Thanks for sharing ~ Ocean View Hugs ~ BRIAN

May 9th, 2017 11:03

You\'re Beautiful
Lizzy Renee said:

Nice Poem :)

May 8th, 2017 07:55

You\'re Beautiful
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

May 8th, 2017 07:00

You\'re Beautiful
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a wonderful write, beauty is found inside people and those who care will always see it. May your life remain beautiful.

May 8th, 2017 01:44

You\'re Beautiful
SoulTuesday said:

I appreciate this

May 8th, 2017 00:52

Because Your Gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MANDI ~ for a beautifully composed poem replete with RHYME & RHYTHM ~ BUT ~ such a tale of WOE ! I can empahsise ! When we are absented from someone who is our Love & Life ~ then life loses its purpose. I know we are only CYBER fiends but we care for you and share the pain of yor separartion ~ HUGS BRIAN

May 7th, 2017 10:32

Because Your Gone
Frank Prem said:

Nice rhyme scheme mandi.

May 7th, 2017 02:51

Tell Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

We all have secrets MANDI that we can only share with those we really love ! So I\'ll tell you mine I LOVE YOU ~ BRIAN XOX

May 6th, 2017 09:40

Wet Dreams
Tony36 said:

Good write

May 5th, 2017 10:28

Wet Dreams
Rajkumar said:

I like the way you expressed simple acts in words

May 5th, 2017 08:32

Wet Dreams
LukeMorrison said:

I really like the structure and imagery of this poem. Well done! I do however think there\'s more to be said about this.I think this could be a world - class poem with a bit of tweaking. Just my opinion, anyway, congratulations!

May 5th, 2017 01:24

Wet Dreams
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

\"Say 69 and kiss me ~ Hold m tight and tell me you miss me ~ I love you wherever you be ~ dream a little DREAM of ME ! Thanks MANDI ~ When we are apart from our LOVER we all dream of making love ~ and (in context) this a very beautiful Poem to wake up to ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN

May 5th, 2017 01:23

Wet Dreams
swingline said:

100 years ago it would have been banned in Boston . Sweet dreams are made of this . Who am I to disagree ?

May 5th, 2017 01:05

Spring Senses
Goldfinch60 said:

May your happiness never stop.

May 4th, 2017 08:04

Mother
swingline said:

If there were no mothers there would be no fathers .When God made woman out of a rib from man he wanted something from the man that was the closest to his heart .

May 3rd, 2017 02:10

Mother
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. In the UK Mothers Day was 26th March.

May 3rd, 2017 01:39

Megan
Mandi said:

Thank you all so much😊

May 2nd, 2017 07:30

Megan
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

May 2nd, 2017 07:00

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