Comments received on poems by Mandi
A Beautiful Butterfly
malubotelho said:
Mandi, you are great story teller. Just so awesome.
August 24th, 2017 14:02
malubotelho said:
Mandi, you are great story teller. Just so awesome.
August 24th, 2017 14:02
A Beautiful Butterfly
WL Schuett said:
Very nice Mandi a good train throughout kept me interested and though I knew where it was going I kept reading and enjoyed it
August 24th, 2017 09:35
WL Schuett said:
Very nice Mandi a good train throughout kept me interested and though I knew where it was going I kept reading and enjoyed it
August 24th, 2017 09:35
A Beautiful Butterfly
lasergraph said:
WOW, a beautiful read and a great message. This would be a great children\'s book. It brightened my day.
August 24th, 2017 08:09
lasergraph said:
WOW, a beautiful read and a great message. This would be a great children\'s book. It brightened my day.
August 24th, 2017 08:09
A Beautiful Butterfly
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW MANDI ~ Thanks for a beautiful SAGA ! We look at ourselves and often wonder ~ will I find someone just like me (My female or male alter ego) and our love will be equal and mutual ? Your story illustrates this perfectly and I found it so so beautiful ~ it made me weep with JOY ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my PYRAMID POEM ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 06:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW MANDI ~ Thanks for a beautiful SAGA ! We look at ourselves and often wonder ~ will I find someone just like me (My female or male alter ego) and our love will be equal and mutual ? Your story illustrates this perfectly and I found it so so beautiful ~ it made me weep with JOY ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my PYRAMID POEM ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 06:17
Emotional Colors
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that rainbow is the promise that all is well.
August 24th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that rainbow is the promise that all is well.
August 24th, 2017 00:56
Emotional Colors
WL Schuett said:
Cool poem nicely done leading to the rainbow
August 23rd, 2017 20:53
WL Schuett said:
Cool poem nicely done leading to the rainbow
August 23rd, 2017 20:53
Empty Room
FredPeyer said:
When reading your well written poem, one can feel the loneliness seeping out between each line. I like \'your laugh echoes in my mind\' and \'your smile is just out of sight\'. Beautifully said.
August 16th, 2017 22:47
FredPeyer said:
When reading your well written poem, one can feel the loneliness seeping out between each line. I like \'your laugh echoes in my mind\' and \'your smile is just out of sight\'. Beautifully said.
August 16th, 2017 22:47
It\'s been a long day
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely love this, thank you! next time I belt one out and take that breath in, I\'m sure to remember these words as I let it go again.
Thank you once more
July 10th, 2017 03:22
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely love this, thank you! next time I belt one out and take that breath in, I\'m sure to remember these words as I let it go again.
Thank you once more
July 10th, 2017 03:22
It\'s been a long day
Nicholas Browning said:
Holding it in is never really a good thing. Unless you\'re like, a cage fighter, or something. I dunno.
July 10th, 2017 02:13
Nicholas Browning said:
Holding it in is never really a good thing. Unless you\'re like, a cage fighter, or something. I dunno.
July 10th, 2017 02:13
Em Seracs Ti *An Emordnilap Poem*
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ITS NOT A BUMMER MANDI ! very challenging and stimulating ! MPS can get a bit boring and pessimist ~ You PALINDROME amused me and made me think ! Did you know that the Artist & Scientist Leonardo Da Vinci wrote all his scientific papers in MIRROR WRITING (Palindromes) When reversed your poem is a GREAT \"Monster in the Room\" poem ~ SPOOKY
I started with the line \"NOTICE IT IS SO BIG FACED\" and ended with \"IT MAY GET ME !\"
It made sense to me ~ so please post some more mad poems ~ OK
I have posted a CUDDLY one on Paddington Bear and a SPOOKY one on DEJA VU ~ please check. If we just stuck to boring and depressing poems ~ then MPS would die ~ it needs people like you and I who think outside the POETIC BOX !
Sguh & Evol ~ BRIAN !
June 30th, 2017 10:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ITS NOT A BUMMER MANDI ! very challenging and stimulating ! MPS can get a bit boring and pessimist ~ You PALINDROME amused me and made me think ! Did you know that the Artist & Scientist Leonardo Da Vinci wrote all his scientific papers in MIRROR WRITING (Palindromes) When reversed your poem is a GREAT \"Monster in the Room\" poem ~ SPOOKY
I started with the line \"NOTICE IT IS SO BIG FACED\" and ended with \"IT MAY GET ME !\"
It made sense to me ~ so please post some more mad poems ~ OK
I have posted a CUDDLY one on Paddington Bear and a SPOOKY one on DEJA VU ~ please check. If we just stuck to boring and depressing poems ~ then MPS would die ~ it needs people like you and I who think outside the POETIC BOX !
Sguh & Evol ~ BRIAN !
June 30th, 2017 10:23
An Instant With You
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, each moment is special and they all should be treasured.
June 30th, 2017 08:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, each moment is special and they all should be treasured.
June 30th, 2017 08:15
Em Seracs Ti *An Emordnilap Poem*
swingline said:
Well after reversing everything it still did not make sense .
June 10th, 2017 22:36
swingline said:
Well after reversing everything it still did not make sense .
June 10th, 2017 22:36
Alone Dreaming Of You
swingline said:
The heart has to have blood to function . When it runs out it grows colder .
June 9th, 2017 22:16
swingline said:
The heart has to have blood to function . When it runs out it grows colder .
June 9th, 2017 22:16
DRINK
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhh MANDI ~ Thanks for a lovely ACROSTIC tribute to BACCHUS ! Alcohol ~ in moderation ~ sure does relieve STRESS ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN
June 4th, 2017 04:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhh MANDI ~ Thanks for a lovely ACROSTIC tribute to BACCHUS ! Alcohol ~ in moderation ~ sure does relieve STRESS ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN
June 4th, 2017 04:09
Her Kiss Might Kill Me
Augustus said:
I take it you really dig this lady. Heh,heh. This is so beautifully done. Love the ending.
June 2nd, 2017 23:48
Augustus said:
I take it you really dig this lady. Heh,heh. This is so beautifully done. Love the ending.
June 2nd, 2017 23:48
Her Kiss Might Kill Me
swingline said:
At first I envisioned a phantom but she quickly materialized into reality . The rest is classified as topless secret .
June 2nd, 2017 23:03
swingline said:
At first I envisioned a phantom but she quickly materialized into reality . The rest is classified as topless secret .
June 2nd, 2017 23:03
Lover\'s Resolve
swingline said:
Love is sometimes like cutting teeth . But eventually everything gums out fine .
May 31st, 2017 23:10
swingline said:
Love is sometimes like cutting teeth . But eventually everything gums out fine .
May 31st, 2017 23:10
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