Comments received on poems by Mandi
I\'m Breaking
AfairlyUselessFairy said:
This is amazing, you can really feel the emotion flowing out of it. Keep writing, I’d love to read more of your art.
October 25th, 2018 16:04
AfairlyUselessFairy said:
This is amazing, you can really feel the emotion flowing out of it. Keep writing, I’d love to read more of your art.
October 25th, 2018 16:04
A Beautiful Goodbye
A.H. Browning said:
I just discovered and enjoyed this write. Very nice.
October 25th, 2018 01:55
A.H. Browning said:
I just discovered and enjoyed this write. Very nice.
October 25th, 2018 01:55
A Beautiful Goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a beautiful part of the day and we know that the beaty of the dawn will be with us before long.
August 24th, 2018 03:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a beautiful part of the day and we know that the beaty of the dawn will be with us before long.
August 24th, 2018 03:47
adjust back WITH me
WL Schuett said:
A powerful longing and a firm call to commitment, good poem
November 9th, 2017 20:02
WL Schuett said:
A powerful longing and a firm call to commitment, good poem
November 9th, 2017 20:02
Pumpkin Jack
Michael Edwards said:
Great little work - so appealing in its simplicity - enjoyed!!
October 5th, 2017 10:34
Michael Edwards said:
Great little work - so appealing in its simplicity - enjoyed!!
October 5th, 2017 10:34
Waiting For You To See Me
ron parrish aka wordman said:
it is a natural thing,attraction,
but we hope to be seen and loved
September 17th, 2017 11:17
ron parrish aka wordman said:
it is a natural thing,attraction,
but we hope to be seen and loved
September 17th, 2017 11:17
Waiting For You To See Me
WL Schuett said:
I like how you are working this poem I like some of each , in either the yearning comes through if I had pick one I d pick the second version ...good work Mandi
September 17th, 2017 10:48
WL Schuett said:
I like how you are working this poem I like some of each , in either the yearning comes through if I had pick one I d pick the second version ...good work Mandi
September 17th, 2017 10:48
Sandman
WL Schuett said:
A nice way to end the day , Mandi . A nice gentle rhythmic poem
September 12th, 2017 22:52
WL Schuett said:
A nice way to end the day , Mandi . A nice gentle rhythmic poem
September 12th, 2017 22:52
Sandman
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.\" Twyla Tharp
Your poetry as art propels us into another world of dreams where we rather gently ... float...
September 12th, 2017 22:22
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.\" Twyla Tharp
Your poetry as art propels us into another world of dreams where we rather gently ... float...
September 12th, 2017 22:22
Sandman
Mugsdaddy said:
Definitely not scary. Makes me want to take a nap.
September 12th, 2017 22:01
Mugsdaddy said:
Definitely not scary. Makes me want to take a nap.
September 12th, 2017 22:01
Sandman
drchito fl said:
Nicely written! I also like the accompanying caricature.
drchito fl
September 12th, 2017 21:51
drchito fl said:
Nicely written! I also like the accompanying caricature.
drchito fl
September 12th, 2017 21:51
She Wants To Dance
Adam Shirley said:
Your poetry is absolutely astounding! Well done Mandi.
September 1st, 2017 22:45
Adam Shirley said:
Your poetry is absolutely astounding! Well done Mandi.
September 1st, 2017 22:45
She Wants To Dance
FredPeyer said:
I really, really like this poem, Mandi. Shyness is a terrible affliction and it takes a lot to overcome it. But then, music is a universal healer! Well written, good message!
September 1st, 2017 20:29
FredPeyer said:
I really, really like this poem, Mandi. Shyness is a terrible affliction and it takes a lot to overcome it. But then, music is a universal healer! Well written, good message!
September 1st, 2017 20:29
She Wants To Dance
WL Schuett said:
A wall flower no more , very nicely presented doodle and all , very good Mandi
September 1st, 2017 20:04
WL Schuett said:
A wall flower no more , very nicely presented doodle and all , very good Mandi
September 1st, 2017 20:04
i\'m my own worst enemy
WL Schuett said:
Full of longing , but everyone can be supportive but it all comes down to you to save yourself,this is nicely done good poem
August 29th, 2017 18:36
WL Schuett said:
Full of longing , but everyone can be supportive but it all comes down to you to save yourself,this is nicely done good poem
August 29th, 2017 18:36
i\'m my own worst enemy
mocuisle said:
I can relate to this a lot , great write I really enjoyed it
August 29th, 2017 18:16
mocuisle said:
I can relate to this a lot , great write I really enjoyed it
August 29th, 2017 18:16
A Broken Old Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with so much meaning in it.
August 27th, 2017 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with so much meaning in it.
August 27th, 2017 02:01
A Broken Old Man
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Love is the cure to brokenness, old age, and well - darn near any other malady the world will offer. Beautiful and timeless subject matter - the world needs a lot more of it too.
August 26th, 2017 22:56
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Love is the cure to brokenness, old age, and well - darn near any other malady the world will offer. Beautiful and timeless subject matter - the world needs a lot more of it too.
August 26th, 2017 22:56
A Broken Old Man
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m in agreement with others before me, this is s beautiful write. And it ends with the old man smiling. ; )
August 26th, 2017 18:04
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m in agreement with others before me, this is s beautiful write. And it ends with the old man smiling. ; )
August 26th, 2017 18:04
A Broken Old Man
docstorm said:
A nice way to go. Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.
August 26th, 2017 16:23
docstorm said:
A nice way to go. Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.
August 26th, 2017 16:23
A Broken Old Man
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MANDY ~ Thanks for a beautiful VISION encapsulated in a perfect POEM ! Perfect rhythm and consistent xaxa xbxb rhyming pattern. As I visulise the scenario you painted so so Beautifully ~ she was sent by God as His Angel Wife to call Him home to Paradise ! It does happen to some ! Thanks for caring & sharing Yours BRIAN
August 26th, 2017 16:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MANDY ~ Thanks for a beautiful VISION encapsulated in a perfect POEM ! Perfect rhythm and consistent xaxa xbxb rhyming pattern. As I visulise the scenario you painted so so Beautifully ~ she was sent by God as His Angel Wife to call Him home to Paradise ! It does happen to some ! Thanks for caring & sharing Yours BRIAN
August 26th, 2017 16:19
A Beautiful Butterfly
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful story, beautifully written poem! We all have some \'spots\' we worry about. A wonderfully uplifting write!
August 26th, 2017 14:58
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful story, beautifully written poem! We all have some \'spots\' we worry about. A wonderfully uplifting write!
August 26th, 2017 14:58
A Broken Old Man
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, well rhymed, with a lot of emotion. Very good work!
August 26th, 2017 14:51
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, well rhymed, with a lot of emotion. Very good work!
August 26th, 2017 14:51
A Broken Old Man
WL Schuett said:
Nice work ,easy to read ,nice flow ... thoughtful.
August 26th, 2017 14:47
WL Schuett said:
Nice work ,easy to read ,nice flow ... thoughtful.
August 26th, 2017 14:47
A Beautiful Butterfly
Adam Shirley said:
This brought me to tears I have to say, It\'s one of the most beautiful pieces I\'ve ever read, thank you for this poem, it\'s wonderful!
August 24th, 2017 21:40
Adam Shirley said:
This brought me to tears I have to say, It\'s one of the most beautiful pieces I\'ve ever read, thank you for this poem, it\'s wonderful!
August 24th, 2017 21:40
A Beautiful Butterfly
dusk arising said:
Quite lovely. Very enjoyable reading.
August 24th, 2017 16:30
dusk arising said:
Quite lovely. Very enjoyable reading.
August 24th, 2017 16:30
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