Comments received on poems by Jane Frye



The Day the Alphabet Stood Still
Jane Frye said:

Thank you, Angela. The funny thing is, I wrote this poem this morning after reading a reply someone left for someone else\'s poem. In the reply the person referred to you and Brian as A&B, and I thought that was cute. So that is how the idea for this story came about. Stay sane. :-)

April 7th, 2020 13:43

The Day the Alphabet Stood Still
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE (I share this site with my Husband Brian) Thanks for sharing an awesome poem based on the *Letters of the Alphabet* I love poems of this sort that Humanise Letters & Numbers. Also ABCDarian Poems with 26 lines each begining with a consecutive letter of the Alphabet !

Please check our site A & B ~Thanks
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛

April 7th, 2020 13:31

Murmuration
Goldfinch60 said:

Those murmurations of starlings are one of the most wonderful sites in the world. I can understand the \'tear-streaked face\' as I am pulled into tears of wonder at the sight of this beauty.

Andy

February 15th, 2020 01:31

Murmuration
Saxon Crow said:

Beautiful poem. The murmeration of birds is completely hypnotising and spellbinding. An ocean of wings on the deep blue sky!

February 14th, 2020 04:22

Foolishly Yours
ron parrish aka wordman said:

a mystical write of a love long ago

December 11th, 2019 14:53

Foolishly Yours
Goldfinch60 said:

Your heartbeats may be numbered but with words like these they will be numbered for eternity.

December 11th, 2019 01:22

Foolishly Yours
FredPeyer said:

beautifully written, Jane! But never give up on dreams, no matter how numbered your heartbeats are. Love the ending!

December 10th, 2019 21:58

Outback
Jane Frye said:



November 27th, 2019 01:48

Outback
Unsub said:

Jane,

great poem. He will be sorely missed with his insightful comments & OUTlook on life.

Thankfully he hasn\'t had his day yet; you can kick a man when he\'s down but he is a defiant bugger.

Unsub.

November 24th, 2019 15:31

Outback
Laura said:

Jane,

Perhaps he was ‘misjudged’ and/or ‘misplaced’...
but he will never be ‘completely erased’!
Like a Phoenix, he will rise once again from its ashes!

~Laura~

November 23rd, 2019 06:04

Outback
orchidee said:

Some things he said went over my head - me, a simple soul - not THAT simple! lol. He had his own style.

November 22nd, 2019 06:55

Outback
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write about a wonderful person, we will miss him.

November 22nd, 2019 02:28

Charming but not Sincere
Goldfinch60 said:

May that dance lead you to the man who will truly love you.

November 17th, 2019 02:36

The Bully
FredPeyer said:

Jane, what a great poem! Love the subject matter, choice of words, and rhyme. Well done!

November 6th, 2019 01:37

The Bully
Aislinn Wilson said:

Good use of rhyme

November 5th, 2019 22:29

Stay Spooky
Jamie said:

A wicked blast! ...wait, someone’s knocking, be right back

October 13th, 2019 17:09

Stay Spooky
Jane Frye said:

Thank you Michael.

October 13th, 2019 16:14

Stay Spooky
Michael Edwards said:

Everything\'s right about this. It\'s a fun write which flows so well - great metre - loved it.

October 13th, 2019 15:18

What If
Jane Frye said:



September 29th, 2019 16:20

The Child Who Stold My Heart
FredPeyer said:

Nice, Jane. I have six grand-kids and they are all angels while they are sleeping. Not so much when awake. But I love them anyway! :-)

September 26th, 2019 17:00

Keeping Time
John_Blood said:

Persistent illusion .. very much so .

November 19th, 2018 12:39

A Father\'s Day Adventure
Jane Frye said:

Thank you for reading to the end. I knew when I was writing this that some would give up on me before reaching the end of the poem. But, I had fun writing it, and I learned all about the post office. The best part of life is that there is always something new to learn, even if it is just how the post office in my town works.

June 18th, 2018 11:32

Soaring
Jane Frye said:

Thank you for your kind words.

June 17th, 2018 01:54

Soaring
Frogspoetry said:

Very beautifully put.Always look to God,for inspiration and love,serenity and refuge

June 16th, 2018 20:30

Soaring
Goldfinch60 said:

Sail into your dreams, they are full of joy.

June 16th, 2018 13:01

Unfortunate Conclusions
AmateurSomeone said:

A powerful message

June 14th, 2018 15:06

Unfortunate Conclusions
willyweed said:

clever with good rhyme. ww

June 14th, 2018 13:53

The Wedding
Jane Frye said:

Wow! Thank you Spinner. I used a book called \"Secret Meanings of Flowers\" by Brenda Jenkins Kleager. It is a book I keep in my library for reference. Great book to keep on hand if you like to write. Another valuable book for any writer is \"The Elements of Eloquence, Secrets of the Perfect Turn of Phrase\". You can download it on Audible. Well, write on!

June 11th, 2018 23:14

The Wedding
Jane Frye said:

Thank you for reading my prose, and taking the time to comment. I too, enjoyed the recent Royal Wedding. Beautiful and glad it was televised. I wrote my prose for the wedding of my daughter and her husband. I looked up the symbolism for each flower, as well as where they grow, so that I found what I thought, was the perfect flower for each stanza. It was fun to write, and I learned a lot about flower symbolism.

June 11th, 2018 15:21

The Wedding
FineB said:

Thanks Jane.

How beautiful, enchanting and ethereal.

I love a good wedding. I certainly enjoyed the Duke and Duchess of Sussex and their beautiful wedding.

Keep writing
FineB

June 11th, 2018 13:37

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