Comments received on poems by Jane Frye
I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show!
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Jane. Thank you for sharing your poem. Good job! And Happy birthday!
November 6th, 2023 17:52
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Jane. Thank you for sharing your poem. Good job! And Happy birthday!
November 6th, 2023 17:52
The Bully
jarcher54 said:
You are quite adept at turning the informal into poetry! What appears to be light and simple ends up being intense and stunning. And the epithets you chose are so apt... we all recall that verbal acid being thrown in our faces... fag, retard, wierdo, punk, and those we cannot even say or write without them hurting still. You are a good soul. So much self-care and universal love in a few words.
August 19th, 2023 09:47
jarcher54 said:
You are quite adept at turning the informal into poetry! What appears to be light and simple ends up being intense and stunning. And the epithets you chose are so apt... we all recall that verbal acid being thrown in our faces... fag, retard, wierdo, punk, and those we cannot even say or write without them hurting still. You are a good soul. So much self-care and universal love in a few words.
August 19th, 2023 09:47
I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show!
Jane Frye said:
Thank you WriteBeLight. I certainly wouldn\'t want the nadir of my life to be recorded and put on national TV, but when that lady yelled out, \"Shut your mouth when you talk.\" I could relate. 🙂
February 18th, 2023 10:43
Jane Frye said:
Thank you WriteBeLight. I certainly wouldn\'t want the nadir of my life to be recorded and put on national TV, but when that lady yelled out, \"Shut your mouth when you talk.\" I could relate. 🙂
February 18th, 2023 10:43
I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show!
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I have watched that show and can\'t believe what some people will do for attention. Good job on the write Jane!
February 17th, 2023 13:19
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I have watched that show and can\'t believe what some people will do for attention. Good job on the write Jane!
February 17th, 2023 13:19
Charming but not Sincere
Jane Frye said:
No, really...just a poem! Okay, maybe a little bit true. 😀 This reminds me of Mark Twain\'s funny comment, \"I have known a great many troubles in my life, but most of them never happened.\"
January 31st, 2023 12:59
Jane Frye said:
No, really...just a poem! Okay, maybe a little bit true. 😀 This reminds me of Mark Twain\'s funny comment, \"I have known a great many troubles in my life, but most of them never happened.\"
January 31st, 2023 12:59
Charming but not Sincere
jarcher54 said:
Very playful, and very observant. OK, just a poem... yeah like we believe that!
January 31st, 2023 10:10
jarcher54 said:
Very playful, and very observant. OK, just a poem... yeah like we believe that!
January 31st, 2023 10:10
I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show!
jarcher54 said:
One must watch at least one to understand why one avoids them. Like social media, they give the addicted viewer a distorted sense of our everyday lives... I hope. I always read the poem BEFORE the author\'s comment. So this was way funny at first then horrifying, then a relief. I\'d like you to review all the shows I don\'t watch. Naked and Afraid, The Bachelor, Fox News...
January 29th, 2023 12:47
jarcher54 said:
One must watch at least one to understand why one avoids them. Like social media, they give the addicted viewer a distorted sense of our everyday lives... I hope. I always read the poem BEFORE the author\'s comment. So this was way funny at first then horrifying, then a relief. I\'d like you to review all the shows I don\'t watch. Naked and Afraid, The Bachelor, Fox News...
January 29th, 2023 12:47
I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show!
L. B. Mek said:
(Edgar A Poe, was visited by a craven
you clicked upon, a Dr Phil
centuries, mediums and topics
apart
yet connected, seamless
by that poetic zeal, that creative need
to depict, to share, to word
sincere and so eloquent...)
thank you dear poet
such a fun read
you showcase lovely dialogue, and characterisation skills
have you tried scribbling a short story or two?
January 27th, 2023 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
(Edgar A Poe, was visited by a craven
you clicked upon, a Dr Phil
centuries, mediums and topics
apart
yet connected, seamless
by that poetic zeal, that creative need
to depict, to share, to word
sincere and so eloquent...)
thank you dear poet
such a fun read
you showcase lovely dialogue, and characterisation skills
have you tried scribbling a short story or two?
January 27th, 2023 03:43
I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show!
orchidee said:
We had dreadful Jeremy Kyle Show in UK until it got banned - consigned to a cess pit.
January 24th, 2023 03:20
orchidee said:
We had dreadful Jeremy Kyle Show in UK until it got banned - consigned to a cess pit.
January 24th, 2023 03:20
I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show!
Doggerel Dave said:
Then if you watch them all, your mind would really fill up then....Become very maggoty. It is a source of wonder at the mentality of those people who wish to participate in such shows.
A write which painted the picture.....
January 24th, 2023 00:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Then if you watch them all, your mind would really fill up then....Become very maggoty. It is a source of wonder at the mentality of those people who wish to participate in such shows.
A write which painted the picture.....
January 24th, 2023 00:37
Existential Change
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your loss, dear poet
this reads a most sincere
and beautifully quirky, dedication
thanks for sharing
(in relativity\'s, interconnectivity
we do so inquisitively
seek, to anchor our hopes
for a revisit of those we miss
beyond
inevitability\'s, \'great perhaps\')
January 23rd, 2023 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your loss, dear poet
this reads a most sincere
and beautifully quirky, dedication
thanks for sharing
(in relativity\'s, interconnectivity
we do so inquisitively
seek, to anchor our hopes
for a revisit of those we miss
beyond
inevitability\'s, \'great perhaps\')
January 23rd, 2023 05:03
Foolishly Yours
StarGazingWanderer said:
What you have to offer is precious. You stayed true to yourself and your promises. You chose to believe the best in others and be courageous to trust and love. Most people give up and never love again but then they\'d miss out on the most beautiful experience in the world. Your mind is a beautiful place. Keep going! :)
January 18th, 2023 01:16
StarGazingWanderer said:
What you have to offer is precious. You stayed true to yourself and your promises. You chose to believe the best in others and be courageous to trust and love. Most people give up and never love again but then they\'d miss out on the most beautiful experience in the world. Your mind is a beautiful place. Keep going! :)
January 18th, 2023 01:16
I Don\'t Want Prune Juice
Doggerel Dave said:
When you successfully complete the tunnel and are on your way, just give me a call....
January 16th, 2023 22:48
Doggerel Dave said:
When you successfully complete the tunnel and are on your way, just give me a call....
January 16th, 2023 22:48
I Don\'t Want Prune Juice
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I could picture myself some day! Great write!
January 16th, 2023 18:45
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I could picture myself some day! Great write!
January 16th, 2023 18:45
X\'s And O\'s
Jane Frye said:
WriteBeLight, I believe it would be called stalking, or at least delusional, at this point. 🙂
January 14th, 2023 23:17
Jane Frye said:
WriteBeLight, I believe it would be called stalking, or at least delusional, at this point. 🙂
January 14th, 2023 23:17
The Day the Alphabet Stood Still
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wonderfully creative Jane!
January 14th, 2023 20:28
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wonderfully creative Jane!
January 14th, 2023 20:28
X\'s And O\'s
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Believe in what you want!
January 14th, 2023 20:27
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Believe in what you want!
January 14th, 2023 20:27
Burnout
L. B. Mek said:
an Artisan\'s plight: within Modernity\'s, reality
how sobering
your insightful commentary, captures
struggles of those, integrity impassioned
with fervent intent, to actualise
their hopes and dreams
but finding their path\'s: forever blockaded
by society\'s crude mechanisms
of bottom line profiteering, ideology
and glutinous greed\'s, narcistic sycophancy...
(A profound write, dear poet)
June 14th, 2021 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
an Artisan\'s plight: within Modernity\'s, reality
how sobering
your insightful commentary, captures
struggles of those, integrity impassioned
with fervent intent, to actualise
their hopes and dreams
but finding their path\'s: forever blockaded
by society\'s crude mechanisms
of bottom line profiteering, ideology
and glutinous greed\'s, narcistic sycophancy...
(A profound write, dear poet)
June 14th, 2021 06:11
Burnout
Saxon Crow said:
It can get like that sometimes but giving up clearly isnt in the cards so i will see this is a positive poem from a caring soul
June 14th, 2021 00:50
Saxon Crow said:
It can get like that sometimes but giving up clearly isnt in the cards so i will see this is a positive poem from a caring soul
June 14th, 2021 00:50
Burnout
Goldfinch60 said:
Those shackles are now released through your words Jane.
Andy
June 14th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Those shackles are now released through your words Jane.
Andy
June 14th, 2021 00:43
Burnout
Jane Frye said:
Yep, just me dusting off my violin to play at my own pity party. But writing it out loud made me feel better. :-)
June 13th, 2021 21:38
Jane Frye said:
Yep, just me dusting off my violin to play at my own pity party. But writing it out loud made me feel better. :-)
June 13th, 2021 21:38
Burnout
Doggerel Dave said:
First and last lines - grave concern.
Middle three - rest up.
June 13th, 2021 20:36
Doggerel Dave said:
First and last lines - grave concern.
Middle three - rest up.
June 13th, 2021 20:36
Burnout
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like writer\'s block. But you pulled through just fine. ; )
June 13th, 2021 14:47
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like writer\'s block. But you pulled through just fine. ; )
June 13th, 2021 14:47
The Day the Alphabet Stood Still
Jane Frye said:
Thank you, Angela. The funny thing is, I wrote this poem this morning after reading a reply someone left for someone else\'s poem. In the reply the person referred to you and Brian as A&B, and I thought that was cute. So that is how the idea for this story came about. Stay sane. :-)
April 7th, 2020 13:43
Jane Frye said:
Thank you, Angela. The funny thing is, I wrote this poem this morning after reading a reply someone left for someone else\'s poem. In the reply the person referred to you and Brian as A&B, and I thought that was cute. So that is how the idea for this story came about. Stay sane. :-)
April 7th, 2020 13:43
The Day the Alphabet Stood Still
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (I share this site with my Husband Brian) Thanks for sharing an awesome poem based on the *Letters of the Alphabet* I love poems of this sort that Humanise Letters & Numbers. Also ABCDarian Poems with 26 lines each begining with a consecutive letter of the Alphabet !
Please check our site A & B ~Thanks
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 7th, 2020 13:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (I share this site with my Husband Brian) Thanks for sharing an awesome poem based on the *Letters of the Alphabet* I love poems of this sort that Humanise Letters & Numbers. Also ABCDarian Poems with 26 lines each begining with a consecutive letter of the Alphabet !
Please check our site A & B ~Thanks
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
April 7th, 2020 13:31
Murmuration
Goldfinch60 said:
Those murmurations of starlings are one of the most wonderful sites in the world. I can understand the \'tear-streaked face\' as I am pulled into tears of wonder at the sight of this beauty.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Those murmurations of starlings are one of the most wonderful sites in the world. I can understand the \'tear-streaked face\' as I am pulled into tears of wonder at the sight of this beauty.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:31
Murmuration
Saxon Crow said:
Beautiful poem. The murmeration of birds is completely hypnotising and spellbinding. An ocean of wings on the deep blue sky!
February 14th, 2020 04:22
Saxon Crow said:
Beautiful poem. The murmeration of birds is completely hypnotising and spellbinding. An ocean of wings on the deep blue sky!
February 14th, 2020 04:22
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