Comments received on poems by Jane Frye
Foolishly Yours
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a mystical write of a love long ago
December 11th, 2019 14:53
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a mystical write of a love long ago
December 11th, 2019 14:53
Foolishly Yours
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heartbeats may be numbered but with words like these they will be numbered for eternity.
December 11th, 2019 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heartbeats may be numbered but with words like these they will be numbered for eternity.
December 11th, 2019 01:22
Foolishly Yours
FredPeyer said:
beautifully written, Jane! But never give up on dreams, no matter how numbered your heartbeats are. Love the ending!
December 10th, 2019 21:58
FredPeyer said:
beautifully written, Jane! But never give up on dreams, no matter how numbered your heartbeats are. Love the ending!
December 10th, 2019 21:58
Outback
Laura🌻 said:
Jane,
Perhaps he was ‘misjudged’ and/or ‘misplaced’...
but he will never be ‘completely erased’!
Like a Phoenix, he will rise once again from its ashes!
~Laura~
November 23rd, 2019 06:04
Laura🌻 said:
Jane,
Perhaps he was ‘misjudged’ and/or ‘misplaced’...
but he will never be ‘completely erased’!
Like a Phoenix, he will rise once again from its ashes!
~Laura~
November 23rd, 2019 06:04
Outback
orchidee said:
Some things he said went over my head - me, a simple soul - not THAT simple! lol. He had his own style.
November 22nd, 2019 06:55
orchidee said:
Some things he said went over my head - me, a simple soul - not THAT simple! lol. He had his own style.
November 22nd, 2019 06:55
Outback
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write about a wonderful person, we will miss him.
November 22nd, 2019 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write about a wonderful person, we will miss him.
November 22nd, 2019 02:28
Charming but not Sincere
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dance lead you to the man who will truly love you.
November 17th, 2019 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dance lead you to the man who will truly love you.
November 17th, 2019 02:36
The Bully
FredPeyer said:
Jane, what a great poem! Love the subject matter, choice of words, and rhyme. Well done!
November 6th, 2019 01:37
FredPeyer said:
Jane, what a great poem! Love the subject matter, choice of words, and rhyme. Well done!
November 6th, 2019 01:37
Stay Spooky
Jamie said:
A wicked blast! ...wait, someone’s knocking, be right back
October 13th, 2019 17:09
Jamie said:
A wicked blast! ...wait, someone’s knocking, be right back
October 13th, 2019 17:09
Stay Spooky
Michael Edwards said:
Everything\'s right about this. It\'s a fun write which flows so well - great metre - loved it.
October 13th, 2019 15:18
Michael Edwards said:
Everything\'s right about this. It\'s a fun write which flows so well - great metre - loved it.
October 13th, 2019 15:18
The Child Who Stold My Heart
FredPeyer said:
Nice, Jane. I have six grand-kids and they are all angels while they are sleeping. Not so much when awake. But I love them anyway! :-)
September 26th, 2019 17:00
FredPeyer said:
Nice, Jane. I have six grand-kids and they are all angels while they are sleeping. Not so much when awake. But I love them anyway! :-)
September 26th, 2019 17:00
A Father\'s Day Adventure
Jane Frye said:
Thank you for reading to the end. I knew when I was writing this that some would give up on me before reaching the end of the poem. But, I had fun writing it, and I learned all about the post office. The best part of life is that there is always something new to learn, even if it is just how the post office in my town works.
June 18th, 2018 11:32
Jane Frye said:
Thank you for reading to the end. I knew when I was writing this that some would give up on me before reaching the end of the poem. But, I had fun writing it, and I learned all about the post office. The best part of life is that there is always something new to learn, even if it is just how the post office in my town works.
June 18th, 2018 11:32
Soaring
Frogspoetry said:
Very beautifully put.Always look to God,for inspiration and love,serenity and refuge
June 16th, 2018 20:30
Frogspoetry said:
Very beautifully put.Always look to God,for inspiration and love,serenity and refuge
June 16th, 2018 20:30
The Wedding
Jane Frye said:
Wow! Thank you Spinner. I used a book called \"Secret Meanings of Flowers\" by Brenda Jenkins Kleager. It is a book I keep in my library for reference. Great book to keep on hand if you like to write. Another valuable book for any writer is \"The Elements of Eloquence, Secrets of the Perfect Turn of Phrase\". You can download it on Audible. Well, write on!
June 11th, 2018 23:14
Jane Frye said:
Wow! Thank you Spinner. I used a book called \"Secret Meanings of Flowers\" by Brenda Jenkins Kleager. It is a book I keep in my library for reference. Great book to keep on hand if you like to write. Another valuable book for any writer is \"The Elements of Eloquence, Secrets of the Perfect Turn of Phrase\". You can download it on Audible. Well, write on!
June 11th, 2018 23:14
The Wedding
Jane Frye said:
Thank you for reading my prose, and taking the time to comment. I too, enjoyed the recent Royal Wedding. Beautiful and glad it was televised. I wrote my prose for the wedding of my daughter and her husband. I looked up the symbolism for each flower, as well as where they grow, so that I found what I thought, was the perfect flower for each stanza. It was fun to write, and I learned a lot about flower symbolism.
June 11th, 2018 15:21
Jane Frye said:
Thank you for reading my prose, and taking the time to comment. I too, enjoyed the recent Royal Wedding. Beautiful and glad it was televised. I wrote my prose for the wedding of my daughter and her husband. I looked up the symbolism for each flower, as well as where they grow, so that I found what I thought, was the perfect flower for each stanza. It was fun to write, and I learned a lot about flower symbolism.
June 11th, 2018 15:21
The Wedding
FineB said:
Thanks Jane.
How beautiful, enchanting and ethereal.
I love a good wedding. I certainly enjoyed the Duke and Duchess of Sussex and their beautiful wedding.
Keep writing
FineB
June 11th, 2018 13:37
FineB said:
Thanks Jane.
How beautiful, enchanting and ethereal.
I love a good wedding. I certainly enjoyed the Duke and Duchess of Sussex and their beautiful wedding.
Keep writing
FineB
June 11th, 2018 13:37
Nonna, Me, and Time
Jane Frye said:
Thank you so much. Remembering my nonna made me cry too. She was the neatest adult in my life when I was a child. I never got to know her as an adult, I only knew her through a child\'s eyes.
June 10th, 2018 22:28
Jane Frye said:
Thank you so much. Remembering my nonna made me cry too. She was the neatest adult in my life when I was a child. I never got to know her as an adult, I only knew her through a child\'s eyes.
June 10th, 2018 22:28
Nonna, Me, and Time
Laura🌻 said:
Jane,
A little gem of a poem!
This made me cry!
I miss my Nonna too!
~Laura~
June 10th, 2018 21:50
Laura🌻 said:
Jane,
A little gem of a poem!
This made me cry!
I miss my Nonna too!
~Laura~
June 10th, 2018 21:50
The Bee and Me
Jhe said:
oh i do think they\'re amazing
but every time one gets in
my home, the only thing
on my mind is its sting
...of course i
open the windows
shut the door and wait
for it to find its own way
(care of flowing fresh air)
back to the flowers again!
June 8th, 2018 11:37
Jhe said:
oh i do think they\'re amazing
but every time one gets in
my home, the only thing
on my mind is its sting
...of course i
open the windows
shut the door and wait
for it to find its own way
(care of flowing fresh air)
back to the flowers again!
June 8th, 2018 11:37
My Favorite Color
Jhe said:
what a great answer to the question!
such an inspiring write...
& romantic too :-)
very nice
June 8th, 2018 11:21
Jhe said:
what a great answer to the question!
such an inspiring write...
& romantic too :-)
very nice
June 8th, 2018 11:21
The Bee and Me
Jhe said:
was stung once
so i kno your fear
~
this poem made alot of sense
but like all poems born of dread
it\'s a shame it got scared
into being here ;-)
June 7th, 2018 04:52
Jhe said:
was stung once
so i kno your fear
~
this poem made alot of sense
but like all poems born of dread
it\'s a shame it got scared
into being here ;-)
June 7th, 2018 04:52
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