Comments received on poems by Jane Frye
Recipe For A Poem
Fay Slimm. said:
A very perceptive look at what makes a good poem Jane and one to which all serious poets can relate - - I love the suggestion of simmering all in the pot before writing. The penultimate stanza has to be my personal favourite. Great read.
June 6th, 2018 01:59
Fay Slimm. said:
A very perceptive look at what makes a good poem Jane and one to which all serious poets can relate - - I love the suggestion of simmering all in the pot before writing. The penultimate stanza has to be my personal favourite. Great read.
June 6th, 2018 01:59
Recipe For A Poem
Laura🌻 said:
Jane,
A delicious recipe from a great chef 👩🍳!
I enjoyed the desert! Thank you for the treat!
~Laura~
June 5th, 2018 19:30
Laura🌻 said:
Jane,
A delicious recipe from a great chef 👩🍳!
I enjoyed the desert! Thank you for the treat!
~Laura~
June 5th, 2018 19:30
Recipe For A Poem
HangingbyaHalo said:
This made me smile so big! So very true.
You have truly written the recipe for the perfect poem.
June 5th, 2018 18:47
HangingbyaHalo said:
This made me smile so big! So very true.
You have truly written the recipe for the perfect poem.
June 5th, 2018 18:47
Recipe For A Poem
Jane Frye said:
Are there poets without pain in their soul? I think everyone has their tears, but, I for one, am glad that not all poetry is dark and gloomy. So much more fun when there is a variety of poetry covering all the human conditions. I thought about this very thing when I was writing this poem. And personally, I do, much more, prefer lighthearted poetry. Thank you for reading my poem and commenting.
June 5th, 2018 15:44
Jane Frye said:
Are there poets without pain in their soul? I think everyone has their tears, but, I for one, am glad that not all poetry is dark and gloomy. So much more fun when there is a variety of poetry covering all the human conditions. I thought about this very thing when I was writing this poem. And personally, I do, much more, prefer lighthearted poetry. Thank you for reading my poem and commenting.
June 5th, 2018 15:44
Recipe For A Poem
dusk arising said:
A clever idea carried off with polish and panache. Are there poets without pain in their soul?
Pain and hurt seems to be a great motivator for us poets doesn\'t it.
But oh what sweet release is this therapeutic poetic outlet... i don\'t think i\'d survive without it. How about you.
June 5th, 2018 14:50
dusk arising said:
A clever idea carried off with polish and panache. Are there poets without pain in their soul?
Pain and hurt seems to be a great motivator for us poets doesn\'t it.
But oh what sweet release is this therapeutic poetic outlet... i don\'t think i\'d survive without it. How about you.
June 5th, 2018 14:50
The Woods
Jane Frye said:
Yes, the woods are aways enchanting. Thank you for your comments.
June 3rd, 2018 18:30
Jane Frye said:
Yes, the woods are aways enchanting. Thank you for your comments.
June 3rd, 2018 18:30
The Woods
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, the woods can tell us so many things, all you need to do is listen to nature.
June 3rd, 2018 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, the woods can tell us so many things, all you need to do is listen to nature.
June 3rd, 2018 00:37
The Woods
Jane Frye said:
Thank you. I read some of your poems today, and I have to tell you, I\'m hooked. I intend to read more in the coming days, and hope you will add many more in the days to come.
June 2nd, 2018 18:16
Jane Frye said:
Thank you. I read some of your poems today, and I have to tell you, I\'m hooked. I intend to read more in the coming days, and hope you will add many more in the days to come.
June 2nd, 2018 18:16
The Woods
dusk arising said:
Beautiful enchanting writing. I too looked at your previous work here and i find myself quite moved by your tender words. You truly have a gift with words.
June 2nd, 2018 15:29
dusk arising said:
Beautiful enchanting writing. I too looked at your previous work here and i find myself quite moved by your tender words. You truly have a gift with words.
June 2nd, 2018 15:29
What Might Have Been
HangingbyaHalo said:
The what if and could have been game is one I am painfully good at. I love this. Thank you for sharing.
May 27th, 2018 09:49
HangingbyaHalo said:
The what if and could have been game is one I am painfully good at. I love this. Thank you for sharing.
May 27th, 2018 09:49
You Never Knew Your Name
Jane Frye said:
Thank you, but I need to clarify. I wrote this for a friend who lost her baby unexpectedly an hour after she was born. It was devastating and affected family and friends, but left both parents besides themselves with grief.
May 3rd, 2017 17:26
Jane Frye said:
Thank you, but I need to clarify. I wrote this for a friend who lost her baby unexpectedly an hour after she was born. It was devastating and affected family and friends, but left both parents besides themselves with grief.
May 3rd, 2017 17:26
You Never Knew Your Name
Bibbeck said:
Your tears are very well written, Jayne. I feel for you and the one you lost.
May 3rd, 2017 14:56
Bibbeck said:
Your tears are very well written, Jayne. I feel for you and the one you lost.
May 3rd, 2017 14:56
You Never Knew Your Name
Jane Frye said:
Paulo Coelho said, \"Tears are words that need to be written.\" It\'s the only way I know to make sense of life. Thank you for your comment.
May 3rd, 2017 11:31
Jane Frye said:
Paulo Coelho said, \"Tears are words that need to be written.\" It\'s the only way I know to make sense of life. Thank you for your comment.
May 3rd, 2017 11:31
My Favorite Color
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JANE ~ Thanks you for a perfect first poem ! R O Y G B I V ~ As you say ~ each color of the Rainbow (and the millions of shades in between) is very precious to us at different times in the day ! When GOD designed the Human Eye he gave us not only 3D vision but the ability not only to distinguish between \"40 Shades of Green\" when we visit Ireland ~ but many many shades of every color ! This enables us to appreciate each other and the clothes we wear but also all the colors of the natural World ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ many are \"color coded\" ! Thanks B
May 3rd, 2017 02:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JANE ~ Thanks you for a perfect first poem ! R O Y G B I V ~ As you say ~ each color of the Rainbow (and the millions of shades in between) is very precious to us at different times in the day ! When GOD designed the Human Eye he gave us not only 3D vision but the ability not only to distinguish between \"40 Shades of Green\" when we visit Ireland ~ but many many shades of every color ! This enables us to appreciate each other and the clothes we wear but also all the colors of the natural World ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ many are \"color coded\" ! Thanks B
May 3rd, 2017 02:37
My Favorite Color
LML said:
This is so beautiful I can picture it and I feel peaceful when I read 👍🏼
May 3rd, 2017 00:58
LML said:
This is so beautiful I can picture it and I feel peaceful when I read 👍🏼
May 3rd, 2017 00:58
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