Comments received on poems by Mary73223

Tell Me
dusk arising said:

Beautiful love poem which reads like watching a bud turn into a wonderful flower.

March 26th, 2020 03:32

Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure that someone will be with you soon.

July 21st, 2019 00:58

dusk arising said:

Hmmm, experience shows me that opposites attract, similar repels.

July 20th, 2019 04:30

Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Well described M that old game of hide and seek

July 20th, 2019 03:44

sylviasearcher said:

I know that restless feeling

July 20th, 2019 03:35

Goldfinch60 said:

Powerful write, those last two lines are so right.

June 11th, 2019 00:13

Amherrera1190 said:

I can feel this love i have 2sisters close in ahe to me. I love this one.

February 12th, 2019 02:43

my love
Amherrera1190 said:

Very nice im almost 30 and i can tell you it never changes.

February 12th, 2019 02:40

Who am I
Aislinn Wilson said:

I\'m struggling with this too. I wish you the best. Well said.

January 9th, 2019 11:15

whisperingquill said:

\"My only fear of death is coming back reincarnated\" Tupac Shakur

Death is just another interval
Pure energy awaits
Or the cycle of life again
Depends on how many deaths you already kissed

January 7th, 2019 23:23


Every single day I think about killing myself.
I just can’t bring myself to do it
But it’s been hard for me to live my life because I can’t get over my past
All we can do is enjoy life while we still here and be the person you wanna be
Don’t let anything or anybody stop you from being who you wanna be

January 7th, 2019 16:14

My mind
Saima said:

Nice poem! It’s hard when you feel like giving up but I guess sometimes there’s someone or something to hold on to? Continue being strong and you’ll get through it x

August 11th, 2018 04:14

My mind
Resa71 said:

It’s ecuasting fighting the demons.
Some days are good.
I wish I could package them up and save them for the crappy days.
Like a sweet snack that gets you through a dreaded chore.
Nice write.’

August 11th, 2018 03:05

SLR said:

I\'m sorry for your loss. It\'s sounds like someone died that you cared deeply about and that took good care of you. I could feel the emotion. Good job.

June 13th, 2018 20:47

Yorelzinala said:


May 29th, 2018 20:10

FredPeyer said:

Ari, I am not sure what you want to say with this poem. Maybe I am a little daft! Could use a little illumination!

September 15th, 2017 23:09

Gary Edward Geraci said:

But I will be the mighty beacon in the light house illuminating your crumpled form awash in a foaming and thrashing sea...Seek my light; seek my light...cries our loving Savior!

September 15th, 2017 22:53

Goldfinch60 said:

Good uplifting write.

June 7th, 2017 08:20

Beautiful ideals
Augustus said:

One of those truths is fighting the devil. And you are sooo right he lives on. Nicely done.

May 28th, 2017 15:42

Beautiful ideals
IAmBeu said:

Such a depth of thought expressed, very nice 😆

May 28th, 2017 15:39

Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

May 26th, 2017 01:37

Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

May 26th, 2017 00:52

IAmBeu said:

You are very talented

May 26th, 2017 00:46


Thanks ARI ~ This is so so true and also so so sad. I know Girls (in my circle) who have been really broken (and in some cases unrepairable !) by the Agony of LOVE ! In some cases I have been the one who eases the pain and by LOVE helps the heart to mend. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN

May 25th, 2017 17:02

Goldfinch60 said:

Super write. Welcome to MPS.

May 24th, 2017 00:49


WELCOME ARI ~ thanks for your first poem ~ I love the Shape and the Subject ! We are all crying today for the Murdered Children & Teens in Manchester (UK) ~ Please check my Poem. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

May 23rd, 2017 17:52