Comments received on poems by Mary73223
The one\'s I\'ll Never Know
sorenbarrett said:
Unsung heros and heroins that like other health care workers do their jobs in the shadows to save lives. A well written poem of awareness nicely done
July 23rd, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Unsung heros and heroins that like other health care workers do their jobs in the shadows to save lives. A well written poem of awareness nicely done
July 23rd, 2025 03:53
The one\'s I\'ll Never Know
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a beautiful write of some the situations they can find themselves in doing an incredibly important and selfless job, nicely expressed and written
July 23rd, 2025 00:26
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a beautiful write of some the situations they can find themselves in doing an incredibly important and selfless job, nicely expressed and written
July 23rd, 2025 00:26
The Forest Whispers
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s as though you\'ve lost someone,\" far away \". I hope not. Either way the poem is beautiful, like a living forest. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2025 13:04
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s as though you\'ve lost someone,\" far away \". I hope not. Either way the poem is beautiful, like a living forest. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2025 13:04
The Forest Whispers
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, written as if part of the forest, some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 08:29
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, written as if part of the forest, some wonderful lines, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 08:29
The Forest Whispers
sorenbarrett said:
This magnificent poem speaks mystically as if part of the forest itself. Beautifully written in such poetic lines each verse hold splendid allegories and and the meter caries one onward as if hypnotically. This is a definite fave
July 17th, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
This magnificent poem speaks mystically as if part of the forest itself. Beautifully written in such poetic lines each verse hold splendid allegories and and the meter caries one onward as if hypnotically. This is a definite fave
July 17th, 2025 07:53
The Silent King
Poetic Licence said:
I thoroughly enjoyed the read, kept me interested all the way through, nicely expressed and crafted, enjoyed the read
June 15th, 2025 04:16
Poetic Licence said:
I thoroughly enjoyed the read, kept me interested all the way through, nicely expressed and crafted, enjoyed the read
June 15th, 2025 04:16
The Silent King
sorenbarrett said:
I must congratulate you on a most wonderful fable and poem. It reads so smoothly and the fable itself is classical and well crafted it immediately caught my attention and kept it throughout. The only minor suggestion I might make is the second to the last stanza seems to have an extra line that would sound better as the first line of the last stanza. Or the last two stanza\'s may be combined into one. Otherwise I wouldn\'t alter what seems perfect. A definite fave
June 15th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
I must congratulate you on a most wonderful fable and poem. It reads so smoothly and the fable itself is classical and well crafted it immediately caught my attention and kept it throughout. The only minor suggestion I might make is the second to the last stanza seems to have an extra line that would sound better as the first line of the last stanza. Or the last two stanza\'s may be combined into one. Otherwise I wouldn\'t alter what seems perfect. A definite fave
June 15th, 2025 04:12
The Silent King
Mary73223 said:
Hello to anyone reading this. This is my first fable Ive written to competition. And Im a bit embarrassed to admit it\'s taking me a little over 7 months to write this, and get the rhyme scheme just the way I wanted it. If you have any constructive feedback please let me know. Ive been writing poetry for over 5 years no and Im always looking to improve.
June 14th, 2025 21:21
Mary73223 said:
Hello to anyone reading this. This is my first fable Ive written to competition. And Im a bit embarrassed to admit it\'s taking me a little over 7 months to write this, and get the rhyme scheme just the way I wanted it. If you have any constructive feedback please let me know. Ive been writing poetry for over 5 years no and Im always looking to improve.
June 14th, 2025 21:21
Hollow Girl
Poetic Licence said:
This is a sad and touching write, you can feel the pain and suffering in the words, appearing to be very close to the edge, nicely expressed and written
June 12th, 2025 04:32
Poetic Licence said:
This is a sad and touching write, you can feel the pain and suffering in the words, appearing to be very close to the edge, nicely expressed and written
June 12th, 2025 04:32
Hollow Girl
sorenbarrett said:
The poem of a person who is on the edge of breaking and is in pain. Well written in good rhyme and meter. Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
The poem of a person who is on the edge of breaking and is in pain. Well written in good rhyme and meter. Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 03:46
She
Thomas W Case said:
And metaphorically speaking, she finds a relationship and spreads the disease. Point being, we have to heal, people can\'t fix us. Tremendous write.
November 2nd, 2023 02:39
Thomas W Case said:
And metaphorically speaking, she finds a relationship and spreads the disease. Point being, we have to heal, people can\'t fix us. Tremendous write.
November 2nd, 2023 02:39
Welcome to America
Doggerel Dave said:
Although the stark realities you so eloquently present in your post here are clearer in America, Paul (above) is right to point out that other so called wealthy western countries are well along that same road too.
Great write - thanks.
September 1st, 2022 00:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Although the stark realities you so eloquently present in your post here are clearer in America, Paul (above) is right to point out that other so called wealthy western countries are well along that same road too.
Great write - thanks.
September 1st, 2022 00:28
Welcome to America
Paul Bell said:
Sadly, this is most western countries.
The rich get richer, the poor just die.
August 31st, 2022 13:58
Paul Bell said:
Sadly, this is most western countries.
The rich get richer, the poor just die.
August 31st, 2022 13:58
Graveyard of Thoughts
dusk arising said:
Sad tale of a soul destroyed by mistreatment wondering if they can repair themself. A good read.
June 23rd, 2021 02:09
dusk arising said:
Sad tale of a soul destroyed by mistreatment wondering if they can repair themself. A good read.
June 23rd, 2021 02:09
Sink
Goldfinch60 said:
May she rise in the light of wonder that is within this world.
Andy
April 11th, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May she rise in the light of wonder that is within this world.
Andy
April 11th, 2021 00:16
Tell Me
dusk arising said:
Beautiful love poem which reads like watching a bud turn into a wonderful flower.
March 26th, 2020 03:32
dusk arising said:
Beautiful love poem which reads like watching a bud turn into a wonderful flower.
March 26th, 2020 03:32
Restless
dusk arising said:
Hmmm, experience shows me that opposites attract, similar repels.
July 20th, 2019 04:30
dusk arising said:
Hmmm, experience shows me that opposites attract, similar repels.
July 20th, 2019 04:30
Restless
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well described M that old game of hide and seek
July 20th, 2019 03:44
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well described M that old game of hide and seek
July 20th, 2019 03:44
Sisters
Amherrera1190 said:
I can feel this love i have 2sisters close in ahe to me. I love this one.
February 12th, 2019 02:43
Amherrera1190 said:
I can feel this love i have 2sisters close in ahe to me. I love this one.
February 12th, 2019 02:43
my love
Amherrera1190 said:
Very nice im almost 30 and i can tell you it never changes.
February 12th, 2019 02:40
Amherrera1190 said:
Very nice im almost 30 and i can tell you it never changes.
February 12th, 2019 02:40
Who am I
Aislinn Wilson said:
I\'m struggling with this too. I wish you the best. Well said.
January 9th, 2019 11:15
Aislinn Wilson said:
I\'m struggling with this too. I wish you the best. Well said.
January 9th, 2019 11:15
Death
whisperingquill said:
\"My only fear of death is coming back reincarnated\" Tupac Shakur
Death is just another interval
Pure energy awaits
Or the cycle of life again
Depends on how many deaths you already kissed
January 7th, 2019 23:23
whisperingquill said:
\"My only fear of death is coming back reincarnated\" Tupac Shakur
Death is just another interval
Pure energy awaits
Or the cycle of life again
Depends on how many deaths you already kissed
January 7th, 2019 23:23
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