Comments received on poems by Mary73223
Death
said:
Every single day I think about killing myself.
I just can’t bring myself to do it
But it’s been hard for me to live my life because I can’t get over my past
All we can do is enjoy life while we still here and be the person you wanna be
Don’t let anything or anybody stop you from being who you wanna be
January 7th, 2019 16:14
said:
Every single day I think about killing myself.
I just can’t bring myself to do it
But it’s been hard for me to live my life because I can’t get over my past
All we can do is enjoy life while we still here and be the person you wanna be
Don’t let anything or anybody stop you from being who you wanna be
January 7th, 2019 16:14
My mind
Saima said:
Nice poem! It’s hard when you feel like giving up but I guess sometimes there’s someone or something to hold on to? Continue being strong and you’ll get through it x
August 11th, 2018 04:14
Saima said:
Nice poem! It’s hard when you feel like giving up but I guess sometimes there’s someone or something to hold on to? Continue being strong and you’ll get through it x
August 11th, 2018 04:14
My mind
Resa71 said:
It’s ecuasting fighting the demons.
Some days are good.
I wish I could package them up and save them for the crappy days.
Like a sweet snack that gets you through a dreaded chore.
Nice write.’
Resa.
August 11th, 2018 03:05
Resa71 said:
It’s ecuasting fighting the demons.
Some days are good.
I wish I could package them up and save them for the crappy days.
Like a sweet snack that gets you through a dreaded chore.
Nice write.’
Resa.
August 11th, 2018 03:05
Loss
SLR said:
I\'m sorry for your loss. It\'s sounds like someone died that you cared deeply about and that took good care of you. I could feel the emotion. Good job.
June 13th, 2018 20:47
SLR said:
I\'m sorry for your loss. It\'s sounds like someone died that you cared deeply about and that took good care of you. I could feel the emotion. Good job.
June 13th, 2018 20:47
Ruins
FredPeyer said:
Ari, I am not sure what you want to say with this poem. Maybe I am a little daft! Could use a little illumination!
September 15th, 2017 23:09
FredPeyer said:
Ari, I am not sure what you want to say with this poem. Maybe I am a little daft! Could use a little illumination!
September 15th, 2017 23:09
Ruins
Gary Edward Geraci said:
But I will be the mighty beacon in the light house illuminating your crumpled form awash in a foaming and thrashing sea...Seek my light; seek my light...cries our loving Savior!
September 15th, 2017 22:53
Gary Edward Geraci said:
But I will be the mighty beacon in the light house illuminating your crumpled form awash in a foaming and thrashing sea...Seek my light; seek my light...cries our loving Savior!
September 15th, 2017 22:53
Beautiful ideals
Augustus said:
One of those truths is fighting the devil. And you are sooo right he lives on. Nicely done.
May 28th, 2017 15:42
Augustus said:
One of those truths is fighting the devil. And you are sooo right he lives on. Nicely done.
May 28th, 2017 15:42
Mourning
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ARI ~ This is so so true and also so so sad. I know Girls (in my circle) who have been really broken (and in some cases unrepairable !) by the Agony of LOVE ! In some cases I have been the one who eases the pain and by LOVE helps the heart to mend. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN
May 25th, 2017 17:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ARI ~ This is so so true and also so so sad. I know Girls (in my circle) who have been really broken (and in some cases unrepairable !) by the Agony of LOVE ! In some cases I have been the one who eases the pain and by LOVE helps the heart to mend. Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN
May 25th, 2017 17:02
Tears
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ARI ~ thanks for your first poem ~ I love the Shape and the Subject ! We are all crying today for the Murdered Children & Teens in Manchester (UK) ~ Please check my Poem. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
May 23rd, 2017 17:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ARI ~ thanks for your first poem ~ I love the Shape and the Subject ! We are all crying today for the Murdered Children & Teens in Manchester (UK) ~ Please check my Poem. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
May 23rd, 2017 17:52
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